Fujisawa (fujisawa_2014) — 付けたレビュー

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Is (B) same as (A) which you talk about in your mail ? I like (B) so much too.
Near by my work, there is a restaurant which provides (B), and I go to there every few weeks.

Tomorrow is my birthday. I won't be able to say I'm in my twenties anymore LOL.
When I look back my twenties, I remember lot of things with fun or with regret. One thing I regret with that I have not studied English well! I want to be able to speak in English, even just a little bit within a year from now.

What you want for your birthday?

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Is (B) same as (A) which you talk about in your mail ? I like (B) so much too.
Near by my work, there is a restaurant which provides (B), and I go to there every few weeks.

Tomorrow is my birthday. I won't be able to say I'm in my twenties anymore LOL.
When I look back on my twenties, I remember a lot of things with fun or with regret. One thing I regret is that I have not studied English well! I want to be able to speak in English, even just a little bit, within a year from now.

What you want for your birthday?

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Hello.
It's been ○ months since I got in this situation, and in the meanwhile, I have made every effort to improve my business.

That is because I am still eager to do business on the platform you are managening.

In the past few months, I have taken a hard look at all the mistakes I made and sought the solutions. I will never make the same mistake again.

Could you please give me the sale permission once again?
Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

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Hello.
It's been ○ months since I got in this status S, and in the meanwhile, I have made every effort to improve my business.

That is because I am still eager to do business on the platform you are managing.

In the past few months, I have taken a hard look at all the mistakes I made and sought the solutions. I will never make the same mistakes again.

Could you please give me the sale permission once again?
Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

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It is foolish that we have 20 percent rework in order to increase the purchase price by 5 percent. We have to change the supplier immediately, and reduce the rework.
However, it is not sufficient only to change the supplier again.
We have to consider why we had changed to the supplier that we have business with now.
The original problem is an assessment standard of the purchasing department.
Even if it is less than the standard price, it is quite contradictiory if we use the wood that produces 20 percent rework.
Regarding the quality of the wood, we have to set the assessment standard, and make the purchasing department be responsible for the quality of the wood.

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It is foolish that we face 20 percent of rework in order to decrease the purchase price by 5 percent. We have to change the supplier immediately, and reduce the rework.
However, it is not sufficient only to change the supplier again.
We have to consider why we had changed to the supplier that we have business with now.
The original problem is the assessment standard of the purchasing department.
Even if it is less than the standard price, it is quite contradictiory if we use wood that produces 20 percent rework.
Regarding the quality of the wood, we have to set an assessment standard, and make the purchasing department be responsible for the quality of the wood.

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If you don't mind the age of the building, the rent for an apartment having one room is 60000-70000yen on average.
But it may be not a reinforced concrete apartment but a wooden apartment.
If you choose a very old room without bathroom, you can rent it by cheaper than 30000yen.
But I do't recommend the room which is too cheap. You may see a ghost there.
My friend, who lives in Nishi-Ogikubo, says his room have one room and one kitchen and the rent is 63000yen.

Wow! you speak out Japanese when you least expect it, don't you?
I don't think that is unusual.
Maybe that man saw you could speak Japanese and envied you.

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If you don't mind the age of the building, the rent for an apartment having one room is 60000-70000yen on average.
But it may be not a reinforced concrete apartment but a wooden apartment.
If you choose a very old room without bathroom, you can rent it by cheaper than 30000yen.
But I do't recommend a room that is too cheap. You may see a ghost there.
My friend, who lives in Nishi-Ogikubo, says his room have one room and one kitchen and the rent is 63000yen.

Wow! you speak out Japanese when you least expect it, don't you?
I don't think that is unusual.
Maybe that man saw you could speak Japanese and envied you.

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Unfortunately, 60 days of production lead time is too long.
As our customer needs the product early December, we need to send the product to Yamato by November 11th.

Quantity request is as follows:
Towel: 1000 pieces
Monogram letter: jaxson and GROHE

Our customer wants to see a few samples before they place an order.
If you can meet the delivery date mentioned above, please reply to us as soon as possible.

Could you also send us the image which is placed on your pamphlet together with Frette?
If you do not have the data, please scan the pamphlet. We want the front page and inner page.

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Unfortunately, 60 days of production lead time is too long.
As our customer needs the product early December, we need to send the product to Yamato by November 28th.

Request is as follows:
Towel: 1000 pieces
Monogram letter: jaxson and GROHE

Our customer wants to see a few samples before they place an order.
If you can meet the delivery date mentioned above, please reply to us as soon as possible.

Could you also send us the image which is placed on your pamphlet together with Frette?
If you do not have the data, please scan the pamphlet. We want the front page and inner page.

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The item was ready for shipping, and we were able to receive the item after payment.
However, according to the delivery details received to day, there are only about 50 pieces of clothes we could receive.
To what extent of the item shipping stauts shall we trust to send the money?
Due to the issue of the shipping content this time, our client considers you are not trustworthy.
It would be acceptable if it was within the reasonable range of the quantity change, but the present status does not make any sense to us.
Is there any way you could change back to the delivery details as were stated on the invoice we received two weeks ago?

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The item was ready for shipping, and we were able to receive the item after payment.
However, according to the delivery details received today, there are only about 50 pieces of clothes we could receive.
To what extent shall we trust the item shipping stauts to send the money?
Due to the issue of the shipping content this time, our client considers we are not trustworthy.
It would be acceptable if it was within the reasonable range of the quantity change, but the present status does not make any sense to us.
Is there any way you could change back to the delivery details as they were stated on the invoice we received two weeks ago?

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You informed us that the products were ready and would be shipped once we credit the fee to your account.
However, the latest shipping notice we received today says there are only 50 units that I can receive.
I wonder if we can trust your shipping note before crediting the fee.
The problem about shipping quantity made our clients distrust your company.
It is acceptable to have just a minor change in quantity, but what happned was beyond our understanding.
Isn't it possible for you to make it in line with the shipping note stated on the invoice you sent us two weeks ago?

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You informed us that the products were ready and would be shipped once we credit the fee to your account.
However, the latest shipping notice we received today says there are only 50 units that we can receive.
I wonder if we can trust your shipping note before crediting the fee.
The problem about shipping quantity made our clients distrust our company.
It is acceptable to have just a minor change in quantity, but what happned was beyond our understanding.
Isn't it possible for you to make it in line with the shipping note stated on the invoice you sent us two weeks ago?

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Recently I received the goods I ordered,there are so many differences compared with the original one that I own.
Is this really original one?
In addition, did you check the condition of it? This does not show anything even it is connected to the main unit.
It would be a defective, I require you to change good one or refund.
Of course, I send the goods immediately.
So, please let me know the return address.
I just uploaded the movie to show the evidence that it is defective,please check the URL below.

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Recently I received the goods I ordered,there are so many differences compared with the original one that I own.
Is this really an original one?
In addition, did you check the condition of it? This does not show anything when it is connected to the main unit.
It seems to be a defective product, I require you to change for a good one or give me a refund.
Of course, I will send the goods immediately.
So, please let me know the return address.
I just uploaded the movie to show the evidence that it is defective,please check the URL below.

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Although I have received the ordered item the other day, I noticed it has quite a few differences from the original one I have with me.
Is this really original?
And did you conduct an inspection properly? Nothing shows when connecting this one with the main machine.
It seems to be a defected item, so please replace or refund.
Of course, I will return the item right away.
So, please let me know the return shipping address.

Anyways, please check the below URL as I have uploaded the movie as a proof of the defected item.

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Although I have received the ordered item the other day, I noticed it has quite a few differences from the original one I have with me.
Is this really original?
And did you conduct an inspection properly? Nothing shows when connecting this one with the main machine.
It seems to be a defected item, so please replace or give me a refund.
Of course, I will return the item right away.
So, please let me know the return shipping address.

Anyways, please check the below URL as I have uploaded the movie as a proof of the defected item.

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I received the product I ordered other day. But there are quite a few discrepancies comparing to an original product I already have.
Is your product really an original?
Also, did you check the product before shipping? Nothing is displayed when I connect it to the main unit.
Since it looks like it's a defective unit, send me a replacement or refund me.
Of course, I will return the product I received.
So, please send me the return address.

As I uploaded a movie to show that the product is defective, please check the URL below.

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I received the product I ordered other day. But there are quite a few discrepancies comparing to an original product I already have.
Is your product really an original?
Also, did you check the product before shipping? Nothing is displayed when I connect it to the main unit.
Since it looks like it's a defective unit, send me a replacement or a refund.
Of course, I will return the product I received.
So, please send me the return address.

As I uploaded a movie to show that the product is defective, please check the URL below.

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Below are my requested conditions.
I'm free from 9:00-17:00 on 14th.
-Commute by MRT
-Budget: maximum S$3200
-Area: over 500sqft
-Desirably separated rooms instead of studio type
*Separate (bedroom/living)
-Partially furnished/installed large electronics (refridgerator/washing machine) requested
(Remarks) Only I will be staying, but my wife would be frequently visit. So please introduce places which Japanese women would have no problem with.

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Below are my requested conditions.
I'm free from 9:00-17:00 on 14th.
-Commute by MRT
-Budget: maximum S$3200
-Area: over 500 sqft
-Desirably separated rooms instead of studio type
*Separate (bedroom/living)
-Partially furnished/installed large electronics (refrigerator/washing machine) requested
(Remarks) Only I will be staying, but my wife would visit frequently. So please introduce places which Japanese women would have no problem with.

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Thanks for using our service.
Regarding LA-50 you purchased, item will be forwarded from Australia which made delivery mistake.
We already sent replacement from our side, too.
That means you will receive 2 items.
However, since it was our fault you do not need to return it.
Please use both of them.
We are very sorry for the inconvenience caused you this time. We look forward to serving you again if there is a chance.

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Thanks for using our service.
Regarding LA-50 you purchased, the item will be forwarded from Austria to where it was delivered by mistake.
We already sent a replacement from our side, too.
That means you will receive 2 items.
However, since it was our fault you do not need to return it.
Please use both of them.
We are very sorry for the inconvenience caused you this time. We look forward to serving you again if there is a chance.

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I am sorry the message had not been properly send to you.

The product is SA-2 for T3, not SA-1.

We will receive your canceled product.

Please send the product to the address below.

Once we receive the product,we will pay you back the product cost deducting the mailing fee via PAYPAL.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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I am sorry the message had not been properly sent to you.

The product for T3 is SA-2, not SA-1.

We will receive your canceled product.

Please send the product to the address below.

Once we receive the product, we will pay you back the product cost deducting the shipping fee via PAYPAL.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

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When we send out roses, we can attach a message card. (Message card is free-service)
In case you would like a message card, Please send us your message for the card by 5pm ,Oct.9th (JST)

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When we send out the roses, we can attach a message card. (Message card is a free-service)
In case you would like a message card, Please send us your message for the card by 5pm, Oct.9th (JST)

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I would like to split the package (Package ID：00-682-3193) and try to do this procedure online, but I have received an e-mail to notify that it's impossible.
What is the problem here?
If I can't spilt the package, could you please tell me the reasons for that?
If it's possible, please go through the procedure for me immediately.
I don't mind paying $15 for the designated fee.

Please make some arrangements as soon as possible.

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I would like to split the package (Package ID：00-682-3193) and try to do this procedure online, but I have received an e-mail notifying me that it's impossible.
What is the problem here?
If I can't spilt the package, could you please tell me the reasons for that?
If it's possible, please go through the procedure for me immediately.
I don't mind paying $15 for the designated fee.

Please make the arrangements as soon as possible.

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Thank you for ordering A and B this time.
There are 2 things I would like to ask for your confirmation:
1. AA that you ordered is the replacement blade for BB, is this okay with you?
2. Since you ordered 2 items, may I pack them together for shipment? In this case, we could give you $2.5 discount, so we will refund it after shipment.

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Thank you for ordering A and B this time.
There are 2 things I would like to ask for your confirmation:
1. AA that you ordered is not the replacement blade for BB, is this okay with you?
2. Since you ordered 2 items, may I pack them together for shipment? In this case, we could give you $2.5 discount, so we will refund it after shipment.↵
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I shall be waiting for your message.

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● I purchased the item for the purpose of resale.
In the country where I sell the item, the BOX is considered as a part of the product, and they are very nervous about its condition, too. Please be sure to pack and ship it thoroughly to avoid a spot, a scratch, or a dent on it.
Also, it would be happy to get the item shipped as soon as possible.
Sorry to bother you but your cooperation is appreciated.

● THank you for your contact.
Your cooperation is appreciated.

● Are you sure the box has not been opened?
Are you sure there are not any spots, scratches, or dents on the box?
Because I am planning to buy the item for resale, please let me know.

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● I purchased the item for the purpose of resale.
In the country where I sell the item, the BOX is considered as a part of the product, and they are very fastidious about its condition, too. Please be sure to pack and ship it thoroughly to avoid a spot, a scratch, or a dent on it.
Also, it would be happy to get the item shipped as soon as possible.
Sorry to bother you but your cooperation is appreciated.

● Thank you for your contact.
Your cooperation is appreciated.

● Are you sure the box has not been opened?
Are you sure there are not any spots, scratches, or dents on the box?
Please let me know because I am planning to buy the item for resale.

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●I purchased a product for sale use.
In the country where I do the business, BOX is also thought to be a part of the product and people are very nervous in a state of BOX.
Please pack it carefully so that there are no stain, scratch or dent on BOX and send it out.
In addition, I am happy when you may send out the product as soon as possible.
I apologize for bothering you, but thank you very much in advance.

●Thank you for contacting me.
Thank you for your cooperation.

●Has the box not been opened yet?
Are there any stain, scratch or dent on the box?
Please tell me because I'm considering the purchase for sale use.

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●I purchased a product for sale use.
In the country where I do the business, the BOX is also thought to be a part of the product and people are very fastidious about the state of the BOX.
Please pack it carefully so that there are no stains, scratchs or dents on the BOX and send it out.
In addition, I would be happy if you send out the product as soon as possible.
I apologize for bothering you, but thank you very much in advance.

●Thank you for contacting me.
Thank you for your cooperation.

●Has the box not been opened yet?
Are there any stains, scratchs or dents on the box?
Please tell me because I'm considering the purchase for sale use.

元の翻訳
We have already contacted Amazon regarding this matter and it seems that the best method would be for you to cancel your order through Amazon. To do this please follow the steps described below.

(How to cancel the order)

Once we have the item in stock again we offer you to buy it at the same price. We are very sorry for all the trouble this has caused to you this time.

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We have already contacted Amazon regarding this matter and it seems that the best method would be for you to cancel your order through Amazon. To do this please follow the steps described below.

(How to cancel the order)

Once we have the item in stock again we will offer it you at the same price. We are very sorry for all the trouble this has caused to you this time.

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• Photos of your company history
• Photos of gift wrapping
• List of website for online sales
• Price list
• Inventory status until next year (items to be production cancelled)

Please pack the following items together when you ship packages to us.
• Sample for variety of fabrics (even though defective fabric but we can see texture and patterns)
• 50 copies each of catalog published with product for this season and Jacadi catalog
(Not in Japanese but in English your company is using)

In addition, we have several questions;

• If your products are published in magazine, please give us photos used by that magazine.

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• Photos of your company history
• Photos of gift wrapping
• List of website for online sales
• Price list
• Inventory status until next year (items to be discontinued)

Please pack the following items together when you ship packages to us.
• Samples for a variety of fabrics (even defective fabrics as long as we can see texture and patterns)
• 50 copies each of the catalog published with products for this season and Jacadi catalog
(Not in Japanese but the English catalog your company is using)

In addition, we have several questions;

• If your products have been published in magazines, please send us the photos of these magazines.