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評価: 59 / 1 Review / 2014/05/01 03:21:45

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日本語

マーケットへのアプローチは色々とアイデアがありますが、まずしっかりとWEBSITEを作りたいと思いますので
画像等頂けると助かります。
こちらでも画像等を撮って許可を頂けたら使用したいと思っています。
また、なるべく早く全てのモデルのサンプルを各5個づつ欲しいです。

英語

There are a lot of ways to approach and advertise your products in our market.
However, the important thing to do first is building an appropriate website.
So please send us something such as pictures of the products so that we can start building your website.
We ourselves also take some pictures for sales if you allow us.
Also, we would like 5 samples of each model as soon as possible.

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katrina_z 68 こんにちは!はじめまして、チェコ在住のアメリカ英語のネイティブです。 日...
katrina_zはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/01 12:48:40

元の翻訳
There are a lot of ways to approach and advertise your products in our market.
However, the important thing to do first is building an appropriate website.
So please send us something such as pictures of the products so that we can start building your website.
We ourselves also take some pictures for sales if you allow us.
Also, we would like 5 samples of each model as soon as possible.

修正後
There are a lot of ways to approach and advertise your products in our market.
However, the important thing to do first is building an appropriate website.
So please send us something such as pictures of the products so that we can start building your website.
With your permission, we will also take some pictures for sales ourselves.
Also, we would like 5 samples of each model as soon as possible.

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