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元の翻訳
I apologize for the in convenience.
Can you check the attached image?
It seems products are in the Jakarta airport. I'm sorry to bother you, but I would appreciate it if you could contact by yourself.
If you have any questions, please feel free to let me know.

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I apologize for the inconvenience.
Can you check the attached image?
It seems the item is at Jakarta airport. I'm sorry to bother you, but I would appreciate it if you could contact the airport yourself.
If you have any questions, please feel free to let me know.

元の翻訳
I am really sorry for causing you trouble.
Could you please check the attached image?
The product appears to be in Jakarta airport. I apologize, but is it possible for you to contact it?
If you have any doubt, please contact me again.

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I am really sorry for causing you trouble.
Could you please check the attached image?
The product seems to be at Jakarta airport. I'm sorry to bother you, but is it possible for you to contact it?
If you have any doubt, please contact me again.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your prompt reply.
I also appreciate that eBay contacted the seller.
I am going to wait for the seller for a while.
However, I will wait until the middle of September. I cannot continue to wait after that.
I will cancel it after the expiration of the period.
The reason is that I decided that the seller does not contact me for more than 2 weeks means that↵
"the seller has no intention to sell the item and I cannot purchase it."
In that case, can the eBay arrange for cancellation?
Best regards

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Thank you for your prompt reply.
I also appreciate eBay contacting the seller.
I am going to wait for the reply from the seller for a while.
However, I will wait until the end of September. I cannot continue to wait after that.
I will cancel it after the expiration of the period.
The reason is that I judged that the seller who did not contact me for more than 2 weeks had no intention to sell the item and I wouldn't be able to purchase it.
In that case, can the eBay arrange for cancellation?
Best regards

元の翻訳
Thank you for your quick reply.
Also, thank you very much for contacting the seller directly from eBay.
I would like to wait a little further for the seller's response.
But I want to set the end of September as a deadline; I cannot wait much longer than that.
If the deadline is passed, I would like to cancel it, because if the seller doesn't contact me for over 2 weeks, I judge this as "The seller doesn't have the will to sell me the item, so I'm unable to purchase it".
In that case, could you please proceed with the cancellation process?

Respectfully,

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Thank you for your quick reply.
Also, thank you very much for contacting the seller directly from eBay.
I would like to wait a little further for the seller's response.
But I want to set the deadline on the end of September; I cannot wait much longer than that.
If the deadline passes, I would like to cancel it, for I judged that the seller who didn't contact me for over 2 weeks wouldn't have the will to sell me the item, so I wouldn't be unable to purchase it.
In that case, could you please proceed with the cancellation process?

Respectfully,

元の翻訳
• Our Thailand office is fundamentally responsible for exchanging information regarding rice sales with our parent company. Part of our contract requires us to conduct price negotiations with the parent company on a quarterly basis. However, due to the to time difference between Japan and Thailand, we cannot find a suitable time to confirm the intention of the headquarters. As such, the Thailand office and our parent company are consulting directly to mutually agree upon a price.

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• Our Thailand office is fundamentally responsible for exchanging information regarding rice sales with our parent company. Part of our contract requires us to conduct price negotiations with the parent company on a quarterly basis. However, due to the time difference between Japan and Thailand, we cannot find a suitable time to confirm the intention of the headquarters. As such, the Thailand office and our parent company are consulting directly to mutually agree upon a price.

元の翻訳
・For the rice deal, the Thai office is basically in charge of information exchange operation with the parent company. In regard to a part of the contract where requires a price negotiation with the parent company every quarter, there is no time to confirm the parent company’s intentions because of the international time differences. For that reason, the fact is that the Thai office and the parent company directly negotiate prices to come to an agreement.

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・For the rice deal, the Thai office is basically in charge of information exchange operation with the parent company. In regard to a part of the contract that requires a price negotiation with the parent company every quarter, there is no time to confirm the parent company’s intentions because of the international time differences. For that reason, the fact is that the Thai office and the parent company directly negotiate prices to come to an agreement.

元の翻訳
I am very sorry that the product has not arrived yet as you bought it at once after I exhibited.

If you can wait for the item will be delivered, I will make the reason check by the Japan post office held there.

Besides, this card will be arrived at you because this is not the loss of the item. I hope you will send it back to me because it is almost not circulated in Japan, too.

I will pay back the charge by Paypal to you directly, so please let me know how much you paid.

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I am very sorry that the product has not arrived yet despite the fact that you bought it right after I listed.

If you can wait for the item to be delivered, I will have the Japan post office check the reason for the package being suspended there.

Besides, this card will be delivered to you because this is not the loss of the item. I hope you will send it back to me because it is rarely distributed also in Japan.

I will pay back the shipping cost to you by Paypal directly, so please let me know how much you paid for shipping the item.

元の翻訳
先ほどレンズを受け取りました。ありがとうございましす。ただ残念なことに、このレンズはフロントフォーカシングなので、私は使うことが出来ません。

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先ほどレンズを受け取りました。ありがとうございます。ただ残念なことに、このレンズは私のカメラではフロントフォーカシングなので、私は使うことが出来ません。

元の翻訳
Hello,
Thank you for making a successful bid for False Eyelashes Case on eBay the other day. I sent it to you, but it was returned to us after a post office hold it for a month. I think you were not at home. Is it all right to cancel this order? Please reply to me. Thank you.

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Hello,
Thank you for making a successful bid for False Eyelashes Case on eBay the other day. I sent it to you, but it was returned to us after a post office held it for a month since you were apparently not at home. Can we understand you would like to cancel this order? Please reply to me. Thank you.

元の翻訳
How's the preparation to order the pack?
This time it takes more time than the last time, and is there any special reason for that situation unlike usual?

In fact, we would like to receive the goods that we order as much as we can because many of them are getting out of stock.

If it takes mote time, is there any good ways or is it possible to send it earlier insterad of reducing some goods?

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How's the preparation for shipping our order?
This time it takes more time than usual, and is there any special reason for that situation that is unlike usual one?

In fact, we would like to receive the goods that we have ordered as many as we can because many of them are getting out of stock.

If it takes more time, are there any good ways or is it possible to send them earlier like partial shipment?

元の翻訳
What is the status of packing of our order?
This time it takes longer than usual. Is there any special reason for this?

In fact, many products are out of inventory and we want to receive products that we have ordered as soon as possible.

If it takes more time, is there any way you can ship them quickly such as partial shipment?

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What is the shipping status for our order?
This time it takes longer than usual. Is there any special reason for this?

In fact, more of our products are running out of inventory and we want to receive products that we have ordered as soon as possible.

If it takes more time, is there any way you can ship them quickly such as partial shipment?

元の翻訳
Because you contacted me about an item not being sent, I checked the tracking number, and the information confirmed that it was sent on 8/17 and has been received on 8/21st.
I sent it in a small white B5 sized envelope.
Could you please check around your house again just to be sure it hasn't been sent?
I will also send you the the voucher for the package I sent to you.
If you don't find it, could you please check with your local post office about it?
Thank you.

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Because you contacted me about an item not being sent, I checked the tracking number, and the information confirmed that it was sent on Aug. 17th and has been received on Aug. 21st.
I sent it in a small white B5 sized envelope.
Could you please check around your house again just to be sure it hasn't been sent?
I will also send you the the shipping bill for the package I sent to you.
If you don't find it, could you please check with your local post office about it?
Thank you.

元の翻訳
The item has not been arrived, I checked it with the tracking number below,it says that it was shipped on August 17th and delivered on 21st.
I shipped it putting it in a B5 sized white envelope.
Will you check in your house again?
I will attach the receipt of the package I sent you.
if you don't find it in your house, can you inquire the nearest post office?

Thank you.

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I was informed that the item has not arrived, so I checked it on the website below, and it says that it was shipped on August 17th and delivered on the 21st.
I shipped it putting it in a B5 sized white envelope.
Will you look for it in your house again?
I will attach the shipping bill for the package I sent you later.
If you don't find it in your house, can you contact your nearest post office?

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello,
Thank you for your reply.
The idem has not arrived yet.
My email address is below.
We are not allowed to post email address, so please replace * to @
Regards,

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Hello,
Thank you for your reply.
The item has not arrived yet.
My email address is below.
We are not allowed to post email address, so please replace * by @
Regards,

元の翻訳
Hi.XXX

Thank you for your reply.
I have not got the product still.
There is my E-mail address n the following.

I can't input any address at here, so please change the part of "*" to "@".

Best regards.

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Hi.XXX

Thank you for your reply.
I have not got the item yet.
My E-mail address is as follows.

I can't input any address at here, so please change the part of "*" to "@".

Best regards.

元の翻訳
In case of [2 available], does that mean it will be 4 x 2, total of 8 pieces?
Also, in that case will the shipping charge be doubled?

Sorry to bother you during your busy time, I appreciate your kind reply.

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In the case of [2 available], does that mean it will be 4 x 2, total of 8 pieces?
Also, in that case will the shipping charge be doubled?

Sorry to bother you during your busy time, but I appreciate your kind reply.

元の翻訳
If two pieces are available, is it going to be eight pieces because four times two is eight? If so, will the shipping cost double?

I know you are busy, but I look forward to your reply.

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In the case of "2 available", is it going to be eight pieces because four times two is eight? If so, will the shipping cost double?

I know you are busy, but I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Dear (Customer's NAME)

I am sorry but I couldn't confirm a payment by the Pay Pall.

Please make sure it to the Pay Pall.

I feel sorry that I don't ship commodities to places where are not registered in pay pal list.

Furthermore I would like to send goods with EMS, Japanese mail.

I can't deal with you this time unless you accept our condition so that I have canceled the pay pal bill I sent you.

I hope that you understand us.

Sincerely↵

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Dear (Customer's NAME)

I am sorry but I can't confirm your payment by PayPal.

Please check it with PayPal.

I'm sorry, but I don't ship items to places that are not registered in the PayPal list.

Furthermore I send goods by EMS, Japanese mail service.

I'm afraid that I can't deal with you this time unless you accept our conditions, so I have canceled the PayPal bill I sent you.

I hope that you understand us.

Sincerely

元の翻訳
We've received the product.
Thank you for your prompt action.
As for the refund, we've just found that Amazon sets a cap on refundable shipping fees.
The relevant page says the maximum refundable shipping fee is USD 75.42.
So we're currently asking Amazon to let us make you refund USD 150.84 plus 84.56.
We're sure to make you a full refund.
We're sorry for the inconvenience, but could we ask your patience and wait a little longer?
We're sure to make you a refund of USD 150.84 + 84.56 = 235.4.

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We've received the product.
Thank you for your prompt action.
As for the refund, we've just found that Amazon sets a cap on refundable shipping fees.
The relevant page says the maximum refundable shipping fee is USD 75.42.
So we're currently asking Amazon to let us make you refund USD 150.84 plus 84.56.
We're sure to give you a full refund.
We're sorry for the inconvenience, but could we ask your patience and wait a little longer?
We're sure to give you a refund of USD 150.84 + 84.56 = 235.4.

元の翻訳
We have received the product.
We appreciate your quick response.
About the refund process, there is a limit that Amazon sets for shipping charge reimbursement.
If you look at the image, you can see that I can only refund U$75.42 of shipping charge. So we are contacting Amazon so that we can refund U$150.84 + 84.56.
We will pay you back the whole amount for sure.
But could you wait just a little more, please? Sorry for the trouble.
We will refund 150.84 + 84.56 = U$235.40 shortly.

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We have received the product.
We appreciate your quick response.
About the refund process, there is an amount limit that Amazon sets for shipping charge reimbursement.
If you look at the image, you can see that I can only refund US$75.42 of shipping charge. So we are contacting Amazon so that we can refund U$150.84 + 84.56.
We will pay you back the whole amount for sure.
But could you wait just for a while, please? Sorry for the trouble.
We will refund 150.84 + 84.56 = U$235.40 shortly.

元の翻訳
When you make the shipment, please do not forget to include the AAA with the order (already paid) I mailed to you about yesturday.

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When you make the shipment, please do not forget to include the AAA of the order (already paid) I made by mail yesterday.

元の翻訳
When you dispatch the item, remember to send AAA(I already paid for AAA) which I ordered yesterday by e-mail.

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When you ship the item, remember to also send AAA(I already paid for AAA) which I ordered yesterday by e-mail.

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Please make sure to send me AAA (paid already) ordered by yesterday’ mail at the time of shipment.

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Please make sure that shipment includes AAA (paid already) ordered by yesterday’ mail before shipping.

元の翻訳
Dear, Kevin D of Amazon in U. S. A.

There was a change of e-mail address.
Thanks for your help.
I'm grateful of you.

I hope your professional support when I face certain problem.

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Dear, Kevin D of Amazon in the U.S,,

I have successfully changed my e-mail address.
Thanks for your help.
I'm grateful of you.

Your support will be appreciated when I face further problems.