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元の翻訳
NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 (Wed) main store/EC buyers Special offer!! <Published Special offer pattern!!>

An original featured present will be given to people who will be reserving or buying the TOHOSHINKI NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 in the following chain stores!
In addition, people who will be reserving or buying in the other CD shops will receive a TOHOSHINKI original postcard as a present on a first come for serve basis!!
This is a special limited offer so please make your reservations now !!

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NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 (Wed) main store/EC buyers Special offer!! <Published Special offer pattern!!>

An original featured present will be given to people who will be reserving or buying the TOHOSHINKI NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 in the following chain stores!
In addition, people who will be reserving or buying in the other CD shops will receive a TOHOSHINKI original postcard as a present on a first come first serve basis!!
This is a special limited offer so please make your reservations now !!

元の翻訳
① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, there is a need to confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Suppose that a product gets lost or became missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two points.
ⅰ. Full amount refund
ⅱ. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

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① All products will be shipped with a tracking number as before.
② Unexpected accidents, troubles, and product loss occur for international deliveries. During those times, there is a need to confirm the tracking status from the tracking number and issue a refund.
③ Suppose that a product gets lost or has gone missing, we can have the buyer choose from the following two points.
ⅰ. Full amount refund
ⅱ. Shipping of new product (free shipping)

元の翻訳
Price
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This is the price of the product.
The difference with the image size differs per person so I do not think that this is not my error.
Can I request for this evaluation to be deleted?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

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Price
Insert a space
This is the rating of the product.
The difference with the image size differs per person so I do not think that this is my error.
Can I request for this evaluation to be deleted?
Thank you and regards.
Have a good day.

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Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template with the product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

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Thank you for contacting me. If you wish to continue my work then I will be happy to accept that.

I will lend you the usage rights for the paid product search tool in Terapeak eBay this time. This would be under the condition that you will not use this tool when I am using it. I will notify you beforehand when I am using this tool.

Please try using Terapeak until I am finished with the manual.

I will place the shipping charge template on the box. Please ensure to use the template with the corresponding product weight.

Please display the following products in commerce from your PC.

元の翻訳
To the person in charge.

Thank you for your usual support.
I am sending the merchant invoice for tracking number 961191307871261827053 and 420342389405509699938263320446.
Please set the packages to shipping status after confirming those.
Please let me know if there are any problems.
I will support in a prompt manner.

Thank you.

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To the person in charge.

Thank you for your usual support.
I am sending the merchant invoice for tracking number 961191307871261827053 and 420342389405509699938263320446.
Please set the packages to shipping status after confirming those.
Please let me know if there are any problems.
I will provide you support in a prompt manner.

Thank you.

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Thank you very much for responding.

I am thinking of buying the 8 units in stock,
but is it possible for you to combine this with the 1 unit bought in eBay and shipped it together?

Thank you and regards.

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Thank you very much for responding.

I am thinking of buying the 8 units in stock,
but is it possible for you to combine this with the 1 unit bought from eBay and shipped it together?

Thank you and regards.