翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

備考: 東方神起はTOHOSHINKIとしてください
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日本語

3/5(水)発売 NEW ALBUM「TREE」店頭/EC購入者特典決定!!＜特典絵柄公開!!＞

東方神起3/5 発売のNEW ALBUM「TREE｣を以下チェーン店でご予約またはお買い上げの方にオリジナル特典のプレゼントが決定しました！
また、その他CDショップでご予約またはお買い上げの方には先着で“東方神起オリジナルポストカード”をプレゼントいたします!!
いずれの特典も数に限りがございますので、お早めにご予約ください！！

英語

NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 (Wed) main store/EC buyers Special offer!! <Published Special offer pattern!!>

An original featured present will be given to people who will be reserving or buying the TOHOSHINKI NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 in the following chain stores!
In addition, people who will be reserving or buying in the other CD shops will receive a TOHOSHINKI original postcard as a present on a first come for serve basis!!
This is a special limited offer so please make your reservations now !!

レビュー ( 2 )

newbie_translatorはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/20 23:54:35

元の翻訳
NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 (Wed) main store/EC buyers Special offer!! <Published Special offer pattern!!>

An original featured present will be given to people who will be reserving or buying the TOHOSHINKI NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 in the following chain stores!
In addition, people who will be reserving or buying in the other CD shops will receive a TOHOSHINKI original postcard as a present on a first come for serve basis!!
This is a special limited offer so please make your reservations now !!

修正後
NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 (Wed) main store/EC buyers Special offer!! <Published Special offer pattern!!>

An original featured present will be given to people who will be reserving or buying the TOHOSHINKI NEW ALBUM[TREE] released on 3/5 in the following chain stores!
In addition, people who will be reserving or buying in the other CD shops will receive a TOHOSHINKI original postcard as a present on a first come first serve basis!!
This is a special limited offer so please make your reservations now !!

minor typo

kapsiao_i3はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/03/21 00:00:25

not bad