Maiko (milvia) — もらったレビュー

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It's a brand-new and made in Japan.
It will be sent from Japan.
Customers need to pay VAT and customs duty.
There are cases that delivery may be delay for special reason.
And there is a possibility that the product are all sold out because it is a continue selling.
We will send the product by EMS or ePacket.
Be caution that you may need a transformer for an electric appliance.
We make an effort for an improvement in service.
Thank you.

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It's a brand-new item made in Japan.
It will be sent from Japan.
Customers need to pay VAT and customs duty.
There are cases that delivery may be delayed for special reasons.
And there is a possibility that the product are [s-v agreement] all sold out because it is a continue [parts of speech confusion] selling.
We will send the product by EMS or ePacket.
Please be aware that you may need a transformer for an electric appliance.
We make an effort to improve our service.
Thank you.

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Hi,
I will tell you an account number one year later when I open the cooperate account.
Please don't forget that I have purchased the Lion EA's double license.

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Hi,
I will tell you the account number one year later when I open the cooperate account.
Please don't forget that I have purchased the Lion EA's double license.

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Your name in Japanese Kanji is below.
①◯◯、２△△、３XX、
Let me know your favorite Kanji. It will take 1 to 2 weeks to send you back.
I will attach PDF file to your email.

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Your name in kanji is below.
①◯◯、２△△、３XX
Please let me know your favorite one. It will take 1 to 2 weeks to send 書いた紙 to you.
I will email you a PDF file to your email.

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メールする前に郵便局で追跡番号を聞いたところ、荷物は送り先のララミー市には到着していないとのことです。
私は、番号の一部をよく記憶しておらず、古い荷物の追跡番号をチェックしておりました。近くの郵便局で尋ねたところ、荷物は全て郵送されており受け取られていて、返送をお願いしていない限り戻ってこないということです。↵
女性の郵便局員は、今のところなす術はなく、荷物が戻ってくるのを待つしかないということです。
なぜ戻ってきたか理由を記した手紙が入っている可能性があるとのことです。

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メールする前に地元の郵便局で該当の追跡番号で問い合わせたところ、荷物は送り先のララミー市には一切到着していないとのことです。
私は、その部分はよく記憶しておらず、以前あなたから送られた古い荷物の追跡番号をチェックしておりました。近くの郵便局で尋ねたところ、私が差し止めを頼むより早く荷物はここLaramieに届くはずだと言われました。すべての荷物を私が返送を依頼しない限り郵送するか差し止めするようお願いしておきました。女性の郵便局員は、今のところなす術はなく、荷物が戻ってくるのを待つしかないということです。
またなぜあなたのところへ戻ってきたか理由を記した手紙が入っている可能性があるとのことです。

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The goods have already arrived at your country on November 28th. However the goods had been stopped at customs.
We claimed but it takes a time. We don't know how long it will take.
Do you want to cancel your order?
Thank you for buying our produt.

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The goods have already arrived at your country on November 28th. However the goods have been stopped at customs.
We claimed but it takes a time. We are not sure how long it will take.
Would you like to cancel your order?
Thank you for purchasing our products.

元の翻訳
The goods have already arrived at your country on November 28th. However the goods had been stopped at customs.
We claimed but it takes a time. We don't know how long it will take.
Do you want to cancel your order?
Thank you for buying our produt.

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The goods have already arrived at your country on November 28th. However the goods have been stopped at customs.
We claimed but it takes a time. We don't know how long it will take.
Do you want to cancel your order?
Thank you for buying our produt.

元の翻訳
Judy Ongg / Love is Calling
May J./ Let it Go

[Singers in a VTR]
Goldenbomber
Sho Sakurai
Masato Nakamura(Dreams Come True)
etc.
*in kana order

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Judy Ongg / Love is Calling
May J./ Let it Go

[Singers in a VTR]
Goldenbomber
Sho Sakurai
Masato Nakamura(Dreams Come True)
etc.
※Syllabary order↵

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The name of bar "Richa 3rd street" has changed to "Downtown".
The black-and-white photo was taken in 1990 and color photo was taken in 2011.
When taken in 1990, a bubble economy still remained. The name of bar may reflect that time of period. I click the shutter since the naming of the bar has great impact on me at that time.
I don't know if the bar still does business now, but it must be an atmosphere of Showa Period.
This is Ookawabashi seen fron Eitai-bridge. The Black-and -white photo was taken in 1990 and color's was taken in 2011.

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The name of bar "Richa 3rd street" has changed to "Downtown".
The black-and-white photo was taken in 1990 and color photo was taken in 2011.
When taken in 1990, a bubble economy still remained. The name of bar may reflect that time of period. I click the shutter since the naming of the bar has great impact on me at that time.
I don't know if the bar still does business now, but it must be an atmosphere of Showa Period.
This is Ookawabashi seen from the Eitai-bridge. The Black-and -white photo was taken in 1990 and the color was taken in 2011.

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I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on official business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, you should be better order in this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

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I am sorry for contacting with you while you are out on business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, it is recommended you should order within this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

元の翻訳
I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on official business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, you should be better order in this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

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I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on a business trip.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the day of shipment will be delayed.
If the date of delivery is a priority, it would be better to order within this week.
If you have difficulty ordering this week because of the business trip, please let me know when will you be able to order.

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Have you done the process to claim PaPpal already?
I will refund your money as soon as possible.
As I am out and at not my office, I can't access to internet.
As soon as I get back home, I will check PayPal. Please wait for a moment.

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Have you done the process to claim PaPpal already?
I will refund your money as soon as possible.
I am afraid I can't access to internet as I am out and not at my office.
As soon as I get back home, I will check PayPal. Please wait for a moment.

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The product of Rose you have ordered is to be sent on 13th, Feb. and to be delivered on 15th.
Under the influence of severe weather, roses are not well grown up. We are sorry for taking a time to deliver and hope your understanding.

We will let you know when shipping has done.
We look forward to your continued acquaintance.

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The rose product you have ordered is to be sent on Feb 13th, and to be delivered on the 15th.
Due to the influence of severe weather, the roses are not yet properly developed, and therefore can not be sent immediately and will take time until delivery. We are terribly sorry about this and hope for your understanding.

We will let you know when they have been shipped.
We look forward to your continued patronage.

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本日中にお届けします。なお配送は無料となりました。

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本日中に出荷致します。なお、無料で特急便に変更させて頂きました。

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<br></br> I would like everyone to support us. I look forward to your acquaintance.

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<br></br> I would like everyone to support us. I look forward for your assistance.

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I'm working as assistant a whole day.
There is a bathroom diagonally to this room.
You go out and walk the far side of here. It doesn't matter which way you go.
There is no convenient store in the company nor nearby.
We have a co-op store and a cafeteria. They are in a building where you step out this building and walk across a street.↵

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I'm working as an assistant all day today.
Bathroom is located on the other side of corner from this room.
If you get out this room, you may walk toward either way. It is on the other side of the floor.
There is no convenience store in the company nor nearby.
We have a small kiosk in the company as well as a company cafeteria. ↵
The kiosk and the company cafeteria are located in the building across the street from this building.

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About the product, VER RARE 1978 BRADLEY MICKEY MOUSE ANIMATED MOVING HEAD CHARACTER WATCH NICE!, purchased through ebay shopping.

I have already paid by PayPal, but haven't received the product yet.
I have been contacting to deliver the product several times, but there is no response.
Please let me know if there is any probrem on delivery system.
If there is no contact with me by tomorrow, I will objet to seek to a refund.

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About the product, VER RARE 1978 BRADLEY MICKEY MOUSE ANIMATED MOVING HEAD CHARACTER WATCH NICE!, purchased through ebay shopping.
<This is in regards to the product "VERY RARE 1978 BRADLEY MICKEY MOUSE ANIMATED MOVING HEAD CHARACTER WATCH NICE!" which I purchased through ebay,>↵

I have already paid by PayPal, but haven't received the product yet.
I have been contacting to deliver the product several times, but there is no response.
<I have been contacting you to deliver the product several times, but there is still no response.>↵
Please let me know if there is any probrem on delivery system.
<Please let me know if there is any problem with the delivery.>↵
If there is no contact with me by tomorrow, I will objet to seek to a refund.↵
<If there is no contact from you by tomorrow, I will object to seek a refund.>

元の翻訳
This PC software can authenticate up to 3 people.
We can't find out the reason of product key's authentication error.↵
And so we will give a new product key to the customers to solve the problems.

Japan's Microsoft company have no relation to Microsoft Corporation in US.
Therefore support office will limit to accept Japan's Microsoft products .
Products are all authorized and so please feel free to use.

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This software can authenticate up to 3 people.
We can't find out the reason for the product key's authentication error, so we will give you a new product key to resolve the problems.

Microsoft of Japan has no relation to the Microsoft Corporation in the US.
Therefore, the support office will only provide support for Japan's Microsoft products .
The products are all legitimate versions, so please feel free to use them.

元の翻訳
この商品をイギリスへ送りたいのですが、ギフトとして送付していただけますか？

ギフトとラベルを張る際に３０ドルと表記してください。

おっしゃっている意味が理解できませんが。。
ギフトとして商品を送付して輸入税は、受取人に支払っていただくという事になりますが？

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この商品をイギリスへ送りたいのですが、ギフトとして送付していただけますか？

ギフトとラベルを張る際に３０ポンドと表記してください。

おっしゃっている意味が理解できませんが。
ギフトとして商品を送付して輸入税は、受取人に支払っていただくという事になりますが？