RosettaZero1 (psychonyaku) — 付けたレビュー

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We are deeply sorry for the inconveniences we have caused to you and the buyers.
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The problem is that the late response which is your k preparation went up over 10 %.
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As a countermeasure, first of all we have answered all of your inquiry which we received so far.
The reason behind this problem was that the employee who was in charge of the email responses was also in charge of other tasks and that delayed the email responses.
In order to solve this problem, we have hired another employee whose task is only to response email inquires.
From now on with this structure, we will do our best to prevent the recurrence of the problem and aspire for customer satisfaction.

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We are deeply sorry for the inconvenience we have caused to you and the buyers.
The problem is that the late response which is your k preparation exceeded 10 %.
In handling this, first of all we have answered all of your inquiries we have received thus far.
As to the reason behind this problem, the employee who was in charge of the email responses was also in charge of other tasks and that delayed the email responses.
We have employed another employee whose task is only to response email inquires and this should solve the issue.
Under this system we will from here on out we will do everything in our power to prevent the recurrence of such issues and aim to increase customer satisfaction.

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Please tell the the tracking number of the package you just sent,

Also, I had a cancellation from a customer because a package from you was sent too late.
I will be sending the item stated below back to you, so please give me a refund.
I would like you to pay for the return shipping.

Please let me know what you have in stock before I place orders so this doesn't happen again.
Would you be able to send me an Excel spread sheet every week detailing what you have in stock of every size and color of the items listed below?

I think our business transactions will proceed more smoothly if I know what you have in stock.
Thanks.

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Please tell me the the tracking number of the package you just sent,

Also, I had a cancellations from customers because a packages are taking too long to deliver.
I will be sending the item stated below back, so please give me a refund.
I would like you to pay for the return shipping also.

Please contact me about what you have in stock before I place orders so this kind of thing doesn't happen again.
Would you be able to send me an Excel spread sheet every week with what you have in stock of every size and color of the items listed below?

I think our business transactions will go smoother for both of us if I know what you have in stock.
Best regards.

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I understand.
Since the bank is closed because it is Saturday, I will make the payment next week on Monday.
When the payment is complete, I will let you know.

Best Regards.

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I understand what was sent in the e-mail.
Today is Saturday in Japan and banks are closed, so will make the deposit on Monday.
When the money has been deposited, I will contact you.

Best Regards.

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It was decided that the popular actor A will play the leading role in "D", the film adaptation of popular manga of Mr.B. The role of A has not been revealed. Costars will be announced at a later date. The detail, including the story is cloaked in secrecy, but the rumor is that sacred ruin Hashima (common name: Battleship Island) in Nagasaki prefecture is selected as the location of the film to make use of its vision of the world that is attacked by Giant and devastated. This will be the first location since 2009 when Hashima was listed on provisional list for World Heritage. It is also announced that leading experts in each field was gathered to make the film, such as character design by Mr.F of anime "E".

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It was decided that the popular actor A will play the leading role in "D", the film adaptation of popular manga of Mr.B. The role of A has not been revealed. Co-stars will be announced at a later date. The details, including the story, are cloaked in secrecy, but the rumor has it that the sacred ruin Hashima (aka: Battleship Island) in Nagasaki prefecture will be the filming location, in order to make use of the film's vision of a world attacked and devastated by giants. This will be the first time a film was made in the same location since the island made the tentative list for World Heritage sites in 2009. It was also announced that leaders in each field will collaborate for the film, with Mr. F who was involved with the anime "E" in charge of character design.

元の翻訳
I joined A Co., Ltd..
As a director, I was responsible for many clients and contributed to the sales increase by making suggestions for sales promotion.

I joined G Co., Ltd. (exterior manufacturer).
Concurrently serving sales and public relations, I was involved in many tasks, from product development to sales.
As I developed clients all over the country, I became the top salesperson.

Utilizing my previous experience, I became independent.
I worked on marketing consulting and advertisement design mainly for small businesses, beauty salons, and eateries.
In addition, I held marketing seminars for managers periodically, provide sales promotion methods, and contributed to the development of the local economy.

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I joined A Co., Ltd..
As a director, I was responsible for many clients and contributed to the sales increase by making suggestions for sales promotion.

I joined G Co., Ltd. (exterior manufacturer).
Concurrently serving sales and public relations, I was involved in many tasks, from product development to sales.
As I developed clients all over the country, I became the top salesperson.

Utilizing my previous experience, I became independent.
I worked on marketing consulting and advertisement design mainly for small to medium-sized businesses, beauty related industries , and eateries.
In addition, I held marketing seminars for managers periodically, provide sales promotion methods, and contributed to the development of the local economy.

元の翻訳
I'm relieved to read the mail.
I understand what you feels toward the items.
Few in number of the items is no problem because I understand your item is made by hand.
I feel attracted to the concept of less quantity production.↵
So I prefer fewer numbers of the item because I can sell one by one politely.
It is easy to purchase the items from you and resell in Japan.↵
But my suggestion would block out these vendors in the future.↵
So it would be the stream that is not against what your feels toward the items.
Please give us your opinion based on the above.

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I was relieved when I read your e-mail.
I understand how you feel about the items.
I understand that the item is hand made, so there is no problem if there are only a few.
I'm also interested in the part about (you mentioned) about not being able to mass produce the product.↵
If that person can carefully sell the items one by one, that would be very convenient for us.
Normally, items purchased from there (you) easily end up resold in Japan, but even if it means that my suggestion would block out these vendors in the future, I think I can create a stream that doesn't go against your thoughts on the items.
I would like to here your thoughts based on the above.

元の翻訳
ph62403

Lala Satalin Deviluke "To LOVE-Ru"

Mizuho Kazami "Please Teacher!"

Tomarin "Teekyuu"

Eris "Asobi ni Iku yo!"

▼ I'm totally an alien!

These girls claim to be aliens, but the protagonists are doubting it.

Touwa Erio "Denpa Onna to Seishun Otoko"

Lucy Maria Misora "To Heart 2"

Nino "Arakawa Under The Bridge"

▼ And to wrap it up...

The desire to meet and alien - or to be one - doesn't change with age.

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ph62403

Lala Satalin Deviluke "To LOVE-Ru"

Mizuho Kazami "Please Teacher!"

Tomarin "Teekyu"

Eris "Let's go Play/ Cat plant Cuties"

▼ I'm totally an alien!

These girls claim to be aliens, but the protagonists are doubting it.

Touwa Erio "Electric wave girl and Youthful boy"

Lucy Maria Misora "To Heart 2"

Nino "Arakawa Under The Bridge"

▼ And to wrap it up...

The desire to meet and alien - or to be one - doesn't change with age.

元の翻訳
ph35307

YAWARA! [Topic : Judo]

Summary
Inokuma Yawara is a normal girl who has been trained by the genius judoka Jigoro Inokuma - her grandfather - since she was 3 years old. Jigoro is the one who chooses Yawara's college and her employment, and almost never lets her go out with other men. She understands how honorable Jigoro is despite her opposition towards him and gradually becomes aware of her talent in judo. It's a love comedy about Yawara being active from inside Japan to as far as the Atlanta Olympics.

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ph35307

YAWARA! [Topic : Judo]

Summary
Inokuma Yawara is a normal girl who has been trained by Jūdō prodigy Jigoro Inokuma - her grandfather - since she was 3 years old. Jigoro is the one who chooses Yawara's college and her employment, and almost never lets her go out with other men. She comes to realize her grandfather's greatness, despite her opposition towards him, and gradually becomes aware of her own innate talent in jūdō. It's a jūdō lover's manga about Yawara from her beginnings nationally in Japan to competing in the Atlanta Olympics.

元の翻訳
The other day the item I ordered from you off of eBay was denied shipping by the forwarding contractor B. Because of that, I am sending the item back to you. Once it gets back to you, could I have you ship it to my address in Japan? I will pay to cover the costs for the shipping to Japan. If you can't do this then I would like to ask for a refund. I hope to hear from you soon.

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The item A I ordered from you the other day through eBay was denied shipping by the forwarding company B. Because of that, I am resending the item back to you. Once it gets back to you, could I have you ship it to my address in Japan? I will pay to cover the costs for the shipping to Japan. If that's not possible, please treat it as a returned item. I hope to hear from you soon.

元の翻訳
I have come across that designer in the city before.

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I have happened to see designers in town before.

元の翻訳
「早急な救助が必要な人々や個人を特定することができるのでレスキューや救援隊にとっても有用です。」

パートナーマネジメント及び開発担当部長のDelations Jim Ayson氏は、「彼らはiCalamityや他の救助者と密接に協力しながら活動し、Yolanda救助活動や未来の同様な災害において成果を上げるでしょう。」と言う。

iCalamityはWeb上でフリーで利用可能です。iOS版とAndroid版も用意されています。

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「早急な救助が必要な人々や個人を特定することができるのでレスキューや救援隊にとっても有用です。」

パートナーマネジメント及び開発担当部長の団長Jim Ayson氏は、「彼らはiCalamityや他の救助者と密接に協力しながら活動し、Yolanda救助活動や未来の同様な災害において成果を上げるでしょう。」と言う。

iCalamityはWeb上でフリーで利用可能です。iOS版とAndroid版も用意されています。

元の翻訳
Thank you for responding about the shipping and back order.

Please ship the back ordered item as soon as you get it in stock.

Thank you for making the 1037 substitute product.
I'll order it from 1453H.

From now on when I order every type of specialty pillow should I order it from 1453H?

Does that mean you don't have any of the following products I ordered on December 2nd in stock?

I'll contact you again after confirming whether or not to wait on this product.

Have you already shipped the product ordered before that one?
Please send me the invoice.

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Thank you for contacting me about the shipping and back order.

Please ship the back ordered item as soon as you get it in stock.

Thank you for making the replacement for the 1037.
I'll order it by 1453H.

From now on, when I order every type of specialty pillow should I order it with 1453H?

Does that mean you don't have any of the following products I ordered on December 2nd in stock?

I'll contact you again after confirming whether or not to wait on this product.

Have you already shipped the product ordered before that one?
Please send me the invoice.

元の翻訳
最初の長時間エアガンシューター。何かわからない事がある場合は日本語で書かれた取説があります。Airsplat社が推奨するシリコンオイルとプロパンフィルタノズルも購入しました。シリコンオイルをマガジンの推奨されている全ての部分に塗布しました。最初にエアガンを撃つことを試した時には、ガスが無くなるまでに約12発撃つことができました。再装填する時はガスが無くなる前に毎回約15発撃てたのですが、それが少なくなり1発(ローパワー)しか打てないようになりました。一見したところ、マガジンのシールの一つか、或いは私が何か間違いをしましたか。このマガジン用の修理キットはありますか。あるのでしたら、どこで購入できますか。

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射撃するのはベテランだが、エアソフトは初めてです。不満するならは日本語で書かれたマニュアルということだけです。Airsplat社が推奨するシリコン油とプロパン噴射ノズルも購入しました。シリコ油を弾倉の勧められている全ての個所に付けました。最初撃ってみたのは、ガスが切れたまでに約12発撃てました。リロードするたびにガスが切れる前「あと１５発」、打てなくなるほど弾倉が減ってきたものですけど。弾倉の封印が解けそうですけど。修理用キットがあるなら、どこで入手できるか教えてくれば幸いです。

元の翻訳
The reason Japan's health foods are loved by not only Japanese, but the whole world is their high level of quality.

Because these foods are ingested into our bodies everyday it's not just the Japanese that are looking for safe and secure foods.

Are your family, friends and lovers living a healthier and more energetic lifestyle than you? We're here to help.

We are managing this business with a small number of people.

Because we provide a service attentive to our customers' needs that large businesses cannot, we do not have large quantities of our goods in stock.

We are holding an anniversary sale in celebration of our shop's founding, so we hope you find something you'll like.

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The reason Japan's health foods are loved by not only Japanese, but the whole world is their high level of quality.

Because these foods are ingested into our bodies everyday it's not just the Japanese that are looking for safe and secure foods.

We are here to support you, your family, and loved ones so you can always live a healthy and energetic life.

We are managing this business with a small number of people.

Because we provide a service attentive to our customers' needs that large businesses cannot, we are not equipped to have a large quantity of goods always in stock.

We are holding an anniversary sale in celebration of our shop's founding; please order now and enjoy the sale while you can.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for contacting me. About the item I found, Please kindly register to your account. Thank you also for your 25$ discount.
I have one question as well, about the products I have received,↵
Tracking number: ＊＊↵
Tracking number: ＊＊↵
These two products are originally the same item, and you sent them to me distinctively considering the safety of amp and front panel of the main body. So, I wanted to declare glass panel for 0$, but it hasn't reflected. Will you let me know how I can solve this?

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Thank you very much for contacting me. Please register that item that I found to the account (my/your?). Also, thank you for the $25 discount.
I also have a question about another case, the items I currently have on order with tracking number:?? and ?? These are originally part of the same product, but considering the safety of the amp and front panel, I would like to have the two sent separately. I wanted to declare the price for the glass panel as $0, but its not reflecting in the price. Can you tell me how to resolve this?

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your interest in the items listed by our shop.

I am afraid to inform you that the item you have inquired is not an expurgated edition and it is in Japanese.
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If you can accept this condition, we will ship the brand new and unopened item but not used one.
Please consider this condition. Thank you very much.↵

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Thank you very much for your interest in the products at this shop.

I am afraid to inform you that the item you have inquired about is not an unaltered/uncensored edition and the language is in Japanese.
If you purchase it under these conditions, we will ship the brand new, unopened item, not a used one.
Please consider these conditions when purchasing. Best regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you for showing interest in the products of our store.

Unfortunately the product you are asking about is unaltered. The language is in Japanese.

If you want to buy this then I will send a new unopened product instead of a second-hand.
Please reconsider. Thank you.

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Thank you for showing interest in the products of our store.

Unfortunately, the product you are asking about is altered and the language is in Japanese.

If you want to buy this item, then I will send a new unopened product instead of a second-hand one.
Please consider purchasing it. Best regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your interests on our prodocts.

Sorry to say but the item you are enquiring is not the one of no modification and the language is Japanese.
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If you agree to purchase under this conditions, we will send you the new unwraped one not second handed one.
Thank you for your consideration and looking forward to your feedback.

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Thank you for your kind interest in on the products at this store,

Unfortunately, the item you are inquiring about is a censored one and the language is Japanese.
Purchasing under these conditions means the products sent will be a new unopened one, not a pre-owned one.
Please consider purchasing. Best regards

元の翻訳
There have been accidents once every 2-3 years where the fishing hooks get caught up.

In most of these cases, they tend to get not themselves but others caught up.

Please make sure to wear hats to protect the area around the head.

There are a lot of other vendors, and taking crowding and the natural environment into consideration, we have limited our services and will refrain from servicing school groups this spring.

After the participants are decided, the site rental will be arranged.
A training room, gymnasium, and restaurant near the lake can also be arranged for rental.

The rental fee will require around 200 yen per person.

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Accidents involving the hooks/needles getting stuck occur to the extent of about 1 every 2-3 years.

Of these, incidents where people get themselves stuck are, they are almost invariably cases where people are sticking other people.

We request hats are worn in order to protect around the head.

With other businesses enacting similar measures, our company is considering the strain on the natural environment and congestion at the site and and we have decided to cut back on the scale of events such as these aimed at school groups that visit during the spring. Please understand.

Once the number of participants is decided, we will move on to arranging a venue.
In the vicinity of the lake, a hands-on training center, gymnasium, and restaurant are being arranged.

We require approximately 200yen per person to cover the price of the venue.