Fujisawa (fujisawa_2014) — 付けたレビュー

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I own a bank account of HSBC.

A few days ago when I tried to withdraw money from an ATM, which provided HSBC service, it did not work.
Is it possible, that I cannot withdraw money from ATMs at the moment?

I was able to finish the procedure of changing to a new security device via internet banking and I as well was able to check my balance, which made me come to the conclusion, that my bank account was not frozen.
Could it be, that only withdrawing money from ATMs is restricted for me?

If so, I would like to inquire how to release this restriction.

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I own a bank account of HSBC.

A few days ago when I tried to withdraw money from an ATM, which provided HSBC service, it did not work.
Is it possible, that I cannot withdraw money from ATMs at the moment?

I was able to finish the procedure of changing to a new security device via internet banking and I as well was able to check my balance, which made me come to the conclusion that my bank account was not frozen.
Could it be, that only withdrawing money from ATMs is restricted for me?

If so, I would like to inquire how to release this restriction.

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Therefore I highly recommend that you add tracking number.
That way you can track your parcel and there is no need to worry about parcel not arriving for a long time.
Only additional $4 is needed for adding a tracking number.
Please contact me if you understand and would like to add tracking number.
I'll send you an additional invoice.

I'll prepare shipment of your item then.
I'll send you an email after it dispatches.

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Therefore I highly recommend that you add a tracking number.
That way you can track your parcel and there is no need to worry about the parcel not arriving for a long time.
Only additional $4 is needed for adding a tracking number.
Please contact me if you understand and would like to add a tracking number.
I'll send you an additional invoice.

I'll prepare shipment of your item then.
I'll send you an email after dispatch is completed.

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I apologize for my late response.

I am happy to hear that you are interested in purchasing a sword.

Please allow me to make sure a few points for smithing a sword.

•Because your order is specific, the price of the production of the sword will start from at least $20,000.

•It will take up to 5 to 6 months for completion of the production until it comes to your hand.

•I would like you to send me a picture of the sword because I would like to know what kind of specification will be to the sword.

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I apologize for my late response.

I am happy to hear that you are interested in purchasing a sword.

Please allow me to make sure a few points before smithing a sword.

•Because your order is specific, the price to produce the sword will start from at least $20,000.

•It will take up to 5 to 6 months for completion of the production until it comes to your hand.

•I would like you to send me a picture of the sword because I would like to know what kind of specification will be to the sword.

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Your order is being pending as your said.
Since the order is transfered via Amazon, the detail need to confirm with Amazon.
I am going to ask Amazon to contact with you, please keep waiting until then.
In case no contact from Amazon, please try to contact with Amazon directly.

The following message is from a customer.
Please contact the customer for the confirmation of payment status and shipment.
Please let me know if there is any question.

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As you said, your order is pending .
Since the order is shipped via Amazon, you need to confirm the details with Amazon.
I am going to ask Amazon to contact you, please wait until then.
In case of no contact from Amazon, please try to contact Amazon directly.

The following message is from a customer.
Please contact the customer for the confirmation of payment status and shipment.
Please let me know if there is any question.

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March 2011, 9th original album 「Dejavu」release. Earn the 1th place on the weekly Oricon ranking. April of the same year, after approximately 4 years, 「Koda Kumi Live Tour 2011 ～Dejavu～」 a nationwide hall tour was holded. At various place the ticket were completely sold out.
May of the same year, for her 10th year anniversary, 「KODA KUMI 10th Anniversary ～FANTASIA～」live concert at tokyo dome was released

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March 2011, 9th original album 「Dejavu」release. Earn the 1th place on the weekly Oricon ranking. April of the same year, after approximately 4 years, 「Koda Kumi Live Tour 2011 ～Dejavu～」 a nationwide hall tour was held. At various places the tickets were completely sold out.
May of the same year, for her 10th year anniversary, 「KODA KUMI 10th Anniversary ～FANTASIA～」live concert at Tokyo Dome was released

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I am a Japanese buyer.
I am selling imported items, mainly of apparel, on several shopping sites popular in Japan, such as BUYMA or Amazon, which amonts to 3 million YEN sales per month.

People in Japan love your company's products very much, and I am interested in handling them by myself, so I want to ask you to sell them to me wholesale.
Please inform me of your wholesal price and conditions for this deal.

I am looking foreward to our cooperation.

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I am a Japanese buyer.
I am selling imported items, mainly of apparel, on several shopping sites popular in Japan, such as BUYMA or Amazon, with sales in the order of 3 million YEN per month.

People in Japan love your company's products very much, and I am interested in handling them by myself, so I want to ask you to sell them to me wholesale.
Please inform me of your wholesale price and conditions for this deal.

I am looking forward to our cooperation.

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Hello,
I would like to know the delivery situation about my product.
Can you please tell me the delivery company and the chase number?
Best regards

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Hello,
I would like to know the delivery situation about my product.
Can you please tell me the delivery company and the tracking number?
Best regards

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Please fill out an application form and send it to us. Our general information service will get back to you by email.
Please note that the reservation within two weeks before your requested date may not be accepted.
This form is displayed in frame structure and the key mark of SSL is not shown on the browser, however, please be assured that it is encrypted during transmission.
Other optional examination will be added based upon the requester's choise.
(Please not that the examination fee is to be paid by individuals.)

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Please fill out an application form and send it to us. Our general information service will get back to you by email.
Please note that the reservation within two weeks before your requested date may not be accepted.
This form is displayed in frame structure and the key mark of SSL is not shown on the browser, however, please be assured that it is encrypted during transmission.
Other optional examination will be added based upon the requester's choice.
(Please note that the examination fee is to be paid by individuals.)

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Please fill out necessary information and send to us. Our information center will contact you in return.
Please note that we may not be able to accept your reservation if your preferable date is within two weeks.
Please be assured as the reservation form is encrypted even though this form is shown in the frame and the browser is not shown with a key mark to indicate SSL (encryption).
The other examination(s) as an option is added if applicants desired to do so. (Please note that applicants are responsible for examination fee(s) including optional examination(s)

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Please fill out necessary information and send it to us. Our information center will contact you in return.
Please note that we may not be able to accept your reservation if your preferable date is within two weeks.
Please be assured as the reservation form is encrypted even though this form is shown in the frame and the browser is not shown with a key mark to indicate SSL (encryption).
The other examination(s) as an option is added if applicants desired to do so. (Please note that applicants are responsible for examination fee(s) including optional examination(s)

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1, In this CD, "thea lottery ticket of the release event" is enclosed.
But this is a lottery ticket so not everyone can go.
It is not the same as single CD. Album is more expensive then single CD so I can't buy many CDs...
2, They are in high spirits and look happy
3,I thought you were using false eyelash but you just use your eyeliner .

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1, In this CD, "a lottery ticket of the release event" is enclosed.
But this is a lottery ticket so not everyone can go.
It is not the same as single CD. An album is more expensive then a single CD so I can't buy many ...
2, They are in high spirits and look happy
3,I thought you were using false eyelash but you just use your eyeliner .

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I have several questions I would like some answers to please.

Is this item a smaller prototype of the normal size?
The serial number ending 497 indicates a prototype.

Is it paint break specification? (specifications that the paint on the neck is not applied)

Is there a specification sheet attached to the crown?

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I have several questions I would like you to answer, please.

Is this item a smaller prototype of the normal size?
The serial number ending 497 indicates a prototype.

Is it made to paint break specification? (specifications that the paint on the neck is not applied)

Is there a specification sheet attached to the crown?

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→The meaning was, "I have to cancel the order once because the item that I had sent came back to me. I am sorry about the confusion. In return, I would like to refund you $3."

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→The meaning was, "I have to cancel the order once because the item that I had sent came back to me. I am sorry about the confusion. In return, I would like to refund you $3."

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However, we do not recommend participation by babies and very young children much by considering the volume of the speakers, etc. during the live concert.
If they would like to participate in it, we recommend that they see the concert at a seat that is far from the speakers.

Notes:
In participation of this event, we request that you must observe the following notes.

When we witness that you act by violating the notes and you do not follow the instruction of the staff on the day, we might stop holding the event or ask you to leave the hall.

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However, considering the volume of the speakers, etc. during the live concert, we do not recommend that babies and very young children attend the concert.
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If you are bringing them to the concert, we recommend that they sit far from the speakers.

Notes:
When attending this event, we request you to observe the following points.

If it is found that you are violating these points, and you do not follow the instructions of the staff on that day, we might stop holding the event or ask you to leave the hall. We appreciate your understanding.