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When I browse the hit charts at iTunes, only the following one tune won't play. Is it because there are special characters in the tune's name?

Also, when I click its name, the page doesn't change. (You're probably aware of this, though)
By the tune in the lowermost line, the playback button doesn't show up. I could fix it with CSS, but I'm reporting it just in case.

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When I browse the iTunes hit charts, only the following tune won't play. Is it because there are special characters in the its title?

Also, when I click its name, the page doesn't change. (You're probably aware of this, though)
By the tune in the lowermost line, the play button doesn't show up. I could fix it with CSS, but I'm reporting it just in case.

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#abit

Thank you for contacting me.

I checked again and the photos of fairway wood did not reach us.
It might be some trouble for you, but could send them again?

Also, would it be possible to order any other RBZ fairway wood?

Please reply when you can answer to both of my questions.

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#abit

Thank you for contacting me.

I checked again and the photos of fairway wood did not reach us.
It might be some trouble for you, but could you send them again?

Also, would it be possible for you to order any other RBZ fairway wood?

(Please reply when you can answer to both of my questions.)↵
Looking forward to hearing from you.

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Thank you for the message.
Concerning the item, I was able to confirm that it was sent.
It's possible that it's late because of our mistake with the delivery or a problem with the customs.
In case it doesn't reach you within 10 days, I will consider giving you a refund.

Sending is planned to be through air mail.
I will plan it so it arrives as soon as possible, so please be patient.

Sending to Singapore is possible.
Warranty only works in case of an early failure.

It's a Japanese product.
Delivery time is 10 days at best, 20 days at worst.
Best wishes.

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Thank you for the message.
We were able to confirm that the item was shipped.
It's possible that it's delayed because of our mistake with the delivery or a problem with the customs.
In case it doesn't reach you within 10 days, I will consider giving you a refund.

We are planning to ship the item through airmail.
I will work out something so that it arrives as soon as possible, so please be patient.

Shipment to Singapore is available.
The warranty is only available for the cases of initial failures.

It's a Japanese product.
Delivery time is 10 days at best, 20 days at worst.
Best wishes.

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I'm really thankful for your attractive offer.
I'm grateful for those few years of us doing business.

Well then I made a list of some items I need urgently.
I put the item URLs in it, so please take a look.
If they're possible to buy, I would like to tell you the quantities later. I would buy at least 4 units of each of the entries.

I'm also interested in items that are not Tour Issue goods, so I might contact you again about that.

Concerning ARP, I understood. Where does the ARP stamp have to be pressed?

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I'm really thankful for your attractive offer.
I'm grateful for those few years of us doing business.

Well then I made a list of some items I need urgently.
I put the item URLs in it, so please take a look.
If they're available for purchasing, I would like to tell you the quantities later. I would buy at least 4 units each of these items.

I'm also interested in items other than Tour Issue goods, so I might contact you again about that.

Concerning ARP, I understood. Where is the ARP stamp affixed?

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Hello.
It's 23:00 right now in Japan.
I'm writing to you worried because of no reply.
Did that discount proposition spoil your mood?
If it's so, I'm sorry.
I'm currently looking for a new retailer.
We think of your store as a really good one.
If possible, we would like to be doing business with you for a long time and
I'm thinking of placing a second order soon.
However, if you think of the price of the goods, shipping costs and tax, even if the goods are attractive, the unit price doesn't come together.
How big of a discount would be possible?
We do business sincerely and proactively.
If you have any doubts, please ask any questions.
I'm waiting for your message.

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Hello.
It's 23:00 right now in Japan.
I'm writing to you as I'm worried since I haven't received your response.
Did that discount proposition spoil your mood?
If it's the case, I apologize.
I'm currently looking for a new supplier.
We think of your store as a really good one.
If possible, we would like to be doing business with you for a long time and
I'm thinking of placing a second order soon.
However, if you consider the price of the goods, shipping costs and tax altogether, the unit price isn't quite what we are expecting, even if the goods are attractive.
How big of a discount would be able to offer us?
We do business sincerely and proactively.
If you have any doubts, please ask any questions.
I'm waiting for your message.

元の翻訳
I ordered 10, but one was delivered broken.
I contacted the seller saying it's broken, but received no answer.

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I ordered 10 units, but one of them was delivered broken.
I contacted the seller saying it's broken, but received no answer.

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I have news on the CD you wanted.
When I aked the maker, it turned out to not be produced anymore, so they had no more brand new ones in stock.
Next, I inquired at various stores carrying CDs, but they don't have it in stock either.
As I told you last time, there is no other way but to buy a used item or a very high-priced brand new one.
What should we do? Search further? There is a possibility that it might be posted at an auction site in the future.
Also, should we send the last transaction's items out? I'm waiting for your answer.

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I have news on the CD you wanted.
When I asked the manufacturer, it turned out that they didn't produce them anymore, so they had no more brand new ones in stock.
Next, I inquired many stores selling CDs, but they don't have it in stock either.
As I told you last time, there is no other way but to buy a used item or a very high-priced brand new one.
What should we do? Search further? There is a possibility that it may be listed at an auction site in Japan in the future.
Or, should we ship the items for this order? I'm waiting for your answer.

元の翻訳
Thank you for placing an order.

The goods you ordered the other day have arrived on March 7th and are stored at a post office.
The storage period is 5 days.
Your package might soon be sent back to me.
I will send the post office's message, so please unrgently contact your local post office.
Also, the tracking number is XX.

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Thank you for placing an order.

The goods you ordered the other day have arrived on March 7th and are stored at a post office.
The storage period is 5 days.
Your package might soon be sent back to me.
I will send the post office's message, so please urgently contact your local post office.
Also, the tracking number is XX.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry that I went home without being able to say goodbye to you.
Give your daughter a lesson.
She will get hurt as soon as you lose her from your eyes.
Tell her to lose weight all the time.
She eats carbohydrates too much, like ice cream or chocolate.
Her weight is probably 117lbs with a height of 5.2ft.
Be wary of her weight until she loses weight until 110lbs.
Concerning the lesson fee, please tell me the sum in this email.
I'll add the handling charge to it and send it.
I will pay you immediately through PayPal.

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I'm sorry that I went home without being able to say goodbye to you.
Give my daughter a lesson.
She gets accidents as soon as you lose her from your eyes.
Tell her to lose weight all the time.
She eatstoo much carbohydrates , like ice cream or chocolate.
Her weight is probably 117lbs with a height of 5.2ft.
Be wary of her weight until she loses weight until 110lbs.
Concerning the lesson fee, please tell me the sum in this email.
I'll add the handling charge to it and send it.
I will pay you immediately through PayPal.

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I have contacted the maker, but I still have not received any answer.
As soon as I do get an answer, I will let you know, so could you wait a little longer?
I'm grateful for your patience.

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I have contacted the manufacturer, but I still have not received any answer.
As soon as I do get the answer, I will let you know, so could you wait a little longer?
I'm grateful for your patience.

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ph55504

Himura Machiko (Ookami-san to Shichinin no Nakama-tachi)
Harusaki Chiwa (OreShura)
Maki Natsuo (Love Lab)

Boys do that too... kind of.

Danshi Koukousei no Nichijou

By the way, this is the very end of the story...

It works with onigiri too.
Suzukawa Koume (Taishou Yakyuu Musume)

...Or a whole loaf of bread.
Elizabeth Warren (Softeni)

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ph55504

Himura Machiko (Ookami-san to Shichinin no Nakama-tachi　(Mr. Wolf and 7 friends))
Harusaki Chiwa (OreShura (My girlfriend makes pandemonium))
Maki Natsuo (Love Lab)

Boys do that too... kind of.

Danshi Koukousei no Nichijou

By the way, this is the very end of the story...

It works with rice ball too.
Suzukawa Koume (Taishou Yakyuu Musume (Baseball girls in Taisho era))

...Or a whole loaf of bread.
Elizabeth Warren (Softeni (Soft Tennis))

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The reaction of visitors to the exhibition is favorable.
I'm getting a lot of questions.
In TP71, private visitors who came to enjoy the circuit and shop owners supporting it responded positively.
They're bothered by the mud and water being there in case they used the circuit. You can produce silver caps as well, right?
Customers who came privately to enjoy the circuit are constantly concerned with air pressure, so I think that they're the perfect customer base as the Japanese market's early adapter group.
I hope you reply as soon as possible.

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The reaction of visitors to the exhibition is favorable.
I'm getting a lot of questions.
Visitors who privately enjoy the circuit and the owners of shops supporting those responded positively to TP71.
They're concerned about the mud and water being there in case they used the circuit. You can produce silver caps as well, right?
Customers who came privately to enjoy the circuit are constantly concerned with air pressure, so I think that they're the perfect customer base as the Japanese market's early adapter group.
I hope you reply as soon as possible.

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Me too, last year, I had some boots sent from America and was made to pay X yen at the customs.
If you're unlucky, because of a check at customs, you have to pay duty.

Y is not the Y in Paris. The castle is Cinderella's castle, we have two kinds, the "Land" and the "Sea". I visit it each year, I recommend this place for sightseeing.

I'm excited about the birthday, but it becomes unpleasant as you get older. When I was a teen, I wanted to be older as fast as possible, though. This time, I'm thinking of sending a book, is there a comic you would like?

Belgian souvenirs should be alright, don't worry. I'm looking forward to it.

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Last year, I also had some boots sent from America and was made to pay X yen at the customs.
If you're unlucky, because of a check at customs, you have to pay duty.

Y is a little different from the Y in Paris. The castle is Cinderella's castle, we have two kinds, the "Land" and the "Sea". I visit it each year, I recommend this place for sightseeing.

I'm excited about the birthday, but it becomes unpleasant as you get older. When I was a teen, I wanted to be older as fast as possible, though. This time, I'm thinking of sending a book, is there a comic you would like?

Belgian souvenirs should be alright, don't worry. I'm looking forward to it.

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al61601

The Japanese rockstar, who merges manliness and feminity. The graceful, constantly evolving Hyde.

The beauty of the evolving rockstar, Hyde is extraordinary.

The Japanese vocalist. The vocalist of L'Arc~en~Ciel, guitarist of P'UNK~EN~CIEL and the vocalist of his own project, "VAMPS". Until 2006, he also worked solo under the name "HYDE".

Combining feminity and masculinity

His wavy long hair period looked phantasmal.

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al61601

A Japanese rockstar, who merges manliness and feminity. The graceful, constantly evolving Hyde.

The beauty of an evolving rockstar, Hyde is extraordinary.

A Japanese vocalist. A vocalist of L'Arc~en~Ciel, a guitarist of P'UNK~EN~CIEL and a vocalist of his own project, "VAMPS". Until 2006, he also worked solo under the name "HYDE".

Combining feminity and masculinity

His wavy long hair period looked phantasmal.

元の翻訳
Was this item sold out?
If you still have it in stock, I'm considering buying it.
Could I buy it for 100 euro?

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Has this item been sold out?
If you still have it in stock, I'm considering buying it.
Could I buy it for 100 euro?

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1
I intend to put the ZINE inside sandwiched in the CD's jacket, so
If the number of pages rose, it wouldn't be a problem.

It's OK to have it reformatted for CD use, without minding the page number.

2
I think it will be alright even without giving any directions on how to print it.
Concerning the tunes, I accept your proposals.

3
In case you do an acoustic show, there are no drums in the cafe, ↵
how does your drummer, Mr C play?

In case of an acoustic show, can you tell me what instruments do all the band members use?

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1
I intend to put the ZINE inside sandwiched in the CD's jacket.
Therefore, even if the number of pages increases, it wouldn't be a problem.

It's OK to have it reformatted for CD use, without worrying about the page number.

2
I think it will be alright even without giving any directions on how to print it.
Concerning the tunes, I accept your proposals.

3
In case you do an acoustic show, there are no drums in the cafe, so how will your drummer, Mr C play?

In case of an acoustic show, can you tell me what instruments do all the band members use?

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I'm sorry fo0r the late reply.
During the weekend, I safely received both the parts and the cage, so I'm letting you know.
Thank you for the parts. I mounted them immediately, I even attached a picture.

I took a look at your FB page.
There is no problem with the images' use. It would not be a problem if you linked to my Flickr page.
Just next time, please contact me before, not after you do that.
As expected, I'm a little worried that the prototype made by Mr XX, since it turned out to not have any meaning.

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I'm sorry for the late reply.
During the weekend, I safely received both the parts and the cage, so I'm letting you know.
Thank you for the parts. I mounted them immediately, and I have attached a picture.

I took a look at your FB page.
I have no problem with your using the images. You can also link to my Flickr page.
Just next time, please contact me in advance, not after the fact.
As expected, I'm a little worried that the prototype you made, since it turned out to not have any meaning.

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The flight schedule is as follows.

Will you be able to support us the way we want this time?
Things will be decided at the inspection site in Egypt, after we have a meeting on site.

According to the schedule, we will need an interpreter, a driver and a vehicle, if I leave it to your company, how much would that cost?

The party will depart tomorrow, so when they arrive at the airport, who should they contact?
Please tell us the name of the guide and the means to contact him.

Or should we contact Mr. Mohammed?

Please give us a confirmation.

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The flight schedule is as follows:

Will you be able to support us the way we want this time?
Things [?] will be decided at the inspection site in Egypt, after we have a meeting on site.

According to the schedule, we will need an interpreter, a driver, and a vehicle. If I leave it to your company, how much would that cost?

The party will depart tomorrow, so when they arrive at the airport, who should they contact?
Please tell us the name of the guide and the means to contact him.

Or should we contact Mr. Mohammed?

Please give us a confirmation.

元の翻訳
It seems like the items I ordered the other day are still not sent.
I was issued a tracking number, but the package doesn't move at all.
Please send the order quickly or tell me about its state.

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It seems like the items I ordered the other day still haven't been sent.
I was issued a tracking number, but the package doesn't move at all.
Please send the order quickly or tell me what's going on.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I'm very interested in this item, but could I get this a little cheaper?
Best regards.

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Hello.
I'm very interested in this item, but could you make it a little cheaper?
Best regards.