Karen Cornish (karekora) — 付けたレビュー

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Other stove thermometers' paint might melt at the heat of over 250 degrees.
Using ceramic decal print, this print will not melt by heat.

Can exactly measure from 40 degrees to 400degrees
Easy to set, using magnets
Ceramic decal print will not melt by heat
Products by other companies often get difficult to observe at intense heat

Easy to see scales using large fonts and vivid colors
Easy to set using magnets

Displays only the range from 40 to 400 degrees, easy to see and very exact measurements

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Other stove thermometers' paint might melt at 250 degrees or more.
Use ceramic decal print to ensure it will not disappear at this heat.

Exactly measures from 40 degrees to 400 degrees
Easy to set, using magnets
Ceramic decal print does not melt with heat
The scale on competitor products often is hard to see in intense heat

Easy-to-see scales using large text and vivid colors
Easy to set via magnets

Displays 40 to 400 degrees only - makes it easy to see and achieve exact measurements

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Thank you for your support last time.
The last time issue you asked was not stolen, but it seems to be a high possibility of a delivery address error.
FedEx seems to have delivered it to the wrong address not buyer's address.
It was shipped by FedEx from eLogi.
I have been contacting FedEx in Japan every day and the buyers to local FedEx.↵
I couldn't get any clear updates so far.
How can I solve this trouble?

Please give me some advice for this matter.

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Thank you for your support last time.
You suggested that there might be a high possibility of a dispatch error rather than theft.
FedEx seems to have delivered it to the wrong address - not the buyer's address.
It was shipped by FedEx via eLogi.
I have been contacting FedEx in Japan every day and the buyers to local FedEx, but am yet to get any clear updates.
How can I solve this issue?

I appreciate your advice on this matter.

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PACKAGE ID ◯ , The quantity for this shipment is 6 items, but the actual quantity purchased is 3 items. The weight is also about 3 items, so is it entered incorrectly?… Confirmation, please.

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PACKAGE ID ◯: The quantity for this shipment is 6 items, but the actual quantity purchased is 3 items. The weight is also equal to about 3 items. Please confirm that it is entered incorrectly.

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Would you sell through our agent company A?
if you would yo like to deal directly, we will require to pay full in advance or L/C because this is the first time to make a deal with you.
We can issue our bond.
Moreover, we can accept the condition which are already given if you use our agent company.
There will be no increase from the estimated quotation because agent fee is included your payment.
A might help you because they are familiar with the polymer industry in China.
Also we can reduce about 10% cost from current price.

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Would you like to sell through our agent, Company A?
If you would yo like to deal directly with us, we will require the full amount to be paid in advance or LC as this would be the first time transaction.
We can issue bonds.
We also can accept the conditions you presented if you go through Company A.
There will be no increase from the estimated quotation because the agent fee is included the payment.
Company A might be also able to assist as they are familiar with the polymer industry in China.
A reduction of about 10% of the current price is also possible.

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1. I heard that Jon-san is coming to Japan next week.
Sato-san would like to have a face-to-face meeting with him.
Are you available in the time frame below?

Meeting duration: 30-60 min
12/20 between 1pm and 4pm

2. Dear Tan,
Could I ask you to arrange an interpreter as well?
Please let me know if there is anything we need to do on our side.

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1. I heard that Jon is coming to Japan next week.
Sato would like to have a face-to-face meeting with him.
Are you available in the time frame below?

Meeting duration: 30-60 min
Dec 20 between 1pm and 4pm

2. Dear Tan,
Could I ask you to arrange an interpreter as well?
Please let me know if there is anything we need to do on our side.

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Unfortunately, it looks like the strap on the back will be cut off, I need to be canceled.

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It looks like the strap on the back will need to be cut off. I would like to cancel, please.

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Anming safely arrived at my place! I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused. Thank you very much for the numerous lovely gifts, including the added touch of the band. I believe she will be delighted. I am deeply impressed by your thoughtful consideration. Looking forward to continued good relations.

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Anming safely arrived at my place! I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused. Thank you very much for the lovely gifts, including the added touch of the band! I think she will be delighted! I am deeply impressed by your thoughtful considerations. I am looking forward to continued good relations.

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I’m sorry for bothering you,↵
but I'd like you to send it to the new address.

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I’m terribly sorry but I'd like you to send it to the new address.

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Considered as the outsourcing, at first, the price decision which you have offered is quite valid.↵
We totally consent to the rate validated, but we made a decision to defer this opportunity to contract, because we could not afford to.
We promised that we will hopefully be willing to do next time, and look forward to updating your list for it.

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Regarding the outsourcing, at first, the price you have offered is quite reasonable. We totally consent to the price you offered, but have made a decision to defer this opportunity this time due to it being over budget.
We will hopefully be outsourcing it in the future and hope you can work on it then. We look forward to the updated list.

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Cocone ; flower pod plants shears You would never lost your shears . Strong stands , The excellent sharpness , Made in Japan

You could put crips and Post-it in the shallow part of a pot plant stand.
furthermore, you could put pens and rulers in the deep part .

This product is designed as young children would clean up their desk.
They would be good at cleaning up by using Cocone.

Cocone is unprecedented haling character stationery makes your desks gorgeous.
This is the best present for important people as you give them bouquets.

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Product name↵
Cocone. Flower pot shaped garden shears. Never lose your shears! Strong pen stand. Excellent sharpness. Made in Japan

Paper clips and sticky notes can be stored in the shallow tray of the pot stand.
You could even store pens and rulers in the deeper parts.

This product is designed so that even young children can clean up their desk.
Everyone can be good at cleaning through Cocone!

Cocone is a unique, characteristic piece of stationery that brightens up any desk.
This is an ideal best present for that someone special - its just like giving them flowers!

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Thank you so much for sending me the extremely valuable music files. I'm still out and about, so I'll listen to them when I get home. I'm really excited. Actually, I reached out to Mr. XX as well, but he didn't have any music files. And he mentioned that he's not feeling well now. I pray for his health to improve.

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Thank you so much for sending me the extremely valuable music files. I'm still out and about, so I'll listen to them when I get home. I'm really excited. Actually, I reached out to 〇〇 as well, but they didn't have any music files. 〇〇 mentioned that they aren’t feeling well at the moment. I hope they get better soon.

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Once the hostess has greeted you, the playing fee is non-refundable.

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• Payment is non-refundable as soon as the hostess has greeted you.

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Buying all 12 razors gets you a great offer. You can get a razor at $200 each.
I will explain to you how:
1 Ask for “$200” per piece from “Make Offer” on eBay.
2 We approve this offer for you.
3 We send you an invoice of $2400 for the total of 12 razors and pay the amount. We get you free shipping.
4 Our items will be delivered in 7 to 10 days normally. Also, we fill out “present” at “$24.00” totally of $2.00 per piece in order to pass the customs.

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Buying all 12 razors gets you a great offer – get each razor for only $200 each.
Let me explain how:
1 Ask for “$200” per piece from “Make Offer” on eBay.
2 We will approve your offer.
3 We will then send you an invoice for $2400 (total cost for 12 razors). Please pay the amount. Shipment is without charge.
4 Our items are normally delivered in 7 to 10 days. In order to pass customs quickly, we state the item is a ‘gift’ with a total value of ‘$24.00’ ($2.00 per piece).

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Mr. Chang, I'm sorry for the late reply to the email you received.
The next meeting is scheduled for May 26th, 13: 30-14: 30

Agenda
(1) Sharing of assessment results of selected training
(2) Share the status of examination of training content
How is it?
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Meeting information will be sent separately. Thank you.

PS:
I also had 10 days off during this year's Golden Week, but it was almost over with the care of my parents. Even so, I was away from work, so I think it was a good change.

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Mr. Chang, I'm sorry for my late reply to your email.
The next meeting is scheduled for May 26th, between 13:30-14:30

How is the following agenda for you?
(1) Share assessment results for selected training
(2) Share the status of research into training content

Meeting details will be sent separately. Thank you.

PS:
I also had 10 days off during Golden Week this year, but it was almost all taken up with caring for my parents. This said, it was a good change from work!

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Thank you for your kind reply.
We are one of Japanese corporations and do not have the EORI.
Is the EORI always necessary for going through the customs?
We shipped 2 freights to France the other day, but we do not have any problem at customs.
We are to register EORI the next week if the EORI is always necessary.
We have some questions for the other thing.
We would like to have SAD documents in terms of the freights to France.
Can we ask you to give us SAD?

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Thank you for your kind reply.
We are a Japanese corporation and do not have the EORI.
Is EORI always necessary for customs?
We shipped 2 freights to France the other day; we didn’t have any problems with customs.
We will register for EORI next week if required.
We have another query regarding something separate from this.
We would like to have SAD documents for freights to France.
Can we ask you to give us SAD?

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1 I am writing to you for the first time!
Thank you for listing the items that I am interested in.
As I will purchase 2 sets of 〇, so would you make it 1 pcs at 140＄, which is 280＄ altogether?
Would it be possible to ship altogether at 50＄ to Japan, please?
I appreciate your further consideration.
2 Thank you for your consideration.
If you change your mind, please let me know.
With regards.

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1 Nice to meet you!
Thank you for listing the items that I am interested in.
As I will purchase 2 sets of 〇, could you make 1 pcs at $140; $280 altogether?
Would it be possible to ship everything to Japan together for $50?
I appreciate your further consideration.↵

2 Thank you for your consideration.
If you change your mind, please let me know.
With regards.

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I set the shipping address to Japan and clicked the 'request total' button
After that, I paid the invoice sent from eBay.
The delivery address in that invoice is Japan.
I changed my primary address after that.
It's strange that you asked me to pay an extra GBP60 to ship to Japan.
But if it's that expensive to ship to Japan, then just ship it to Germany.

I've paid ￡14.84, so if I pay the remaining ￡27.11 will you ship it to Japan?

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I set the shipping address to Japan and clicked the 'request total' button.
After that, I paid the invoice sent from eBay.
The delivery address in that invoice is Japan.
I changed my primary address after that.
It's strange that you ask for an extra GBP60 to ship to Japan.
But if it's that expensive to ship to Japan, then just ship it to Germany.

I've paid £14.84, so if I pay the remaining £27.11 will you ship it to Japan?

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Hello everyone!
My online lecture will be held on November 28 at 18 o'clock in Japan time hosted by OO.
There are simultaneous English interpreters, and sometimes Korean and Chinese interpreters. It seems that people from any country can participate, so please take this opportunity.
I look forward to seeing you all.
You can apply from the following URL.
Also, this is the URL of the host OO.
Thank you and best regards.

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Hello everyone!
My online lecture; hosted by OO, will be held on November 28 at 6 o'clock Japan time.
There are simultaneous English interpreters, and sometimes also Korean and Chinese. Anyone from around the world can participate – don’t miss this opportunity!
I look forward to seeing you all.
You can apply via the following URL.
Also, this is the URL of the host.
Thank you and best regards.

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I have a question about the FBA shipment written above.
I sent 39 items of FBA15CSJN01T, but I received 74 at the warehouse.
Furthermore, I sent 37 items of FBA15CSDMYR9, but I received 62 at the warehouse.
I received a lot more goods than I sent. I guess the extra items are from other sellers.
Amazon pointed out that there were mistakes in the number of sent items, and I already got penalized.
If these extra items sell, will the sales money be mine?
Will Amazon re-correct the number of the items later?

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I have a question about the FBA shipment written above.
I sent 39 items of FBA15CSJN01T, but I received 74 at the warehouse.
Furthermore, I sent 37 items of FBA15CSDMYR9, but I received 62 at the warehouse.
I received a lot more goods than I sent. I guess the extra items are from other sellers.
Amazon pointed out that there were mistakes in the number of sent items, and I have already received a penalty.
If these extra items sell, will the sales money be mine?
Will Amazon re-correct the number of the items later?

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I have a question about the above FBA delivery.
For FBA15CSJN01T, I sent 39 pieces, but I received 74 pieces at the warehouse.
For FBA15CSDMYR9, I sent 37 pieces and I received 62 pieces at the warehouse.
The number of items received is much larger than the number of items I sent, and I think it is probably another seller's items.
Amazon pointed out that there was an error in the number of shipments and I have already received a penalty.
If these extra items are sold, will the proceeds from sale be mine?
Is there any possibility that Amazon will correct the number of items later?

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I have a question about the above FBA delivery.
For FBA15CSJN01T, I sent 39 pieces, but I received 74 pieces at the warehouse.
For FBA15CSDMYR9, I sent 37 pieces and I received 62 pieces at the warehouse.
The number of items received is much larger than the number of items I sent, so I think they are probably for another seller.
Amazon pointed out that there was an error in the number of shipments and I have already received a penalty.
If these extra items are sold, will the proceeds from sale be mine?
Is there any possibility that Amazon will correct the number of items later?

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Next, prioritize those with "large budgets" but "distant order dates.
→Nurture the inquiries in collaboration with the inside sales team. When the time to place an order is near, we will ask you to set up a meeting.

At the end of the process, we will start working on the ones that do not have a large budget and are far away from the time of order.
→We consult with the team to see if we should work on it as a sales team in the first place. If you decide that you should not work on it, ask the marketing team to nurse it to a larger budget and closer to the time of order through the influx of email newsletters and events.

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Next, prioritize those with "large budgets" but "distant order dates”.
→Nurture inquiries in collaboration with the inside sales team. When the time to place an order is approaching, we will ask you to set up a meeting.

At the end of the process, we will start working on the ones that do not have a large budget and are far away from the time of order.
→We consult with the team to see if we should initially work as a sales team. If you decide that you should not work on it, please ask the marketing team to nurse it to a larger budget and closer to the time of order through the influx of email newsletters and events.

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Thank you for your reply.
Although I would like to proceed with ordering, what do I have to do after this?
Once confirmed the order status, it says “Pending Fulfillment”, would it be a proper status for completing the order and waiting ready for shipping, right?
I am waiting for your reply again soon.

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Thank you for your reply.
I would like to proceed with ordering, what do I have to do now?
I looked up the order status, it says “Pending Fulfillment”. Should I assume this status usually refers to completing the order and awaiting shipment?
I’ll await your reply.