New translator (newbie_translator) — 付けたレビュー

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The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Your special days with a special camera will leave behind a beautiful gallery.

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The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let's save the different special days taken with a special camera in a beautiful gallery.

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Wow, you moved a lot! LOL
Where you live is really important. Shibuya is a good place... but it is pretty noisy.
Oh by the way, my office is in Suginami, Nakano. Is it close?

I love Urayasu!
I have been living here for 10 years now.
It's a low-lying part of Tokyo and a lot of the people are warm. It's very comfortable to live and I recommend it.
You can also get to Tokyo station in 20 minutes, but it is painful that the last train leaves quite early!!

Yes, I love horses and animals! But not insects....
I have done horseback riding several times, and my brother does horseback riding too.
I'd love to visit Oregon one day.

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Wow, you moved a lot! LOL
Where you live is really important. Shibuya is a good place... but it is pretty noisy.
Oh by the way, my office is in Suginami, Nakano. Is it close?

I love Urayasu!
I have been living here for 10 years now.
It's a low-lying part of Tokyo and a lot of the people are warm. It's very comfortable to live in and I would recommend it.
You can also get to the Tokyo train station in 20 minutes, but it is hard that the last train leaves quite early!!

Yes, I love horses and animals! But not insects....
I have done horseback riding several times, and my brother does horseback riding too.
I'd love to visit Oregon one day.

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Thank you very much for letting me know the order number.

However, there has been no transactions found with me on investigation.

Probably, the order number is wrong. Otherwise, you might be misunderstanding it.

Please kindly confirm it again. If you are not unsure, kindly contact Amazon instead of me.

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Thank you very much for letting me know the order number.

However, there has been no transactions found with me upon investigation.

Probably, the order number is wrong. Otherwise, you might have gotten it wrong.

Please kindly confirm it again. If you are not sure, kindly contact Amazon instead of me.

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Shall I just send the shirt?
Shall I refund the full amount for both the shirt and the pants?

I have put together your oder; called and emailed your many times.
But I was unable to make contact with you, and you eventually canceled.
I am very sorry, but I will no longer be doing business with you.

I usually do not refuse customers.
But you are very selfish.

You absolutely do not think about my feelings.
I had been prepared so that I can send you the order at any time.

You have purchased from me before so you should have known that it is not for children.

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Shall I just send the shirt?
Shall I refund the full amount for both the shirt and the pants?

I have put together your order; called and emailed you many times.
But I was unable to make contact with you, and you eventually canceled.
I am very sorry, but I will no longer be doing business with you.

I usually do not refuse customers.
But you are very selfish.

You absolutely do not think about my feelings.
I had been prepared so that I can send you the order at any time.

You have purchased from me before so you should have known that it is not for children.

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Thank you always for your quick delivery.

The other day, you sent the latest price list,
but can you also send the latest catalog in soft copy?

Also, please send the larger data file of the attached photo.

In addition, can you also send the sample fabrics that you always send with the shipments?

I would also like to request that you send us the shipment date, packaging list and tracking number whenever you make a shipment.

Without this information, we are unable to check the contents upon arrival to our warehouse, ↵
and it delays our orders.

Thank you in advance.

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Thank you always for your quick delivery.

You sent the latest price list the other day,
but can you also send the latest catalog data?

Please also send the large data file of the attached photo.

In addition, can you also include the sample fabrics that you always send together with the succeeding shipment?

Can you also send us the shipment date, packaging list and tracking number whenever you make a shipment?

Without this information, we won't be able to check the contents in our warehouse even if the product has arrived, and it also causes delays for those orders.

Thank you in advance.

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Once again, thank you for your order.
Because this product uses high-pressure gas and there's a posibility it can burn, I can not send it by air mail.
I am very sorry, but the order will have to be canceled.
I deeply apologize for my clumsiness.

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Once again, thank you for your order.
Because this product uses high-pressure gas and there's a possibility it can burn, I can not send it by air mail.
I am very sorry, but the order will have to be canceled.
I deeply apologize for my clumsiness.

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We carelessly uploaded inappropriate products this time. We will make sure that we won't upload any inappropriate products again by managing products in the list. We also will be sure that we will temporally disable the listing once we upload it to double check that we don't list any inappropriate products. We are confident that we will not have the same problem by checking it twice.

I have experiences selling on ebay other than Amazon. We mainly sell Japanese products. We also sell toys and home electrical appliances on auction sites in Japan.

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We carelessly uploaded inappropriate products this time. We will make sure that we won't upload any inappropriate products again by managing products with a list. We will also temporarily disable the sales after we upload it and double check that we don't list any inappropriate products in the stock information. We are confident that we will not have the same problem by checking it twice.

I have experiences selling on ebay aside from Amazon. We mainly sell Japanese products. We also sell toys and home electrical appliances on auction sites in Japan.

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First of all, I would like to apologize with the inconvenience this may have caused.
It would be greatly appreciated if you could resend the product to us.

Furthermore, since there we caused you great trouble, I would like to help you by exchanging the product to something similar.

The refund has already been completed.

Something different would be alright.

If the product is from Japan, we would be happy to assist you to purchase it.

Sincere apology again for the inconvenience this has caused and we look forward to serving you again.↵

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First of all, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience that this may have caused.
It would be greatly appreciated if you could resend the product to us.

Furthermore, since we caused you great inconvenience, I would like to help you by replacing it with a similar product.

The refund has been completed.

Something different would also be alright.

If the product is from Japan, we would be happy to assist you to purchase it.

Again, our sincerest apology for the inconvenience may have caused and we look forward to serving you again.

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There are the total 8 emergency exits.

JL950 service will use the Boeing 767 plane on November 5. The plane has total 237 seast, including 30 business seats and 207 coach seats. There are the total 8 emergency exits.

Korean Air was founded in 1962, has provided their services in 125 cities or 45 countries, and has 149 planes.
Japan Airline was founded in 1951, has provided their services in 229 airports or 40 countries, and has 214 planes.

Korea Air has won the first position in the contest of inovative air companies in the world 2012.

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There are a total of 8 emergency exits.

JL950 service will use the Boeing 767 plane on November 5. The plane has total 237 seats, including 30 business seats and 207 coach seats. There are a total 8 emergency exits.

Korean Air was founded in 1962, has provided their services in 125 cities or 45 countries, and has 149 planes.
Japan Airline was founded in 1951, has provided their services in 229 airports or 40 countries, and has 214 planes.

Korea Air was selected with a ranking of first place for innovative air companies in the world of 2012.

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However, your assessment seems to be 100% and I am content with your correspondence.
That is why I chose to send you this message before reviewing you first.

What are your thoughts on this incident?
I hope that you would be able to come up with a solution I can work with.

Also, please be extra careful when packing the product for delivery.
The packages are extremely roughly handled, and the product is prone to get broken.
If the products are free to move around inside the box, it makes it easier to break.
Please make sure that there are no extra spaces in the box.

I have been happy with your correspondence, but I just wasn't happy with the state your product was in.

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However, your assessment seems to be 100% and I am satisfied with your actions.
That is why I chose to send you this message before providing a review.

What are your thoughts on this incident?
I hope that you would be able to come up with a solution that I can accept.

Also, please be extra careful when packing the product for delivery.
The packages are handled very roughly, and the product is prone to get broken.
If the products are free to move around inside the box, it makes it easier to break.
Please make sure that there are no extra spaces in the box.

I have been happy with your actions, but I just wasn't happy with the state the product was in.

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There is a hole on the right lower part of the product.
Had I known that the product had a hole, I would not have purchased it for this price.

I think that the hole should affect hugely on the price of the product, as it is a huge shortcoming.

On the documents, it says that there is a flaw in one part, but I feel that it should have been more clearly.
You could also have posted a picture of the part with the hole.

Did you not make an ambiguous statement knowingly?
If so, what you're doing is fraud.

I am thinking of writing about this on your review.

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There is a hole on the lower right part of the product.
Had I known that the product had a hole, I would not have purchased it for this price.

I think that the hole should hugely affect the price of the product as it is a huge shortcoming.

On the documents, it says that there is a flaw on one part, but I feel that it should have been stated more clearly.
You could also have posted a picture of the part with the hole.

Did you not make an ambiguous statement knowingly?
If so, what you're doing is fraud.

I am thinking of writing about this on your review.

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Hi Dan, thanks for the reply.
I will contact you and make payments through my PayPal ID.

Prior to our , I have purchased 2 products on RCTAIY by Amazon.
I will be directly purchasing from you , starting with 10 products. If it sells well, then we will be purchasing larger quantities.
[] What will the price be for each quantity?
10 items
20 items
30 items
40 items
Is it possible to ship them directly to Japan?

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Hi Dan, thanks for the reply.
I will contact you and make payments through my PayPal ID.

Prior to our deal, I have purchased 2 products on RCTAIY by Amazon.
I will be directly purchasing from you , starting with 10 products. If it sells well, then I will be purchasing larger quantities.
[] What will the price be for each quantity?
10 items
20 items
30 items
40 items
Is it possible to ship them directly to Japan?

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Thank you for your hlep.
ebay account has been limited.
But the last day, it can limit-up again.
I have also submitted documents of identification and other documents like before
I am having purchasing on ebay.
Limited is a big trouble to me.
Please release it as soon as possible.
I am having transaction on ebay as a gentlmen.
Please solve this problem as soon as possible

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Thank you for your help.
ebay account has been restricted.
But the last day, it can limit-up again.
I have also submitted documents of identification and other documents like before
I make a living from ebay.
The restriction is very troubling for me.
Please remove it as soon as possible.
I am courteously doing transaction on ebay.
Please resolve this problem as soon as possible.

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I'm afraid the item you have ordered is out of stock, with no plans of restocking in the foreseeable future. However, the similar product A can be restocked, and be delivered to you by the deadline. The details for this product A is under the following URL below. If you are happy with this alternative, we will be happy to deliver this instead. The price and delivery fee will be the same, but we will be able to give you an Amazon coupon worth $10. Kind regards.

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I'm afraid the item you have ordered is out of stock, with no plans of restocking it in the near future. However, the similar product A can be restocked, and can be delivered to you by the deadline. You can confirm the details of the product in the URL below. If you are alright with this alternative, we will be happy to deliver this instead. The price and delivery fee will be the same, but we will give you an Amazon coupon worth $10. Kind regards.

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Good Day. I am Tanaka who bought this product from you last time. I appreciate your support as I would like to but additional products this time.
I have completed the payment so please ship the products once you have completed the confirmation
In addition , it will greatly be appreciated if you can ensure that the products won't be damage.
Until then , I am looking forward for the arrival of the products.

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Good Day. I am Tanaka who bought this product from you last time. I appreciate your support as I would like to buy additional products this time.
I have completed the payment so please ship the products once you have completed the confirmation
In addition, it will greatly be appreciated if you can ensure that the products won't be damage.
Until then, I am looking forward for the arrival of the products.

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Thank you for the quick reply.
I am very disappointed that we cannot do direct transactions with your company. I really liked HR-03 so I find it hard to accept the sad reality. Won't you be able to grant my wish to be able to sell your company's products in Japan? If I cannot do direct transactions with your company, will you be able introduce an agency in the US that complies with the shipping of products to Japan and who also happens to have the cheapest stock? Will that be possible? I would be for a favorable response.

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Thank you for the quick reply.
I am very disappointed that we cannot do direct transactions with your company. I really liked HR-03 so I find it hard to accept the sad reality. Won't you be able to grant my wish to be able to sell your company's products in Japan? If I cannot do direct transactions with your company, will you be able introduce an agency in the US that complies with the shipping of products to Japan and who also happens to have the cheapest stock? Will that be possible? I would be waiting for a favorable response.

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Please tell your shipping staff to ship my rug so that it will hopefully reach me by September 26.

I know that you cannot guarantee, but please tell your shipping staff to try anything he/she can do so that my rug will reach me as soon as possible.

Among the items I received today, an item different from my order was included. As I cannot return it directly, I will send it back to you. Is the address shown in the current address alright for you to receive it?

When you receive it, please forward it to the specified location for me. I will send you the free shipping label and the address to return via email later.

I am placing an order again because a wrong item was delivered. Please ship it immediately.

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Please tell your shipping staff to ship my rug so that it will hopefully reach me by September 26.

I know that you cannot guarantee, but please tell your shipping staff to accommodate this so that my rug will reach me as soon as possible.

Among the items I received today, an item different from my order was included. As I cannot return it directly from Japan, I will send it back to you. Is it alright to send it to the address shown in the Current Address?

When you receive it, please forward it to the specified location for me. I will send you the free shipping label and the return address via email later.

I am placing an order again because a wrong item was delivered. Please ship it immediately.

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Today I looked at the rugs I received and found a wrong one that I did not even order.

I attach a picture of this wrong rug.

I will not be able to return it to you until next week due to my job.

I would like to have the rug I ordered immediately. Please ship the one I ordered before you receive the return. Could you do so?

Will I get the right rug sooner if I place an order again?

Recently troubles have been often happening including late deliveries and cancellation of orders by your reasons. Please make sure with your shipping staff not to ship a wrong item this time.

I would like you to process this order as soon as possible.

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Upon confirming today I found that a totally different rug was delivered to me.

This was the rug that was delivered to me. I am also attaching a picture.

I will not be able to return it to you until next week due to my work schedule.

I would like you to deliver the rug according to what I've ordered as soon as possible. I would like you to ship the one I've ordered prior to receiving the returned product. Is this possible?

Will the delivery be faster if I place a new order for the same rug?

Recently, troubles such as late deliveries and cancellation of orders made by your company are frequently occurring. Please inform your staff not to ship a wrong item this time.

I would like you to process this order as soon as possible.