Simon Cantrill (scintillar) — 付けたレビュー

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I will prepare the PS-2 with a better quality of the product I have already sent you.
And I will send you the image as soon as possible.
Though I try to get it as soon as I can, it may take a few days for me to get that.
Would you give me some time?
I will cover the shipment charges, so I think you could return me the product you have now after I have dispatched the new one to you.
Please consider it.

The amount of the refund is the price $○○○＋shipment charges ○○○(those per item).

Can I reimburse you only for ○○○?

How about me sending this product to you?
Please have a look at the image.

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I will prepare the PS-2 with a better quality than the product I have already sent you.
And I will send you the image as soon as possible.
Though I'll try to get it as soon as I can, it may take a few days for me to get that.
Would you give me some time?
I will cover the shipment charges, so I think you could return me the product you have now after I have dispatched the new one to you.
Please consider it.

The amount of the refund is the price $○○○＋shipment charges ○○○(those per item).

Can I reimburse you only for ○○○?

How about me sending this product to you?
Please have a look at the image.

元の翻訳
I will prepare PS-2 whose condition is better than the item which I sent to you.
Once the preparation is completed, I will send you a picture.
I will try to prepare it as soon as possible, but i might ask you to allow some extra days.
Can you please allow me some more time?
We will cover the shipping fee, so please send the item we delivered to you back to us after we make shippment of the new item to you.
I appreciate your consideration.

The amount of money for the refund is item unit price $○○○ and the shipping fee $○○○ (per an item.)

Would it OK for you to return only one item to us?

We will send this item to you. What do you think?
Please refer to the picture.

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I will prepare a PS-2 whose condition is better than the item which I sent to you.
Once the preparation is completed, I will send you a picture.
I will try to prepare it as soon as possible, but I might ask you to allow for some extra days.
Can you please allow me some more time?
We will cover the shipping fee, so please send the item we delivered to you back to us after we make the shipment of the new item to you.
I appreciate your consideration.

The amount of money for the refund is item unit price $○○○ and the shipping fee $○○○ (per item.)

Would it be OK for you to return only one item to us?

We will send this item to you. What do you think?
Please refer to the picture.

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I am writing this to inform you of the progress at this moment.
This is an answer from the store specializing in Mosrite.
The moseley unit which has been out of order this time is out of production, and the arm unit of vibramute that ranks higher is currently produced.

The estimation is the following:
The charges for the parts of vibramute: about 750 USD.
The parts of vibramute do not include the roller bridge.
This estimation is merely based on the image, and they fail to judge if the parts are really attachable or not until they see the guitar actually.

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I am writing this to inform you of the progress at this moment.
This is an answer from the store specializing in Mosrite.
The Black Cloud moseley unit which has been out of order this time is out of production, and the arm unit of vibramute that ranks higher is currently being produced.

The estimation is the following:
The charges for the parts of the vibramute: about 750 USD.
The parts of the vibramute do not include the roller bridge.
This estimation is merely based on the image, and they cannot judge if the parts are really attachable or not until they actually see the guitar.

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As for item with these embroidery, as it is an order via department store, I want to send it to Japan as soon as possible and deliver to customer.
We are going to send these to Japan by air on Wednesday.
To arrive it in New Jersey on Tuesday, would you send it until Monday?

I received the item that is different from what I ordered.
I have to ask the customer to have a patience under this situation. Please send a correct item as soon as possible.

I made a mistake in listing. Would you send a standard size for this?

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As for item with the embroidery, as it is an order via a department store, I want to send it to Japan as soon as possible and deliver it to the customer.
We are going to send these to Japan by air on Wednesday.
To arrive in New Jersey on Tuesday, would you send it by Monday?

I received an item that is different from what I ordered.
I have to ask the customer to have patience because of this situation. Please send the correct item as soon as possible.

I made a mistake in the listing. Would you send a standard size for this?

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Regarding this embroidered items, it is the order to receive through the department store so I would like to ship to Japan as soon as possible and deliver to the customer.
We would like to ship this out to Japan by flight Wednesday.
Would you ship the item by Monday in order to deliver it to New Jersey on Tuesday?

I received the different product from that I ordered.
The customer will wait for a long time the way things stand, so please send us the right product as soon as possible.

I mistook to write it. As for this, please send us the standard size.

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Regarding this embroidered item, the order was received through the department store so I would like to ship it to Japan as soon as possible and deliver it to the customer.
We would like to ship this out to Japan by air mail on Wednesday.
Would you ship the item by Monday in order to deliver it to New Jersey on Tuesday?

I received a different product from what I ordered.
The customer will wait for a long time the way things stand, so please send us the right product as soon as possible.

I made a mistake in writing it. As for this, please send us the standard size.

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Regarding the items with embroidery, I would like to transport them to Japan, and to deliver them to customers because we accepted the orders by way of the department store.
We would like to transport these items to Japan by air on Wednesday.
Can you please arrange shipment by the end of Monday in order for the items to be delivered to New Jersey on Tuesday?

I received the different item from what I ordered.
As my customer needs to wait for a long time patiently, please send the correct items to me as soon as possible.

I made a mistake in the description. Please send me a standard size regarding this.

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Regarding the items with embroidery, I would like to transport them to Japan, and to deliver them to customers because we accepted the orders by way of the department store.
We would like to transport these items to Japan by air on Wednesday.
Can you please arrange shipment by the end of Monday in order for the items to be delivered to New Jersey on Tuesday?

I received a different item from what I ordered.
As my customer is made to wait for a long time patiently, please send the correct items to me as soon as possible.

I made a mistake in the description. Please send me a standard size for this.

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※①When the drawer is fully opened,, I found that the numbers shown in the picture were written on the backside of the body unit and the drawer.
I guess they were written in order to associate the drawer with the body unit, but please do not write such number directly on the surface of the parts of the item.

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※①When the drawer is fully opened,, I found that the numbers shown in the picture were written on the back of the body unit and the drawer.
I guess they were written in order to connect the drawer with the body unit, but please do not write such numbers directly on the surface of the parts of the item.

元の翻訳
It's long time no see.
How have you been?
I am glad that you liked the guitar very much.

Thank you for your order.
You also play acoustic guitar, don't you?

Regarding the guitar you ordered, I can offer a brand-new one or an used one.
The used one is made in 2013, but there is no outstanding scratch, and the used one is in mint condition.
I am sending several pictures of the used one. I appreciate if you can confirm them.

The price is mentioned below.

As I have the stock of both, I can arrange shipment right away.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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Long time no see.
How have you been?
I am glad that you liked the guitar very much.

Thank you for your order.
You also play acoustic guitar, don't you?

Regarding the guitar you ordered, I can offer a brand-new one or an used one.
The used one is made in 2013, but there are no scratches which stand out, and the used one is in mint condition.
I am sending several pictures of the used one. I'd appreciate it if you can confirm them.

The price is mentioned below.

As I have both in stock, I can arrange shipment right away.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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As far as I look at the picture, I cannot confirm whether the item shown in the picture is A-001 or not.
I do not have the product unit itself with me, but my customer needs the part instead.

What the customer needs is the white part shown in the center of the picture attached with this e-mail.

I lost A-001 when I bought it form you last time. I dropped it and I could not find it at that time.
What I would like to buy this time is the part which you obtained from Company B at that time.
The reason is that A-001 came apart off again at my customer's, and my customer lost it.

My customer strongly wants to find it.
I really appreciate if you can help me in finding A-001 again.

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From what I've seen in the picture, I cannot confirm whether the item shown in the picture is the A-001 or not.
I do not have the product unit itself with me, but my customer needs the part instead.

What the customer needs is the white part shown in the center of the picture attached to this e-mail.

I lost the A-001 when I bought it from you last time. I dropped it and I could not find it at that time.
What I would like to buy this time is the part which you obtained from Company B at that time.
The reason is that the A-001 came off again at my customer's, and my customer lost it.

My customer really wants to find it.
I'd really appreciate it if you could help me in finding the A-001 again.