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It seems that I can't receive it because the file size is too big.
Could you cut it into parts and send it this way?

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It seems that I can't receive it because the file size is too big.
Could you split it into parts and send it to me?

元の翻訳
I tried to translate the Japanese maintenance manual that I have. I hope these instructions will be useful to you.

Usual maintenance
Soon after use, wash it well enough with a sponge with detergent, then rinse.
Wipe the water away after rinsing.

Maintenance in case it's very dirty
1. In case of discoloration
Fill the kettle with water up to about 70%, add 3 spoons of vinegar, put it over fire and heat it up.
It doesn't have to be boiled, just warming it up is enough. Move the kettle around so that the hot water can clean the inside of the kettle thoroughly.

修正後
I tried to translate the Japanese maintenance manual that I have. I hope these instructions will be useful to you.

Usual maintenance
Soon after use, wash it thoroughly with a sponge with detergent, then rinse well.
Wipe the water away after rinsing.

Maintenance against heavy stains
1. For discoloration
Fill the kettle with water up to about 70%, add 3 spoons of vinegar, put it over the fire and heat it up.
It doesn't have to boil, just warming it up is enough. Move the kettle around so that the hot water can clean the inside of the kettle thoroughly.

元の翻訳
"Pre-washed rice" is rice that you can cook instantly, without washing it.

This rice is a sort called "Akita Komachi".
It's rice grown with minimal use of pesticides.
Recipes allowing anyone to cook good rice easily are enclosed.
You can have a taste of Japan very easily, it's made to be almost the same as the rice you could eat in Japan.

Put 500ml of cold mineral water and the rice into your rice cooker.
After you put rice and water in the cooker, wait for 30 minutes.
After 30 minutes have passed, turn the cooker's switch on.

The cold mineral water and waiting 30 minutes are the key points.

修正後
"Pre-washed rice" is rice that you can cook instantly, without washing it.

This rice is a type called "Akita Komachi".
It's rice grown with minimal use of pesticides.
Recipes allowing anyone to cook good rice easily are enclosed.
You can have a taste of Japan very easily, it's made to be almost the same as the rice you could eat in Japan.

Put 500ml of cold mineral water and the rice into your rice cooker.
After you put rice and water in the cooker, wait for 30 minutes.
After 30 minutes have passed, turn the cooker's switch on.

The cold mineral water and waiting 30 minutes are the key points.

元の翻訳
-Thank you for the swift correspondence.
The price you presented me goes over my budget.
Sorry, but I'll have to give up on this item.
I'm sorry for taking your time.

-Thank you for the swift correspondence.
The price you presented me goes over my budget.
I'd be able to buy if you lower the prices by $5 for each article.
Would that be possible?
Please think about it.

修正後
-Thank you for your quick reply.
The price you presented me goes over my budget.
Sorry, but I'll have to give up on this item.
I'm sorry for taking your time.

-Thank you for your quick reply.
The price you presented me goes over my budget.
I'd be able to buy if you lower the prices by $5 for each article.
Would that be possible?
Please think about it.