翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

弊社のCOOである田中が3月４日に御社のイベントに行くことになりまして、
是非御社の経営陣にご挨拶だけしたいと申しております。
ご対応いただくことはできないでしょうか。

田中は御社の出展ブースに３月４日の15時半以降であれば立ち寄ることができるようです。
フィードバックをお待ちしております。

英語

Mr. Tanaka, our company COO, will be attending your event on March 4th. If possible, he would like to make a short greeting with your top management.
Would that be possible?

Mr. Tanaka will be available to stop by your booth any time after 3:30PM on March 4th.
I will be waiting for your feedback.

レビュー ( 1 )

yxn667はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2015/03/06 12:53:56

元の翻訳
Mr. Tanaka, our company COO, will be attending your event on March 4th. If possible, he would like to make a short greeting with your top management.
Would that be possible?

Mr. Tanaka will be available to stop by your booth any time after 3:30PM on March 4th.
I will be waiting for your feedback.

修正後
Mr. Tanaka, our company COO, will be attending your event on March 4th. If possible, he would like to make a short greeting with your top management team.
Would that be possible?

Mr. Tanaka will be available to stop by your booth any time after 3:30PM on March 4th.
I will be waiting for your feedback.

[sophia24]

Thanks for the review and the correction!