mbednorz (mbednorz) — もらったレビュー

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Thank you for sending the new price list.
After some consideration, I'll change the quantities to order, so please check them.

Item 1: xx units
Item 2: yy units

Also, I signed the terms & conditions, so please check it.

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Thank you for sending the new price list.
After some consideration, I'll change the order quantities, so please check them.

Item 1: xx units
Item 2: yy units

Also, I signed the terms & conditions, so please check it.

元の翻訳
Happy New Year.
Thank you for using our store last year.
It's winter now in Japan.
The time of the year when it's the coldest.
Mt. Fuji and other place under the snow look beautiful.
My English is not very good, but
when you need to know something about Japanese products,
please do not hesitate to contact me.
I'm glad I got to know you through eBay.
Let's have another good year.

Thank you for using our store.
Have the goods arrived safely?
I'm doing business at Amazon wanting to deliver
Japanese products to people all over the world.

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Happy New Year.
Thank you for using our store last year.
It's winter now in Japan.
The time of the year when it's the coldest.
Mt. Fuji under the snow looks beautiful.
My English is not very good, but
when you need to know something about Japanese products,
please do not hesitate to contact me.
I'm glad I got to know you through eBay.
Let's have another good year.

Thank you for using our store.
Have the goods arrived safely?
I'm doing business at Amazon wanting to deliver
Japanese products to people all over the world.

元の翻訳
May the world be happy.

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May the world happy.

元の翻訳
Did you enjoy that last night?
I'm in Korea right now.
I was studying in Korea before too, I come here frequently.
This time, I'm accompanying my mom and her friend as an interpreter.

Let's have fun in Korea this time.
This town is very exciting.

Be careful on your way home.
From your sister in Japan, with love

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Did you enjoy that last night?
I'm in Korea right now.
As I used to study in Korea before, I come here frequently.
This time, I'm accompanying my mom and her friend as an interpreter.

Let's have fun in Korea this time.
This town is very exciting.

Be careful on your way home.
With love,↵
from your sister in Japan

元の翻訳
Are you shy too?
You're still young, so you can become good at Japanese if you study some.
I'm looking forward to the day when it happens.
Don't expect much from my English.

Next time we meet, you talk in Japanese, while I will speak English.

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Are you shy, too??
You're still young, so you can be good at Japanese if you study some!
I look forward to the day to come!
Don't expect much from my English though!

Next time we meet, you will talk in Japanese and I will in English!

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Mr XX

Good evening.

I'm sorry for contacting you this late.

Understood. Tomorrow, when we start the workday, I will tell the person in charge to send it as soon as possible.
Best wishes.

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Dear ○○,

Good evening.

I'm sorry for contacting you this late.

Understood. Tomorrow, at the start of our business day, I will tell the person in charge to send it as soon as possible.
Best wishes.

元の翻訳
Hello.

It has been over 3 days since the order, but no email noticing of shipping has come.
Please tell me the state of delivery.

Best wishes.

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Hello.

It has been over 3 days since my order placement, but I still have not heard from you regarding the shipping notice.
Please tell me the state of delivery.

Best wishes.

元の翻訳
In case when multiple images are uploaded, would it be possible to change the image file's name to the image's"alt" or "title"?
Also, if submitting Youtube vids was possible, that would be good.
It might be only my opinion, so please treat it as advice.

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When multiple images are uploaded, would it be possible to change the image file's name to the image's"alt" or "title"?
Also, if submitting Youtube videos was possible, that would be good.
It might be only my opinion, so please treat it as advice.