Katherine Bantiles (googlybear) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

I only have an online shop for now.
We're selling selected and wonderful products from overseas, and our target customers are ladies in their teens until their 30s.
Our sales have been good recently, so we're thinking of selling new brands.
We love your products because it's colorful, and it makes you feel good.
We would like to sell your products because they're very popular in Japan.

If you can, will you consider our request?
We are hoping to hear from you soon.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.

I only have an online shop for now.
We selectively buy and sell wonderful products from overseas, and our target customers are girls in their teens and women in their 20s and 30s.
As our sales have picked up steadily, we hope to sell new brands.
We love your products because they are colorful and brighten the mood.
As they are very popular in Japan, we would very much like to sell them.

We would be grateful if you could consider our request.
We look forward to hearing from you soon.

元の翻訳
I am sending you this email because I want to know something. I want to know about the offered product. I noticed recently that the logo on the product page of Gemtech is different from the usual logo. I wonder, is this logo is especially for the products of Gemtech?
I sent you an email because I wanted to know about it. Don't worry, I won't ask for a refund.
I would be happy if you can reply to my inquiry whenever you can do so.

修正後
I am writing to you to inquire about the offered product. I noticed recently that the logo is different from the one on Gemtech's product page. I wonder if this logo on the product is special.
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I contacted you out of curiosity. Please be assured that I will not return the product or ask for a refund.
I would be grateful if you could find the time to respond to this inquiry.