Karen Cornish (karekora) — 付けたレビュー

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Thank you for your email. Thank you for announcement of the number and the name list. I like the participation of the trekking of course? Cave does not need to be a grouping from? The particular beginning to enter. Is not the problem be determined on the spot. It is OK if you come in dressed as a trekking that usually. Time I have heard and about an hour and a half to two hours. Long-sleeved, it is OK if Moraere to prepare such as long pants, drink, wear familiar shoes. Please let us know if there is such a process table of the trip.

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Thank you for your email. Thank you for announcement of the number and the name list. Am I correct in understanding you will participate in the trekking course? Will you enter the cave? There's no need to group from the very beginning - it can be determined at the time. It is OK to come in your usual trekking clothes. It takes about an hour and a half to two hours. Please bring long-sleeves, long pants, and a drink. Please wear comfortable shoes you are used to wearing. Please let us know if you have a trip schedule.

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If the photos yet won't get uploaded in the message, I'll up them on the ebay offer page.
On the offer page photos get uploaded successfully.

This figure is so old, deteriorated through years, and the transparent out case has some crack and concavity.
Please take those conditions into consideration at decision.

Please wait a bit.

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If the photos cannot be uploaded in the message, I'll upload them to the ebay offer page.
Photos can be uploaded successfully on the offer page.

This figure is old, it has deteriorated through the years, and the outer transparent case has some cracks and dents.
Please take those conditions into consideration when deciding.

Please wait a bit.

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Hokkaido's northernmost point is said to be literally Japan's farthest point that is possible. In this land traces of the beginning of life remain untouched, and maagnificent nature extends in all directions. It is exactly because it is the farthest point that its landscape can only be found here in all Japan. This time the fun of drone tourism in this land remains in photographs.

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Hokkaido's northernmost point is said to be literally Japan's farthest point possible. In this land, traces of the beginning of life remain untouched, and magnificent nature spreads out in all directions. It is exactly because it is the farthest point that this landscape can only be found here in Japan. This time I took photographs here depicting the joy of drone tourism.

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Understood. Since all the materials are complete, it is fine to report on June 7, which is the last VAT Return.
What is "purchase VAT"? Is it about VAT that occurs when our company purchases something in the UK?
We do not buy anything in the UK.

The requested information is as follows.
The address of the company is currently different since we moved.
What is "Certificate of Incorporation"?
Is it okay with the register like the one attached?

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Understood. Since all the materials are complete, it is fine to report on June 7, the last VAT Return.
What is "Purchase VAT"? Is it the VAT which occurs when our company purchases something in the UK?
We haven’t bought anything in the UK.

The requested information is as follows.
The address of the company is currently different, as we moved.
What is a “Certificate of Incorporation"?
Is it okay with the register like the one attached?

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The customs clearance process was complete today and I was able to receive the item with no problem.
Thank you very much for your thorough support.
We hope to continue our long business transaction with you in the future.

Hopefully, we should be able to handle the customs process much smoother from next time onward.

You sent us the attached catalogue previously, are there any products that you currently sell besides xxx and yyy?
If so, we would like to consider purchasing, so please kindly share the information.

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The customs clearance process was completed today and I was able to receive the item without any problems.
Thank you very much for your thorough support.
We hope to continue our business transaction with you long in to the future.

Hopefully, we should be able to handle the customs process much smoother next time.

You sent us the attached catalogue previously, are there any products that you currently sell besides xxx and yyy?
If so, we would like to consider purchasing them. Please kindly share the information.

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Sorry for noticing late with your mail.
As my niece Y is on summer vacation, we're hanging out together.
Yesterday she told me she wanted to go to Starbucks coffee, so I took her there.
Though she was drinking juice.
I was at the mercy of her selfishness.
This may be continuing for the time being, I'm happy but it's a little bit tough work.

There's no problem for me to sign and be your guarantor.
It's my pleasure.
Should I send the document with my signature by mail?
I'll be waiting for your response.

Comments on pictures are still ongoing.
I'll let you know when it finished.
My mum is very well in her spirit.
No one notice that she's sick.
Even herself forget to be in sick except the moment when she takes medicine.

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Sorry for noticing your mail late.
My niece, Y, is on summer vacation now. We're hanging out together.
Yesterday she told me she wanted to go to Starbucks, so I took her there.
Though she was only drinking juice.
I am at the mercy of her selfishness.
This may be continuing for the time being, I'm happy but it's a little bit tough.

There's no problem for me to sign and be your guarantor.
It's my pleasure.
Should I send the document with my signature by mail?
I'll be waiting for your response.

Comments on pictures are still ongoing.
I'll let you know when it finished.
My mum is in good spirits.
No one notices that she is sick.
Even she forgets herself that she is sick except for the times when she has to take her medicine.

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I ate it with staff.
Some of them looks like a big pills, but the composition is very attractive.
Some of the items that you sent us are rare and interesting concept.
We are interested in your items which are not in our product lineup, and would like to import them.
Can we sell the samples you sent us in Japan?
(It means not sample itself, but the lineup.)
We understand that you make an exclusive distributorship agreement with Company A of Japan.
If so, can we sell your items in Japan?

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I ate it with staff.
Some of them look like big pills, but the composition is very attractive.
Some of the items that you sent us are rare and interesting concepts.
We are interested in the items by you which are not in our product lineup. We would like to import them.
Can we sell the samples you sent us in Japan?
(Not sample itself - the lineup.)
We understand that you have an exclusive distributorship agreement with Company A in Japan.
If so, can we sell your items in Japan?

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I think it is the best way to have one of your update kit sent to me.
Now I am going to my update kit repaired, I am not sure if it will be in time for Commissioning.
In the former work, A company got so angry about update kit issue.
If Commissioning is not in time, I will lose face from A company.

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I think it is best to have one of your update kits sent to me.
I am going to have my update kit repaired, therefore I am not sure if it will be done in time for commissioning.
Previously, A company got angry about the update kit issue.
If commissioning is not done in time, I will lose trust from A company.

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The manufacturer arranges for the item after making a payment.
Would you send the order to 2 different customers by separating it?
Or if I do not change amount of the item ordered, can't I change the item number that was ordered? As I pay the item within the next week, would you send it earlier?↵
As I have accepted sending the item more than last year, I sent the item behind schedule this time. As this customer sells at high price and will order the next time, would you give me a small discount? The reason is that as I cannot send within the period, I send by air this time.

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The manufacturer arranges the item after making a payment.
Is it possible to send the order to 2 different customers by separating them?
Or, if the order amount isn’t changed, can I instead change the item number that was ordered? I will pay for the item within the next week - is it possible to send the item sooner?↵
I sent the item behind schedule as I have accepted a lot more orders than last year. Is a small discount feasible, as this customer is selling at high price and will order again. As I cannot send within the period this time, I will send it by airmail.