＠Trans (ilad) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Did the returned product arrive safely?

Kindly refund once you confirmed the product is arrived.
After refund is completed, we would appreciate hearing from you.

修正後
Have you received the product I returned on November 13?

Please refund me when you confirm the product has arrived.
After the refund is completed, please inform us.↵

元の翻訳
It is my opinion regarding this problem.
As you say, this problem does not have a problem in its function.
However, it is an item with defect subject to the Japanese standard.
As we understand the world standard, if you insist that it is an item without defect,
we will solve this problem within our company.
However, we have to reflect it to the sales price, so we would be glad if you consider a selection by improvement of the quality or inspection.

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My opinion about the "name" is:
As you say, this a functional problem.
However, it is an item with defect subject to the Japanese standard.
As we understand the world standard, if you insist that it is an item without defect,
we will solve this problem within our company.
However, we have to reflect it to the sales price, so we would be glad if you consider a selection by improvement of the quality or inspection.

元の翻訳
Keitan

【Good point of FUNCTION6ch】
Everyone can express their opinions.
【When do you enjoy when you participate in FUNCTION6ch】
When each work is completed.
【Please appeal something in chuunibyo (like a student of eighth grade) style if any.】
………Just watch. We………won't lose!!

They started when they were the eighth-grade. They watched "Slayers", a popular light novel animation and got hooked on the Akihabara style culture, became fanatic.

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Keitan

【Good point of FUNCTION6ch】
Everyone can express their opinions.
【When do you enjoy participating in FUNCTION6ch】
When each work is completed.
【Please appeal something in chuunibyo (like a student of eighth grade) style if any.】
………Just watch. We………won't lose!!

They started when they were the eighth-grade. They watched "Slayers", a popular light novel animation and got hooked on the Akihabara style culture, became fanatic.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your inquiry.
I am taking efforts to find out the most affordable shipment and products as much as I can.
So far I know, I have figured out that I can purchase in a slightly better price than the price shown on the website you mentioned.
Based on j-Grab system, I am checking if it is ok to purchase and send from a different website or not. As soon as I figure it out, I will let you know.

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Thank you very much for your inquiry.
I am taking efforts to find out the most affordable shipment and products as much as I can.
So far as I know, I have figured out that I can purchase in a slightly better price than the price shown on the website you mentioned.
Based on j-Grab system, I am checking if it is ok to purchase and send from a different website or not. As soon as I figure it out, I will let you know.

元の翻訳
Don't you misunderstand?
The product I sold before is below.

Why do you mail which can be expected to deal directly on ebay?
Don't you understand what I said before?
If our direct deal is found, the ebay might suspend your ID too.
Is it OK?

I'll reply to you on the ebay later to not be suspected our direct deal, but don't reply to it.

I'd like to do business with you. But if you reply on the ebay or send an email regarding direct deal, I won't sell products to you any more.

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Don't you misunderstand me?
The product I sold before is as follows.

Why do you send me such an email which you expected you can deal directly on ebay?
Don't you understand what I said before?
If our direct deal is found, the ebay might suspend your ID too.
Is it OK?

I'll reply to you on the ebay later to not be suspected our direct deal, but don't reply to it.

I'd like to do business with you. But if you reply on the ebay or send an email regarding direct deal, I won't sell products to you any more.

元の翻訳
We would like to handle the items of your company.
(The shipping charge to Japan is included).

Can you ship the items to Japan?

We will start sales in the Japanese market.
Then we are going to handle your items in Japan.
There are a number of customers who use this item in Japan, and it is highly demanded.
Could you please sell it at wholesale price?

At how much are you going to sell it?↵

修正後
We would like to handle the items of your company.
(The shipping charge to Japan is included).

Can you ship them to Japan?

We will start sales in the Japanese market.
Then we are going to handle your items in Japan.
There are a number of customers who use this item in Japan, and it is highly demanded.
Could you please sell it at wholesale price?

What [How much] are you asking for this?

元の翻訳
承認の返信がありがとうございます。
郵便番号がそれを必要とする場合には、日本の住所を送信することができますか？

修正後
返品の証人がありがとうございます。
郵便局が必要とする場合には、日本の住所を送信していただけますか？

元の翻訳
This week, I sick in bed because caught a cold and I absence from work. Cough is not stopped, It is very hard. At last, fever went away and I recovery. Finally, I can resume study English.
Please take care you too.

I habit to watch a movie every week, but I waver what to see next time.
I want to know your country "~", and I searched by Google. I think "~" seems good. Do you know it? If you know, is it recommend?

And if you know other recommend movies, please tell me.

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This week, I was sick in bed because I caught a cold and I was absence from work. Cough is not stopped, It is very hard. At last, fever went away and I recovered. Finally, I can resume my study of English.
Please take care you too.

I make a habit of watching a movie every week, but I wonder what to see next time.
I want to know your country "~", and I searched by Google. I think "~" seems good. Do you know it? If you know, is it recommend?

And if you know other recommend movies, please tell me.

元の翻訳
It is just after 4 o'clock in Tokyo, and it is a nice day in the fall. The clothes I washed are dried well.

Almost all the Japanese people understand the expression ～that you wrote in the email, but the expression ～ is better.

As for ～, thank you for yoru detailed explanation. The example that you specified is also very easy to understand. You must be a teacher who are good at teacher.

If I do not understand some expressions while I am learning English, may I ask you a question? If the items are in regard with Japan, I can answer them. If you have a question, please do not hesitate to ask.

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It is just after 4 pm in Tokyo, and it is a nice day in the fall. The clothes I washed are dried well.

Almost all the Japanese people understand the expression ～that you wrote in the email, but the expression ～ is better.

As for ～, thank you for your detailed explanation. The example that you specified is also very easy to understand. You must be a teacher who are good at teacher.

If I do not understand some expressions while I am learning English, may I ask you a question? If the items are in regard with Japan, I can answer them. If you have a question, please do not hesitate to ask.

元の翻訳
Please send the item back. I have already paid you the money for the item, but you didn't send the money back. That is, I have the ownership of the item. If you send the item to me again, I will pay $20 to you for the shipping fee.
The shipping address is the same as before.

修正後
Please send the item back. I have already paid you the money for the item, but you haven't send the money back. That is, I have the ownership of the item. If you send the item to me again, I will pay $20 to you for the shipping fee.
The shipping address is the same as before.

元の翻訳
Please send item back to me. I paid item's charge. And you didn't refound me. To say, item's ownership is mine. If you send item me again, I will pay you shipping charge $20. Shipping address is same as before.

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Please send the item back to me. I paid item's charge. And you haven't refounded me. To say, the item's ownership is mine. If you send it to me again, I will pay you shipping charge $20. Shipping address is same as before.

元の翻訳
こんにちは、私はもうペイパル口座を確認しましたが、あなたからのメールは届いてません。
ただし、あなたに払ったのインボイスを見えました。
私はこれで完成したと思いますので、これ以上は何もしなくてもいいと思います。これからの2週間をお待ちします。
ありがとうございます

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こんにちは、私はペイパル口座を確認しましたが、あなたからのメールは届いてません。
ただし、あなたに払ったのインボイスは確認できます。
私はこれで完成したと思いますので、これ以上は何もしなくてもいいと思います。これから2週間をお待ちします。
ありがとうございます

元の翻訳
これは、問題のモデルを組み上げるのに必要なもの全てを含んでいますか？胴体部分はどこにあるのでしょうか、もしかしてこれは他のバラバラの部分から組み上げるものなのでしょうか？よろしくお願いします！Localneuron

これは、1/16 のデアゴスティーニモデルを組み立てる実際のキットなのでしょうか、それとも単なる説明なのでしょうか？よろしくお願いします！Localneuron

このモデルはシリンダー上の塗装が傷つき剥がれていることがありがちです、というコンディションはどういう事ですか？この個体もそこに傷がありますか？写真からは確認することができません。また、簡単に取り除くことが出来るオレンジのチップを、この品物にペイントするのではなく、接着した状態で一緒に送って頂けませんか？私のカリフォルニア州では、この品物はオレンジのチップが接着されていなくてはいけないのです。それに品物がペイントされるのは嫌なのです。

修正後
これは、問題のモデルを組み上げるのに必要なもの全てを含んでいますか？胴体部分はどこにあるのでしょうか、もしかしてこれは他の別々の部分から組み上げるものなのでしょうか？よろしくお願いします！Localneuron

これは、1/16 のデアゴスティーニモデルを組み立てる実際のキットなのでしょうか、それとも単なる説明なのでしょうか？よろしくお願いします！Localneuron

このモデルはシリンダー上の塗装が傷つき剥がれていることがありがちです、というコンディションはどういう事ですか？この個体もそこに傷がありますか？写真からは確認することができません。また、簡単に取り除くことが出来るオレンジのチップを、この品物にペイントするのではなく、接着した状態で一緒に送って頂けませんか？私のカリフォルニア州では、この品物はオレンジのチップが接着されていなくてはいけないのです。それに品物がペイントされるのは嫌なのです。

元の翻訳
We also deal with many other high class shoes.

Our customers mainly order our product online

When we have a shop in the future, our customers would be those shop around JIYUGAOKA

Please grab the chance for choosing our product

We are proud of offering our product around the world

We play an important role in helping to expand your business of your product

We strongly hope that we could work our business together

Please give us a chance

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We also deal with many other high class shoes

Our customers mainly order our products online

When we have a shop in the future, our customers would be those shop around JIYUGAOKA

Please grab the chance for choosing our products

We are proud of offering our product around the world

We play an important role in helping to expand your business of your products

We strongly hope that we could conduct business together

Please give us a chance

元の翻訳
There are many other products like luxury shoes.
Our main customers are the ones who purchase our products online.
When we have our own store in future, we will locate it at Jiyugaoka . So we expect many customers from the area surrounding of Tokyo.
We would like to have a business opportunity to sell your products.
We believe that we can deliver the better products in the world to the customers.
We will increase your business further.
We wish strongly to work with you.
Please give us a chance.

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There are many other products like luxury shoes.
Our main customers are the ones who have purchased our products online.
When we have our own store in future, we will locate it at Jiyugaoka . So we expect many customers from the area surrounding Tokyo.
We would like to have a business opportunity to sell your products.
We believe that we can deliver the better products in the world to the customers.
We will increase your business further.
We wish strongly to work with you.
Please give us a chance.

元の翻訳
We don't have shop by now.
Our office is located in the fashionable street called Jiyuaoka in Tokyo.
We are planning to open a shop next year but by now, we are more focusing on internet selling.

The rich people make up of our main targets.
For example, the link below is under running by us.

Normal products will not satisfy our clients.
They have continous pursits of products with high-value.
Products specially designed and can be as present are more requested by our clients.

We having and knowing great products becomes standard for them.

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We don't have shop by now.
Our office is located in the fashionable street called Jiyuaoka in Tokyo.
We are planning to open a shop next year but as of now we are more focusing on internet selling.

The rich people make up of our main targets.
For example, the link below is under running by us.

Normal products will not satisfy our clients.
They have continous pursits of products with high-value.
Products specially for decoration and for present are more requested by our clients.

We having and knowing great products becomes standard for them.

元の翻訳
Actually we don't have the physical retail store yet.
Our office, located in Jiyugaoka, a fashionable area in Tokyo.
Mainly, we are doing merchandise on web storefront, and palnning to have a
physical retail store in the coming year.
Our taget market is wealthy costomors.
As an example, we are running a web store as following
Our costomer may not fullfilled with ordinary goods,
always looking for high quality goods and nice gifts to their friends.
Possession and knowledge of high quality goods may raises their status.

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Actually we don't have the physical retail store yet.
Our office, located in Jiyugaoka, a fashionable area in Tokyo.
Mainly, we are doing merchandise on web storefront, and palnning to have a
physical retail store in the coming year.
Our taget market is wealthy costomors.
As an example, we are running a web store as following
Our costomer may not be satisfied with ordinary goods,
always looking for high quality goods and nice gifts to their friends.
Their possession and knowledge of high quality goods may raise their status.

元の翻訳
We received your approval for using the article you wrote the other day.
As already informed you, we are going to pay the royalty on the last day of October. But my client asked me to confirm SWIFT code of your bank account.
Would you please check it and let us know a.s.a.p.?
If you can inform us by the morning of 27th in Japan time, we will be able to pay it by the last day of October as planned.

修正後
We received your approval for using the article you wrote the other day.
As already informed you, we are going to pay the royalty on the last day of October. But my client asked me to confirm SWIFT code of your bank account.
Would you please check it and let us know a.s.a.p.?
If you can inform us by noon of 27th in Japan time, we will be able to pay it by the last day of October as planned.

元の翻訳
We strictly prohibit that you leave the wastes and garbages in the hall or near it. Be sure to discard it in the each designated dumping place or you bring it back with you.
When you come to the hall, we ask you to use the nearest public transportation.
In case where you take an action such as breaking the equipment in the hall, the sponsor is not responsible for it. We ask you to keep it on your mind.
Please do not make an inquiry to the hall regarding the event.
The hours of shaking hands are limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.
The number of the participation ticket of the shaking hands is limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.

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We strictly prohibit you from leaving the wastes and garbages in the hall or near it. Be sure to discard it in the each designated dumping place or you bring it back with you.
When you come to the hall, we ask you to use the nearest public transportation.
In case where you take an action such as breaking the equipment in the hall, the sponsor is not responsible for it. We ask you to keep it on your mind.
Please do not make an inquiry to the hall regarding the event.
The hours of shaking hands are limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.
The number of the participation ticket of the shaking hands is limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.

元の翻訳
18th November Saturday
AAA will be coming on stage at the Cosmos festival in Showa Women's University!

Date: November 8th, Saturday

Place: Outdoor stage at Showa Women's University(1-7 Taishi-Do, Setagaya)
☆In case of bad weather, event will be held in the"Green Hall" which is located inside the campus.

Starting time: 2pm

Inquiries: Showa Women's University Cosmos Festival executive committee

cosmos_event@yahoo.co.jp

☆We are students and therefore we might not be able to give you a speedy reply.We appreciate your understanding.

◆This is an opened stage talk event, and everyone is welcome to enjoy it for free.

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18th November Saturday
AAA will be coming on stage at the Cosmos festival in Showa Women's University!

Date: November 8th, Saturday

Place: Outdoor stage at Showa Women's University(1-7 Taishi-Do, Setagaya)
☆In case of bad weather,　the event will be held in the"Green Hall" which is located inside the campus.

Starting time: 2pm

Inquiries: Showa Women's University Cosmos Festival executive committee

cosmos_event@yahoo.co.jp

☆We are students and therefore we might not be able to give you a speedy reply.We appreciate your understanding.

◆This is an opened stage talk event, and everyone is welcome to enjoy it for free.

元の翻訳
First of all, as a representative of A Company, we are very sorry that we cannot deliver the satisfaction goods to costumers. With all Japanese pride, all our company can do is trying hard to respond.
Is the product has been returned to United States? If the product has not been returned, is it possible to send it back to Japan? We will do the maintenance in the workshop, we will extend the diameter inside into 220 mm. We will contact you by tomorrow morning for confirming the cost.

修正後
First of all, as a representative of A Company, I'm very sorry that we cannot deliver the satisfactory goods to you. With all Japanese pride, all our company can do is trying hard to respond.
Is the product has been returned to United States? If the product has not been returned, is it possible to send it back to Japan? We will do the maintenance in the workshop, we will extend the diameter inside into 220 mm. We will contact you by tomorrow morning for confirming the cost.

元の翻訳
Please deliver the ordered goods to the requested address.
It will be also a bother to me if I do not received them.
Previously, I have also requested for delivering goods to addresses other than our company's and the requested has been received.
I need your help this time, too.
Please send only the bill to our company.
I would appreciate for you help.

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Please deliver the ordered goods to the requested address.
It will be also a bother to me if I do not receive them.
Previously, I have also requested for delivering goods to addresses other than our company's and the requested has been received.
I need your help this time, too.
Please send only the bill to our company.
I would appreciate your help.

元の翻訳
I would like to confirm with you. Is it only a lid which was broken and teapot had no damage?
I informed you that we would send you a new teapot but is it alright to send you only a lid?
As this trade is in the red, we would appreciate if we could save shipping cost.
I await for your reply.
Thank you & Best Regards,

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I would like to confirm with you. Is it only the lid which was broken and the teapot had no damage?
I informed you, by an email, that we would send you a new teapot but is it alright to send you only a lid?
As this trade is in the red, we would appreciate if we could save shipping cost.
I await for your reply.
Thank you & Best Regards,