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日本語

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それ以降に発注すると、出荷日が遅れてしまいます。
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英語

I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on official business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, you should be better order in this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

レビュー ( 2 )

o63odtはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/13 20:21:46

元の翻訳
I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on official business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, you should be better order in this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

修正後
I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on a business trip.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the day of shipment will be delayed.
If the date of delivery is a priority, it would be better to order within this week.
If you have difficulty ordering this week because of the business trip, please let me know when will you be able to order.

cold7210はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/14 10:27:04

元の翻訳
I am sorry for contacting with you while you are on official business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, you should be better order in this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?

修正後
I am sorry for contacting with you while you are out on business.
If you are ordering shoes during this week, it will be shipped in April.
After that, the shipment will be delayed.
If you have priority to an appointed date, it is recommended you should order within this week.
When could you order if you have a difficulty on ordering this week because of your business trip?