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[May]. Tour 2014~Message for Tomorrow~] Pre-Sale of T shirt and face towel from goods is decided!

National Tour starting from Zepp Sapporo July 5th(Sat.) [May]. Tour 2014 ~ Message for Tomorrow ~].
Pre-Sale of T shirts (2 kinds) and face towel (2 kinds) from the goods of this tour is decided!
Run Up of the items that enrich the tour of this year! You must check!

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[May J. Tour 2014~Message for Tomorrow~] T shirt and face towel from goods is on pre-sale!

National Tour starting from Zepp Sapporo on July 5th(Sat.) [May J. Tour 2014 ~ Message for Tomorrow ~].
Pre-Sale of T shirts (2 types) and face towel (2 types) from the goods of this tour is on pre-sale!
The items lined up to invigorate the tour this year! Check them out!

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警告：貴方の情報は、現在、有効です。追加の情報が必要な場合、ご連絡します。

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注意：貴方の情報は、現在認証中です。追加の情報が必要な場合、ご連絡します。

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# For buyer has experience purchasing items at eBay and desire to purchase additional items

I have had not communications before, but I am writing to you because I won your auction at eBay this time (before).
I would like to purchase additional items from you, but would you be possible to give me a discount?
I think if we have direct deal without through eBay, you would not need to be charged the eBay’s commission and I would purchase items cheaper without their commission.
I would appreciate if you could take consideration on this matter.↵

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# When a buyer with prior purchase experiences wishes to place an additional order

Nice to meet you. I am an import distributor in Japan.↵
I won your auction at eBay this time (before).
As I would like to purchase additional items from you, would you give me a discount?
If we could make a deal without going through eBay, you would not need to pay for the eBay’s handling fee, and I would purchase items cheaper that way.
I would appreciate if you could take this matter into your consideration.

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沢山のレンズを持っていて、多分あなたが興味を持つのでないかと思いメールしています。もし興味があるのであれば何処に住んでいようが価格交渉をしましょう。私はカリフォルニアに住んでいます。

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沢山のレンズを持っているので、多分あなたが興味をお持ちでないかと思いメールしています。もしご興味があるのであればあなたのいらっしゃるところまでは伺えませんが価格交渉をしましょう。私はカリフォルニアに住んでいます。

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I'm sorry for your waiting for luggage so long time.
We shipped your product in X/Y via international post of Japan Post. As we used Standard shipment, There is no tracking number of luggage.

You will usually reveive the product in 1 week. But as you said that You don' receive the one, We will prepare for shipping the same product as soon as possible. You will get the package in next week.

I'm sorry for inconveniece from the bottom of the heart.
We will refund whole price if you don't need ordered item at all. So, please contact with us.

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I'm sorry for having kept you waiting for the shipment for so long.
We shipped your product on X/Y as an international mail via Japan Post. As we used Standard shipment, There is no tracking number provided for your item.

The shipment will usually take 1 week. But as you said that You haven't received it, we are going to prepare for shipping the same product as soon as possible. You should be able to receive the package some time next week.

I'm sorry for the inconveniece from the bottom of the heart.
We will issue you a full refund if you don't need the ordered item any more. So, please contact with us.

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[Tokyo] "TV Asahi, Roppongi Hills Summer Festival SUMMER STATION" SUMMER STATION live music
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[May J ] SUMMER STATION live music
[Dates ] August 14 ,2014 (Thu) 17:30 Doors open / 18:00 Start
[Location ] SUMMER STATION LIVE Arena (Roppongi Hills Arena)
[Ticket reservations start depending on the performance date. Please refer to the official HP.
[Price ] free

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[Tokyo] "TV Asahi, Roppongi Hills Summer Festival SUMMER STATION" SUMMER STATION Music Live
[Event Title ] SUMMER STATION Music Live
[Date] August 14 ,2014 (Thu) 17:30 Doors open / 18:00 Start
[Location] SUMMER STATION LIVE Arena (Roppongi Hills Arena)
[Numbered Ticket Reservation] Ticket reservations start depending on the performance date. Please refer to the official HP.
[Fees] Free

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I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you.

We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packaging.

We are planning to place next order at the end of this month.

Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to see your new products on your site.
We would like to develop longterm relationship from our heart.
Thanks with my very best regards.

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I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you.

We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packing.

We are planning to place next order by the end of this month.

Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to seeing your new products on your website.
We would like to develop a long-term relationship from our heart.
Thank you and best regards.

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I will immediately pay for the items CUH16-2 and NPS16-5 which I ordered some time ago.
If possible, please inform us of when you ship the items in advance.
Thank you very much for your help and for your consideration, as always.

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I will immediately pay for CUH16-2 and NPS16-5 which I ordered some time ago.
If possible, please inform us of when you ship the items in advance.
Thank you very much for your help and for your consideration, as always.

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#アビットさん
ツアー・イシューシャフトのジェットスピードドライバーヘッドの写真を撮ってお送りします。これらのヘッドはあなたが以前購入したツアー・イシュー製品と同様のものです。明日オフィスに戻り次第、画像をメールにてお送りします。

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#アビットさん
ツアー・イシュー(シャフト)のジェットスピードドライバーヘッドの写真を撮ってお送りします。これらのヘッドはあなたが以前購入したツアー・イシュー製品と同様のものです。明日オフィスに戻り次第、画像をメールにてお送りします。

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Although in the previous message you've said "In next days we'll make it available to choose Japan as shipping address", when I try to go to the purchase settlement page after putting item in the cart, "ERROR: SORRY, “product name” DOESN’T SHIP TO JAPAN" message pops out, and purchase can't be done.

Please fix settings to make it possible to purchase items. Thank you.

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Although in the previous message you've said "In next days we'll make it available to choose Japan as shipping address", when I try to go to the purchase settlement page after putting item in the cart, "ERROR: SORRY, “product name” DOESN’T SHIP TO JAPAN" message pops out, and I cannot place my order.

Please fix settings to make it possible to purchase items. Thank you.

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Thank you for your message.
I apologize for my delayed response.

Unfortunately, this particular merchandise was sent back to the manufacturer.
To remedy the situation we will issue you a full refund.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for your message.
I apologize for my delayed response.

Unfortunately, this particular merchandise we shipped to you was sent back to us.
To remedy the situation we will issue you a full refund.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for your messsage.
I must apologize for our delaying reaching this message.

Regrettably, All items we had sent to you were returned to us.
Therefore, we will refund the full amount that you have paid.
Thank you.

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Thank you for your messsage.
I must apologize for our delaying reaching this message.

Regrettably, the item we had shipped to you were returned to us.
Therefore, we will issue a refund for the full amount that you have paid.
Thank you.

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Thank you for replying.

Now then, will you send me the PayPal payment invoice for the 6 [*******] that includes the handling fee?
Once I receive the payment invoice, I would like to deposit the amount that is written.

I thank you in advance.

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Thank you for replying.

Now then, will you send me the PayPal purchase invoice for the 6pcs of [*******] that includes the handling fee?
Once I receive the purchase invoice, I would like to deposit the amount that is written.

I thank you in advance.

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質問）カップ一杯のコーヒーを入れた後のCanadianoをどのように掃除するのですか。
回答）入れた後のコーヒーの粉は堆肥として使え、また使用したCanadianはぬるま湯で洗ってください。Canadianoを掃除するときには食器用洗剤などを使う必要は本当にありません。ぬるま湯で洗うだけでCanadianoのひいたコーヒー粉を入れる部分は確実にきれいになります。もし必要と思う場合は、食器用潜在を使用してください。時間がたてば、お客様の好きなコーヒーを毎回入れることで、コーヒー豆に含まれる天然の油がCanadianoに吸収され保持されます。

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質問）カップ一杯のコーヒーを入れた後のCanadianoをどのようにクリーニングするのですか。
回答）入れた後のコーヒーの粉は堆肥として使え、また使用したCanadianはぬるま湯で洗ってください。Canadianoを掃除するときには食器用洗剤などを使う必要は本当にありません。ぬるま湯で洗うだけでCanadianoのひいたコーヒー粉を入れる部分は確実にきれいになります。もし必要と思う場合は、食器用洗剤を使用してください。時間がたてば、お客様の好きなコーヒーを毎回入れることで、コーヒー豆に含まれる天然の油がCanadianoに吸収され保持されます。

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レンズにかすみ、ホコリ、傷のない、メカニカルも状態の良い中古のNikon 20-35 AF ガラスレンズを探しています。

もしそのようなレンズが入荷しましたら是非知らせて頂けますか。私のN6006とD-50Nikonカメラで使いたいと思っています。

どうぞよろしくお願い致します。

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レンズにかすみ、ホコリ、傷のない、メカニカルも状態の良い中古のNikon 20-35 AF ガラスレンズを探しています。

もしそのようなレンズの入荷予定の有無と時期ががおわかりでしたら是非知らせて頂けますか。私のN6006とD-50Nikonカメラで使いたいと思っています。

どうぞよろしくお願い致します。

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Thank you for the message.
I am happy to receive the product.
I would appreciate it if you evaluate it.

Thank you for the message.
The tracking number was not correct.
Please refer to the number below.
RR905929239JP

I'm sorry for the mistake.
It will take about a week until you receive the product.

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Thank you for the message.
I am happy to hear that you have received the product.
I would appreciate it if you evaluate it.

Thank you for the message.
The tracking number was not correct.
Please refer to the number below.
RR905929239JP

I'm sorry for the mistake.
It will take about a week until you receive the product.

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As I informed you yesterday, if do not cancel and agree to our terms, we will send you the pre-release of this item on the release date, August 28th.
It should take 8 to 14 business days for it to arrive.

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As I informed you yesterday, if you agree to our terms without cancellation, we will ship the pre-release item to you on the release date, August 28th.
It should take 8 to 14 business days for delivery.

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Thank you very much for your message.
Regarding to the orange amplifier items, we have deleted all we can from our side, however, if there is anything that can not be deleted, please kindly let me know ASIN or URL. If you let me know, we will delete them right away. Thank you very much for your cooperation.

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Thank you very much for your message.
Regarding to the orange amplifier items, we have deleted all we can from our side, however, if there is anything that has not been deleted yet, please kindly let me know ASIN or URL. If you let me know, we will delete them right away. Thank you very much for your cooperation.