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The A & B you sent me the day before has a problem in customs, I received a request to submit the following documents
(This power of this product does not exceed the upper limit 0.989J, they request to submit some documents of responsible vendor which described that this is an accessory to be used for toys)
I am very sorry but could you attach the manager documents of your company

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The A & B you sent me the day before have a problem in customs, I received a request to submit the following documents
(This power of this product does not exceed the upper limit 0.989J, they request to submit some documents of responsible vendor which described that this is an accessory to be used for toys)
I am very sorry but could you attach the manager documents of your company

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There was a damage in goods this time, sorry for troubling you but i need your help.
First i wanna confirm about the condition of the goods, Could i send you the picture about the damage of the goods. Or i would like to send you a refund as your request.
About Insurance claim of this problem, i think i had post office make damage report. Your help in this trouble will save me

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There was a damage in goods this time, sorry for troubling you but i need your help.
First i wanna confirm about the condition of the goods, Could you send me the picture about the damage of the goods. Or i would like to send you a refund as your request.
About Insurance claim of this problem, i think i had post office make damage report. Your help in this trouble will save me

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if we make all replication, it will waste, so it if difficult for me to give an advice to my important friend. If i were you i would chose Nikon lens.
My body panels is made from aluminum sheet so it will take a long time.
When The product of ( Name of Manufacture) is available, after all if you think you want a product that you can convince by yourself, why don't you try to make a plan?
I will give my hands for you, do not hesitaste to send me an e-mail

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if we make all replication, it will waste money, so it if difficult for me to give an advice to my important friend. If i were you i would choose Nikon lens.
My body panels is made from aluminum sheet so it will take a long time.
When The product of ( Name of Manufacture) is available, after all if you think you want a product that you can convince by yourself, why don't you try to make a plan?
I will give my hands for you if i can do something, do not hesitaste to send me an e-mail

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Thank you for your great comment, it is very honored
Please imitate without diffidence, Because at the beginning i also imitate a race car vehicle,
The sticker which was made for sale is not being used. I almost use the one i made by myself.Several spots were masking paint.
Is there any manufacture who producing Hungary cutting sticker?
I am able to trace the Logo data from the image of each manufacture
It is also produced in Japan but if it is sent via post i think the cost will go up

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Thank you for your great comment, it is very honored
Please imitate without diffidence, Because at the beginning i also imitated a race car vehicle,
The sticker which was made for sale is not being used. I almost use the one i made by myself.Several spots were masking paint.
Is there any manufacture who producing Hungary cutting sticker?
I am able to trace the Logo data from the image of each manufacture
It is also produced in Japan but if it is sent via post i think the cost will go up

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We are a manufacture who make great base both A and B.
The customer's budget is $ so i suggest you to choose B, A is at least $
This is very rare model which used alder materials in the body back and ash materials in the body top.
Combining the sound in the stickiness of the alder materials with the sound in the sharpness of th tight ash material, there will be a little bit different from the normal BW
In addition, equipped a convert turbo switch in the series connect to both pickups in the control unit makes it possible to have a wide sound range

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We are a manufacture who make great base both A and B.
The customer's budget is $ so i suggest you to choose B, A is at least $
This is very rare model which used alder materials in the body back and ash materials in the body top.
Combining the sound in the stickiness of the alder materials with the sound in the sharpness of the tight ash material, there will be a little bit different from the normal BW
In addition, equipped a convert turbo switch in the series connect to both pickups in the control unit makes it possible to have a wide sound range

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When I tested the ER02 the suspected initial defect
There was no trouble. I work smoothly.
However, parts surrounded by a red circle in the attached image Configuration was not included..
Please send this two part.
Instead of that the part which surrounded by a red circle in the photo I have taken instead was included.
I think this is not a part of the other products.
You will not be able to used in ER02 because of thickness of the screw
I have a new order.
Send together with this order items is fine

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When I tested the ER02 the suspected initial defect
There was no trouble. It works smoothly.
However, parts surrounded by a red circle in the attached image Configuration was not included..
Please send this two part.
Instead of that the part which surrounded by a red circle in the photo I have taken instead was included.
I think this is not a part of the other products.
I will not be able to used in ER02 because of thickness of the screw
I have a new order.
Sending together with this order items is fine

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I am really satisfied with you reply.
Then, I will order 8 units of 6hours, and 8 hours of 8 hours.
We do not ask you the production of samples this time, but please make sure to prepare something that satisfy our request. If the products sent to us does not meet our request, they will be returned via PayPal.

So please send us the invoicel.
Please also let us know the delivery date.

Sincerely,

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I am really satisfied with your reply.
Then, I will order 8 units of 6 hours, and 8 units of 8 hours.
We do not ask you the production of samples this time, but please make sure to prepare something that satisfy our request. If the products are sent to us does not meet our request, they will be returned via PayPal.

So please send us the invoicel.
Please also let us know the delivery date.

Sincerely,

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Thank you for your message.
If a problem remains unsolved despite eBay's Resolve a problem, it will affect my business.

I would appreciate it if you could close the case.
The product is completely guaranteed. I promise to replace the return item without any additional shipping cost to you.

Please email me before you place an order next time. I will give you a large disount.

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Thank you for your message.
If a problem remains unsolved despite eBay's Resolve a problem, it will affect my business.

I would appreciate it if you could close the case.
The product is full compensated. I promise to replace the return item without any additional shipping cost to you.

Please email me before you place an order next time. I will give you a large discount.

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We finished contest voting.

Thank you for participation in the contest by a number of people.
A couple of minutes ago, voting period was finished.
Fron now, we are going to total the voting, and will announce the result around 21:00
on 12th today.
You might be the first champion who is selected among 406 applicants.
Please look forward to the result.

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We finished contest voting.

Thank you for participation in the contest by a number of people.
A couple of minutes ago, voting period was finished.
From now, we are going to totalize the voting, and will announce the result around 21:00
on 12th today.
You might be the first champion who is selected among 406 applicants.
Please look forward to the result.

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Thank you for gettig in touch.
It is to small the refund of only 5 dollars .
With the purchase of 6 dollars includying the shipping it will be10 dollars.
also, the description of the item was not clear.
that color in the top of the plate was something that it could not remove by cleaning it.
at first glance has a good impression.
That is why, summirizing all of that I want a 30 dollars refund.

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Thank you for getting in touch.
It is too small the refund of only 5 dollars .
With the purchase of 6 dollars including the shipping it will be 10 dollars.
also, the description of the item was not clear.
that color in the top of the plate was something that it could not be removed by cleaning it.
at first glance has a good impression.
That is why, summarizing all of that I want a 30 dollars refund.

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I have already decided to purchase this product and is currently negotiating the price. As we are running out of time, I would like for you to re-exhibit the product. Thank you. I have purchased this product several times in the past.

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We have already decided to purchase this product and is currently negotiating the price. As we are running out of time, We would like for you to re-list the product. Thank you. We have purchased this product several times in the past.

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I am about to be in my 40's, but I look younger and am younger at heart as well. ( So many people surprised and said " Are you a really engineer?" when we saw first time in person. )Both my cooperativeness and communication skills are very high level. ( I am a type of person who speak up my ideas and opinions a lot.)

I might not have so many experiences in the field, but I am very confident that I am able to work on presentations in formal occasions wihtout any problems.

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I am about to be in my 40's, but I look younger and am younger at heart as well. ( So many people surprised and said " Are you a really engineer?" when we saw first time in person. )Both my cooperativeness and communication skills are very high level. ( I am a type of person who speaks up my ideas and opinions a lot.)

I might not have so many experiences in the field, but I am very confident that I am able to work on presentations in formal occasions wihtout any problems.

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Although I am just before 40 years old, he has young appearance and heart (People I have met often surprised and said "Are you really Engineer"). I believe I am co-operative and have high communication skill ( I keep sending lots of idea and opinion ).

I have not yet have experience but I can easily handle presentation and so on in official places without any issue.

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Although I am not yet 40 years old, i has young appearance and heart (People I have met often surprised and said "Are you really Engineer"). I believe I am co-operative and have high communication skill ( I keep sending lots of ideas and opinions ).

I have not yet had experience but I can easily handle presentation and so on in official places without any issue.

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I am currently working as a development engineer, but I would like to change my carrier by April/2014.

My career goal is that after having experience as an engineering leader; develop skill of management, presentation and English communication, then aiming position such as CTO or executive management in Internet Company with global business.

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I am currently working as a development engineer, but I would like to change my job by April/2014.

My career goal is that after having experience as an engineering leader, developing skill of management, presentation and English communication, then aiming position such as CTO or executive management in Internet Company with global business.

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I'm not looking to have a refund. I would like you to ship the remaining order as soon as possible.
I will close the case as soon as I receive the product I have not received yet.
I have discussed with the person at Paypal and we both agreed to it.
Could you please inform me when you can ship it again? Thanks.

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I'm not looking to have a refund. I would like you to ship the remaining order as soon as possible.
I will close the claim until I receive the product I have not received yet.
I have discussed with the person at Paypal and we both agreed to it.
Could you please inform me when you can ship it again? Thanks.

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Thanks for sending the product the other day.

I would like to ask you a question.
Would it be possible to get a trophy of the Yu-Gi-Oh!'s Asian tournament?

I know a person in Japan who is interested to purchase.↵

If it's possible for you to get it, could you please send a picture of it, and let me know the price you can offer.

Thanks for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

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Thanks for sending the product the other day.

I would like to ask you a question.
Would it be possible to get a trophy of the Yu-Gi-Oh!'s Asian tournament?

I know a person in Japan who wants to purchase
If it's possible for you to get it, could you please send a picture of it, and let me know the price you can offer.

Thanks for your attention and I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

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Good day. Can I purchase this product with the same price as before?
It was sold to me at 1596 dollars including the shipping fee. So is this possible?

I will wait for your response. I will purchase immediately if this is possible.
Thank you.

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Hello. Can I purchase this product with the same price as before?
It was sold to me at 1596 US dollars including the shipping fee. So is this possible?

I will wait for your response. I will purchase immediately if this is possible.
Thank you.

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I received the record you sent today. However, it is different from the product title of eBay. Also, jacket was not the WIDE SPINE. I bought it in an auction for higher price than that of in the market, because I wanted to have the WIDE SPINE. Other conditions were almost same as shown in the explanation page in eBay. However, a CD at this level can be available just for £25. Could you kindly refund the difference? I am sending this message to you because I thought it will be better to tell you before stating complainants in eBay. I will be waiting your reply.

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I received the record you sent today. However, it is different from the product title of eBay. Also, jacket was not the WIDE SPINE. I bought it in an auction for higher price than that of in the market, because I wanted to have the WIDE SPINE. Other conditions were almost same as shown in the explanation page in eBay. However, a CD at this level can be available just for £25. Could you kindly refund the difference? I am sending this message to you because I thought it will be better to tell you before starting complaints in eBay. I will be waiting your reply.

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I am writing to you as we have been contacted by the delivery company.

・ The delivery company say that they delivered a package to XX on October 5, but that they could not hand it as you were not there.

・ Your telephone number seems to be wrong. Please tell me your phone number accessible in Japan.

・ Is the following address correct to deliver to? I would like to make it sure for just in case.

I am sorry to bother you, but would appreciate your response at your earliest convenience. I will contact the delivery company with your response.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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I am writing to you as we have been contacted by the delivery company.

・ The delivery company said that they delivered a package to XX on October 5th, but that they could not hand it as you were not there.

・ Your telephone number seems to be wrong. Please tell me your phone number which is accessible in Japan.

・ Is the following address correct to deliver to? I would like to make it sure for just in case.

I am sorry to bother you, but would appreciate your response at your earliest convenience. I will contact the delivery company with your response.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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We desire to have an educator who will be advantage in the sale of Sha-Nail Pro.

The roll of an educator is only to expand the sale in Sha-Nail Pro.

An educator we desire is the person who goes to a nail salon with a sales representative and can give the technique of Sha-Nail Pro , as well as giving demonstration at an event.

In Thailand, the sale has quite been be increased by promoting in cooperation with sales woman and technique person.

The 2 persons you has chosen are possible to proactively work like above?

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We desire to have an educator who will be advantage in the sale of Sha-Nail Pro.

The role of an educator is only to expand the sale in Sha-Nail Pro.

An educator we desire is the person who goes to a nail salon with a sales representative and can give the technique of Sha-Nail Pro , as well as giving demonstration at an event.

In Thailand, the sale has quite been increased by promoting in cooperation between sales woman and technique person.

The 2 persons you has chosen are possible to proactively work like above?

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Hello,
Thank you for continuous service.

I have just ordered 2 items,
I prefer not to send them together with the order,
because if you send them together, it quite often become delay.

Is it possible to ask you to send them separately?

Hoping to hear from you soon.

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Hello,
Thank you for continuous service.

I have just ordered 2 items,
I prefer not to send them together with the order,
because if you send them together, it quite often becomes delay.

Is it possible to ask you to send them separately?

Hoping to hear from you soon.

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Thank you for your information.
I am going to save the picture posted in the homepage, and then, I will inform to the customers. I have one question. There are Golf Pride grips (Black/Red and Black) listed, but is it different depending of the number of golf club? If so, please let me know the number of golf club for each grip.

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Thank you for your information.
I am going to save the picture posted in the homepage, and then, I will inform to the customers. I have one question. There are Golf Pride grips (Black/Red and Black) listed, but is it different depending on the number of golf club? If so, please let me know the number of golf club for each grip.

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Hello

Thank you for your email.
It has been a long time!

I'm sorry that I couldn't visit ManilaFAME, because I have important business to do in Japan.
I'm sorry.

Filomena's bag is also received well in Japan.
I'd like to consider the purchase of it, could you send me the photo and the material of new collection?

I'm verry sorry that we couldn't meet, but thank you for your help.
Good luck for your exhibition!

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Hello

Thank you for your email.
It has been a long time!

I'm sorry that I couldn't visit ManilaFAME because I have important business to do in Japan.
I'm sorry.

Filomena's bag is also received well in Japan.
I'd like to consider the purchase of it, could you send me the photo and the material of new collection?

I'm very sorry that we couldn't meet, but thank you for your help.
Good luck for your exhibition!