Đinh Văn Khánh (khanh) — もらったレビュー

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私たちのウェブサイトにアクセスして私たちの国の禁止輸出用のリストをチェック出来ます。さらに、あなたの国を選んで私たちのキャリアと禁止されているインポート用をチェックも出来ます。
何かを援助させるかどうかお知らせください。
アメリカから日本までの転送はいくらですか？
内部規則で転送られない商品であるとお知らせてください。
宜しくお願い致します。

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私たちのウェブサイトにアクセスしていただければ、私たちの国の輸出禁止品のリストをチェック出来ます。さらに、あなたの国を選ぶと、わが国のキャリアによる輸入が禁止されている品もチェックも出来ます。
何かお手伝いできることがありましたら、どうかお知らせください。
アメリカから日本までの転送料はいくらですか？
そちらの内部規則で転送できない商品がありましたらお知らせください。
宜しくお願い致します。

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I already ordered this item on October 1st but the wrong size of this product arrived.
I think i will return this items to you and i hope you will pay the shipping fee of returning.
Do you have the number of cash on delivery which starting from 9 of DHL?
I have been contacting you many time, i feel anxious when i do not still receive reply from you
Please reply to me as soon as possible.

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I already ordered this item on October 1st but the wrong size of this product arrived.
I think i will return this items to you and i hope you will pay the shipping fee of returning.
Do you have the number of cash on delivery which starting from 9 of DHL?
I have been contacting you many times, i feel anxious when i do not still receive reply from you
Please reply to me as soon as possible.

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I am satisfied with your answer.
Then i order 8 machines of 6 hours and 8 machines of 8 hours.
This time we got the product sample but Please prepare the thing which can satisfy this request by all means. I will return goods through PayPal by any chance when the product which has been sent does not satisfy the request

Then send an invoice.
In addition, please let us know delivery date.

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I am satisfied with your answer.
Then i order 8 machines of 6 hours and 8 machines of 8 hours.
This time we did not get the product sample but Please prepare the thing which can satisfy this request by all means. I will return goods through PayPal by any chance when the product which has been sent does not satisfy the request

Then send an invoice.
In addition, please let us know delivery date.

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Thank you for your email.
If the problem isn't still solved on Resolve a problem of eBay, my business will get a trouble.
Therefore, If you can help me to solve this problem ( relating to this case)
I am very glad.
The goods will be compensated. To returned products they promise to return without shipping fee.
Next time when you buy my product Please send me an email about this time's case.I will make a big discount for you

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Thank you for your email.
If the problem isn't still solved on Resolve a problem of eBay, my business will get a trouble.
Therefore, If you can help me to solve this problem ( relating to this case)
I am very glad.
The goods will be compensated. About returned products they promise to return without shipping fee.
Next time when you buy my product, please send me an email about this time's case.I will make a big discount for you

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「スズは、どれくらい大きいですか（インチの）？
幅さと高さがすごく感謝されますとき私はできるだけ早く10を注文したい

「つまり、各々のスズはどれくらい大きいですか（発送の目的ではなく）です。

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「スズは、どれくらい大きいですか（インチで）？
私はできるだけ早く10個くらいをを注文したいので、幅と高さを教えていただけると助かります。よろしくお願いします。

「つまり、各々のスズはどれくらい大きいですか（発送の目的ではなく）です。

元の翻訳
The contest vote was finished

Thank you for much participation in a contest.
I had a while ago voting period was also a end.
I am gonna checking the total and will announce the result today about 21:00 of 12th.
can you be the first champion chosen among all 406 application? ?
Wait to enjoy a result

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The contest vote was finished

Thank you very much for your participation in a contest.
I had a while ago voting period was also a end.
I am gonna checking the total and will announce the result today about 21:00 of 12th.
can you be the first champion chosen among all 406 application? ?
Wait to enjoy a result

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
Refunding $5 is too small.
Purchasing goods costed $6 and including postage to Japan so total amount becomes $10.
In addition, the description of the item was not accurate.
There is no rustle of the top with the thing to get by cleaning
It can be seen by eyes so it is not ok.
So, please refund total $30.

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Thank you for your contact.
Refunding $5 is too small.
Purchasing goods costed $6 and including postage to Japan so total amount becomes $10.
In addition, the description of the item was not accurate.
There is no rustle of the top with the thing to get by cleaning
It can be seen by eyes so it is not ok.
So, please refund the total amount of $30.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
Refunding $5 is too small.
Purchasing goods costed $6 and including postage to Japan so total amount becomes $10.
In addition, the description of the item was not accurate.
There is no rustle of the top with the thing to get by cleaning
It can be seen by eyes so it is not ok.
So, please refund total $30.

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Thank you for contacting me.
A $5 refund is not enough.
I purchased the item for $6, and with shipping to Japan, it cost me $10.
In addition, the description of the item was not accurate.
The scratch on the top can not be cleaned.
It is on a visible area, so it's an eyesore.
So, please refund the total amount of $30.

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Sorry for late reply to you because of my business trip.I wanted to accomplish the present project with you till the last, but support your decision. Working with you till now is very happy to me. After self-regard, I wish it will play an active part in your life and pray your family to have a good health and happiness . When you come to Japan, please contact me.

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Sorry for the late reply to you. I was out for the business trip. I wanted to accomplish this project with you until the end, but I respect your decision. I had a great time working with you. After self-regard, I wish it will play an active part in your life and pray for your family to have a good health and happiness . When you come to Japan, please contact me.

元の翻訳
堅固派（例えばトヨタとソニー）より前に、日本の消費者の年次調査で、Ghibliが彼らの大好きな国内ブランドであることがしばしば明らかになります。↵
宮崎の動画の叙事詩は、定期的に国内劇場の市場のトップに立ちます。↵
「カゼTachinu」、彼の最新映画 — ゆるく、エンジニア堀越二郎（日本の戦時ゼロ戦飛行機のデザイナー）の人生に基づきます — その7月のリリースの後7週連続の間そのボックスオフィス・ライバルの頭上に急上昇しました。↵
その間に、彼のオスカー獲得の「取り去れことを元気づけた」(2001)残りです日本の歴史のトップを稼いでいる映画（ハリウッド・ライヴの競争相手（例えば「タイタニック」と「ハリー・ポッター」映画）をわきに打つ）。

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日本の消費者の年次調査で、ジブリがトヨタやソニーのような堅固派よりも先に、彼らの大好きな国内ブランドであることがしばしば明らかになります。宮崎アニメの大作は、通常、国内劇場の市場のトップに立ちます。彼の最新映画 「風立ちぬ」は— エンジニアであり、戦時中、ゼロ戦飛行機のデザイナーであった堀越二郎の大まかな人生に基づいて作られています。 — 7月のリリース後、7週連続でボックスオフィスのライバルの頭上に上昇しました。その一方で、彼のオスカー賞を受賞した映画「千と千尋の神隠し」(2001)はハリウッドの実写映画「タイタニック」や「ハリー・ポッター」を脇におき、日本の歴史上、最高の興行収益を上げています。↵
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Various languages, framework tools, [[[ development-style]]] I learned it while I experienced I have confidence about the technique to write the high code such as [[[readability]]], ・[[[conservatism]]] . In addition, I am confident of ability that I make full use of a book or a search engine for intelligence and new technical power of absorption (I can read the English technical book without a problem). In addition, Basically it is [[[application engineer]]] i have an abundant experience of using OSS

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I learned various languages, framework tools, and [[[development-style]]] through experiences. I am confidet in the technique to write codes with high [[[readability]]] and [[[conservatism]]. I am also confident in my ability that I can make full use of books and search engines and learn new technique (I can read English technical books without problems). In addition, I am basically an [[[application engineer]]], but I have a wealth of experience and knowledge of [[[infrasyructure/cloud are]]] using OSS.

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Hello.
We are Japantex Video Team.

We provide a program to deliver as an animation for the purpose of the presentation of the product which you exhibit this time and make it to be well-know to Japanese markets.

I settle your presentation for three minutes and attach Japanese subtitles and, for a target of JAPANTEX, deliver it at various opportunities.

The top page of the JAPANTEX web site, an interval of the live delivery of the seminar, the publication to a venue map of web, an introduction on japantex facebook.

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Hello.
We are Japantex Video Team.

We provide you with a program to deliver your presentation as a film in the purpose of making your products well-known in Japanese market.

We make your presentation into a three-minute film with Japanese subtitles and deliver it at various opportunities, targetting the JAPANTEX.

The top page of the JAPANTEX web site, at an interval time between the live seminars, on the venue map of web, an introduction on japantex facebook.

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I am confirming how much you can prepare for the person in charge of the advertisement now.
I want you to tell the sales number from October to December of the last year in Japan.
I think that It will become a useful reference quantity

For these past 2-3 months, we has been selling from 90 to 110 pieces per month
I hardly have the surplus stock.
The stores which I continue selling elsewhere are as follows.
-A
-B
The pages are different but the operator is same.
The prices are cheaper than our company so there is existing buying a certain number from the store mentioned above

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I am now confirming how much we can prepare with the person in charge of the advertisement.
I would be grateful if you can tell us the number of the sales made from October to December last year in Japan.
I think that will be a helpful information to know how much we
need.
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These past 2-3 months, we have sold around 90 to 110 pieces per month.
We do not havemuch stocks available.
The stores that are stilI selling the items are as follows.
-A
-B
The pages are different but the operating companies are the same.
The prices are cheaper than our company so there is some certain numbers of the people buying from the store mentioned above.

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On October 1st, at the Japan National Tourism Organization, Japan Congress and Convention Bureau industry group held " The first 2013 JCCB industry group organized by MICE skills workshop (Industrial Group MICE seminar)" . Approximately 50 people attended from member company members and organizations.

The workshop deputy secretary of the Taiwan Trade Center headquarters (Vice President) Mr. Mingshui gave a lecture titled "MICE circumstances of Taiwan and the introduction of the IT example" by the workshop. They won a best marketing award of association of international conference (ICCA) and introduced activity of TAITRA which worked on MICE promotion all over the country.

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On October 1st, Japan Congress and Convention Bureau industry group held " The first JCCB industry group organized by MICE skills workshop (Industrial Group MICE seminar) in 2013" at the Japan National Tourism Organization. Approximately 50 people from member companies and organizations have attemded the workshop.

The vice president, as well as the deputy head of secretary of the Taiwan Trade Center headquarters, Mr. Mingshui Ye gave a lecture titled "MICE circumstances of Taiwan and the introduction of the IT example" in the workshop. They have introduced the TAITRA activity which is promoted by the country, presenting the fact that they have won a best marketing award of association of international conference (ICCA)

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The Japanese congless convention bureau (JCCB) will hold an inspection tour in Taiwan in November. It is recruiting participants.

Taiwan which activity of "MEET TAIWAN" wins a best marketing award at association of international conference (ICCA) general meeting of the last year, and works on MICE promotion all over the country. We planned "Taiwan MICE circumstances inspection" as the cause of the full-scale cooperation of the headquarters of Taiwanese Trade Center and the Tokyo office, the first foreign countries training by the industrial sectional meeting of JCCB this time.

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The Japanese congless convention bureau (JCCB) will hold an inspection tour in Taiwan in November. Now recruiting participants.

Taiwan which activity of "MEET TAIWAN" wins a best marketing award at association of international conference (ICCA) general meeting of the last year, and works on MICE promotion all over the country. We planned "Taiwan MICE circumstances inspection" as the cause of the full-scale cooperation of the headquarters of Taiwanese Trade Center and the Tokyo office, the first foreign countries training by the industrial sectional meeting of JCCB this time.

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It is held on the scale of 100 exhibition of milk, the dairy products company!
On October 30th, J milk held a talk named"Japan Milk Collection 2013" at Pacifico Yokohama for milk and the dairy products company!. It started pre-registered visitors on the web recently.

The event is held for the purpose of value improvement and the demand expansion of domestic milk and dairy products by the cooperation such as Ministry of Agriculture, Forestry and Fisheries or the dairy farming dairy business affiliate. The exhibition will gather 100 companies from the whole country and introduce more than 500 items, and the arrival of a buyer and concerned with media is anticipated approximately 3,000.

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Held with more than 100 milk and milk products companies!↵

On October 30th, J milk held a talk named"Japan Milk Collection 2013" at Pacifico Yokohama for milk and the dairy products company!. It started pre-registered visitors on the web recently.

The event is held for the purpose of value improvement and the demand expansion of domestic milk and dairy products by the cooperation such as Ministry of Agriculture, Forestry and Fisheries or the dairy farming dairy business affiliate. The exhibition will gather 100 companies from the whole country and introduce more than 500 items, and the arrival of a buyer and concerned with media is anticipated approximately 3,000.

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Hello.
Thank you for your Email
About mention to a cabinet, it is all right in just what I heard.
Thank you in advance
Because I leave Japan for around two weeks after 14th of this month and cannot transfer the documents,So could you tell me when the plan is completed?

This is forward information
Aiefuesu joitn stock company （http://www.ifsjpn.co.jp/com/）
Person in charge is mr Hara and his email address is hikari.hara@ifsjpn.co.jp
Thank you in advance↵
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Thanking you in advance.

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Hello.
Thank you for your Email
All the information you have given to us is right with regards to the package.
Thank you in advance
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Could you tell me when the plan will be completed because I leave Japan for around two weeks after 14th of this month and I will not be able to proceed to the money transfer?

This is the information of the person who will be forwarded the item.
IFS stock company （http://www.ifsjpn.co.jp/com/）
Person in charge is Mr. Hara and his email address is hikari.hara@ifsjpn.co.jp
Thank you.