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googlybear
googlybear 52 Hi there! I have been working as a...
日本語

孫正義氏の基調講演に2000人集まる

ソフトバンクグループは7月23日・24日の2日間、ザ・プリンスパークタワー東京で、企業向けサービスの展示会「SoftBank World 2013」を開催。基調講演ではグループ代表のの孫正義氏が登壇。世界に挑むと題して、同社のデバイスやサービスがつくりだす新しいワークスタイルとそれにより人々に幸せを提供する、という同グループのビジョンを説明した。

展示会では100社を超える企業が出展、企業向けのITソリューション」を提案していた。

英語

Two thousand people attended the keynote address of Mr. Masayoshi Son.

The SoftBank Group held the two-day exhibition "SoftBank World 2013" for corporate services on July 23 to 24 at Prince Tower in Tokyo. Mr. Masayoshi Son, the representative of the group, went to the stage and delivered his keynote address. He entitled it as "challenging the world". He explained that the vision of the group is to create devices and services with new work style, which will then offer happiness to the people.

Company-oriented IT Solution and more than 100 companies were introduced at the exhibition.

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元の翻訳
Two thousand people attended the keynote address of Mr. Masayoshi Son.

The SoftBank Group held the two-day exhibition "SoftBank World 2013" for corporate services on July 23 to 24 at Prince Tower in Tokyo. Mr. Masayoshi Son, the representative of the group, went to the stage and delivered his keynote address. He entitled it as "challenging the world". He explained that the vision of the group is to create devices and services with new work style, which will then offer happiness to the people.

Company-oriented IT Solution and more than 100 companies were introduced at the exhibition.

修正後
Two thousand people attended the keynote address of Mr. Masayoshi Son.

The SoftBank Group held the two-day exhibition "SoftBank World 2013" for corporate services on July 23 to 24 at Prince Tower in Tokyo. Mr. Masayoshi Son, the representative of the group, went to the stage and delivered his keynote address. Titled "Challenging the World," his address explained that the vision of the Group is to provide a new work style to create the company's devices and services, which will then offer happiness to the people.

Corporate-oriented IT solutions and more than 100 companies were introduced at the exhibition.

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