Karen Cornish (karekora) — 付けたレビュー

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(1) Please tell us if the music box plays without any problem.

(2) Are you able to ship the products I bought a few days ago together with this product if I win the bid?
Please advise me if the shipping cost I already paid is enough to cover the both products?
Do I have to pay for the additional shipping cost?

(3) Please pack it well.
Please let me know the additional shipping cost.

4) I bought this at a concert hall.
I noticed that a small damage was on the product when I bought.
I noticed that there is a letter missing on the new T-shirts I bought .

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(1) Please tell us if the music box plays without problem.

(2) Are you able to ship the products I bought a few days ago together with this product if I win the bid?
Please advise me if the shipping cost already paid is enough to cover both products?
Do I have to pay any additional shipping costs?

(3) Please pack it well.
Please let me know any additional shipping costs.

4) I bought this at the concert hall.
I noticed some small damage to the product after buying it.
I noticed that there is a letter missing on the new t-shirts I bought.

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Let's take a look at example sentences.
When you express that the temperature is cold,
you can use the word ”cold” as "The rain is cold" or "I’d like to drink something cold."
In this case, the antonym is "hot" or "warm".
And when you express personality or attitude is cold, ↵
you can use it as "I am cold-hearted" or "He gave me the cold shoulder."
In this case, the antonym is "warm" or "gentle".
Please review at ease while having something cold to drink.
That's all for today. See you next time.

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Let's take a look at an example sentence.
When you want to express that the temperature is cold,
you can use the word ”cold”; for example, “The rain is cold" or "I’d like to drink something cold."
In this case, antonyms are “hot" or "warm".
When you want to express the idea that someone’s personality or attitude is cold, you can also use “cold”; for example, “I am cold-hearted" or "He gave me the cold shoulder."
In this case, antonyms are “warm" or "gentle".
Please review this at ease while having something cold to drink.
That's all for today. See you next time.

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It's been a long time. How are you?
I have something to consult with you.
I have been looking for "Aster kit", but I cannot find it. So I looked for a similar kit.
Is "Amelie by Sandy Faber" available?
The kit on the left in the attached photo.
The "Aster" you made before is very cute, so I want you to make it in the similar way.
If possible, how much would it be including shipping fee to Japan?

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It's been a long time! How are you?
I have something I’d like to discuss with you.
I have been looking for an "Aster kit", but I haven’t been able to find it. I am looking for a similar kit instead.
Is "Amelie by Sandy Faber" available?
I refer to the kit on the left in the attached photo.
The "Aster" you made before is very cute, so I want you to make it in a similar way.
If possible, how much would this be including the shipping fee to Japan?

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The mail that was delivered this time doesn't include the submission form.
They won't accept it for the grading if this situation goes on.
I am very sorry.
I just made the submission form for three cases, and attach them in the service.
If the submission is completed, please disregard the documents.
If you have any confirmation, please kindly let me know by e-mail.
Thank you for your continuous support.

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The mail that was delivered this time doesn't include the submission form.
They won't accept it for grading if this situation continues.
I am very sorry.
I have just made the submission form for three cases and attached them to the service.
If submission is complete, please disregard the documents.
If you have any queries, please kindly let me know by e-mail.
Thank you for your continued support.

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Replace the printer with a new one.
Change the ink to a product with low water content and less likely to leaking or oozing.
After printing, labels are not used for delivery until at least one hour has passed.
A three-person team checks the labels for quality issue.

1st person Visual check of printed labels
2nd person Visual check by label attaching staff
3rd person Visual check by the person in charge of placing the product in the delivery box

7. All the problems have been corrected for the deliveries made after today.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused by this issue.
We will be very careful not to cause this kind of situation in the future.

Excuse me.

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Replace the printer with a new one.
Change the ink to a product with low water content less likely to leak or ooze out.
Labels are not used for delivery until at least one hour has passed since printing.
A three-person team checks the labels for quality.

1st person: Visual check of printed labels
2nd person: Visual check by label attaching staff
3rd person: Visual check by the person in charge of placing the product in the delivery box

7. All the problems have been corrected for the deliveries made after today.

We apologize for the inconvenience caused by this issue.
We will be very careful not to cause this kind of situation again.

Kind regards

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Dear who may in concern.
Would you Please reissue C79.
I had requested a reissue of C79 last month, ↵
but it has not done yet,
I'm sorry to bother you at such a busy time, ↵
I really appreciate that for your cooperation.

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To whom it may concern
Could you please reissue C79?
I had requested a reissue of C79 last month, however it has not been done yet.
Apologies for the inconvenience during such a busy time. I really appreciate that for your cooperation.

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thank you for telling me about the audit.
to resolve the audlt, I want to accept your company‘'s service.
instead of me please proceed the response to HM RC.
please accept it, thank you.

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Thank you for telling me about the audit.
To resolve the audlt, I want to accept your company‘s service.
Please proceed by liaising with HMRC on my behalf.
Thank you.

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I will buy one. By the way, I have bought some posters from you about 10 years ago. Do you remember me?
If you have any posters of the 70s that you can sell to me besides 〇〇, please let me know. If there are any that I like, I will buy them together with 〇〇.

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I will buy one. By the way, I bought some posters from you about 10 years ago. Do you remember me?
If you have any other posters of the 70s to sell besides 〇〇, please let me know. I will buy the ones I like alongside 〇〇.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I would like to change into 〇〇 account directly, not to STEAM account.
Would you please change it?
The current account is 〇〇, and plays ▽▽.

The name of the current account is □□, and I would like to change into ☆☆.
Would you please change it, too?

Thank you.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I would like to change to a 〇〇 account directly, rather than a STEAM account.
Could you please do this?
The current account is 〇〇, and plays ▽▽.

The name of the current account is □□, and I would like to change this to ☆☆.
Could you please change this, too?

Thank you.

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Thank you for purchasing a book from my store this time.
I'm very sorry, but the book you purchased gets out of stock.
Please let me check below things.
If it is a used book, I can send it to you right away.
In that case, we can give you a discount.
Or we can order the book for you and you will have to wait for it.
In some cases, we can't order the book from anywhere, in that case we will give you a full refund.
Of course, you can cancel your order.
We apologize for the inconvenience. and we look forward to your reply!

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Thank you for purchasing a book from my store on this occasion.
I'm very sorry, but the book you purchased is currently out of stock.
Please allow me to check a couple of things -
if it is a used book, I can send it right away.
In this case, we can provide a discount.
Alternatively, we can order the book for you, however this will take some time.
If we are unable to order the book, we will give you a full refund.
Of course, you can also cancel your order should you wish.
We apologize for the inconvenience and we look forward to your reply.

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This invoice is created by WEB shopping tool of fedex and it will be out put as PDF.
I tried to convert it to MSdata using this PDF tool, but deformation is too severe to use.

You can shipping it using [invoice.pdf] at this time.

It would be help if you prepare original invoice for the next time.
There are no formatting rules, but please take a look template as follows and INVOICE of my client about items mention

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This invoice is created by FedEx’s web shopping tool and will be output as a PDF.
I tried to convert it to MSdata using the PDF tools, but it gets too different to use.

On this occasion, you can ship it using [invoice.pdf].

It would be helpful if you could prepare the original invoice next time.
There are no formatting rules, but please take a look at the following template and client invoice regarding mentioned items.

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①I am interested in purchasing 〇〇〇 at your page on Amazon.com. It would be appreciated if you could offer about 12 USD for this item. In order to purchase it at 12 USD, kindly advise me how many items we should order.
Hopefully our purchasing amount and your preferred price can match, so that we will be able to order officially.

③As it is our first time business with you, if our sales goes well, we would like to order more items to you.
We are interested in purchasing hundreds of items if your items are sold successfully.
Prior to this, would you please advise me your special rates for 10 / 30/ 50 orders each.

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①I am interested in purchasing 〇〇〇 on your Amazon.com page. It would be appreciated if you could sell this for about 12 USD. In order to purchase it at 12 USD, kindly advise me how many items we should order.
Hopefully our purchasing amount and your preferred price can match, so that we will be able to order officially.

③It is our first time doing business with you, so if our sales go well, we would like to order more items from you in the future.
We are interested in purchasing hundreds of your items if your items are sold successfully.
Prior to this, would you please advise me of your special rates for 10 / 30 / 50 orders each.

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We cannot wait for your because there are other parties for the morning tour.
We are afraid that tour for the afternoon will also be fully booked.
Did you get the bus on board already?
For your note, we will have a availability for our afternoon tour for tomorrow.
What do you think ?

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We cannot wait for you because there are other parties for the morning tour.
We are afraid that the afternoon tour is also fully booked.
Did you get on the bus already?
For your information – we will have availability in tomorrow’s afternoon tour.
What do you think ?

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Thank you for your email. Thank you for announcement of the number and the name list. I like the participation of the trekking of course? Cave does not need to be a grouping from? The particular beginning to enter. Is not the problem be determined on the spot. It is OK if you come in dressed as a trekking that usually. Time I have heard and about an hour and a half to two hours. Long-sleeved, it is OK if Moraere to prepare such as long pants, drink, wear familiar shoes. Please let us know if there is such a process table of the trip.

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Thank you for your email. Thank you for announcement of the number and the name list. Am I correct in understanding you will participate in the trekking course? Will you enter the cave? There's no need to group from the very beginning - it can be determined at the time. It is OK to come in your usual trekking clothes. It takes about an hour and a half to two hours. Please bring long-sleeves, long pants, and a drink. Please wear comfortable shoes you are used to wearing. Please let us know if you have a trip schedule.

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If the photos yet won't get uploaded in the message, I'll up them on the ebay offer page.
On the offer page photos get uploaded successfully.

This figure is so old, deteriorated through years, and the transparent out case has some crack and concavity.
Please take those conditions into consideration at decision.

Please wait a bit.

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If the photos cannot be uploaded in the message, I'll upload them to the ebay offer page.
Photos can be uploaded successfully on the offer page.

This figure is old, it has deteriorated through the years, and the outer transparent case has some cracks and dents.
Please take those conditions into consideration when deciding.

Please wait a bit.

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Hokkaido's northernmost point is said to be literally Japan's farthest point that is possible. In this land traces of the beginning of life remain untouched, and maagnificent nature extends in all directions. It is exactly because it is the farthest point that its landscape can only be found here in all Japan. This time the fun of drone tourism in this land remains in photographs.

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Hokkaido's northernmost point is said to be literally Japan's farthest point possible. In this land, traces of the beginning of life remain untouched, and magnificent nature spreads out in all directions. It is exactly because it is the farthest point that this landscape can only be found here in Japan. This time I took photographs here depicting the joy of drone tourism.

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Understood. Since all the materials are complete, it is fine to report on June 7, which is the last VAT Return.
What is "purchase VAT"? Is it about VAT that occurs when our company purchases something in the UK?
We do not buy anything in the UK.

The requested information is as follows.
The address of the company is currently different since we moved.
What is "Certificate of Incorporation"?
Is it okay with the register like the one attached?

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Understood. Since all the materials are complete, it is fine to report on June 7, the last VAT Return.
What is "Purchase VAT"? Is it the VAT which occurs when our company purchases something in the UK?
We haven’t bought anything in the UK.

The requested information is as follows.
The address of the company is currently different, as we moved.
What is a “Certificate of Incorporation"?
Is it okay with the register like the one attached?

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The customs clearance process was complete today and I was able to receive the item with no problem.
Thank you very much for your thorough support.
We hope to continue our long business transaction with you in the future.

Hopefully, we should be able to handle the customs process much smoother from next time onward.

You sent us the attached catalogue previously, are there any products that you currently sell besides xxx and yyy?
If so, we would like to consider purchasing, so please kindly share the information.

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The customs clearance process was completed today and I was able to receive the item without any problems.
Thank you very much for your thorough support.
We hope to continue our business transaction with you long in to the future.

Hopefully, we should be able to handle the customs process much smoother next time.

You sent us the attached catalogue previously, are there any products that you currently sell besides xxx and yyy?
If so, we would like to consider purchasing them. Please kindly share the information.

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Sorry for noticing late with your mail.
As my niece Y is on summer vacation, we're hanging out together.
Yesterday she told me she wanted to go to Starbucks coffee, so I took her there.
Though she was drinking juice.
I was at the mercy of her selfishness.
This may be continuing for the time being, I'm happy but it's a little bit tough work.

There's no problem for me to sign and be your guarantor.
It's my pleasure.
Should I send the document with my signature by mail?
I'll be waiting for your response.

Comments on pictures are still ongoing.
I'll let you know when it finished.
My mum is very well in her spirit.
No one notice that she's sick.
Even herself forget to be in sick except the moment when she takes medicine.

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Sorry for noticing your mail late.
My niece, Y, is on summer vacation now. We're hanging out together.
Yesterday she told me she wanted to go to Starbucks, so I took her there.
Though she was only drinking juice.
I am at the mercy of her selfishness.
This may be continuing for the time being, I'm happy but it's a little bit tough.

There's no problem for me to sign and be your guarantor.
It's my pleasure.
Should I send the document with my signature by mail?
I'll be waiting for your response.

Comments on pictures are still ongoing.
I'll let you know when it finished.
My mum is in good spirits.
No one notices that she is sick.
Even she forgets herself that she is sick except for the times when she has to take her medicine.

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I ate it with staff.
Some of them looks like a big pills, but the composition is very attractive.
Some of the items that you sent us are rare and interesting concept.
We are interested in your items which are not in our product lineup, and would like to import them.
Can we sell the samples you sent us in Japan?
(It means not sample itself, but the lineup.)
We understand that you make an exclusive distributorship agreement with Company A of Japan.
If so, can we sell your items in Japan?

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I ate it with staff.
Some of them look like big pills, but the composition is very attractive.
Some of the items that you sent us are rare and interesting concepts.
We are interested in the items by you which are not in our product lineup. We would like to import them.
Can we sell the samples you sent us in Japan?
(Not sample itself - the lineup.)
We understand that you have an exclusive distributorship agreement with Company A in Japan.
If so, can we sell your items in Japan?