翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

返信がおそくなり、申し訳ありません。
先程、請求書を確認し、支払いが完了しました。

私たちは、御社の迅速、丁寧な対応・素晴らしい梱包にとても感謝しております。

次回は今月末頃に、もう一度注文させていただく予定です。

御社の商品ラインナップはとても素晴らしいので、
新商品が出品されるのを私たちはとても楽しみに待っています。

今後も末永くよろしくお願いします。
ありがとうございました。

英語

I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you.

We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packaging.

We are planning to place next order at the end of this month.

Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to see your new products on your site.
We would like to develop longterm relationship from our heart.
Thanks with my very best regards.

レビュー ( 1 )

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/07/07 21:52:40

元の翻訳
I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you.

We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packaging.

We are planning to place next order at the end of this month.

Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to see your new products on your site.
We would like to develop longterm relationship from our heart.
Thanks with my very best regards.

修正後
I would like to express my sincere apology for our slow response. We just confirmed the details of your invoice and completed our payment to you.

We truly appreciate for your prompt and polite response, and a fantastic packing.

We are planning to place next order by the end of this month.

Since your product line-up is so great, we are really looking forward to seeing your new products on your website.
We would like to develop a long-term relationship from our heart.
Thank you and best regards.

全体的に読みやすかったです。

[kazuhiro_uozumi]

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