Hiroshi (hiro_ure_87) — 付けたレビュー

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Don't Stop Loving

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This musical gem of a love ballad presented by Kumi Koda is finally on sale in this fall, as the theme song for a movie "Second Virgin". A great tune surpassing "A Song of Love", "Being Love, Love and Love With You" has been born. "Don't Stop Loving", a great musical tune selected as the theme song for the film version of the last year's sensational NHK drama "Second Virgin" by the scriptwriter Shizuka Ohishi.

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Don't Stop Loving

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This musical gem of a love ballad presented by Kumi Koda is finally on sale in this fall, as the theme song for a movie "Second Virgin." A great tune surpassing "A Song of Love," "Being Love, Love and Love With You" has been born. "Don't Stop Loving," a great musical tune selected as the theme song for the film version of the last year's sensational NHK drama "Second Virgin" by the scriptwriter Shizuka Ohishi.

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MUSIC VIDEO of all three songs is in DVD! This one includes Koda Kumi's various charms and make up!

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Videos for all three songs are included in DVD! It's a piece shows Kumi Koda's attractiveness from all different angles!

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TRICK

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The ever-changing entertainment show's curtain has finally been risen. Released by Team [TRICK] ! This 7th original album of Kouda Kumi will feature all the latest songs such as "Moon Crying", "That Ain't Cool" (ft. Fergie), "TABOO", "stay with me" (commercial song of AU[LISMO], in total, 14 songs ! And what's more, 10 new songs is also included !!

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TRICK

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The ever-changing entertainment show's curtain has finally been risen! "Trick" will be released! This 7th original album by Kouda Kumi will feature all the latest songs such as "Moon Crying," "That Ain't Cool (ft. Fergie)," "TABOO," "stay with me (commercial song of AU[LISMO]," total 14 songs! And what's more, 10 new songs are also included!!

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flower

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Author of "Koibana", Yoshi made lyrics of this song. This story with Kumi Koda's powerful and gentle voice is for all the people in love.

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flower

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Yoshi, the author of "Koibana," made lyrics for this song. This story with Kumi Koda's powerful and gentle voice is for all people in love.

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7 SPIRITS

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1st video clip. Includes total 7 songs' PVs and off-shot & past TV-CMs as a bonus.

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7 SPIRITS

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The first video clip, which includes videos for all seven songs, as well as off-shot & past TV-CMs as a bonus.

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私が全てを理解したかは定かではないが、双方の解釈が正しいかもう一度確かめる。
あなたはebayとpaypalでもう支払済みの、頼んだ二つのために、もう2つの箱を加えたい考えていると思う。
96ドルでもう4つ加えることができる。また、96ドルをpaypalのインボイスで送ることと、全ての6つの箱の輸送することが可能だ。
もう2つだけのためなら、50ドル必要になる。
ebayでの料金を少し安くすることができるはず、というあなたの意見は正しい。しかし、私は2ドルそれぞれの箱に対し負担していて、もしあなたがもう2ついるのなら、その負担額は増える。↵
もし96ドルを支払ってくれるのなら、私には都合のよいことだ。
残念なことに、これらは私の私物ではなく、オーナに意見を聞かなければいけない。私が既に価格表から少し値段を下げていたために、これらは昨日売りに出されるべきではなかった。

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私が全てを理解したかは定かではありませんが、お互いの解釈が正しいかもう一度確かめさせていただきます。
あなたはebayとpaypalにて支払済みのオーダー二点に、さらに2箱の追加を検討されているという理解でよろしいですね。
96ドルでもう4つ加えることができます。また、96ドルをpaypalのインボイスで送ることと、6つ全ての箱の輸送することが可能です。
追加分2つだけのためなら、50ドル必要になります。
ebayでの料金を少し安くすることができるというあなたの意見は正しいでしょう。しかし、私は郵便料金2ドルそれぞれの箱に対し負担していて、もしあなたがもう2ついるのなら、その負担額は増えるます。もし96ドルを支払って頂けるのなら、私の負担が無くなります。
残念なことに、これらは私の私物ではないので、オーナに意見を聞かなければいけなりません。私が既に価格表から少し値段を下げていたため、昨日売りに出されるべきではなかったです。

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I understand that the guitar switch is not working properly.
Prior shipment, we test all the guitars to make sure that the electrical system of each guitar works without problems.
There is the possibility that the switch is not operating correctly due to damage during shipping.

We have shipping insurance, therefore we ask you to first report the fact that the guitar was not working properly to your nearest post office as soon as possible. Based on the damage report you fill, we can claim insurance compensation to the Japanese Post Office.
Please contact us as soon as you have submitted the damage report.

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I understand that the guitar switch is not working properly.
Prior to shipment, we test all the guitars to make sure that the electrical system of each guitar works without any problems.
There is the possibility that the switch is not operating correctly due to damage during shipping.

We have shipping insurance, therefore we ask you to first report the fact that the guitar was not working properly to your nearest post office as soon as possible. Based on the damage report you submit, we will claim insurance compensation to the Japan Post Office.
Please contact us after you have submit the damage report.

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*No sitting down and saving a spot with your belongings or a picnic sheet around the venue. Any unattended items may be removed. You may also be asked to leave or the event may even be cancelled if your behaviour is offensive to others.
*For safety reasons, do not piggyback or use an umbrella both around and inside the venue. You can view it from level 3 and 4, however, please refrain from any dangerous acts such as lean over a fence.

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*Do not sit down to save a spot with your belongings or a picnic sheet around the venue. Any unattended items may be removed. You may also be asked to leave or the event may even be cancelled if your behaviour is offensive to others.
*For safety reasons, do not piggyback or use an umbrella both around and inside the venue. You can view it from level 3 and 4, however, please refrain from any dangerous acts such as lean over a fence.

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The point is to bring out an active stylish look with random natural looking curls by rolling the hair from the mid-part to the tip and add spiral curls to it.

Add freshness to the hair by giving it some airy-feel with the Styling Spray.

Put some layers to the One-Length Bob, to that, style a neat straight hair for the bang. From there, cut the hair along the nap of the neck and give the style well shaped Mushroom Bob, the hair should be harmoniously lined from front to side without any parting. It is important to give the style a youthful impression by leaving a little volume to the hair to keep the hair well-set.

Then give the style a calm feeling with violet brown color. Complete the look by combing soft wax into the hair with your fingers.

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The point is to bring out an active stylish look with random natural looking curls by rolling the hair from the mid-part to the tip and add spiral curls to it.

Add freshness to the hair by giving it some airy-feel with the Styling Spray.

Put some layers to the one-length bob, to that, style a neat straight hair for the bang. From there, cut the hair along the nap of the neck and give the style well shaped mushroom bob, the hair should be harmoniously lined from front to side without any parting. It is important to give the style a youthful impression by leaving a little volume to the hair to keep the hair well-set.

Then give the style a calm feeling with violet brown color. Complete the look by combing soft wax into the hair with your fingers.

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25 year old part timer, Ms. Aimi Tachiyama's " Before and After Theme" is "Natural cute look with light, summer color and short bangs".

Before, she had no layers but had thick, heavy, bulky look.
First, we started with giving layers in the surface to define and create movements in the hair.
The bangs were cut short above the eyebrows to give an active impression.
We've highlighted above the ears with orange-brown color for light and casual look.
Applied a bit of hair wax on the tip of the hair for the final touch.

We have turned her dry, thin, long hair into something different by controlling the inner volume of the hair and making her head look small.

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Ms. Aimi Tachiyama, the 25 year old part timer, sets the theme for " Before and After" as a 'natural and cute look with light color and short bangs for the summer.'

She had no layers and had a bulky look.
We started with giving layers on the surface to create movements in the hair.
The bangs were cut short above the eyebrows to give an active impression.
We also highlighted hair above ears with orange-brown color for a light and casual look.
Finally, we applied a bit of hair wax on the tip of the hair for the final touch.

She used to have dry, thin, and long hair, but we could change the inner volume of the hair to make her head look smaller.

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Q: 濾過するのに4分以上かかる場合は？
A: かき混ぜる回数を増やし、豆のひき方を変えてください。
カナディアーノ専用のカナディアーノ・オルガニック・コーヒーを利用することもお勧めです。ご注文は、こちらのリンクから！
ご自身が用意されたコーヒー豆を利用する場合は、挽き方を粗くするか、コーヒーを淹れる間、かき混ぜる回数を増やしてください。挽き方の設定を中挽きぐらいから始めて、お好みに合った理想のセッティングになるように、1回ごとに細かくしていってください。

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Q: 濾過するのに4分以上かかる場合は？
A: かき混ぜる回数を増やし、豆のひき方を変えみてください。
カナディアーノ専用のカナディアーノ・オルガニック・コーヒーを利用することもお勧めです。ご注文は、こちらのリンクから！
ご自身が用意されたコーヒー豆を利用する場合は、挽き方を粗くするか、コーヒーを淹れる間、かき混ぜる回数を増やしてください。挽き方の設定を中挽きぐらいから始めて、お好みに合った理想のセッティングになるように、1回ごとに細かくしていってください。

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Nagoya Club KUATORO
standing with a reference number /5,650 (including tax) -one drink required -- /1 sheet
※aged 3 and over charged
Kyoodoo Tokai

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Nagoya Club Quattro↵

Standing room. Each ticket carries a reference number: JPY 5,650 (including tax) ↵
You'll asked to pay for at least one drink.
※Children over three years old are required to pay for the entrance fee.
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Kyodo Tokai

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<interesting!>
Although I was wondering, "how it will be like without being able to understand the language", I could have so much fun without my concerns.
I think all the people from children to adults can enjoy this show.
Some parts of the show were participatory during the show, and I think it was also good.

<impressed by its spectacularity>
It was first time for us to see painters' show. Although we have seen NANTA and JUMP before, this one was the best.
I was impressed by its technologies.
I think you should see this show at least once. I strongly recommend it!

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"Interesting!"
Initially I was wondering "how it will be like without being able to understand the language." But I could have so much fun nevertheless.
I think people from children to adults can enjoy this show.
I think it was also good that they ask some audience to join the stage during show.

"Spectacular performance is impressive"
It was first time for us to see the painters' show. Although we have seen NANTA and JUMP before, this one was the best one.
I was impressed by its technology.
I think you should see this show at least once. I strongly recommend it!

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Loson ticket http://l-tike.com/ayumihamasaki-lawson/
E-plus http://eplus.jp/ayumi-hamasaki2014/

[Day exchange ticket]↵
Performance @Osaka Castle Hall ↵
* Day exchange tickets on the day for Osaka Castle Hall in Jun 12 (Thus) and Jun 13 (Fri) will be available even though the number of the tickets is limited.

Jun 12 (Thus) Doors Open 17:30 / Event Starts 18:30
Jun 13 (Fri) Doors Open 17:30 / Event Starts 18:30

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Loson ticket http://l-tike.com/ayumihamasaki-lawson/
E-plus http://eplus.jp/ayumi-hamasaki2014/

[On-Date Exchange Tickets for Performance at Osaka Castle Hall will be Available]↵
*Tickets will be available in a limited number.

Jun 12th (Thursday) Doors Open at 17:30 / Event Starts at 18:30
Jun 13th (Friday) Doors Open at 17:30 / Event Starts at 18:30

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8/14 (wed) (a-nation island powerd by in-gelly Asia Progress—from a-nation—) Live!

Special reservation will be available from 6/10(tue) 12:00 till 6/17 (tue) 23:59.

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August 14th (Wednesday) (a-nation island powered by in-gelly Asia Progress—from a-nation—) Live!

Special reservation will be available from June 10th (Tuesday) 12:00 a.m. until June 17th (Tuesday) 11:59 p.m..

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From 22:00 onwards on June 11 (Wednesday), a special program commemorating the release of TOHOSHINKI's new single, Sweat to be broadcasted on Ameba Studio!

To commemorate the new single release, Sweat
there will be a special program broadcast on Ameba Studio on June 11 (Wednesday) from 22:00 onwards.

Focusing on Sweat's music video, comments from the members will be broadcasted too!
As they look back on their TREE tour, showing the PV for the album, TREE and etc,
It's a special broadcast that showcases TOHOSHINKI's appeal!

Don't miss it!

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From 22:00 onwards on June 11 (Wednesday), a special program commemorating the release of TOHOSHINKI's new single, Sweat to be broadcasted on Ameba Studio!

To commemorate the new single release, Sweat
there will be a special program broadcast on Ameba Studio on June 11 (Wednesday) from 22:00 onwards.

Focusing on the music video for Sweat, comments from the members will be broadcasted too!
As they look back on their TREE tour, showing the PV for the album, TREE and etc,
It's a special broadcast that showcases TOHOSHINKI's appeal!

Don't miss it!

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*You need an a-ticket membership (Free) to apply.
If you have not registered to an a-ticket membership, it is highly recommended that you will register before you apply for tickets for the smooth application.
(Pre-registration http://a-ticket.jp)
*Please note that the access is concentrated at the start of accepting.

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*You need an a-ticket membership (free of fee) to apply.
If you have not registered to an a-ticket membership, it is highly recommended that you will register before you apply for tickets to expedite the application.
(Pre-register at: http://a-ticket.jp)
*Please note that the connection might be jammed when we start receiving applications.

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Thank you for your message.
A sending method will be international e packet.
and can be confirmed of sending.

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A setting of fee is not set individually at amazon`s setting.↵
I am really sorry for that.

Thank you for your message.
Sending to china is possible.
If you purchase,I am delighted to send to you.

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Thank you for your message.
It will be sent with the International E-Packet.
You can check status of the package with the ID number.

Thank you for your message.

We are afraid that the shipping fee is not individually set at amazon.com.

Thank you for your message.
We can send item to China
We will be happy to receive your order.

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CPA integrates with JAPCO ~ CPA Convention

Convention Planners Association of Japan (CPA) held annual convention in 2014 at Iwasaki Koyata Memorial Hall of the International House of Japan on June 5th in Tokyo.

At the beginning of the convention, chairperson Hideo Bunbu told members that CPA integrates with Japan Association of Professional Congress Organizers (JAPCO).
He explained that both organizations fit the purpose and cooperate with each other to spread consensus to the public and strengthen MICE as an industry, and signed the pre-agreement about the integration on June 3rd. ↵

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CPA integrates with JAPCO ~ CPA Convention

Convention Planners Association of Japan (CPA) held annual convention in 2014 at Iwasaki Koyata Memorial Hall of the International House of Japan on June 5th in Tokyo.

At the beginning of the convention, the chairperson Hideo Bunbu told members that CPA integrates with Japan Association of Professional Congress Organizers (JAPCO).
He explained that companies attending the convention had agreed that they would combine power of their industry to spread a consensus to the public and strengthen MICE as an industry. Mr. Bunbu signed the pre-agreement about the integration on June 3rd.

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It often fails when you enter the characters shown on Image:, keep on entering!
- Enter your credit card
Choose the type of your card
Enter the number of your card
Enter the name of card holder in alphabet
Enter expiration date of your card (shown as **/** in your card, Month/Year)
- Enter the detail of card holder
You can easily enter them by this site!
Copy and paste the date converted in the site above, then it's allright.
- Click Confirm on right bottom, then successfully finished!

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You may fails several times when you enter the characters shown on as the image. Don't give up and keep trying!
- Enter your credit card information.
Choose the type of your card
Enter the number of your card
Enter the name of card holder in alphabet
Enter the expiration date of your card (shown as **/** in your card, Month/Year)
- Enter the detail of the card holder
Use this site and get them entered quickly!
Just copy and paste the script converted in the site above.
- Click Confirm on the bottom right corner, and then finish it!

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[ Support for the beginners of Kickstarter in English ]

* How to create an account of Kickstarter

At first you sign up for Kickster.
For those who have already completed registration, scroll until the subject " *How to get a support ".
- Access the website of Kickstarter
- Click "Sign up" on the right-top
- Input for "New to Kickstarter?" in the middle;
your name in alphabet
e-mail address
e-mail address again for confirmation
password

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[ Support for the beginners of Kickstarter] English ver.

* How to create a Kickstarter account

At first you sign up for Kickster.
For those who have already completed registration, scroll down to find 'How to get a support .'
- Access Kickstarter website
- Click "Sign up" on the right-top
- Input for "New to Kickstarter?" in the middle;
Input your name in alphabet
Input e-mail address
Input e-mail address again for confirmation
Input password

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You may fail many times when you input the words on "Image". Don't give up!
- Input your credit card information
Choose the type of your credit card
Input the number of your credit card
Input the name who has the credit card in alphabet
Input expiration date of your credit card ( It's written as **/**, Month/Year )
- Input the detail of the owner of the credit card
You can use this website to simplify!
It's enough you do copy and paste the information of the site.
- Compete with a click "Confirm" on the right-bottom

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You may fail many times when you try to type words that show up as an image, But don't give up!
- Input your credit card information
Choose the type of your credit card
Input the number of your credit card
Input the owner of the credit card in alphabet
Input expiration date of your credit card ( It's written as **/**, Month/Year )
- Input the detail of the owner of the credit card
Simplify the process by using the website!
Just copy and paste information on the website above!
- Click "Confirm" on the bottom-right conner and finish it!

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Actually, it was updated before EXPO and it can be achieved accurate gesture working using Leap Motion.

It is built into a weight scale on the floor so that you can measure and record your weight automatically.
And you can also record usage of water automatically because it is interfaced to the faucet.

Although it is a small amount of time to be in a lavatory, when you think what information would be useful at the time, weather forecast and traffic information would be helpful, and a function of measurement of your weight everyday would be good, too.

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In fact, before the EXPO, it was updated with Leap Motion to achieve more accurate control with motion gesture.

It is built into a weight scale on the floor so that you can measure and record your weight automatically.
The interfaced faucet also records the usage of water automatically because it is

Although the amount of time we spend in a lavatory is limited, when you think what information would be useful at the time, weather forecast and traffic information would be helpful, and a function of measurement of your weight everyday would be good, too.