Karen Cornish (karekora) — 付けたレビュー

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Confirmation of Product Delivery

I recently purchased an item from Walmart. According to my order history, it was supposed to arrive on 6/24. However, I have not yet received a notification email from your company confirming the delivery. The order history on Walmart's website does not include a tracking number, but it does show a photo of the package upon delivery.It seems that the package may not have included a tracking number or my suite number on the label, which has happened before with Walmart shipments. I will send the relevant documents for this order via email.
Could you please confirm the whereabouts of my package?I look forward to your response.

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Confirmation of Product Delivery

I recently purchased an item from Walmart. According to my order history, it was supposed to arrive on 6/24. However, I have not yet received a notification email from your company confirming the delivery. The order history on Walmart's website does not include a tracking number, but it does show a photo of the package upon delivery. It seems that the package may not have included a tracking number or my suite number on the label, which has happened before with Walmart shipments. I will send the relevant documents for this order via email.
Could you please confirm the whereabouts of my package? I look forward to your response.

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Hi.
I confirmed the number of books sent to Kaori.
I heard two "KANJI from zero" and one "Japanese From Zero."
I appreciate it.

I also heard that books that were supposed to be sent on 7th May are not arrived yet.
A concierge usually takes the luggage when Kaori is absent, but it is not the case this time.

I would appreciate if you can make sure what is going on.

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Hi.
I confirmed the number of books sent to Kaori.
I hear it’s two "KANJI from zero" and one "Japanese From Zero” books.
I appreciate it.

I also heard that the books that were supposed to be sent on 7th May have not arrived yet.
A concierge usually takes packages when Kaori is absent, but it seems it is not the case this time.

I would appreciate if you can find out what is going on.

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I am really sorry that you may be offended by the content.
I would like to solve the problem of the import and to place orders continuously, so I am now working with the specialist. I would appreciate if you could give me some more time.

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I am really sorry if you were offended by the content.
I would like to solve the importing problem and repeatedly place orders, so I am now working with a specialist. I would appreciate if you could give me some more time.

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We are sorry, but the 400 units that you are keeping now are↵
We are sorry for the inconvenience, but the 400 units you are keeping now can be given to other buyers.

In order to continue our good relationship↵
We appreciate your understanding in taking some time to continue our good relationship.

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We are sorry for the inconvenience, but the 400 units you are keeping for us can be given to other buyers.

We appreciate your patience while we take measures to ensure our good business relationship continues.

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Thank you for the list of the sales. This time, I am only interested in ○○. It says 100$ including the shipping cost, but could you lower the price? The ideal price for me is 60$ including the shipping cost. I would like you to take this discount into consideration. If it is hard for you to lower the price, I will give it up this time. 　

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Thank you for the sales list. This time, I am only interested in ○○. It says $100 including the shipping cost - is it possible to lower the price? The ideal price for me is $60 including the shipping cost. Please take this discount into consideration. If it is hard for you to lower the price, I will have to give it up this time. 　

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Thank you for sending me the bill.
At the moment,USD55- at Paypal is completed, please check it.

Furthermore, I am sorry to trouble you but, after shipping is completed, could you send me its tracking number.

As soon as the sample arrives, I would like to be finished the Landing Page. As for the items' features and appealing points, I would like to ask you, please continue further cooperation.

I am happy to deal with you.↵

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Thank you for sending me the bill.
I have sent USD55.00 via Paypal. Please confirm receipt.

Once shipped, please send me the tracking number.

I would like to finish the Landing Page as soon as the sample arrives. I may seek your advise on the items' features and points of appeal. I appreciate your cooperation in advance.

I am happy to work with you.

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Thank you very much for sending an invoice for us.
We've just transferred USD55- through paypal now, so please kindly confirm your receipt.
Sorry for bothering you, but once you dispatched the cargo, please kindly let us know the tracking number for us.
Once we received the sample, we would like to complete our Landing Page. We may ask you about the features, selling points, etc., please kindly cooperate me with it.
We're so glad to work with you.

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Thank you very much for sending us the invoice.
We've just transferred USD55- through PayPal. Please kindly confirm receipt.
Once you have dispatched the cargo, please kindly let us know the tracking number.
Once we received the sample, we would like to finish our Landing Page. We may ask you about the features, selling points, etc., please kindly cooperate with us on this.
We're so glad to work with you.

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Hi, My name is A. I'm sending this message from Japan.

Let me tell you this first, I am your huge fun.

Do you have spare kits for "Jack"?
I can't find it anywhere and I'm feeling sad.

I hope I can buy "Jack kit" from you.

I'm looking forward to your good reply.

Thank you for reading this suddenly message.

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Hi, My name is A. I'm sending this message from Japan.

Firstly, I am a huge fan of you!

Do you have spare kits for the Jack?
I can't find them anywhere and I'm feeling sad about it.

I hope I can buy a Jack kit from you?

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Thank you for reading this sudden message.

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Other stove thermometers' paint might melt at the heat of over 250 degrees.
Using ceramic decal print, this print will not melt by heat.

Can exactly measure from 40 degrees to 400degrees
Easy to set, using magnets
Ceramic decal print will not melt by heat
Products by other companies often get difficult to observe at intense heat

Easy to see scales using large fonts and vivid colors
Easy to set using magnets

Displays only the range from 40 to 400 degrees, easy to see and very exact measurements

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Other stove thermometers' paint might melt at 250 degrees or more.
Use ceramic decal print to ensure it will not disappear at this heat.

Exactly measures from 40 degrees to 400 degrees
Easy to set, using magnets
Ceramic decal print does not melt with heat
The scale on competitor products often is hard to see in intense heat

Easy-to-see scales using large text and vivid colors
Easy to set via magnets

Displays 40 to 400 degrees only - makes it easy to see and achieve exact measurements

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Thank you for your support last time.
The last time issue you asked was not stolen, but it seems to be a high possibility of a delivery address error.
FedEx seems to have delivered it to the wrong address not buyer's address.
It was shipped by FedEx from eLogi.
I have been contacting FedEx in Japan every day and the buyers to local FedEx.↵
I couldn't get any clear updates so far.
How can I solve this trouble?

Please give me some advice for this matter.

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Thank you for your support last time.
You suggested that there might be a high possibility of a dispatch error rather than theft.
FedEx seems to have delivered it to the wrong address - not the buyer's address.
It was shipped by FedEx via eLogi.
I have been contacting FedEx in Japan every day and the buyers to local FedEx, but am yet to get any clear updates.
How can I solve this issue?

I appreciate your advice on this matter.

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PACKAGE ID ◯ , The quantity for this shipment is 6 items, but the actual quantity purchased is 3 items. The weight is also about 3 items, so is it entered incorrectly?… Confirmation, please.

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PACKAGE ID ◯: The quantity for this shipment is 6 items, but the actual quantity purchased is 3 items. The weight is also equal to about 3 items. Please confirm that it is entered incorrectly.

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Would you sell through our agent company A?
if you would yo like to deal directly, we will require to pay full in advance or L/C because this is the first time to make a deal with you.
We can issue our bond.
Moreover, we can accept the condition which are already given if you use our agent company.
There will be no increase from the estimated quotation because agent fee is included your payment.
A might help you because they are familiar with the polymer industry in China.
Also we can reduce about 10% cost from current price.

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Would you like to sell through our agent, Company A?
If you would yo like to deal directly with us, we will require the full amount to be paid in advance or LC as this would be the first time transaction.
We can issue bonds.
We also can accept the conditions you presented if you go through Company A.
There will be no increase from the estimated quotation because the agent fee is included the payment.
Company A might be also able to assist as they are familiar with the polymer industry in China.
A reduction of about 10% of the current price is also possible.

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1. I heard that Jon-san is coming to Japan next week.
Sato-san would like to have a face-to-face meeting with him.
Are you available in the time frame below?

Meeting duration: 30-60 min
12/20 between 1pm and 4pm

2. Dear Tan,
Could I ask you to arrange an interpreter as well?
Please let me know if there is anything we need to do on our side.

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1. I heard that Jon is coming to Japan next week.
Sato would like to have a face-to-face meeting with him.
Are you available in the time frame below?

Meeting duration: 30-60 min
Dec 20 between 1pm and 4pm

2. Dear Tan,
Could I ask you to arrange an interpreter as well?
Please let me know if there is anything we need to do on our side.

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Unfortunately, it looks like the strap on the back will be cut off, I need to be canceled.

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It looks like the strap on the back will need to be cut off. I would like to cancel, please.

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Anming safely arrived at my place! I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused. Thank you very much for the numerous lovely gifts, including the added touch of the band. I believe she will be delighted. I am deeply impressed by your thoughtful consideration. Looking forward to continued good relations.

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Anming safely arrived at my place! I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused. Thank you very much for the lovely gifts, including the added touch of the band! I think she will be delighted! I am deeply impressed by your thoughtful considerations. I am looking forward to continued good relations.

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I’m sorry for bothering you,↵
but I'd like you to send it to the new address.

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I’m terribly sorry but I'd like you to send it to the new address.

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Considered as the outsourcing, at first, the price decision which you have offered is quite valid.↵
We totally consent to the rate validated, but we made a decision to defer this opportunity to contract, because we could not afford to.
We promised that we will hopefully be willing to do next time, and look forward to updating your list for it.

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Regarding the outsourcing, at first, the price you have offered is quite reasonable. We totally consent to the price you offered, but have made a decision to defer this opportunity this time due to it being over budget.
We will hopefully be outsourcing it in the future and hope you can work on it then. We look forward to the updated list.

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Cocone ; flower pod plants shears You would never lost your shears . Strong stands , The excellent sharpness , Made in Japan

You could put crips and Post-it in the shallow part of a pot plant stand.
furthermore, you could put pens and rulers in the deep part .

This product is designed as young children would clean up their desk.
They would be good at cleaning up by using Cocone.

Cocone is unprecedented haling character stationery makes your desks gorgeous.
This is the best present for important people as you give them bouquets.

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Product name↵
Cocone. Flower pot shaped garden shears. Never lose your shears! Strong pen stand. Excellent sharpness. Made in Japan

Paper clips and sticky notes can be stored in the shallow tray of the pot stand.
You could even store pens and rulers in the deeper parts.

This product is designed so that even young children can clean up their desk.
Everyone can be good at cleaning through Cocone!

Cocone is a unique, characteristic piece of stationery that brightens up any desk.
This is an ideal best present for that someone special - its just like giving them flowers!

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Thank you so much for sending me the extremely valuable music files. I'm still out and about, so I'll listen to them when I get home. I'm really excited. Actually, I reached out to Mr. XX as well, but he didn't have any music files. And he mentioned that he's not feeling well now. I pray for his health to improve.

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Thank you so much for sending me the extremely valuable music files. I'm still out and about, so I'll listen to them when I get home. I'm really excited. Actually, I reached out to 〇〇 as well, but they didn't have any music files. 〇〇 mentioned that they aren’t feeling well at the moment. I hope they get better soon.

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Once the hostess has greeted you, the playing fee is non-refundable.

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• Payment is non-refundable as soon as the hostess has greeted you.

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Buying all 12 razors gets you a great offer. You can get a razor at $200 each.
I will explain to you how:
1 Ask for “$200” per piece from “Make Offer” on eBay.
2 We approve this offer for you.
3 We send you an invoice of $2400 for the total of 12 razors and pay the amount. We get you free shipping.
4 Our items will be delivered in 7 to 10 days normally. Also, we fill out “present” at “$24.00” totally of $2.00 per piece in order to pass the customs.

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Buying all 12 razors gets you a great offer – get each razor for only $200 each.
Let me explain how:
1 Ask for “$200” per piece from “Make Offer” on eBay.
2 We will approve your offer.
3 We will then send you an invoice for $2400 (total cost for 12 razors). Please pay the amount. Shipment is without charge.
4 Our items are normally delivered in 7 to 10 days. In order to pass customs quickly, we state the item is a ‘gift’ with a total value of ‘$24.00’ ($2.00 per piece).

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Mr. Chang, I'm sorry for the late reply to the email you received.
The next meeting is scheduled for May 26th, 13: 30-14: 30

Agenda
(1) Sharing of assessment results of selected training
(2) Share the status of examination of training content
How is it?
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Meeting information will be sent separately. Thank you.

PS:
I also had 10 days off during this year's Golden Week, but it was almost over with the care of my parents. Even so, I was away from work, so I think it was a good change.

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Mr. Chang, I'm sorry for my late reply to your email.
The next meeting is scheduled for May 26th, between 13:30-14:30

How is the following agenda for you?
(1) Share assessment results for selected training
(2) Share the status of research into training content

Meeting details will be sent separately. Thank you.

PS:
I also had 10 days off during Golden Week this year, but it was almost all taken up with caring for my parents. This said, it was a good change from work!