Conyacサービス終了のお知らせ (11月25日更新)

翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → ネイティブ 英語 )

評価: 63 / 1 Review / 2013/11/22 08:52:17

paulboland
paulboland 63 My goal is to work as a translator in...
日本語

日本の健康食品が日本人はもちろんのこと、世界中の人から愛される理由は品質の高さです

毎日体に摂り入れるものだからこそ、安心安全な食品を探しているは日本人だけではありません

あなたが、家族や友人、恋人などと、いつまでも健康で活き活きした人生がおくれるよう応援します

私たちは少人数でショップを運営しています

大企業には決して真似ができないきめ細やかなサービスをしている為に、在庫は数多く抱えておりません

ショップを立ち上げた記念に期間限定のセールもやっていますので、今すぐご注文してください

英語

The reason Japan's health foods are loved by not only Japanese, but the whole world is their high level of quality.

Because these foods are ingested into our bodies everyday it's not just the Japanese that are looking for safe and secure foods.

Are your family, friends and lovers living a healthier and more energetic lifestyle than you? We're here to help.

We are managing this business with a small number of people.

Because we provide a service attentive to our customers' needs that large businesses cannot, we do not have large quantities of our goods in stock.

We are holding an anniversary sale in celebration of our shop's founding, so we hope you find something you'll like.

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psychonyaku 60 いつもお世話になっております。
psychonyakuはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/06 14:52:50

元の翻訳
The reason Japan's health foods are loved by not only Japanese, but the whole world is their high level of quality.

Because these foods are ingested into our bodies everyday it's not just the Japanese that are looking for safe and secure foods.

Are your family, friends and lovers living a healthier and more energetic lifestyle than you? We're here to help.

We are managing this business with a small number of people.

Because we provide a service attentive to our customers' needs that large businesses cannot, we do not have large quantities of our goods in stock.

We are holding an anniversary sale in celebration of our shop's founding, so we hope you find something you'll like.

修正後
The reason Japan's health foods are loved by not only Japanese, but the whole world is their high level of quality.

Because these foods are ingested into our bodies everyday it's not just the Japanese that are looking for safe and secure foods.

We are here to support you, your family, and loved ones so you can always live a healthy and energetic life.

We are managing this business with a small number of people.

Because we provide a service attentive to our customers' needs that large businesses cannot, we are not equipped to have a large quantity of goods always in stock.

We are holding an anniversary sale in celebration of our shop's founding; please order now and enjoy the sale while you can.

Other than the third line, this is one of the best translations I've seen on this site. The other lines are just comments and alternatives.

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