Khoa (mapmetroi) — 付けたレビュー

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We have 10 to 20 sale per month.

This product has not benn on sale in Japan, so it has good sales, and the new version is coming out right?

Since the new versionon will be on sale in Japan too, so the sales of old verion may get worse.

By the way I want product *** a lot, can purchase product ***?

If so, I will buy from you a lot.

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We have 10 to 20 sale per month.

This product has not been on sale in Japan, so it has good sales, and the new version is coming out right?

Since the new versionon will be on sale in Japan too, so the sales of old verion may get worse.

By the way I want product *** a lot, can you stock product****?

If so, I will buy from you a lot.

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I am considering to telephone ◯ on Monday and inquire for stockists of ☆.
☆ may currently be purchased by reservation at ◆, however, it will incur a separate postage.
I believe the product you informed me of and ☆ are completely different items. This set will probably include his full body drawings and a few variations of facial expressions, however, it will not include the original drawings of anime.
The autographed paper was not distributed to people but was on display at the ◇ shop.
I have made an error and have written your previous address on the EMS slip.
I have already arranged a change of address procedure, however, am uncertain whether it will be accepted in time.

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I am considering to telephone ◯ on Monday and inquire for stockists of ☆.
☆ may currently be purchased by reservation at ◆, however, it will incur a separate postage.
I believe the product you informed me of and ☆ are completely different items. This set will probably include his full body drawings and a few variations of facial expressions, however, it will not include the original drawings of anime.
The autographed paper was not distributed to people but was on display at the ◇ shop.
I have made an error and have written your previous address on the EMS slip.
I have already arranged a change of address procedure, however, i am uncertain whether it will be accepted in time.

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Thank you so much for your reply.
And thanks for presentation for your price.
Actually, the same goods with othter negotiation was US$368.99.
If they are same price as yours, I want to purchase them from your shop.
For, I have purchased the goods from you about six months before and remember your polite attitude.
Could you please sell your goods at US$368.99?

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Thank you so much for your reply.
And thanks for presentation of your price.
Actually, the same goods with other negotiation was US$368.99.
If they are same price as yours, I want to purchase them from your shop.
For, I have purchased the goods from you about six months before and remember your polite attitude.
Could you please sell your goods at US$368.99?

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Thank you for your reply.
Thank you for giving me the price.
Actually, another shop gives me the price of $368.99.
If you give me the same price, I want to buy from you.
Because I bought from you a half years ago and you treat me with great kindness.
Will you sell me by $368.99?

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Thank you for your reply.
Thank you for giving me the price.
Actually, another shop gives me the price of $368.99.
If you give me the same price, I want to buy from you.
Because I bought from you a half year ago and you treated me with great kindness.
Will you sell me at $368.99?

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On the Website on Amazon, it seems to be a little dusty-green, but the real color of the item is vivid khaki. The images of this model in Japan is also gry, so I think it is difficult to produce the real color by a picture. I have requested to Amazon to change the image, but it has not changed yet. I am very sorry. I will add an image with near color to the real item, so could you please check it and contact us? We will ship it out within 48 hours after your reply.

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On the Website on Amazon, it seems to be a little dusty-green, but the real color of the item is vivid khaki. The images of this model in Japan is also gray, so I think it is difficult to produce the real color through a picture. I have requested to Amazon to change the image, but it has not been changed yet. I am very sorry. I will add an image with near color to the real item, so could you please check it and contact us? We will ship it out within 48 hours after your reply.

元の翻訳
Is the time convenient for you?
If it isn't, please let me know.

Thank you.

*Because I didn't hear anything, I will send the products that I currently have stocks of.
I will give you a refund for the products that are out of stock.

Thank you for your order.
I have contacted you several times, but there is one product that is out of stock.
As I felt bad for not making shipments while I wait for your reply,
I have decided to send you the rest of the products that are available.
Also, I will give you a wrist band as a small gesture.

I hope you will like it.

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Is the time convenient for you?
If it isn't, please let me know.

Thank you.

*Because I didn't hear anything, I will send the products that I currently have stocks of.
I will give you a refund for the products that are out of stock.

Thank you for your order.
I have contacted you several times, but there is one product that is out of stock.
As I felt bad for not making shipments while I was waiting for your reply,
I have decided to send you the rest of the products that are available.
Also, I will give you a wrist band as a small gesture.

I hope you will like it.

元の翻訳
Can you sell it at 460 dollars since I am buying 2?
In addition, I would like to but products from you every month.
Is it possible to purchase every month?

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Can you sell it at 460 dollars since I am buying 2?
In addition, I would like to buy products from you every month.
Is it possible to purchase every month?

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Therefore, we wish to invite translators to our humble exchange meeting.
For those who are able to participate, we ask you to fill out the form below and send it to us by Friday 1st November. Should we receive a large volume of participants, there will be draw and those who are selected will be contacted by Monday 11th November.
Due to the location our company, the event will only be held in Tokyo, however, it is a good opportunity for other translators to meet in person their fellow translators whom faces they usually cannot see, therefore, we hope we hope we will receive many enthusiastic participants.

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Therefore, we wish to invite translators to our humble exchange meeting.
For those who are able to participate, we ask you to fill in the form below and send it to us by Friday 1st November. Should we receive a large volume of participants, there will be draw and those who are selected will be contacted by Monday 11th November.
Due to the location our company, the event will only be held in Tokyo, however, it is a good opportunity for other translators to meet in person their fellow translators whom faces they usually cannot see, therefore, we hope we will receive many enthusiastic participants.

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I'm searching for the same products as the picture attached.
Can the products the same with the picture attached be orderd in 4 colors with A and B (8 combinations)?

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I'm searching for the same products as the picture attached.
Can the products the same with the attached picture be ordered in 4 colors with A and B (8 combinations)?

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Now we know you are so competent. However, we decided to ask the job to another person.

We would like Mr. B to do our job some time soon.

We have two questions to ask you.

1. Can you make the task we ask this time to a web application?
If yes, please tell us the amount of money you need to develop.

2. Can you find products with the scheme in Europe?
If so, it is difficult for us to prepare tools.

We look for to hearing from you./

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Now we know you are so competent. However, we decided to ask the job to another person.

We would like Mr. B to do our job some time soon.

We have two questions to ask you.

1. Can you make the task we ask this time to a web application?
If yes, please tell us the amount you need to develop.

2. Can you find products with the scheme in Europe?
If so, it is difficult for us to prepare tools.

We look forward to hearing from you./

元の翻訳
I noticed this after purchasing, but the PayPal account is in Japan, so I'm unable to pay the price. Is it possible to change your settings? The delivery address is in the United States.

If it's not possible I'll cancel the order.

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I noticed this after purchasing, but the PayPal account is in Japan, so I'm unable to pay the charge . Is it possible to change your settings? The delivery address is in the United States.

If it's not possible I'll cancel the order.

元の翻訳
I have received the product and checked inside.
Is this really a brand new product?
The tent was very ruoghly folded and some grass came out from within.
I am thinking of reviewing you negatively.

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I have received the product and checked inside.
Is this really a brand new product?
The tent was very roughly folded and some grass came out from inside.
I am thinking of reviewing you negatively.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
If you returned me a little sooner, it would make me more happy.
Yes, I want the merchandise.
And I need to confirm once again.
The size of this merchandise is different from the ☆☆, isn't it?
Same size one had been arrived.
I want you to send me soon.
(Address)
Please reply me.

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Thank you for your reply.
If you reply me a little sooner, it would make me more happy.
Yes, I want the merchandise.
And I need to confirm once again.
The size of this merchandise is different from the ☆☆, isn't it?
Same size one had been arrived.
I want you to send me soon.
(Address)
Please reply me.

元の翻訳
About handling the package, FOB from Idaho, Boise, should be okay,
and the number of MOQ is 60.

How much would the delivery cost for 60 be if we used USPS with insurance from Japan?
Is it possible to get it sent to Japan directly if we paid for the product and delivery fee?

We have confirmed the new packaging.
Am I correct in thinking that after the contract has been made, it will be delivered in the new packaging?
If it is going to change from a tin can to a paper box, is the logo going to be printed on the paper box itself?

Please send me the image of the new packaging when it's done.
Make sure it looks much cooler! Then we can talk about the contract.

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About handling the package, FOB from Idaho, Boise, should be okay,
and the number of MOQ is 60.

How much does the delivery cost for 60 be if we use USPS with insurance from Japan?
Is it possible to get it sent to Japan directly if we paid for the product and delivery fee?

We have confirmed the new packaging.
Am I correct in thinking that after the contract has been made, it will be delivered in the new packaging?
If it is going to change from a tin can to a paper box, is the logo going to be printed on the paper box itself?

Please send me the image of the new packaging when it's done.
Make sure it looks much cooler! Then we can talk about the contract.

元の翻訳
I happen to have bought breakfast from McDonald's.
I am not good in English so I always ask my colleague to translate.
So I cannot speak because of it.
Thank you for contacting me about the sale.

Thank you for the status report.
Please let me know the tracking NO once the product has been shipped.
I am looking forward to it.

The site is undergoing a renewal now.
It is scheduled to be back online from MM/DD.
Please wait for a while.
(The words will be used for the home page notification)

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I happen to have bought breakfast from McDonald's.
I am not good at English so I always ask my colleague to translate.
So I cannot speak because of it.
Thank you for contacting me about the sale.

Thank you for the status report.
Please let me know the tracking NO once the product has been shipped.
I am looking forward to it.

The site is undergoing a renewal now.
It is scheduled to be back online from MM/DD.
Please wait for a while.
(The words will be used for the home page notification)

元の翻訳
We would like to use this picuture as a product if the condition is agreed. How should we deal out with the rights? Could
you kindly tell us how we should apply for the
right as there is yet no licensing company and also the prices. Is the composor mentioned in song A credited as an arranger? Is there
any problem if we regard it is A? After making it sure the rights, we will decide
the picture we record
this time. How is the making process going on? Please keep us updated as we would like to plan next year's schedule.

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We would like to use this picture as a product if the condition is agreed. How should we deal out with the rights? Could
you kindly tell us how we should apply for the
right as there is yet no licensing company and also the prices. Is the composor mentioned in song A credited as an arranger? Is there
any problem if we regard it is A? After making it sure the rights, we will decide
the picture we record
this time. How is the making process going on? Please keep us updated as we would like to plan next year's schedule.

元の翻訳
The exhibition of audio home theatre 2013 will be held from october 18th to 20th, during three days in the Tyme venue of Odaiba Tokio. Organized by Nipon Audio Company.

Besides the exhibition of machinery audio and a lot of seminars, this time a variety of events are prepared sucha as the topic of personal experience of high resolution sound, NHK's super high definition (8K) video demonstration, the presentation of the release of CASIOPEA 3rd, a string quartet female group, in addition to a classroom work, combinating the component lstening association and music bird public recording among others,

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The exhibition of audio home theatre 2013 will be held from october 18th to 20th, during three days in the Tyme venue of Odaiba Tokio. Organized by Nipon Audio Company.

Besides the exhibition of machinery audio and a lot of seminars, this time a variety of events are prepared such as the topic of personal experience of high resolution sound, NHK's super high definition (8K) video demonstration, the presentation of the release of CASIOPEA 3rd, a string quartet female group, in addition to a classroom work, combinating the component listening association and music bird public recording among others,

元の翻訳

⚫〜⚫ 2012
Managed the online shopping site in the company. Got a better results by improving the way of purchasing the stocks and the selling method.
Enhanced the new stock suppliers
Numbers of the orders made ⚫→⚫(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Increased the numbers of the line-up items ⚫items-⚫items(⚫% compared to the previous year)

Planned numerous Special Discount Sales Plans, including the Time Sale at night, improving the surplus by enhancing the more effective operation using the smartphones, developing the operation system and cancelling the telephone call service and simlifised it into only on the Web site.

No one has enough knowledge with regards to making the Health Check Reservation like me. Also I always put it into a consideration to establish a comfortable system for the customers and the telephone operators,using the experiences as an telephone operator.↵

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Major achievements
⚫〜⚫ 2012
Managed the online shopping site in the company. Got a better result by improving the way of purchasing the stocks and the selling method.
Enhanced the new stock suppliers
Numbers of the orders made ⚫→⚫(⚫% compared to the previous year)
Increased the numbers of the line-up items ⚫items-⚫items(⚫% compared to the previous year)

Planned numerous Special Discount Sales Plans, including the Time Sale at night, improving the surplus by enhancing the more effective operation using the smartphones, developing the operation system and cancelling the telephone call service and simlifised it into only on the Web site.

No one has enough knowledge with regards to making the Health Check Reservation like me. Also I always put it into a consideration to establish a comfortable system for the customers and the telephone operators,using the experiences as an telephone operator.

元の翻訳
01/Apr/2010

Been appointed
to the Director of buying the stocks in Service Department.

01/Dec/2011
Director of the direct Marketting
Always absorbed self in establishing the new department, enhanced the skills and gained confidence with the growth of the Centre.

I am confident in the Management which is indispensable in running the Centre, especially by establishing the system which is aiming the biggest effects by making the individual workers at the centre of the stage to make them gain more knowledge. No other people than I would have sufficent knowledge in making the Health Check Reservation. Also I always bear in mind of putting self in the customer's shoes, using the experience as a phone Operator.

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01/Apr/2010

Been appointed
to the Director of buying the stocks in Service Department.

01/Dec/2011
Director of the direct Marketing
Always absorbed self in establishing the new department, enhanced the skills and gained confidence with the growth of the Centre.

I am confident in the Management which is indispensable in running the Centre, especially by establishing the system which is aiming the biggest effects by making the individual workers at the centre of the stage to make them gain more knowledge. No other people than I would have sufficent knowledge in making the Health Check Reservation. Also I always bear in mind of putting self in the customer's shoes, using the experience as a phone Operator.

元の翻訳
The brochure could be seen at the bellow PDF file or you could also print it out.

Please contact us through our e-mail if you wish to read our brochures regarding large party, Educational trip programs. We would send us the brochure the moment we receive your email.

Please kindly note in advance that these brochures will be limited to Traveling Agents, enterprise studies coordinators.
After we receive your email, we would also attach the price list to your email.

We would try to reply to your email as soon as possible however, if there is no reply from us after 3 working days, please kindly send us an email again.

Regards,

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The brochure could be seen at the bellow PDF file or you could also print it out.

Please contact us through our e-mail if you wish to read our brochures regarding large party, Educational trip programs. We would send you the brochure at the moment we receive your email.

Please kindly note in advance that these brochures will be limited to Traveling Agents, enterprise studies coordinators.
After we receive your email, we will send e-mail with attached price list

We would try to reply to your email as soon as possible however, if there is no reply from us after 3 working days, please kindly send us an email again.

Regards,

元の翻訳
Hello,

I have ordered this in different sizes, but I received the same sized ones.
Are they any different?

Please let me know as soon as possible.

Thanks,

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Hello,

I have ordered this in different sizes, but I received the same sized ones.
Are there any difference between them ?

Please let me know as soon as possible.

Thanks,

元の翻訳
This merchandise is not sold in the shop.
This is a gift for the lottery only available at event space in Tokyo.
I told you that I have no plan to receive, but if you can pay $18 for the merchandise, I can purchase the merchandise in this month.
I searched the merchandise but I couldn't find it at all, because of sold out. I want it, I think it's cute, I will search it from now on.
I think it is an original picture which really used be applied, but I am sorry that I cannot find it. I live in the suburbs so that I need time and money to go Mandarake.

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This merchandise is not sold in the shop.
This is a gift for the lottery only available at event space in Tokyo.
I told you that I have no plan to receive, but if you can pay $18 for the merchandise, I can purchase the merchandise in this month.
I searched the merchandise but I couldn't find it at all, because it was sold out. I want it, I think it's cute, I will search it from now on.
I think it is an original picture which really used be applied, but I am sorry that I cannot find it. I live in the suburbs so that I need time and money to go Mandarake.

元の翻訳
The contents of the Intermatiomal Meeting Exposition(IME) has been announced on 7 October in Tokyo. Thanks to the fact that to have utilized the promotional events by the Nikkei BP, which has contributed in planning and managing, the previous expo has recorded 3197 people, the biggest number to have participated. They have come up with the new programme and improved on the existing programme, aiming more peopre to participate and the increased effect in the expo with B to B colour.

After the exhibition on 11, IME expositor and incentive show case key person opinion excange party, which has newly planned this year, will be held in Shinagawa Prince Hotel.

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The contents of the International Meeting Exposition(IME) have been announced on 7 October in Tokyo. Thanks to the fact that to have utilized the promotional events by the Nikkei BP, which has contributed in planning and managing, the previous expo has recorded 3197 people, the biggest number to have participated. They have come up with the new programme and improved on the existing programme, aiming more people to participate and the increased effect in the expo with B to B colour.

After the exhibition on 11, IME expositor and incentive show case key person opinion excange party, which has newly planned this year, will be held in Shinagawa Prince Hotel.

元の翻訳
There is a hole in around the right bottom of the item.
If i knew that there was a hole in the item, I wouldn't have bought it.

The hole affect the value of the item a lot, and it is a serious defection.

On the description, it says it has one defect, but I think you could explain more specific
of you could take a photo focused on the defect part.

You knew about the defect and wrote about it in obscurity on purpose didn't you?
If so, it is fraud.

I was thinking about to write about it on your feedback.

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There is a hole in around the right bottom of the item.
If i knew that there was a hole in the item, I wouldn't have bought it.

The hole affects the value of the item a lot, and it is a serious defection.

On the description, it says it has one defect, but I think you could explain more specifically
of you could take a photo focused on the defect part.

You knew about the defect and wrote about it in obscurity on purpose didn't you?
If so, it is fraud.

I was thinking about to write about it on your feedback.

元の翻訳
I would like to expect the price equivalent to the wholesale price or cheaper then the A shop.

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I would like to expect the price equivalent to the wholesale price or cheaper than the A shop.