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佐藤様

初めに、Ngoc Nghiaインダストリー---サービス---トレーディングJSC("NNG")の代理として、取引における貴方の温情のこもった協力及び支援に感謝します。本書間は、見積もり送り状番号NNG-NUR-140711Aに関する取引の問題を収束するためにしたためました。
2.5gr キャップ1810に関する本年１0月14日に貴社から受領した速達に基づき、以下のようにフィードバックします。

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佐藤様

初めに、Ngoc Nghiaインダストリー---サービス---トレーディングJSC("NNG")の代理として、取引における貴方の温情のこもった協力及び支援に感謝i致します。本書間は、見積もり送り状番号NNG-NUR-140711Aに関する取引の問題を収束するためにしたためました。
2.5gr キャップ1810に関する本年１0月14日に貴社から受領した速達に基づき、以下のようにフィードバックさせていただきます。。

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Since I work at the area where many foreigners gather, I think if I could speak English so that I could communicate with a variety of people.
It also will be great to watch films with out Japanese subtitles.

Why IT industry attracted me is after I know that if you own the knowleges of ~, people over the world could access to your website.
And I tried making a website, it was interesting.

I have worked in IT industry for 5 years, and I think it fits perfectly with my career.
Although it is hard to study following up with fast-developed technology.

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Since I work at the area where many foreigners gather, I think, if I could speak English, I could communicate with a variety of people.
It also will be great to watch films without Japanese subtitles.

Why IT industry attracted me was that I came to know that if you own the knowlege of ~, people all over the world could access my website.
And I tried making a website, it was interesting.

I have worked in IT industry for 5 years, and I think it fits perfectly me.
Although it is hard to study following up with fast-developing technology.

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It 's because I'm working in a city called " " where we can find many foreigners, and I thought if I could speak English I could communicate with those people there. Also, it'd be great if I could watch movies without Japanese subtitles.

I started having interest in IT industry when I found out that if I have a knowledge of " " I can create web sites which people all around the world can see. I actually tried once and it was exciting experience.

I've been working in IT industry for about 5 years, and I think this job really fits me.
I have to say that it's hard to keep studying to follow the rapid technology advance.

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It 's because I'm working in a city called " " where we can find many foreigners, and I thought if I could speak English I could communicate with those people there. Also, it'd be great if I could watch movies without Japanese subtitles.

I started having interest in IT industry when I found out that if I have a knowledge of " " I can create web sites of my own which people all around the world can see. I actually tried once and it was exciting experience.

I've been working in IT industry for about 5 years, and I think this job really fits me.
I have to say that it's hard to keep studying to follow the rapid technology advance.

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OK,everybody!Sorry to have kept you waiting.Let's move to acoustic live corner.Let's welcome A./A,thank you for your performance.It's really a valuable live that we have few chance to see.So is everybody satisfied?I'm very excited though.There's only 2 months left this year so what's the plan when new year's coming?Finally,please give our spectators some information.-I'm sorry have taken you so long and I think it's a great performance to live up to your expectations.

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OK,everybody! Sorry to have kept you waiting. Let's move to acoustic live corner. Let's welcome A ./A,thank you for your performance. It's really a valuable live that we have few chance to see. "Everybody, how did you like it?" I'm very excited too. There are only 2 months left this year. What will be your plans of activities for the end of the year and the beginning of the new year? Finally,please give our spectators your message.-I'm sorry it took so long but I think it's a great performance to live up to your expectations.

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When will you pay me back? I gave you back the item after your recognition about returening goods and paying back money. But then, you did not pay me back althogh you received the item. This is undoubted fraud. If you have a beef, and you are not going to pay me back, give me back the item at once.

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When will you pay me back? I gave you back the item after your recognition about returening goods and paying back money. But then, you have not paid me back although you received the item. This is undoubted fraud. If you have a beef, and you are not going to pay me back, give me back the item at once.

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Thank you for your order for LA-50.
The purchased product will deliver from Australia by mistake, but also we have already sent you the substitute.
So it means two products will deliver to you, but please use both without sending back.
I'm very sorry our mistake.
I'm looking forward to ordering next time from you.

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Thank you for your order for LA-50.
The purchased product will be delivered from Australia by mistake, but also we have already sent you the substitute.
So it means two products will be delivered to you, but please use both without sending back.
We are very sorry for our mistake.
We are looking forward to next orders from you.

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Hello,

I refunded to you via Paypal just now. Please confirm.
I am sincerely sorry that I couldn't deliver the product, but I'd be glad if we can stay in touch.
Also, i'd like to ask a favor of you. You will get a notice of cancellation from eBay later, so please accept the notice in order to close this deal smoothly. Otherwise, the shop has to pay the transaction fee despite the deal was cancelled. Thanks in advance.
Again, I am really happy to meet with you via eBay. Thank you.

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Hello,

I refunded you via Paypal just now. Please confirm.
I am sincerely sorry that I couldn't deliver the product, but I'd be glad if we can stay in touch.
Also, I'd like to ask a favor of you. You will get a notice of cancellation from eBay later, so please accept the notice in order to close this deal smoothly. Otherwise, the shop has to pay the transaction fee despite the deal was cancelled. Thanks in advance.
Again, I am really happy to get in touch with you via eBay. Thank you.

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Thank you very much for your response.

I am very sorry for the inconvenience.

It seems that the arrival has not been made within the due date, so I would like to propose 2 alternate plans.
Let me know which you prefer.
1) Get a refund.
2) We will send you the same item with track record.

I am sorry again to cause you extra effort.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Shipping with track record

Will be shipped by EMS

Weight

For female

For male

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Thank you very much for your response.

We apologize for any inconvenience this transaction has caused.

It seems that the arrival has not been made within the due date, so I would like to propose 2 alternate plans.
Let me know which you prefer.
1) Get a refund.
2) We will send you the same item with track record.

I am sorry again to cause you extra effort.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Shipping with track record

Will be shipped by EMS

Weight

For female

For male

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Good afternoon. I am Mr/Ms OO , now living in Japan. I have come through your company HP occasionally. I wish to buy it, but it seems that impossible. Which requirement should be met to be able to buy it? Besides, is it possible to buy it in Japan?

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Hello. I am Mr/Ms OO , now living in Japan. I have come across your company HP. I wish to buy it, but it seems impossible. Which requirement should be met for me to be able to buy it? Besides, is it possible to buy it in Japan?

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Please cover the postage to send the new body there.
I thought that should be.
In addition, the postage from Japan to China is about 100$.
I even think that postage should be also covered by you.
I'll be waiting for your reply during the morning today.
Because we need to tell our customer the tracking number.

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Please cover the postage to send the new body there.
I think it's a legitimate claim.
In addition, the postage from Japan to China is about 100$.
I even think that postage should be also covered by you.
I'll be waiting for your reply during the morning today.
Because we need to tell our customer the tracking number.

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We're sorry to say that I can't receive your proposal.
The product is in the customer's hand, so it is impossible for us to repair it.
We can't make the customer keep waiting, so please send the body right away.
If you don't inform us that you've sent it ,by tomorrow morning, We will apply refund tomorrow's afternoon.
We will send the defective merchandise back to you. Then repair it by yourselves.
Do you think ebay allow such a disingenuous transaction like this?
We received a defective product last time.
Please be sure to send us after inspection.

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We're sorry to say that I can't receive your proposal.
The product is in the customer's hand, so it is impossible for us to repair it.
We can't make the customer keep waiting, so please send the item right away.
If you don't inform us that you've sent it ,by noon tomorrow, We will apply refund tomorrow's afternoon.
We will send the defective merchandise back to you. Then repair it by yourselves.
Do you think ebay allow such a disingenuous transaction like this?
We received a defective product last time.
Please be sure to send us after inspection.

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D2 Box deadline is 9:00 on 10th, is this correct?
Translation from this side is done, but I cannot open the downloaded file after it's done and cannot add Japanese translation of "Patent pending" to this file.
Attached is downloaded file, so will you kindly check this?

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D2 Box deadline is 9:00 on 10th, is this correct?
Translation from this side is done, but I cannot open the downloaded file after it's done and cannot add Japanese translation of "Patent pending" to this file.
Attached is downloaded file, so will you kindly check it?

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I am sorry the message had not been properly send to you.

The product is SA-2 for T3, not SA-1.

We will receive your canceled product.

Please send the product to the address below.

Once we receive the product,we will pay you back the product cost deducting the mailing fee via PAYPAL.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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I am sorry it seems that the message had not been properly send to you.

The product is SA-2 for T3, not SA-1.

We will receive your canceled product.

Please send the product to the address below.

Once we receive the product,we will pay you back the product cost deducting the mailing fee via PAYPAL.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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We apologize. We did not send it well.
If what you mean is not SA-1 but for T3, the item is SA-2.
We accept cancellation of the item.
We ask you to send the item to the following address.
When we receive it, we will refund the price for the item after deducting the
shipping charge via Paypal.

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We apologize. We did not send it properly.
If what you mean is not SA-1 but for T3, the item is SA-2.
We accept your cancellation of the item.
We ask you to send the item to the following address.
When we receive it, we will refund the price for the item after deducting the
shipping charge via Paypal.

元の翻訳
お客様のご注文は保留中で処理待ちの状態になっています。

次に進むために、お取引銀行から取得できるトランザクション認証コードをご提示いただけますでしょうか。

コードは6桁のもので、当方がお客様のご注文を処理するにあたり、安全な情報を取得するために必要なものです。認証コードはご注文の際に発行され、お取引銀行がお客様のアカウントの未払いの項目と一緒に確認するものです。

現段階ではまだ金額は請求されておらず、お支払は保留中となっております。ご不便をおかけしますが、初期のご注文の際にご注文者のクレジットカードの認証のために必要となる情報です。

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お客様のご注文は保留中で処理待ちの状態になっています。

次の手続きに進むために、お取引銀行から取得できるトランザクション認証コードをご提示いただけますでしょうか。

コードは6桁のもので、当方がお客様のご注文を処理するにあたり、安全な情報を取得するために必要なものです。認証コードはご注文の際に発行され、お取引銀行がお客様のアカウントの未払いの項目と一緒に確認するものです。

現段階ではまだ金額は請求されておらず、お支払は保留中となっております。ご不便をおかけしますが、初期のご注文の際にご注文者のクレジットカードの認証のために必要となる情報です。

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It is not my fault the products are held in the plant without the payment done by your customer.
It is planned to ship the products by sea, and it is estimated to arrive at Osaka next month.
The products will be shipped by air to meet the appointed day of delivery.
In case using the air shipment, the cost will be 4 times as that planned.
I feel so sorry, however, could you please cover the extra cost with me equally ?

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I have nothing to do with the fact that the products are held in the plant without the payment done by your customer.
It is planned to ship the products by sea, and it is estimated to arrive at Osaka next month.
The products will be shipped by air to meet the appointed day of delivery.
In case using the air shipment, the cost will be 4 times as that planned.
I feel so sorry, however, could you please cover the extra cost with me equally ?

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I am very sorry to bother you.

I requested eBay on the 2nd of October to change the feedback.

You should be getting an email from them soon, but when they looked for your account, the email was found in the trash folder.

Please find the email in the trash folder, open it, and change the feedback from negative to positive.

You can change it until the 12th, so I am asking for you to please help me.

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I am very sorry to bother you.

I requested eBay on the 2nd of October to change the feedback.

You should have got an email from them soon, but when they looked for your account, the email was found in the trash folder.

Please find the email in the trash folder, open it, and change the feedback from negative to positive.

You can change it until the 12th, so I am asking for you to please help me.

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I am sending you an email for the first time.
I have a question about receiving the ticket.

Order No. 51-11594/NY5
I purchase a ticket under the order number above and chose to receive it as 'eTicket', but I cannot print it out as the 'Print-at-Home' button never appears on the display of my PC at home.
Is this the trouble by your system? Or does this normally happen?

Is it possible for me to collect the ticket at the venue on the day of the show.
If possible, please let me know which proof of ID I need to bring to collect the ticket.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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I am sending you an email for the first time.
I have a question about how to receive the ticket.

Order No. 51-11594/NY5
I purchase a ticket under the order number above and chose to receive it as 'eTicket', but I cannot print it out as the 'Print-at-Home' button never appears on the display of my PC at home.
Is this the trouble by your system? Or does this normally happen?

Is it possible for me to collect the ticket at the venue on the day of the show.
If possible, please let me know which proof of ID I need to bring to collect the ticket.

Looking forward to hearing from you.