翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 日本のアニメのキャラクターの紹介文です

日本語

今現在、HarukaやNagisaが水泳部にいますが、これから来るReiも特徴的な性格をしていそうで、Makotoの気苦労が絶えなさそうです…。

彼は（なりゆきで）水泳部の部長を務める事にもなったので、よりいろんな人から頼りにされていくと思います！

頑張れMakoto！　Harukaが水着になっても泣かないで！！！

英語

Haruka and Nagisa is currently in the swimming club, but Rei, who will be coming in soon, is also quite a character; Seems like Makoto will have a lot more to worry about...

He managed to be the manager of the club (somehow with the flow), I am expecting him to be relied more and more from a lot of people!

Keep it up Makoto! Don't cry even if Haruka's in fer swimsuit!!

レビュー ( 1 )

tokyomanlyはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/17 13:33:43

元の翻訳
Haruka and Nagisa is currently in the swimming club, but Rei, who will be coming in soon, is also quite a character; Seems like Makoto will have a lot more to worry about...

He managed to be the manager of the club (somehow with the flow), I am expecting him to be relied more and more from a lot of people!

Keep it up Makoto! Don't cry even if Haruka's in fer swimsuit!!

修正後
Haruka and Nagisa are currently in the swimming club, but Rei, who will be coming in soon, is also quite a character. It seems like Makoto will have a lot more to worry about.

He managed to (by some chance) become the manager of the club. I am expecting that more and more people will be relying on him.

Good luck Makoto! Don't cry even if Haruka's in a swimsuit!

[cheekytwat96]

Thanks a lot for the review. Seems like i've made quite a few mistakes here and there not to mention the typo at the end. I'll be careful, appreciate it a lot!

[tokyomanly]

No problem. I just made it read a bit more natural. Also, Japanese uses more exclamation points than English!!! So I usually reduce or remove them. That's a style choice, but it's not incorrect.