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Thank you for your shipping
It is a little bit quick but if it is possible we want to order one more time in this month.
Could you confirm the stock of the following items
In addition, I think that you can send it together if there is the latest list.
Thank you for your help.

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Thank you for shipping!
I know this is sudden but we want to order one more time in this month.
Could you confirm the stock of the following items
In addition, I think that you can send it together if there is the latest list.
Thank you for your help.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for purchasing a product in the Amazon from us the other day.

Did the product arrive to you safely?

When a product arrives, i will be happy if i can get evaluation and contact from you
Sorry for this inconvenience but please cooperate with us

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Hello.
Thank you for purchasing a product in the Amazon from us the other day.

Did the product arrive to you safely?

When the product arrives, i will be happy if i can get evaluation and contact from you
Sorry for this inconvenience but please cooperate with us

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I tested the performance of the sample
The stock of the floodlight is in condition to have been sharp now. I want to order it from your company as soon as possible. Let's exchange it using a picture and video as soon as possible.
Here is an impression and a demand as follows

・As for the sustained time, the battery is very good, too. About this issue, I am satisfied. Please tell me light quantity and the sustained time when I pushed only one switch. Please inform accurate numerical value

・Please make the indication of the back seal according to performance of the product

・Please match the performance indication of the cabinet with a product. If it is impossible, please use white box

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I tested the performance of the sample.
The stock of the floodlight is in condition to have been sharp now. I want to order it from your company as soon as possible. Let's exchange it using a picture and video as soon as possible.
Here is an impression and a demand as follows

・As for the sustained time, the battery is very good, too. About this issue, I am satisfied. Please tell me light quantity and the sustained time when I pushed only one switch. Please inform accurate numerical value

・Please make the indication of the back seal according to performance of the product

・Please match the performance indication of the cabinet with a product. If it is impossible, please use white box

元の翻訳
・Please change the part which fixes a light to the stands for a longer thing so that 270 degrees turns lengthwise. Specifically, please refer to an animation.
An animation:
It is other brands meeting the above agreement first to come out.
It is your product to come out next.

・Please make the design of the light, the color of each part the same as the front. Because we have already made a product page, we want to reduce the cost of photography, etc..
Product page:

A product page:

・Please make same until now the constitution of a part fixing back and forward turn . I attach a reference image.

I wait for a reply as things mentioned above.

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・Please change the part which fixes a light to the stands for a longer thing so that 270 degrees turns lengthwise. Specifically, For the detail, see an animation.
An animation:
It is other brands meeting the above agreement first to come out.
It is your product to come out next.

・Please make the design of the light, the color of each part the same as the front. Because we have already made a product page, we want to reduce the cost of photography, etc..
Product page:

A product page:

・Please make same until now the constitution of a part fixing back and forward turn . I attach a reference image.

I wait for a reply as things mentioned above.

元の翻訳
Thank you.
Would you like to change the "product price" of following products?
Tracking number ***
Tracking number ***
Because i already attached a file, please confirm it.
Sorry for bothering but could you help me

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Thank you for your support
Would you like to change the "product price" of following products?
Tracking number ***
Tracking number ***
Because i already attached a file, please confirm it.
Sorry for bothering but could you help me

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I'm sorry. I listed it in product explanation with lens filter attachment, but, actually, the lens filter is not attached to this product (only the cap is attached).

Because product explanation had a mistake, I can accept repayment.

Besides I wait for your communication about the purchase.

I'm sorry to trouble you,; but thank you in advance.

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I would like to sincerely aporogize first. I have listed the products including lens filter however, the fact is that the lens filter is not attached to this product but only the cap is attached.

Because I have given you a false explanation, I can accept the refund from you.

I am waiting for your further communication about the purchase.

I am sorry for troubling you and thank you for your understanding.

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Today, i already receive the recorder you sent to me,it is not the same title written on eBay, Jacket was not Wide Spine. I wanted to get Wide Spine,i had my bid accepted because of its price is higher than the market.About other conditions, there was no bid different from the explanation on eBay. you can get 25 pounds at this record.Please refund to me the difference. I think that it is better to ask you about the valuation of eBay so i already contacted to you. So i'm looking forward to hearing from you soon

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Today, i already receive the record you sent to me, it is not the same title written on eBay, Jacket was not Wide Spine. Because I wanted to get Wide Spine, i accepted higher price than the market. About other conditions, there was no big different from the explanation on eBay. But you can get this record at 25 pounds. Please refund to me the difference. I think that it is better to ask you before the valuation of eBay so i contacted to you. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon

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Here is the information from delivery company, i would like to inform you.
. October 05th arrived and delivery to you but you were absent so it was could be delivered.
. It looks like the phone number is wrong. It can be used within Japan. Please contact the customer's phone number.
The delivery person want to confirm that the following address is correct or not, sorry for this convenience.
Sorry for make you confused when you are busy but please contact to me as soon as possible.
I will contact to delivery person when i got your reply
Thank you and best regards

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Here is the information from delivery company, i would like to inform you.
. October 05th arrived and delivered to you but you were absent so it was could be delivered.
. It looks like the phone number is wrong. It can be used within Japan. Please contact the customer's phone number.
The delivery person wants to confirm that the following address is correct or not, sorry for this convenience.
Sorry for make you confused when you are busy but please contact to me as soon as possible.
I will contact to delivery person when i get your reply
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
Good afternoon
Thank you for your contact
Last time i already 2 pieces
But I don't want to ship together at this time
If you ship together, shipping by vessel is too many
Is it possible
I'm looking forward to hearing from you

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Good afternoon.
Thank you for your contact .
Last time i ordered 2 pieces .
But I don't want to ship together at this time.
If you ship together, shipping by vessel is too many.
Is it possible?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
今、Wechatで料理を注文できた。
マイクロライフ会員カードはTebcent のライフスタイルにエーコマースサービスマイクロライフが運営されている正式なWechat口座です。2012年の途中から、これは直接にWechatでマイクロライフスタイルのほホームページに商人が欽定されたデジタル会員カードの提供し始まりました
現在、マイクロライフ口座はモバイルCRMを行う商人のため供え物のカスタマイズ、支払いおよびサビスをサポートX1という名前の新しいバージョンを発行されました。今、ユーザがマイクロライフによって救わレストランを開いてクリックすることができて、Wechatを離れてなくても注文して払います

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今、Wechatで料理を注文できる。
マイクロライフ会員カードはTencent のライフスタイルのeコマースサービス、マイクロライフにより運営されている正式なWechatアカウントだ。2012年の半ばから、直接Wechatのマイクロライフスタイルのホームページの商人に認定されたデジタル会員カードの提供が始まった。
現在、マイクロライフアカウントはカスタマイズされたサービス、モバイルCRMを行う商人のためのサービス、支払いをサポートするX1という名前の新しいバージョンをローンチした。今、ユーザはマイクロライフによって保存されたレストランをクリックして開くことができて、Wechatを離れてなくても注文して支払いをすることが出来る。

元の翻訳
Good afternoon, Josh. You sent the luggage to me, didn't you? If that is true, thank you. I'm enjoying it. I'm thinking about send the luggage to you. Have a nice weekend

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Good afternoon, Josh. You sent the luggage to me, didn't you? If that is true, thank you. I'm waiting for it. I'm thinking about sending the luggage to you. Have a nice weekend

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I already talked to teacher.
About ..'s business, For developed you should have a greeting to the office - bear of the place where you want to exhibit. Did you decide where you want to open your shop in Philippines. Please let me know when you decided the place. I will contact to the teacher.
About the judgement of the land, i was saying to promote to go smoothly to see the land when i go to Philippines next time
If you don't understand or want to ask somethings more, please reply to me.↵

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I already talked to the teacher.
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According to the teacher, you should greet to the guardian god of the property for the ○○'s business's develop. Have you decided where you want to open your shop in Philippines?. Please let me know if you have already decided the location. I will contact to the teacher.
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About the judgement of the land, the teacher was saying that to make things go smoothly, when he sees the land when he go to Philippines next time
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If there is anything you don't understand or want to ask somethings more, please reply to me.

元の翻訳
I already talked to teacher.
About ..'s business, For developed you should have a greeting to the office - bear of the place where you want to exhibit. Did you decide where you want to open your shop in Philippines. Please let me know when you decided the place. I will contact to the teacher.
About the judgement of the land, i was saying to promote to go smoothly to see the land when i go to Philippines next time
If you don't understand or want to ask somethings more, please reply to me.

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I already talked to the teacher.
About ..'s business, for developing you should have a greeting to the office - bear of the place where you want to exhibit. Did you decide where you want to open your shop in Philippines? Please let me know when you decide the place. I will contact the teacher.
About the judgement of the land, I was saying to promote to go smoothly to see the land when I go to Philippines next time.
If you don't understand or want to ask anything further, please reply me.

元の翻訳
Good afternoon
Thank you for your E-mail
Long time no see you
I regret not joining to this Manila FAME because of my important business in Japan. I'm so sorry
About Filomena's bag, it is also popular in japan
I'm considering to buying but could you send me the picture or the documents of the newest one
I really regret not seeing you
Best regards
try your best at exhibition

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Good afternoon
Thank you for your E-mail
Long time no see you
I regret not joining to this Manila FAME because of my important business in Japan. I'm so sorry
About Filomena's bag, it is also popular in japan
I'm considering to buying but could you send me the picture or the documents of the newest one
I really regret not seeing you
Best regards
Try your best at exhibition

元の翻訳
Good afternoon
Thank you for your E-mail
Long time no see you
I regret not joining to this Manila FAME because of my important business in Japan. I'm so sorry
About Filomena's bag, it is also popular in japan
I'm considering to buying but could you send me the picture or the documents of the newest one
I really regret not seeing you
Best regards↵
try your best at exhibition

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Good afternoon.
Thank you for your E-mail.
Long time no see you.
I regret not joining this Manila FAME because of my important business in Japan. I'm so sorry
about Filomena's bag, it is also popular in japan.
I'm considering making a purchase, but could you send me the picture or documents of the newest one?
I really regret not seeing you.
Try your best at exhibition.↵
↵
Best regards,↵

元の翻訳
注意、１０月０７日にアジア太平洋への支払いを行いますまた、すぐにNE15/ D/13019＆022の請求書が解決してください。一緒にクラブするの請求書が存在しないので。あなたの支払いのおすすめを待てます。ありがとう

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了解しました。あなたは１０月０７日にアジアパシフィックへの支払いを行うのですね。すぐにNE15/ D/13019＆022の請求書も支払いをしてください。さらに一緒に出てくる請求書が存在しないので。あなたの支払い通知書を待ちます。ありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
i have a question about setting on twitter. i already sent an a-mail, if i get a reply from you i will be saved
i've completed an Twitter account as shown below, could i receive an sample of setting file?
if you send to me an index.html or aaa.php,bbb.php file, i will be survived
Sorry for this complicated request. here is the temporary domain of setting http://www.abc.com
bestregards

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I have a question about setting on twitter. I will send an e-mail, so it will be helpful if I get a reply from you.
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I've completed a Twitter account as shown below. Could I receive a sample of setting file?
If you send me an index.html or aaa.php,bbb.php file, It will be helpful for me.
Sorry for this complicated request. Here is a temporary domain of setting http://www.abc.com
Best Regards,