翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/10/23 16:34:08

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日本語

※会場内・近隣に置いてのゴミ放置は固く禁止いたします。必ず各指定のゴミ捨て場に捨てていただくか、お持ち帰りになるかにしていただきます。
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英語

We strictly prohibit that you leave the wastes and garbages in the hall or near it. Be sure to discard it in the each designated dumping place or you bring it back with you.
When you come to the hall, we ask you to use the nearest public transportation.
In case where you take an action such as breaking the equipment in the hall, the sponsor is not responsible for it. We ask you to keep it on your mind.
Please do not make an inquiry to the hall regarding the event.
The hours of shaking hands are limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.
The number of the participation ticket of the shaking hands is limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.

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ilad 52 公文書(英日)、企業内部文書、社内マニュアル(英⇔日)、正規の翻訳会社から...
iladはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/27 13:43:27

元の翻訳
We strictly prohibit that you leave the wastes and garbages in the hall or near it. Be sure to discard it in the each designated dumping place or you bring it back with you.
When you come to the hall, we ask you to use the nearest public transportation.
In case where you take an action such as breaking the equipment in the hall, the sponsor is not responsible for it. We ask you to keep it on your mind.
Please do not make an inquiry to the hall regarding the event.
The hours of shaking hands are limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.
The number of the participation ticket of the shaking hands is limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.

修正後
We strictly prohibit you from leaving the wastes and garbages in the hall or near it. Be sure to discard it in the each designated dumping place or you bring it back with you.
When you come to the hall, we ask you to use the nearest public transportation.
In case where you take an action such as breaking the equipment in the hall, the sponsor is not responsible for it. We ask you to keep it on your mind.
Please do not make an inquiry to the hall regarding the event.
The hours of shaking hands are limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.
The number of the participation ticket of the shaking hands is limited. We ask you to understand it in advance.

prohibit A from B の形が基本だと思います。

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