＠Trans (ilad) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Yes.

As I was working on this file, I used copying and pasting.
Usually they are used in other translation.

修正後
Yes.

As I was working on this file, I used copying and pasting.
Usually these operations are used in other translation.

元の翻訳
The following address to which an invoice and item are sent is correct.

〒100-0000
Tokyo
City


I will the Master card whose last number is 2001 for the payment.
I appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
The following address to which an invoice and item will be sent is correct.

〒100-0000
Tokyo
City


I will use the Master card whose last number is 2001 for the payment.
I appreciate your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for your using my shop.
I'm very sorry to inform you of the trouble regarding the delivery.
The merchandise I sent with SAL registered mail the other day was sent back to me from Tokyo Post Office.
It's because SAL registered mail is not available in Denmark.
So I send it to you using SAL again.
The expected shipping date is 7th on October.
The expected arrival date is from 21st on October to 4th on November.
Please wait for receiving the merchandise a little while.
I'm very sorry to keep you waiting this time.
I'm going to address the issue until the business completed.
Don't hesitate to contact us if you have any question.

修正後
Hello.
Thank you for using my shop.
I'm very sorry to inform you of the trouble regarding the delivery.
The merchandise I sent by SAL registered mail the other day was sent back to me from a post office in Tokyo.
It's because SAL registered mail is not available in Denmark.
So I send it to you using SAL again.
The expected shipping date is 7th on October.
The expected arrival date is from 21st on October to 4th on November.
Please wait for receiving the merchandise a little while.
I'm very sorry to keep you waiting this time.
I'm going to address the issue until the business completed.
Don't hesitate to contact us if you have any question.

元の翻訳
A
“I’m wondering how is the feeling of family being disappeared all of sudden. It will be hard to give up, especially if they are missing and you can’t confirm their death”
“Even if you could confirm their death, don’t you think it would still be hard to accept the fact?”
“Probably so, especially if they were kids.”

B
It seems like you carelessly forgot.

C
In fact, this time, we have lots of spaces for this free conversation. This bothers me…
Therefore, in one third of the space, I will write two Yonkoma Mangas (4-panel comics), and trivial hobby talks in the outline space as usual.

修正後
A
“I’m wondering how you would feel when your family have disappeared all of a sudden. It would be hard to give up, especially if they are missing and you can’t confirm their death”
“Even if you could confirm their death, don’t you think it would still be hard to accept the fact?”
“Probably so, especially if they were kids.”

B
It seems like you carelessly forgot.

C
In fact, this time, we have lots of spaces for this free conversation. This bothers me…
Therefore, in one third of the space, I will write two Yonkoma Mangas (4-panel comics), and trivial hobby talks in the outline space as usual.

元の翻訳
Thank you for ordering.
We checked your inquiry.
We cannot send it to you at free of charge, but can discount by 2 .5 dollars
If you agree to our proposal that the shipping method is changed from expedited to standard, we will give you the discount by 8 dollars.
In case of standard, it takes from 6 to 20 days until you receive it.
In case of expedited, it takes from 3 to 6 days, and the possibility of troubles that occurs during its transportation such as loss is fewer in comparison with the standard.
We ask for you to consider it, and look forward to your reply.

修正後
Thank you for ordering.
We checked your inquiry.
The shipping cost can’t be free, but instead we can give you a $2.5 discount.
If you agree to our proposal that the shipping method is changed from expedited to standard, we will give you the discount by 8 dollars.
In case of standard, it takes from 6 to 20 days until you receive it.
In case of expedited, it takes from 3 to 6 days, and the possibility of troubles that occurs during its transportation such as loss is fewer in comparison with the standard.
We ask you for considering it, and look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for inquiring us.
We are very sorry, but we do not manufacture the black outfits used for work by size XS for me.
We have this outfit for women whose size is large and red color as well as the one with design by size medium or large.
In regard with juban, we are the store which handles "Japanese style outfit.
However, among this type of stores, the "store which sells kimono" tends to handle juban as their specialty, and we do not have any plan to manufacture and sell it.
We apologize that we cannot be of your help, but we hope that you understand us.

修正後
Thank you for inquiring us.
We are very sorry, but we do not manufacture the black outfits used for work by size XS.
We have this outfit for women whose size is large and red color as well as the one with design by size medium or large.
In regard with juban, we are the store which handles "Japanese style outfit.
However, among this type of stores, the "store which sells kimono" tends to handle juban as their specialty, and we do not have any plan to manufacture and sell it.
We apologize that we cannot be of your help, but we hope that you understand us.

元の翻訳
The goods that you returned have been received in Japan.

I will pay back $200 and $10.20 as refund fees to you.

When I ask Paypal, a procedure of refund cannnot be carried out unless a problem is solved at Resolution Center. Therefore, please cannel your claims in eBay at first.

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I have received an order from you.

I will soon obtain goods from a workshop.

At first, you are requested to make a successful bid of the goods of No.12 and to pay $12.

When the goods is reached to me, I measures a weight to tell you total fees again.

修正後
The goods that you returned have been received in Japan.

I will pay back $200 and $10.20 as refund fees to you.

When I ask Paypal, a procedure of refund cannnot be carried out unless a problem is solved at Resolution Center. Therefore, please cannel your claims in eBay at first.

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I have received an order from you.

I will soon obtain goods from a workshop.

At first, you are requested to make a successful bid of the goods of No.12 and to pay $12.

When the goods have reached me, I will measure its weight to tell you total fees again.

元の翻訳
We set up contracts with several buyers. Also we are running our own EC site and have multiple sales channels.
We check the logical values according to stock records and books. Also we are comparing the logical values on book and actual numbers on stocks monthly, in order to deliver ordered items to our customers properly.
Additionally, high-valued products are stocked in different places from ordinary ones and hedging the steal risk by counting daily.

修正後
We set up contracts with several buyers. Also we are running our own EC site and have multiple sales channels.
We daily check the logical values according to stock records and books. Also we are comparing the logical values on book and actual numbers on stocks monthly, in order to deliver ordered items to our customers properly.
Additionally, high-valued products are stocked in different places from ordinary ones and hedging the steal risk by counting daily.

元の翻訳
Tamahagane is a special steel with high hardness, which need special machine to cut it off.

Even you are requesting to cut it with 500g, please be aware of the unavoidable tolerance.

In case, the items not included in the exhibited ones are ordered currently, cause they need to be shipped from the workshop directly, it may take 1 week before the shipment is ready.

In the case of no stock, sometimes it may take more than 1 month.

In case of order with more than 1kg, the item will be sold at $ 5 per 100g.
So it takes $ 500 for 1kg. The shipping fee is $ 27.

You can search for "Taro" and send me an email to take the order, or go to pay the $ 12 to bid the No.1.
Please go to pay the $ 12 to bid the No1.

修正後
Tamahagane is a special steel with high hardness, which needs special machine to cut it off.

Even you are requesting to cut it with 500g, please be aware of the unavoidable tolerance.

In case, the items not included in the exhibited ones are ordered currently, cause they need to be shipped from the workshop directly, it may take 1 week before the shipment is ready.

In the case of no stock, sometimes it may take more than 1 month.

In case of order with more than 1kg, the item will be sold at $ 5 per 100g.
So it takes $ 500 for 1kg. The shipping fee is $ 27.

You can search for "Taro" and send me an email to take the order, or go to pay the $ 12 to bid the No.1.
Please go to pay the $ 12 to bid the No1.

元の翻訳
Recently, I went to the place called 〜 for shopping, where takes 15 minutes from my home by train.
Maybe you feel familiar with this place somehow, it is the place that appeared in favorite cartoon comic "~". It is also used as a location of the drama.
It is located in the west side of Tokyo and there is a little issue to get access there, but it worth your visit if you have the chance.

Indeed, besides English, it is a rule to learn one more language in your country. Right ?
Since there is little opportunity to speak English in daily life in Japan, I do like the rule in your country, so that I am able to learn English with less hardship.

修正後
Recently, I went to the place called 〜 for shopping. It took15 minutes from my home by train.
Maybe you are familiar with this place somehow, it is the place that appeared in your favorite cartoon comic "~". It is also used as a location of the drama.
It is located in the west side of Tokyo and there is a little issue to get access there, but it worth your visit if you have the chance.

Indeed, besides English, it is essential to learn one more language in your country. Right ?
Since there is little opportunity to speak English in daily life in Japan, I do like the rule in your country, so that I am able to learn English with less hardship.

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing this time.
Although we have received your order, your status of the order is under ○　now. The shipping is "on hold" for some reason.

For this problem, we have to check X who is responsible for the shipping.

As we sometimes need important information such as how to settle and address to which it is sent, we would be glad if you cotact .
The URL of is as follows.

Please select ○○.
Thank you for your cooperation.

修正後
Thank you for purchasing this time.
Although we have received your order, your status of the order is under ○　now. The shipping is "on hold" for some reason.

For this problem, we have to check with X who is responsible for the shipping.

As we sometimes need important information such as how to settle and address to which it is sent, we would be glad if you cotact .
The URL of is as follows.

Please select ○○.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
This is a Japanese production. The mannul is only Japanese. Seiko radio control watch is available to use in Japan, America, Germany, and China.

修正後
This is a Japanese production. The mannul is only in Japanese. Seiko radio control watch is available to use in Japan, America, Germany, and China.

元の翻訳
This item is a Japanese item, the manual is in Japanese. It is a SEIKO radio clock it a model that can be exported to US, Germany and China.

修正後
This item is a Japanese product, the manual is in Japanese. It is a SEIKO radio clock. It is a model that can receive a signal in Japan, US, Germany and China.

元の翻訳
I have no idea why the items have not being shipped from your warehouse. I cannot wait further more since I still do not know when you are ready to ship the items. I cannot sell them until I know when I will receive them, so I have no amount sales. As a result, I do not have enough amount to pay out the next arrival items. Our priority request is to have the same amount we sent refunded. Otherwise, please ship out the items for the amount we paid from your warehouse as soon as possible.

修正後
I have no idea why the items have not been prepared for shipment from your warehouse. I cannot wait further more since I still do not know when you are ready to ship the items. I cannot sell them until I know when I will receive them, so I have no amount sales. As a result, I do not have enough amount to pay out the next arrival items. Our priority request is to have the same amount we sent refunded. Otherwise, please ship out the items for the amount we paid from your warehouse as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry that the rent should be cancled and I'm going to handle procedures of rufund.
1. Please reply the email after completing filling the form attached
2. The fee of cancelation will be deducted from refund as written on document

修正後
Unfortunately, the rent should be cancled and we are going to handle procedures of rufund.
1. Please reply the email after completely filling the form attached
2. The fee of cancelation will be deducted from refund as written on document

元の翻訳
Do you have it from when you were 10 years old?
I am a beginner.

Your age is the same with my mother.
However, you are so skillful at internet.

This is a traditional Japanese craft and it is difficult to be found in other countries.

By the way, have you sent photo to me?
Please send it again.

In addition, I have found a big size box as you requested.
But it is a little bit wider.
And the cap will be settled by hinge.

修正後
Have you had it since you were 10 years old?
I am only a beginner.

You are the same age as my mother is.
However, you are so skillful at internet.

This is a traditional Japanese craft and it is difficult to be found in other countries.

By the way, have you sent the photo to me?
Please send it again.

In addition, I have found a big size box as you requested.
But it is a little bit wider.
And the cap will be settled by hinge.