翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

販売をリストありがとうございます。今回は〇〇の一点だけ興味があります。送料込みで100ドルとのことですがもう少し安く提供できないでしょうか？私の希望価格は送料込み60ドルです。ご検討ください。もし値引きが難しいなら今回は諦めます。

英語

Thank you for the list of the sales. This time, I am only interested in ○○. It says 100$ including the shipping cost, but could you lower the price? The ideal price for me is 60$ including the shipping cost. I would like you to take this discount into consideration. If it is hard for you to lower the price, I will give it up this time. 　

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karekoraはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2024/06/17 18:05:45

元の翻訳
Thank you for the list of the sales. This time, I am only interested in ○○. It says 100$ including the shipping cost, but could you lower the price? The ideal price for me is 60$ including the shipping cost. I would like you to take this discount into consideration. If it is hard for you to lower the price, I will give it up this time. 　

修正後
Thank you for the sales list. This time, I am only interested in ○○. It says $100 including the shipping cost - is it possible to lower the price? The ideal price for me is $60 including the shipping cost. Please take this discount into consideration. If it is hard for you to lower the price, I will have to give it up this time. 　

Great! No need for double spaces between sentences these days.