Khoa (mapmetroi) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you for your interests on our prodocts.

Sorry to say but the item you are enquiring is not the one of no modification and the language is Japanese.

If you agree to purchase under this conditions, we will send you the new unwraped one not second handed one.
Thank you for your consideration and looking forward to your feedback.↵

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Thank you for your interests in our products.

Sorry to say but the item you are inquiring is not the one of no modification and the language is Japanese.

If you agree to purchase under this conditions, we will send you the new unwrapped one not second handed one.
Thank you for your consideration and looking forward to your feedback.

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Both A and B are good company to make good bases. As your budjet is #$, I strongly recommend B for you.
A will cost you #$ at mimimu.

This model is unique model using ashe material for the body top and alder material for body back.
The ashe material creates tight and sharp sound and alter material creates sticky sound, those are a slight different sound of normal BW.
And the controll unit has a turbo switch which can switch to series connection of both pick ups and that can make a wide range of sound making.

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Both A and B are good company to make good bases. As your budjet is #$, I strongly recommend B for you.
A will cost you #$ at minimum.

This model is unique model using ashe material for the body top and alder material for body back.
The ashe material creates tight and sharp sound and alter material creates sticky sound, those are a slight different sound of normal BW.
And the control unit has a turbo switch which can switch to series connection of both pick ups and that can make a wide range of sound

元の翻訳
I hope to receive the supporting from you

Why can you not send this product to Japan this time?
the same kind of product has been sent in just these days by MyUS.

When I cannot send a product, what kind of response should I give?

Please inform it.

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I hope to receive the supporting from you

Why can you not send this product to Japan this time?
the same kind of product has been sent in just these days by MyUS.

When you cannot send a product, what kind of response should I give?

Please let me know

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Thank you, I have received the products safely.
I am grateful for your consideration, and will prioritize when contacting you for when the products come in stock.
I would definitely like to purchase it. Also, I would like to purchase the Danish version of it if possible. Kind regards.

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Thank you, I have received the products safely.
I am grateful for your consideration, please contact me as a priority when the products are in stock again
I would definitely like to purchase it. Also, I would like to purchase the Danish version of it if possible. Kind regards.

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I was sorry that I could not make a qualified reply for your question, i was not good at English.

It is indicated that there is a different that the kitchen knife which reached the exhibition by auction, but the product I sent is the same thing.

The sticker of the pattern of the kitchen knife is put to prove that it is new.

A letter to Sato who is the name of Kajiya is written on the sticker.

Please contact me for return of goods.

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The postage to the United States is $ 15. It doesn't matter how many for product, It will be delivered at the same price.

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I was sorry that I could not make a qualified reply for your question, i was not good at English.

It is indicated that there is a difference that the kitchen knife which reached the exhibition by auction, but the product I sent is the same thing.

The sticker of the pattern of the kitchen knife is put to prove that it is new.

A letter to Sato who is the name of Kajiya is written on the sticker.

Please contact me for return of goods.

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The postage to the United States is $ 15. It doesn't matter how many for product, It will be delivered at the same price.

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I intended to deliver the goods for countries outside the US but an error occurred.

The following are the cause of the error:

・Payment of the delivery
・The description of the product included unsuitable words

First, I paid the whole amount of the delivery fee, but it cannot be delivered.

Also, I checked for unsuitable contents in the description, however, I could not find any. I believe that this error is clearly a mistake.

I cannot deliver if this is the case,.

Please tell me how to solve this problem.

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I intended to deliver the goods for countries outside the US but an error occurred.

The followings are the cause of the error:

・Payment of the delivery
・The description of the product included unsuitable words

First, I paid the whole amount of the delivery fee, but it cannot be delivered.

Also, I checked for unsuitable contents in the description, however, I could not find any. I believe that this error is clearly a mistake.

I cannot deliver if this is the case,.

Please tell me how to solve this problem.

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Do herb's cartridge and oil contain nicotine?

If included, you can't sell inn Japan.
If there are anything contain nicotine, let me know all of them.

Is USB only available for power supply?
Is it okay without consent?

We will purchase immediately if it costs $10,000 monthly.

We will enlarge our selling soon, so I think we can buy more than $50,000, monthly.

We are sincerely happy about being a branch of your company.

I'm looking forward to all of your replies.

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Do herb's cartridge and oil contain nicotine?

If included, you can't sell in Japan.
If there is anything contain nicotine, let me know all of them.

Is USB only available for power supply?
Is it okay without consent?

We will purchase immediately if it costs $10,000 monthly.

We will enlarge our selling soon, so I think we can buy more than $50,000, monthly.

We are sincerely happy about being a branch of your company.

I'm looking forward to all of your replies.

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I want to be your distributor in Japan as soon as posible
To do so, I want to confirm some points with you

• The "INTERNATIONAL" price list Is a price that anyone other than us can buy?

• We wiil be available to buy at a price of "INTERNATIONAL", If we became a distributor?

•How much order you have a month from Japan?

• Minimum order of $ 50,000 is quite high
I will buy if minimum order goes down

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I want to be your distributor in Japan as soon as posible
To do so, I want to confirm some points with you

• The "INTERNATIONAL" price list Is a price that anyone other than us can buy?

• We wiil be available to buy at a price of "INTERNATIONAL", If we become a distributor?

•How much order you have a month from Japan?

• Minimum order of $ 50,000 is quite high
I will buy if minimum order goes down

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Hello.
Thanks for applying. I am looking for who can register goods at ebay immediately.

Reserching goods selling well in ebay, I confirm the stock at amazon.jp and register goods.
The reward is fixed, so it's lower than what you want. Is it a problem to you?
It doesn't matter you use your register tool if you have your own.

Await your contact.

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Hello.
Thanks for applying. I am looking for who can register goods on ebay immediately.

Reserching goods selling well in ebay, I confirm the stock at amazon.jp and register goods.
The reward is fixed, so it's lower than what you want. Is it a problem to you?
It doesn't matter you use your register tool if you have your own.

Await your contact.

元の翻訳
There is no problem in using my book for your book.
Please print my name under my photograph as a credit,
and if possible, please send me a copy of the finished book.
I will handle the shipping fee to Japan if you could tell me how much it would be.
I am looking forward for the book to finish.

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There is no problem in using my photograph for your book.
Please print my name under my photograph as a credit,
and if possible, please send me a copy of the finished book.
I will handle the shipping fee to Japan if you could tell me how much it would be.
I am looking forward for the book to finish.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your help.
The issue about the Stand could be solved with the costumer(s).
I am very sorry, that the payment has been delayed so much.
I am sorry for causing trouble, but sice I'd like to order another NPS12-5 please send me the calculation and the bill again.

About the other thing, I'd like to order a little bit more, so please send it via DHL.
Since the installation Tools are (only) sold in Japan, please try to avoid any damage to the package. Since the packages get damaged from time to time.
Sorry for causing so much trouble.

Sincerely yours

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Thank you for your help.
The issue about the Stand could be solved with the costumer(s).
I am very sorry, that the payment has been delayed so much.
I am sorry for causing trouble, but since I'd like to order another NPS12-5 please send me the calculation and the bill again.

About the other thing, I'd like to order a little bit more, so please send it via DHL.
Since the installation Tools are (only) sold in Japan, please try to avoid any damage to the package. Since the packages get damaged from time to time.
Sorry for causing so much trouble.

Sincerely yours

元の翻訳
Oh yes, I saw the site, too. But it doesn't include any description about the cartoon bonus.
I think the bonus will definitely comes along since they are making exclusive pages!
By the way, the cover was drawn by Mr. ◇.

I misread quite often, so sometime I say the same things... sorry. I must be careful not to miss the sticker on December!

The shipping fee is included, but it says shipping abroad is possible, so how about purchasing here?

This is an announcement poster of theatrical 〇 which is not for sale, so it's hard to get it.

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Oh yes, I saw the site, too. But it doesn't include any description about the cartoon bonus.
I think the bonus will definitely come along since they are making exclusive pages!
By the way, the cover was drawn by Mr. ◇.

I misread quite often, so sometime I say the same things... sorry. I must be careful not to miss the sticker on December!

The shipping fee is included, but it says shipping abroad is possible, so how about purchasing here?

This is an announcement poster of theatrical 〇 which is not for sale, so it's hard to get it.

元の翻訳
Notice to our valued customer.

We have a very disappointing notice .

Today, we try to dispatch the products that you have purchased from the post office in Japan, but it was not possible to send it because your country not accept products that is using the lithium battery. Very disappointed.

Therefore, I will full refund the payment from you.
Please be aware we will push forward a procedure of purchase cancellation on ebay.

I think that you have been looking forward to the arrival of the goods, but it is very disappointing.
However, we believe that you be able to understand it.

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Notice to our valued customer.

We have a very disappointing notice .

Today, we try to dispatch the products that you have purchased from the post office in Japan, but it was not possible to send it because your country does not accept products that is using the lithium battery. Very disappointed.

Therefore, I will full refund the payment from you.
Please be aware we will push forward a procedure of purchase cancellation on ebay.

I think that you have been looking forward to the arrival of the goods, but it is very disappointing.
However, we believe that you will be able to understand it.

元の翻訳
I have a job that belong to the things I like.
My favorites are creative somethings and provide ideas.
I used to have a dream to get a job something belong to design,
I almost gave up my dream because I could not afford to pay for school.
One day my ex colleague push my back to encourage keep having dream
I started leaning computer skills such as MAC all by myself
had almost more than 50 interviews until I got a spot...
since them I really worked hard and launched this company

Wow! You really a fun of Classical Rock!
Tell me your favorite and recommend if you have

I watched the reruns movie " Armageddon"
the song of Aerosmith and the word of Will Smith
Oh my god... that both parts made me cry...

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I have a job that belongs to the things I like.
My favorites are creative somethings and provide ideas.
I used to have a dream to get a job something belong to design,
I almost gave up my dream because I could not afford to pay for school.
One day my ex colleague pushed my back to encourage keep having dream
I started learning computer skills such as MAC all by myself
had almost more than 50 interviews until I got a spot...
since them I really worked hard and launched this company

Wow! You really a fun of Classical Rock!
Tell me your favorite and recommend if you have

I watched the reruns movie " Armageddon"
the song of Aerosmith and the word of Will Smith
Oh my god... that both parts made me cry...

元の翻訳
I agree with your idea.
As you say, the change of the product package immediately after the announcement is discouraged.

I can not wait really, but I will wait until the new package to be completed in December.
Show me the new package as soon as it is complete. Soif it is OK let's contract there.

Do you gonna change the image of the website in conformity to a new package?
We also wiil make a site in Japanese, so please give me permission to use image and logo.

I am looking forward to titanium version. Please, let me sell in Japan.

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I agree with your idea.
As you say, the change of the product package immediately after the announcement is discouraged.

I can not wait really, but I will wait until the new package to be completed in December.
Show me the new package as soon as it is complete. So if it is OK let's contract there.

Do you gonna change the image of the website in conformity to a new package?
We also wiil make a site in Japanese, so please give me permission to use image and logo.

I am looking forward to titanium version. Please, let me sell in Japan.

元の翻訳
Hello

Thanks for the sharp photo.

Thank you for the sharp photo.↵
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I had check the wound of the items. I didn't find any problem, so I'll buy it.

Because the date has passed, could you send me the delivery in a hurry?

Regards

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Hello

Thanks for the sharp photo.

I had check the wound of the items. I didn't find any problem, so I'll buy it.

Because time has passed, could you send me the delivery as soon as possible?

Regards

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#1 Hello. Thank you for sending clear photo. I would liki to purchase it, because it was no problem when I have checked the scratch of the item. Could you send it by express delivery, as the day passed.

Thank you very much for your help.

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#1 Hello. Thank you for sending clear photo. I would like to purchase it, because there was no problem when I checked the scratch on the item. Could you send it by express delivery, as time passed.

Thank you very much for your help.