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JNTO will establish an office in Jakarta.

The Ministry of Foreign Affairs of the Republic of Indonesia approved the establishment of the Japan National Tourist Organization (JNTO) in Indonesia on July 23. From hereon, various legal formalities in the ara will be done in the location, and at the earliest, the office will be opened in October. This office will be the 14th overseas base of JNTO.

The Indonesian market attracts attention because of its large population even for Southeast Asia. The number of visitors to Japan exceeded 10 million for the first time last year and it is regarded as a high growth market. Currently, the Indonesian office is handled by the Singapore office.

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JNTO will establish an office in Jakarta.

The Ministry of Foreign Affairs of the Republic of Indonesia has approved the establishment of the Japan National Tourist Organization (JNTO) in Indonesia on July 23. From hereon, various legal formalities in the area will be done in the location, and at the earliest, the office will be opened in October. This office will be the 14th overseas base of JNTO.

The Indonesian market attracts attention because of its large population even for Southeast Asia. The number of visitors to Japan exceeded 10 million for the first time last year and it is regarded as a high growth market. Currently, the Indonesian office is handled by the Singapore office.

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Please choose the size from S, M and L, and the send us a message on Paypal or eBay. We will ship it five days after the payment has been confirmed. Also, please confirm to us the shipping address. The zip code is required. Please contact us as soon as possible if there is a problem with the registered address. We will be waiting for the payment now.

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Please choose the size from S, M and L, and send us a message on Paypal or eBay. We will ship it five days after the payment has been confirmed. Also, please confirm the shipping address. The zip code is required. Please contact us as soon as possible if there is a problem with the registered address. We will be waiting for the payment.

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Hello.

The tracking number is definitely correct.

After confirming it just now, it seems that the product is at the customs house in Japan.

It is scheduled to be leave Japan soon.

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Hello.

The tracking number is definitely correct.

After confirming it just now, it seems that the product is at customs in Japan.

It is scheduled to leave Japan soon.

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「An improvement request for Motorcycle Shelter.」

There is a part that I hope you could improve with the Motorcycle Shelter.

・ Just like what is on the attached image, I hope that a base plate will be attached to the front wheel of the motorcycle.

I believe that this will become more popular if you improve this part.

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「Motorcycle Shelter improvement request」

There is a part of the motorcycle shelter that I would like you to improve.

・ I would like a base plate attached to the front wheel of the motorcycle just like what is on the attached image,

I think that sales will improve if you make these adjustments.

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① Thank you for your email.
We will be filing damages report to the shipping company, and we have a request from you.
Please report to the shipping company that the product that arrived was broken.
We won't be able to file damages report to the shipping company if you do not do this.
We apologize for the inconvenience, and we hope for your cooperation.
We wish you all the best!

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① Thank you for your email.
We will be filing damages to report to the shipping company, and we have a request from you.
Please report to the shipping company that the product that arrived was broken.
We won't be able to file damages to report to the shipping company if you do not do this.
We apologize for the inconvenience, and we hope for your cooperation.
We wish you all the best!

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If you want a product, please make a bid for it at the auction.
After having your bid accepted, please make a payment for the product and its shipping to the designated bank account.
And then, the product will be shipped to the designated address.

You have a discerning eye because you have found this car.
This car is a good bargain.

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If you want the item please make a bid for it at the auction.
After having your bid accepted, please make a payment for the product and its shipping to the designated bank account.
And then the product will be shipped to the designated address.

You must have a discerning eye to find this car.
This car is a good bargain.

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Please wait for just a little more time for the explanation of the work and specific information about myself.

The English translation takes time, so in a few days, I will send you an email with an attached file containing detailed in a few days.

If you don't mind, could you tell me information regarding payment and shipping?

I am considering that payment should be made on Paypal.

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Please wait for just a little more time for the explanation of the work and specific information about myself.

The English translation takes time, so in a few days, I will send you an email with an attached file containing details.

If you don't mind, could you tell me the information regarding payment and shipping?

I am considering to make the payment through paypal.

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We opened a bank account that could receive remittance from Paypal, and we have received the 50 dollars.
Please disregard the inquiry made the other day.
We are sorry for the inconvenience.

We have another inquiry.
A shipping notice from The golf stome came from you after the purchase.
Does this mean that the product will be shipped by a different supplier?

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We opened a bank account that could receive remittance from Paypal, and we have received the 50 dollars.
Please disregard the inquiry made the other day.
We are sorry for the inconvenience.

We have another inquiry.
A shipping notice comes from The golf stome after the purchase from you.
Does this mean that the product will be shipped by a different supplier?

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Thank you for your continued patronage.
When will you send the invoice for the product that was ordered yesterday?
We are sorry for hurrying you, but we would really appreciate it if you could send the invoice by the end of today.

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Thank you for your continued patronage.
When can you send the invoice for the product that we ordered yesterday?
We are sorry for hurrying you, but we would really appreciate it if you could send the invoice by the end of today.

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The baby is being delivered.
We apologize for taking your time on such a busy time.

Of course, there is no need for the customer to go to the post office.
Communicating with the post office by phone or email during your free time is will be enough.

Should there be cute Hello Kitty items for babies, please recommend them.
We pray for your baby's health.

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Oh, you had a baby.
We apologize for taking your time on such a busy time.

Of course, there is no need for the customer to go to the post office.
Communicating with the post office by phone or email during your free time will be enough.

Should there be cute Hello Kitty items for babies, we will let you know.
We pray for your baby's health.

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Two thousand people attended the keynote address of Mr. Masayoshi Son.

The SoftBank Group held the two-day exhibition "SoftBank World 2013" for corporate services on July 23 to 24 at Prince Tower in Tokyo. Mr. Masayoshi Son, the representative of the group, went to the stage and delivered his keynote address. He entitled it as "challenging the world". He explained that the vision of the group is to create devices and services with new work style, which will then offer happiness to the people.

Company-oriented IT Solution and more than 100 companies were introduced at the exhibition.

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Two thousand people attended the keynote address of Mr. Masayoshi Son.

The SoftBank Group held the two-day exhibition "SoftBank World 2013" for corporate services on July 23 to 24 at Prince Tower in Tokyo. Mr. Masayoshi Son, the representative of the group, went to the stage and delivered his keynote address. Titled "Challenging the World," his address explained that the vision of the Group is to provide a new work style to create the company's devices and services, which will then offer happiness to the people.

Corporate-oriented IT solutions and more than 100 companies were introduced at the exhibition.

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Dear 〇〇,

We sincerely thank you for your purchase.

We will give you a refund for the VAT that you had paid.
Please take a photo or scan the documents you have for VAT, and send it to us via email. This is a necessary procedure for us to give you a refund.
We will process the refund after checking the documents.

Sincerely yours,


We have confirmed the documents.
We already sent you a refund for the 〇〇 euro that you paid for VAT, so please confirm that you have received it.
We thank you for your cooperation.

We look forward to your next purchase.

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Dear 〇〇,

We sincerely thank you for your purchase.

We will give you a refund for the VAT that you paid.
Please take a photo or scan the VAT documents you have and send it to us via email. This is a necessary procedure for us to give you a refund.
We will process the refund after checking the documents.

Sincerely yours,


We have confirmed the documents.
We have sent you a refund for the 〇〇 euro that you paid for VAT, so please confirm that you have received it.
We thank you for your cooperation.

We look forward to your next purchase.

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My order arrived today.

I sent this email because the product's quality is poor.
"Corsica Pants Black S"
- The cloth in the knees is stretched and it is worn out.
- There is a hole because of a frayed spot.
- There are strong traces of marks left by the hanger around the waist area.

I am wondering if this product is a leftover stock or intended for rental because of the logo on the hip area.

First, I want to have this item replaced immediately.
Then, I want to have an explanation as to why this item was sent, and what kind of inspection was done at the time of shipping?

This has a negative effect on your brand.

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My order arrived today.

I am sending you this email because the product I received is of poor quality.
"Corsica Pants Black S"
- The cloth in the knees is stretched and worn out.
- The fabric is frayed and there is a hole in it.
- There are strong traces of marks left by the hanger around the waist area.

Also, I am wondering if this product is leftover stock or intended for rental because of the logo on the hip area.

First, I want to have this item replaced immediately.
Then, I would like an explanation as to why this item was sent, and what kind of inspection was done at the time of shipping.

This has a negative effect on your brand.

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We want to sell camera machine parts and office supplies in Amazon Europe from hereon.
We are still an unknown brand; hence, we want to sell items abroad in a grand scale.
We are selling items with a bar code.

We want to sell our items in Italy, France, Germany and Amazon England. We also want to market our products on the online store that we will create.

※ We are still the creation stage of our online store and company website.

【Bank account and address】
We are applying for a corporate bank account in Cyprus.
The address is also in Europe.

We also have a VAT number.

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We want to sell camera machine parts and office supplies in Amazon Europe from hereon.
We are still an unknown brand; hence, we want to sell items abroad in a grand scale.
We are selling items with a bar code.

We want to sell our items in Italy, France, Germany and Amazon England. We also want to market our products on the online store that we will create.

※ We are still in the creation stage of our online store and company website.

【Bank account and address】
We are applying for a corporate bank account in Cyprus.
The address is also in Europe.

We also have a VAT number.

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This is ○○.
Thank you for your consideration.

About the invoice request in PAYPAL, please put the total amount $○○ after listing the number of goods and their respective prices.
Please send the items to Florida.

Thank you in advance.

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This is ○○.
Thank you for your consideration.

As for the invoice through PayPal, please put the total amount $○○ along with the number of goods and their respective unit prices.
Please send the items to Florida.

Thank you in advance.