翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

販売復権のお願い


私は問題点を確認しましたので販売計画を提出します。
商品が届かないことがクレームにつながり、顧客満足度をさげていり
ことが問題点です。
私は以下対応、改善策を提案いたします。

英語

Request for Sales Reinstatement

I have confirmed the problem so I am submitting a sales plan.
The problem points are the non arrival of products leading to claims and lowered customer satisfaction.
I am proposing the following improvement measures.

レビュー ( 3 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/16 15:37:25

元の翻訳
Request for Sales Reinstatement

I have confirmed the problem so I am submitting a sales plan.
The problem points are the non arrival of products leading to claims and lowered customer satisfaction.
I am proposing the following improvement measures.

修正後
Appeal for the Removal of Selling Privileges

I have identified the problems on my selling practice in the past, so I would like to submit a Plan of Action
The problems had been the non-delivery of products which had led to customers’ claims and lowered customers’ satisfaction.
I would like to propose the following Plan of Action for the improvement.↵

[[削除済みユーザ]]

I have identified the problems on my selling practice in the past, so I would like to submit a Plan of Actionの文章中のsoの前にあるコンマを忘れないでください。さもないと文章が全く違う意味になってしまいます。

kapsiao_i3はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/17 16:11:54

good!

newbie_translatorはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/17 16:16:16

good!