翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

■タバコの煙の成分
ほんの一部ですが、身近なもの・有害作用の順に挙げておきます。
・ニコチン…ゴキブリ駆除剤
有害作用：依存性薬物
・一酸化炭素…車の排気ガス
有害作用：酸素欠乏状態
・アンモニア…し尿
有害作用：肝障害
・カドミウム…電池
有害作用：腎障害

…恐ろしいものばかりなので、このくらいにしておきますね。

タバコは自分だけの問題ではありません。
自身と周囲の人への気遣いや健康を守るためにも禁煙、本格的に始めてみませんか…?

みなさまの禁煙成功を願っております。

英語

■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
One portion, familiar things, harmful effects caused in turn.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver difficulties
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

As they are only terrible things, it is done to this extent.

For the consideration of yourself and to protect the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking all-out?

I hope that everyone can quit smoking successfully.

レビュー ( 1 )

michael_1987はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2017/01/31 08:19:58

元の翻訳
■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
One portion, familiar things, harmful effects caused in turn.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver difficulties
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

As they are only terrible things, it is done to this extent.

For the consideration of yourself and to protect the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking all-out?

I hope that everyone can quit smoking successfully.

修正後
■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
It's only one part, but I'll list some familiar products and the harmful effects.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver damage
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

... only terrible things come of smoking, so you should know this much at least.

For the consideration of yourself and to protect the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking for good?

I hope that everyone can quit smoking successfully.