RosettaZero1 (psychonyaku) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
売られている商品「中古PS３アクセル・ワールド -銀翼の覚醒日本限定版」についての質問ですが。確認させていただきたいのですが、これはゲーム、更にBluray OVAを含む完全版ですよね。
あなたのe-Bayストアで注文したいですが、ご確認を待機しておりますが。
よろしくお願いします。
Roberto・CLD Computer Land snc

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売られている商品「中古PS３アクセル・ワールド -銀翼の覚醒 アニメ ブルーレイ 日本限定版」についての質問ですが。確認させていただきたいのですが、これはゲーム、OVAブルーレイ、その他を含む完全版ですよね。
e-Bayストアで注文したいので、ご確認をお待ちしております。
よろしくお願いします。
Roberto・CLD Computer Land snc

元の翻訳
I understood what was sent in the e-mail.
Today is Saturday and a holiday at the banks, so I will make the deposit on Monday.
Once the money is deposited I will contact you again.

Best regards

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I understood what was asked in the e-mail.
Today is Saturday and a closing day of (or for) the banks, so I will make the deposit on Monday.
Once the money is deposited I will contact you again.

Best regards

元の翻訳
I have something I would like to discuss regarding the current shape of the deal.
Regarding the items planned on being supplied by us, we are thinking we want to send 10 units each of USB memory and calculators.
We are thinking 10 units would be good, because we would like you to try a sampling of the items and attach and furnish a planned purchase order.
We would like you to ask the buyer on site what price and how many units they plan on ordering.
Speaking of which, what is the manner you use to collect payments from buyers?
Please inform us of the collection period and wage flow.
We are considering the number of items to ship out based on these figures.

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I have something I would like to discuss regarding the current shape of the deal.
Regarding the items planned on being supplied by us, we are thinking we want to send 10 units each of USB memory sticks and calculators.
We are thinking 10 units would be good because we would like you to try a sampling of the items and attach and furnish a planned purchase order.
We would like you to ask the buyer on site what price and how many units they plan on ordering.
Speaking of which, what is the manner you use to collect payments from buyers?
Please inform us of the collection period and wage flow.
We are considering the number of items to ship out based on these figures.

元の翻訳
ph76202
For the sake of that, however race and tribe are configured it is a feasible attribute. When compared to the antonym fair skinned it is a rather new element of Moe but preference for, brown skin or sun-tanned skin have been seen even from relatively earlier times. At least it is certain that the the word moe has existed much earlier than the second half of the 90s. Because of that, it is used outside of Moe culture also.
-Show me some pretty brown skin!
* Within parenthesis is the works they appear in
Urd (Oh my Goddess!)
Nadia (Nadia: The Secret of Blue Water)

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ph76202
For the sake of that, however race and tribe are configured it is a feasible attribute. When compared to the antonym fair skinned it is a rather new element of Moe but preference for brown skin, or sun-tanned skin have been seen even from relatively earlier times. At least it is certain that the the word moe has existed much earlier than the second half of the 90s. Because of that, it is used outside of Moe culture also.
-Show me some pretty brown skin!
* Within parenthesis is the works they appear in
Urd (Oh my Goddess!)
Nadia (Nadia: The Secret of Blue Water)

元の翻訳
ph75803
The following characters can be divided into those who from the moment they appear for whatever reason as women disguised as men. Even after they take off their disguises they keep referring to themselves as "boku", originally male characters who change their gender and become "boku" or as a result of male characters and female characters whose insides get switched around.
-I like you!
*inside the () are the works the characters star in.
Arle Nadja (Tale of Sorcery/Puyo Puyo)
Souseiseki (Rozen Maiden)
Natsume Tsuchimikado (Tokyo Ravens)
Kino (Kino's Journey)

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ph75803
The following characters can be divided into those who from the moment they appear for whatever reason as women disguised as men. Even after they take off their disguises they keep referring to themselves as "boku", originally male characters who change their gender and become "boku" or as a result of male characters and female characters whose insides get switched around.
-I (boku) like you!
*inside the () are the works the characters star in.
Arle Nadja (Tale of Sorcery/Puyo Puyo)
Souseiseki (Rozen Maiden)
Natsume Tsuchimikado (Tokyo Ravens)
Kino (Kino's Journey)

元の翻訳
ph62403
Lala Satalin Deviluke(To LOVEru -Toraburu-)
Mizuho Kazami (Please teacher!)
Tomalin (Teekyu)
Eris (Cat Plant Cutie/Let's go play: Bomb shells from the Sky)
-I'm an alien!
He insists he's an alien, but the main characters are doubtful.
Erio Tōwa (Electric Wave girl and Youthful boy)
Lucy Maria Misora (To Heart 2)
-Lastly...
No matter what generation, desires like "I want to meet an alien!" or "Am I actually an alien?" are ceasless.

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ph62403
Lala Satalin Deviluke(To LOVEru -Toraburu-)
Mizuho Kazami (Please teacher!)
Tomalin (Teekyu)
Eris (Cat Plant Cutie/Let's go play: Bomb shells from the Sky)
-I'm an alien!
He insists he's an alien, but the main characters are doubtful.
Erio Tōwa (Electric Wave girl and Youthful boy)
Lucy Maria Misora (To Heart 2)
-Lastly...
No matter what generation, desires like "I want to meet an alien!" or "Am I actually an alien?" are ceaseless.

元の翻訳
ご連絡どうもありがとうございます。お役に立てば幸いでございます。私はMVPマーケティング＆マネジメントの社長であるMario・Monteleon 「マリオ・モンテレオン」と申します。石川 遼と松山英樹の商品が在庫でございます。現在の在庫は以下のとおりでございます

まずは2012年アーナルド・パーマー招待からの石川遼さんにサインされたスリクソンのゴルフボールがございます。
一度も使わず新しくてぴかぴかとしてポンチ絵が付きサインされたものでございます。
もしご興味があるならば石川遼にサインされたマスターズの得点カードもございます。
ご感想やご購入する気になってくださいましたら、ご遠慮なくご通知をしてください。改めてどうもありがとうございます。

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ご連絡（どうも）ありがとうございます。あなたとお仕事（お取引）ができれば幸いでございます。私はMVPマーケティング＆マネジメントの社長を務めさせていただいていますMario・Monteleon （マリオ・モンテレオン）と申します。石川 遼と松山英樹の商品両方共、在庫がございます。現在の在庫は以下のとおりでございます。

まずは2012年アーナルド・パーマー招待の石川遼さんのサイン入りスリクソンのゴルフボールがございます。
新品で（一度も使わず新しくてぴかぴかとして）ポンチ絵付きサイン入りです。
もし興味がございましたら、石川遼サイン入りのマスターズの得点カードもございます。
ご感想やご購入希望の商品などがございましたら、ご連絡ください。↵
よろしくお願い申し上げます。↵
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