Simon Cantrill (scintillar) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for the late reply.
It's not that I have completely stepped down from A-line business support. The rate of work up until now in the field of product design will surely increase somewhat from now on, so there is no mistaking that the rate spent on co-ordination procedures put in between Tokyo and the US up until now will come down, but for the matter that was requested, things are currently in operation so if some kind of problem occurs, please feel free to discuss this from now on. Even in cases where I can't deal with things directly, I can tailor things so as to give operational support instead of the Tokyo head office overseas operations team.

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I'm sorry for the late reply.
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It's not that I'm completely stepping down from A-line business support. It's true that I will likely be devoting more time to product design in the future and that does mean that the amount of time I spend coordinating between Tokyo and the US will go down. However, I am still working on the matter you requested and you should not hesitate to reach out to me at any time if you have any concerns. Even in cases where I can't deal with things directly, I can arrange to have the overseas operations team at our head office in Tokyo provide support in my stead.

元の翻訳
There are 4 things.
4件あります。↵
① I'd like pre-registration for the badge for the visiting company at the New York business meeting with Mr. A and Mr. B. When I receive an email that the registration has been completed, I will forward to the head office an explanation of the method of receiving the badge for the venue for that day.
② Apparently, Mr. Y from head office would also like to participate in the company dinner on Saturday 18th. Is there any problem with adding one more person from now?
③ There is an additional visitor to our booth at the New York business meeting. Mr. M from T company from 15:30 on the 18th will attend for me. I'd like to do pre-registration for him.
④ If it suits Mr. M, I hope he can have dinner together with Mr. T in the evening. Firstly, could you tell me the evening schedule for Mr. T during the session.

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I have 4 requests:↵

① I'd like to arrange pre-registration for Person A and Person B to receive participant badges at the conference in New York. Once I receive an official confirmation email, I will forward it to head office and explain the process for picking up their badges on the day of the event.
② Apparently, Person Y from head office would also like to participate in the company dinner on Saturday the 18th. Is there any problem with adding one more person from now?
③ There will be an additional visitor to our booth at the New York conference. Person M from T company will arrive to see me from 15:30 on the 18th. I'd like to arrange pre-registration for them as well.
④ If their schedule permits, Person M would like to have dinner with Person T in the evening. Could you tell me the evening schedule for Person T during the session?

元の翻訳
Could you please use the credit card with the 4 digits below ●●●●.
If this number card is not registered, I don't mind which credit is used.

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Could you please use the credit card with the last 4 digits ●●●●.
If this number card is not registered, I don't mind which credit is used.

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■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
One portion, familiar things, harmful effects caused in turn.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver difficulties
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

As they are only terrible things, it is done to this extent.

For the consideration of yourself and to protect the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking all-out?

I hope that everyone can quit smoking successfully.

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■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
It's only one part, but I'll list some familiar products and the harmful effects.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver damage
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

... only terrible things come of smoking, so you should know this much at least.

For the consideration of yourself and to protect the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking for good?

I hope that everyone can quit smoking successfully.

元の翻訳
Also, commonplace smoke is acidic.

■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
One portion, familiar things, harmful effects caused in turn.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver difficulties
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

As they are only terrible things, it is done to this extent.

Tobacco isn't just a problem for yourself.
For consderation for yourself and the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking all-out?

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Also, first hand smoke is acidic. Second hand smoke is alkaline, and stimulates the mucous in the nose and eyes.

■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
This is only a small part, but I will list some of the familiarities and adverse effects.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver damage
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

There are only terrible things in tabacco, which is why I list them.

Tobacco isn't just a problem for yourself.
For consideration of yourself and the health of the people around you, won't you begin to really try quitting smoking?

元の翻訳
In addition, tobacco smoke contains carbon monoxide and when it enters the bloodstream, it binds to hemoglobins. This inhibits the supply of oxygen.

When you smoke tobacco, the head becomes unsteady, and you can get headaches and dizziness... That is from an insufficiency of oxygen in the blood→this is falling into a state of anemia.


《Foods that contain iron》
◇Soybean products
◇Beef, pork, chicken liver
◇Shellfish like oyster, Manila clam, freshwater clam
◇Spinach, Japanese mustard spinach
◇Hijiki, prunes etc.

At the moment there is a bit of a boom in acai palm, which gives strong support to your blood.

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In addition, tobacco smoke contains carbon monoxide and when it enters the bloodstream, it binds to hemoglobins. This inhibits the supply of oxygen.

When you smoke tobacco, you can become lightheaded, get headaches, or become dizzy... This is from an insufficiency of oxygen in the blood→this is falling into a state of anemia.


《Foods that contain iron》
◇Soybean products
◇Beef, pork, chicken liver
◇Shellfish like oyster, Manila clam, freshwater clam
◇Spinach, Japanese mustard spinach
◇Hijiki, prunes etc.

At the moment there is a bit of a boom in acai, which gives strong support to your blood.

元の翻訳
◎Tobacco and... anemia?

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Anemia... if it's a woman, doesn't she have one experience of it?

In fact, does everyone know the things that tobacco does as one of the causes of anemia?

This time it is easy so I'll explain the relationship between tobacco and anemia.

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・By smoking tobacco once, it's said to destroy 25mg of vitamin C inside the body.
Vitamin C is a vital ingredient for the absorption of iron. When that vitamin C is destroyed, the rate of iron absorption declines.

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◎Tobacco and... anemia?

Anemia... most women are likely to have experienced it before.

In fact, did you know that tabacco has been raised as one of the causes of anemia?

Allow me, on this occasion, to explain the relation between tabacco amd anemia.

・It is said that smoking one cigarette destroys 25mg of vitamin C in the body.
Vitamin C is a vital ingredient for the absorption of iron. When that vitamin C is destroyed, the rate of iron absorption declines.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for the unpleasant sentiments on this occasion.
I'm accepting return requests.

Only I am selling this set item as it looks.
I've already sold over several thousand of them, and the product reviews are high.
However, I received negative feedback for just 2 cases that they were counterfeit.
One of those was from you.
From looking at what did it make you think it was counterfeit? If you can tell me this, I'll make a consultation next time.
As this is procured in Japan, it would be difficult to prepare a counterfeit.
Is the item in the following URL different from the real thing?
Thank you very much.

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I'm sorry for the unpleasant sentiments on this occasion.
I'm accepting return requests.

Only I am selling this item set as you can see.
I've already sold over several thousand of them, and the product reviews are high.
However, I received negative feedback for just 2 cases that they were counterfeit.
One of those was from you.
From looking at what did it make you think it was counterfeit? If you could tell me this, it will be useful for future reference.
As this is procured in Japan, it would be difficult to prepare a counterfeit.
Is the item in the following URL different from the real thing?
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
It's costs an annual fee for the usage of that kind of data. I didn't think it was that high.
I'll try to think of another research method by some kind of analog device until then.

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I see, it costs that much as an annual fee for the usage of data. I didn't think it was that high.
I'll try to think of another research method by some kind of analog device until then.

元の翻訳
For the motif referencing the design of the American flag, we adopted it's color and pattern for the composition of the product design. The new American President was inaugurated, but what do you think about putting out the product design for a limited time during the season, such as the Independence holiday?

As for the materials proposing a design with a different color, I summarized it in what I sent so that it was even easier to understand, so could you please check the attached file.

Also, as for the preparatory meeting with Mr. M on Friday, I understand. Are you having a strategy meeting beforehand with Mr. M on Friday morning before the meeting? If necessary I'll make advance arrangements on Friday morning.

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Using/Taking the design of the American flag as the motif referencing, we adopted it's color and pattern for the composition of the product design. The new American President was inaugurated, but what do you think about putting out the product design for a limited time during the season, such as the Independence holiday?

As for the materials proposing a design with a different color, I summarized it in what I sent so that it was even easier to understand, so could you please check the attached file.

Also, as for the preparatory meeting with Mr. M on Friday, I understand. Are you having a strategy meeting on Friday morning, prior to the meeting with Mr. M? If necessary I'll make advance arrangements on Friday morning.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the good information about the situation with the powdered milk. I ordered it immediately at the weekend.
It was good information for my wife too as it seems she is bothered about the removed and left-over powder.
By the way, which company's baby bottle are you using? Whose is a good one?
Our family is using one manufactured by Doctor Brown.
How does the water dissolve the powdered milk? Do you use a water filter?
Or else do you buy water that is sold to be use for dissolving powdered milk?

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Thank you for the good information about the situation with the powdered milk. I ordered it immediately at the weekend.
It was good information for my wife too as it seems she is bothered about the undissolved powder.
By the way, which company's baby bottle are you using? Whose is a good one?
Our family is using one manufactured by Doctor Brown.
What are you doing with the water for dissolving the powdered milk? Do you use a water filter?
Or else do you buy water that is sold to be use for dissolving powdered milk?

元の翻訳
There's a no frills (banana mark), a bus stop, underground station, and it's a convenient location.
The landlord lives separately but keeps the apartment clean.
There are 4 rooms in the house.
There are 2 large fridges in the kitchen with plenty of space.
The kitchen is fully-equipped with a rice cooker, instant water heater, a microwave oven, a toaster, pots, frying pans, plates, bowls, chopsticks, spoons and forks.
The bedroom includes a bed, closet, desk and chair.
The internet, water bill, electricity and gas are all included in the rent.

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There's a no frills (banana mark), a bus stop, underground station, and it's a convenient location.
The landlord lives separately but keeps the apartment clean.
There are 4 rooms in the house.
There are 2 large fridges in the kitchen with plenty of space.
The kitchen is fully-equipped with a rice cooker, instant water heater, a microwave oven, a toaster, pots, frying pans, plates, bowls, chopsticks, spoons and forks.
The bedroom includes a bed, closet, desk and chair.
The rent includes charges for the internet, water bill, electricity and gas.

元の翻訳
I bought one each of your items on bonanza and ebay, two in total.
However, the bonanza and ebay co-ordinated delivery could only send one item with the same tracking number.
Could you please send the one remaining item?
Thank you very much for this.

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I bought one item each from Bonanza and eBay, two in total.
However, Bonanza and eBay co-ordinated delivery could only send one item with the same tracking number (unclear).
Could you please send one remaining item?
Thank you very much for this.

元の翻訳
In order to play this game, you need the "memory expansion pack".
As this is not included, please arrange that separately.

We are unable to accept return of the item for the reason of the "memory expansion pack" not being included.

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In order to play this game, you need the "memory expansion pack".
As this is not included, please arrange it separately.

We are unable to accept return of the item for the reason of the "memory expansion pack" not being included.

元の翻訳
Wasuta limited edition live performance "Wasuta Land Wa-3" Reception desk open for general sale of all playguides, August 6th 2016 (Sat) from 10:00!

Reception desk open for general sale of all playguides, August 6th 2016 (Sat) from 10:00!

General sale reception desk
WEB
Ticket Pia: http://w.pia.jp/t/wa-suta-land/
Lawson Ticket: http://l-tike.com/wa-suta/
e+: http://eplus.jp/wa-suta/

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Wasuta limited edition live performance "Wasuta Land Wa-3" Reception open for general sale of all playguides, August 6th 2016 (Sat) from 10:00!

Reception desk open for general sale of all playguides, August 6th 2016 (Sat) from 10:00!

General sale reception
WEB
Ticket Pia: http://w.pia.jp/t/wa-suta-land/
Lawson Ticket: http://l-tike.com/wa-suta/
e+: http://eplus.jp/wa-suta/