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Convention Bureau in the Eastern Shizuoka Prefecture has published a unique venue booklet for PR in English. The booklet, covering an outline of facilities and comprehensive information to have events such as kinds of invent, fees, capacity, drinks, and equipment, would become a powerful tool to appeal foreign MICE planners.

On this booklet, the bicycle racing track "Izu Velodrome," the racing circuit "Fuji Speed Way," and the Numazu Imperial Villa have been featured, along with 6 unique venues and 6 excursion facilities, as well as Plaza Verde as an one-stop MICE facility.

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Convention Bureau in the Eastern Shizuoka Prefecture has published a unique venue booklet for PR in English. The booklet, covering an outline of facilities and comprehensive information necessary for organizing events, such as kinds of events, fees, capacity, drinks, and equipment, would become a powerful tool to appeal foreign MICE planners.

On this booklet, the bicycle racing track "Izu Velodrome," the racing circuit "Fuji Speed Way," and the Numazu Imperial Villa have been featured, along with 6 unique venues and 6 excursion facilities, as well as Plaza Verde as an one-stop MICE facility.

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Down below is the tracking number.
Apparently it is going through the Customs smoothly, so it won't take longer than a month to get there.

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We keep the item in our inventory.
The prince is shown in a appropriate range.
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Thank you for your message.
Down below is the tracking number.
Apparently it is going through the customs smoothly, so it shouldn't take longer than a month to get there.

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We received your request.
We have processed your refund.
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We have the item in stock.
The price listing reflects the appropriate descriptions.
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Please inform us beforehand for the next time.
We always ask you to use airmail.
We don't accept delivery by sea mail.

The product is often sold well from Jul to August in our country.
However, it's no longer popular after September.
Therefore, the late delivery incur a huge damage.
As you have requested, we will wait for another four weeks.
We will ask you to refund for this case if it doesn't arrive here by August.
Please accept our inquiry of refund then.

If we receive the product after we have it refunded, we will inform you.
If that is the case, please send an invoice for paypal again.

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Please inform us beforehand for the next time.
We always ask you to use airmail.
We don't accept delivery by sea mail.

The product is often sold well from July to August in our country.
However, it's no longer popular after September.
Therefore, the late delivery incur a huge damage.
As you have requested, we will wait for another four weeks.
We will ask you to refund for this case if it doesn't arrive here by August.
Please accept our inquiry of refund then.

If we receive the product after we have it refunded, we will inform you.
If that is the case, please send an invoice for paypal again.

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Thank you for your email.

We apologize for your inconvenience.
The package might have been lost or have not been arrived due to an error during delivery.
We refund it immediately.
Please let us know when you have the package arrived.

Thank you for your message.
We apologize for your inconvenience. We confirmed that there might be an error during delivery.
We will send the package within three business days.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Thank you for your email.

We apologize for your inconvenience.
The package might have been lost or have not been arrived due to an error during delivery.
We refund it immediately.
Please let us know when the package has arrived.

Thank you for your message.
We apologize for your inconvenience. We confirmed that there might be an error during delivery.
We will send the package within three business days.
Thank you for your understanding.

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Cautions:
--The stage-side seats and stage-side experience seats are both located at the end of the stage, so you might not be able to se performances and videos on the main stage. People on the stage-side seats might see the main stage better than those on the stage-side experience seats. In addition, you might have a difficulty to listen to the sound as noise from equipments could be loud.
--Before your purchase, please understand that each person has a different perception of seeing and hearing.

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Cautions:
--The stage-side seats and stage-side experience seats are both located at the end of the stage, so you might not be able to se performances and videos on the main stage. People on the stage-side seats might see the main stage better than those on the stage-side experience seats. In addition, you might have difficulty listening to the sound as noise from equipments could be loud.
--Before your purchase, please understand that you may feel impossible to watch and listen to the performance.

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This is an app allows you take take a note or picture just like you text with your familiar texting app.
The app features Kuma-mon so that more women will have fun using it.

You'll appreciate this app especially when you want to take a quick note.
Date and time you take a note remain on the timeline, so you can look back your past notes smoothly.

--Type in, eddy, delete, copy and share your notes and photos.
--Tap a phone number to make a call, or tap URL to open the website on your browser.

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This is an app allows you to take a note or picture just like you text with your familiar texting app.
The app features Kuma-mon so that more women will have fun using it.

You'll appreciate this app especially when you want to take a quick note.
Date and time you take a note remain on the timeline, so you can look back your past notes smoothly.

--Type in, eddy, delete, copy and share your notes and photos.
--Tap a phone number to make a call, or tap URL to open the website on your browser.

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Daichi Miura's Special Live Concert in Izumo Taisha Shrine on Saturday, October 11th!

After the Heisei era restoration, Daichi Miura will hold the first live concert at the shrine with a renovated look!
The special live concert will take place at an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en surrounded with the forest with divine atmosphere. It will be a special occasion you can witness only on the day!

Date: Tuesday, October 11th, 2014. Doors open at 4:30 pm/Show starts at 5:00 pm
Place: Izumo-taisha shrine (an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en) *the show will be canceled if it should rain.

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Daichi Miura's Special Live Concert in Izumo Taisha Shrine on Saturday, October 11th!

After "the Heisei era restoration" in last May, Daichi Miura will hold the first live concert at the shrine with a renovated look!
The special live concert will take place at an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en surrounded by the forest with divine atmosphere. It will be a special occasion you can witness only on the day!

Date: Tuesday, October 11th, 2014. Doors open at 4:30 pm/Show starts at 5:00 pm
Place: Izumo-taisha shrine (an open-air stage build at the Higashi-shin'en) *the show will be canceled if it should rain.

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[Available Products]
A short album "Together" which is going to be released on June 18th (Wednesday) exclusively at Loppi and HMV (AVC1-39164), CD+DVD (AVCD-39163/B)

*1 You can't participate the event if you don't have both an event ticket and a "ticket for handshaking sessions" included to the firer-print CDs. We'll collect the tickets during the sessions.
*2 We'll ask you to line up at the time doors open.
*3 The sessions will be over as all people lined up finish shaking hands.

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[Qualifying Products]
Mini album "Together" available June 18th (Wednesday) exclusively at Loppi and HMV (AVC1-39164), CD+DVD (AVCD-39163/B)

*You can't participate in the event if you don't have both an event ticket and a ticket for the handshaking sessions included in the first-run CDs. We'll collect the tickets during the sessions.
*We'll ask you to line up at the time doors open.
*The sessions will be over when all people lined up finish shaking hands.

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From 6:00 pm:
Yuna Sekine, Rino Shimazaki, Yuriya Suzuki, Mariya Suzuki

From 7:00 pm:
Asami Watanabe, Seran Kuroki, Hina Nagai

Doors open at 5:45 pm
Even starts at 6:00 pm

[Notice from SHIBUYA TSUTAYA]
--There's no space to view the event since it's taking place inside the store.
--Please take care of your own belongings as the store doesn't have any locker.
--You can make a call to reserve (we might limit the number of tickets you can purchase via phone call).

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From 6:00 pm:
Yuna Sekine, Rino Shimazaki, Yuriya Suzuki, Mariya Suzuki

From 7:00 pm:
Asami Watanabe, Seran Mizorogi, Hina Nagai

Doors open at 5:45 pm
Event starts at 6:00 pm

[Notice from SHIBUYA TSUTAYA]
--There's no space to view the event since it's taking place inside the store.
--Please take care of your own belongings as the store doesn't have any lockers.
--You can make reservations via telephone (we might limit the number of tickets you can purchase via phone call).

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今や全ての人が結果を知っている。これの市場での運用が失敗した後、TencentはオンラインリテーラーのYixunにて運用資金を購入した。ただし、Tencentのゲームの様なオンライン・ビジネスと比べ、このようなオンライン・リテール・ビジネスは利益幅とても少ない。最近、TencentはEコマースの資産のほぼすべてを中国内のオンライン・リテールとB2Cプラットフォーム・プロバイダーであるJDに変更し、今や後者の第二位の株主だ。

JDは数日前WeChatの公式ショッピング・チャンネルとして登録された。中国のオンライン・スーパーマーケットでWaltmartが支配的株数を保有するYihaodianは、同様にWeChatに追加された。

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今や全ての人が結果を知っている。これの市場での運用が失敗した後、TencentはオンラインリテーラーのYixunの経営支配権を獲得した。ただし、Tencentのゲームの様なオンライン・ビジネスと比べ、このようなオンライン・リテール・ビジネスは利益幅とても少ない。最近、TencentはEコマースの資産のほぼすべてを中国内のオンライン・リテールとB2Cプラットフォーム・プロバイダーであるJDに変更し、今や後者の第二位の株主だ。

JDは数日前WeChatの公式ショッピング・チャンネルとして登録された。中国のオンライン・スーパーマーケットでWaltmartが支配的株数を保有するYihaodianは、同様にWeChatに追加された。

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I'm sorry for not explaining it well.
When you check out, you don't have to link the item that you made a successful bit. You don't have to pay beforehand either.
A seller can combine several invoices their from buyers with the same ID.

If you still don't understand well with the explanation above, please pay them all. We can refund you the difference later, so please choose your most convenient payment.

Your kindness makes me cry.
I'll reserve for ◯ as well in addition. Then I should combine all three invoices and send them to ◯. I can pay for it anytime if its before the release date.

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I'm sorry for not explaining it well.
When you check out, you don't have to link the item that you made a successful bit. You don't have to pay beforehand either.
A seller can combine several invoices there from buyers with the same ID.

If you still don't understand well with the explanation above, please pay them all. We can refund you the difference later, so please choose your most convenient payment.

Your kindness makes me cry.
I'll reserve for ◯ as well in addition to this. Then I should combine all three invoices and send them to ◯. You can pay for it anytime if its before the release date.

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Todays, I followed the advice from eBay and raised an object to PayPal's Resolution Centre. I made a phone call to PayPal right after this, and told them it was an accident during delivery. I was relieved to hear that PayPal will deal with everything as it was delivery for eBay's Global Shipping Program. We will be able to solve this issue with no problem.

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Today, I followed the advice from eBay and raised an objection to PayPal's Resolution Centre. I made a phone call to PayPal right after this, and told them it was an accident during delivery. I was relieved to hear that PayPal will deal with everything as it was the delivery for eBay's Global Shipping Program. We will be able to solve this issue with no problem.

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RMDLOのデザインは前Dyson Designエンジニアで、New Product Developmentの真のベテランあるRan Merkazyによって創られ、彼が生み出した多くの革新とパテントがあります。
RMDLOのデザイン・プロセスは現実の問題から始まります。私たちのプロダクトを使うことになる方を理解することは、全てのニーズに対してエレガントに、そして目的に見合った形で答える上でとても重要なのです。どんな使用にも耐え長持ちするようデザインされた製品には、クオリティは最重要項目です。
クリエイティブであるだけでは十分ではありません。細部にいたるまでクオリティとユーザー体験に対して真摯に向き合わなければなりません。
この緻密なアプローチは必ず功を奏するものですが、正しく行うためには時間と労力が伴います。
RMDLOでは、私たちは完璧な製品を作り上げるために汗を流すことを惜しみません。

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RMDLOのデザインは前Dyson Designエンジニアで、New Product Developmentの真のベテランであるRan Merkazyによって創られ、彼が生み出した多くの革新とパテントがあります。
RMDLOのデザイン・プロセスは現実の問題から始まります。私たちのプロダクトを使うことになる方を理解することは、全てのニーズに対してエレガントに、そして目的に見合った形で答える上でとても重要なのです。どんな使用にも耐え長持ちするようデザインされた製品には、クオリティは最重要項目です。
クリエイティブであるだけでは十分ではありません。細部にいたるまでクオリティとユーザー体験に対して真摯に向き合わなければなりません。
この緻密なアプローチは必ず功を奏するものですが、正しく行うためには時間と労力が伴います。
RMDLOでは、私たちは完璧な製品を作り上げるために汗を流すことを惜しみません。

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Thank you for your message.
Amazon sets a standard shipping fee, so the price includes both shipping fee and price of the product. We apologise for you inconvenience.

Thank you for your message.

We did not know that the produce had been prohibited to be sold in the U.K.
Although the product has been displayed, none of these has been sold.
We already have deleted the product.
We apologise for uploading the product without know much about it.
We will be careful not to repeat the same from now on.
We would appreciate your a dive if you have noticed anything.

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Thank you for your message.
Amazon sets a standard shipping fee, so the selling price includes both shipping fee and price of the product. We apologise for you inconvenience.

Thank you for your message.

We did not know that the product had been prohibited to be sold in the U.K.
Although the product has been posted, none of these has been sold.
We already have deleted the product.
We apologise for uploading the product due to our lack of understanding.
We will be careful and not repeat the same from now on.
Your advice will be much appreciated if you notice other things as well.

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I'll be available anytime on Thursday!
I can adjust to your convenience.

Are you going stay in Sapporo overnight?
Do you want to go back to Tokyo?
Are you going to Sapporo by yourself?
Are you going with somebody else?

Are you coming to my company directly from the airport?
I can go to pick you up at New Chitose Airport.

If you're craving for certain foods or places, I'll do my best to show you around!
Please feel free to let me know.

Do you have a cell phone in Japan?
Call me on my cell phone after arriving at the airport.
Please let me know when you confirmed you flight's arrival time.

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I'll be available anytime on Thursday!
I can adjust my schedule to yours for your convenience.

Are you going stay in Sapporo overnight?
Do you want to go back to Tokyo?
Are you going to Sapporo by yourself?
Are you accompanying somebody else?

Are you coming to my office directly from the airport?
I can go to pick you up at New Chitose Airport.

If you're craving for certain foods or places, I'll do my best to show you around!
Please feel free to let me know.

Do you have a cell phone in Japan?
Call me on my cell phone after arriving at the airport.
Please let me know when your flight's arrival time is confirmed.

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I'll be available anytime on Thursday!
I can adjust to your convenience.

Are you going stay in Sapporo overnight?
Do you want to go back to Tokyo?
Are you going to Sapporo by yourself?
Are you going with somebody else?

Are you coming to my company directly from the airport?
I can go to pick you up at New Chitose Airport.

If you're craving for certain foods or places, I'll do my best to show you around!
Please feel free to let me know.

Do you have a cell phone in Japan?
Call me on my cell phone after arriving at the airport.
Please let me know when you confirmed you flight's arrival time.

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I'll be available anytime on Thursday!
I can adjust to your convenience.

Are you going to stay in Sapporo overnight?
Do you want to go back to Tokyo?
Are you going to Sapporo by yourself?
Are you going with somebody else?

Are you coming to my company directly from the airport?
I can go pick you up at New Chitose Airport.

If you're craving certain foods or places, I'll do my best to show you around!
Please feel free to let me know.

Will you have a cell phone in Japan?
Call me on my cell phone after arriving at the airport.
Please let me know when you've confirmed your flight's arrival time.

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$180 has nine wires, the wire stripping gauge, the wire stripper, and the wooden breadboard!
Choose your favourite plan.

--Click 'Continue to Amazon' and make your account on amazon.com
--Type your email address and move on to a registration page.
Select this.
After doing above, select this button.
--Create your account for amain.com
An email adress to register with
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$180 includes nine wires, a wire stripping gauge, a wire stripper, and a wooden breadboard!
Choose your favourite plan.

--Click 'Continue to Amazon' and create your account on amazon.com
--Type your email address and move on to a registration page.
Select this.
After doing above, hit this button.
--Create your account on Amazon.com
Your email address to register with
Image: Type characters shown in the image.