遠藤 (bhendo) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
私は追加割引有りで購入できる製品の写真を送って頂けるよう依頼しただけで、無礼等しているつもりはありません。私は侮辱する気は全くありません。もし、そのように感じさせることがあったのでしたら、すみませんでした。

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私は割引の適用有りで購入できる製品の写真を送って頂けるよう依頼しただけで、無礼等しているつもりはありません。私は侮辱する気は全くありません。もし、そのように感じさせることがあったのでしたら、すみませんでした。

元の翻訳
ありがとうございます。今までの長い道のりもありましたから、今後は本当に問題なく進んで欲しいと思います。それに、輸入のために証明が必要ですので、急がなければいけません。良いお知らせをお待ちしております。

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ありがとうございます。今までの長い道のりもありましたから、今後は本当に問題なく進んで欲しいと思います。それに、輸入するために証明が必要ですので、急がなければいけません。良いお知らせをお待ちしております。

元の翻訳
The packing of the product in the recent shipments have been changed as attachment 1.
Sometimes, we ship the product to our customers using the same package, and the simple vinyl package have been an issue for us. Thus, can you please return to the old thick plastic package that have a hard sheet inside, as attachment 2?

Regarding the order of last week, we don't mind the handling fee of 30 euros to be charged, so please proceed with the order with this quantity.

Besides, we could not find the images of the series below, so can you send images of them as much as possible?

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The packing of the product in the recent shipments have been changed as shown in attachment 1.
Sometimes, we ship the product to our customers using the same package, and the simple vinyl package has been an issue for us. Thus, can you please return to the old thick plastic package that has a hard sheet inside, as shown in attachment 2?

Regarding the order placed last weekend, we don't mind being charged the handling fee of 30 euros, so please proceed with the order with this quantity.

Also, we could not find the images belonging to the series below, so can you please send as many images from this series as possible?

元の翻訳
REQUEST FOR QUOTATION
We are now considering to purchase from your company the product XXX during this month.
Thus, we kindly request for a quotation considering the following conditions to be sent to us by tomorrow end of the day.
Please send us separated sheets of quotations for PANTONE1 and PANTONE2.
We are discussing if we will take the PANTONE1 or PANTONE2 color.
We are preparing the design of the package, the letter to be attached and the contents of the manual.
As soon as it is concluded, we will send the data.

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REQUEST FOR QUOTATION
We are now considering to order XXX from your company during this month.
Thus, we kindly request a quotation considering the following conditions to be sent to us by the end of the day tomorrow.
Please make separate quotations for PANTONE1 and PANTONE2.
We are discussing whether we will take the PANTONE1 or PANTONE2 color.
We are preparing the design of the package, the letter to be attached and the contents of the manual.
As soon as it is concluded, we will send the data.

元の翻訳
REQUEST FOR QUOTATION
We are now considering to purchase from your company the product XXX during this month.
Thus, we kindly request for a quotation considering the following conditions to be sent to us by tomorrow end of the day.
Please send us separated sheets of quotations for PANTONE1 and PANTONE2.
We are discussing if we will take the PANTONE1 or PANTONE2 color.
We are preparing the design of the package, the letter to be attached and the contents of the manual.
As soon as it is concluded, we will send the data.

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REQUEST FOR QUOTATION
We are now considering to purchase from your company the product XXX within this month.
Thus, we kindly request for the quotation considering the following conditions to be sent to us by the end of tomorrow .
Please prepare separate quotations for PANTONE1 and PANTONE2.
We are discussing if we will take the PANTONE1 or PANTONE2 color.
We are preparing the design of the package, the attached document, and the contents of the manual.
As soon as they are completed, we will send the data.

元の翻訳
Sorry for such many questions.
Is that some way to avoid images uploaded to be converted to PNG files?
Whenever I upload JPG files, it is converted to PNG. The size of the files increases a lot.
Besides, the height x width relation becomes smaller automatically as well. Is there something I can do?

I can not understand English very well, but this script seems to overload my server and API server, right?↵
I am worried about that.

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I apologize for the barrage of questions,↵

Is there any way for me to stop all my photos uploaded from being turned into PNG format?
JPG files end up as PNG when I upload them and the file size increases substantially.
Also, I have a similar issue with the aspect ratio automatically getting smaller; is there a way to avoid this?

I don't really understand English. This script (Japanese font) bogs up both my server and the API server doesn't it? I'm a little concerned about that.

元の翻訳
ＩＤＣによるとインドのスマートホン輸入は2013年第2四半期で3倍に上昇し、その結果他国では長く繰り広げられているチャットアプリの競争はインドではまだ試合開始したばかりだ。WhatsAppの創立者ジャン・コウン氏はインドに8月の段階で当社アプリのユーザーが月間２千万人いたと述べた。一方、GlobalWebIndex社が発表した調査では中国でWeChatメッセージサービスが当国の使用量５位であった。

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ＩＤＣによるとインドのスマートフォン輸入は2013年第2四半期で3倍に上昇し、その結果他国ではとっくの昔に終了しているチャットアプリの競争はインドではまだ予想のつかない競争だ。WhatsAppの創立者ジャン・コウン氏はインドに8月の段階で自社アプリのユーザーが月間２千万人いたと述べた。一方、GlobalWebIndex社が発表した調査では中国のWeChatメッセージサービスが当国の使用量５位であった。

元の翻訳
現在 Zookal　は東南アジアでも英語を使う人口が密集している地域に拡大の焦点を絞っている。既にシンガポールとマレーシアに合弁会社を設け、来年には市場規模が更に大きく収益性の高いインドネシアの市場に進出する予定。また、シンガポールに事業本部を設置の最中である。
アハメッド氏は　StartupSmart　に次のように語っている：

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現在 Zookalは東南アジアでも英語を使う人口が密集している地域に拡大の焦点を絞っている。既にシンガポールとマレーシアに合弁会社を設け、来年には市場規模が更に大きく収益性の高いインドネシアの市場に進出する予定。また、シンガポールに事業本部を設置の最中である。
Ahmed氏は　StartupSmartに次のように語っている。

元の翻訳
地球の温度上昇はオーストラリアの動植物の種類に影響を及ぼすと予想される。先日、気候変動に関する政府間パネルで発表された地球上の平均温度の２～４度の上昇によりオーストラリアの２１～３６％の蝶々類を全滅させ、Queensland生息地の半減により、爬虫類の７～１４％、カエル類の８～１８％、鳥類の１割、哺乳類の１０～１５％が行き場をなくすことになる。
Queensland大学生物科学部所属で移動の調査の共著者のTracy Rout氏はGuardian Autralia誌に種類移動は科学者間でも議論の項目であると述べる。

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地球の温度上昇はオーストラリアの動植物の種類に影響を及ぼすと予想される。先日、気候変動に関する政府間パネルで発表されたレポートによると、地球上の平均温度の２～４度の上昇によりオーストラリアの２１～３６％の蝶類を全滅させ、Queensland生息地の半減により、爬虫類の７～１４％、カエル類の８～１８％、鳥類の１割、哺乳類の１０～１５％が行き場をなくすことになるという。
Queensland大学生物科学部所属で移動の調査の共著者であるTracy Rout氏は、Guardian Autralia誌に種類移動は科学者間でも議論の的になっていると述べている。

元の翻訳
Hello.

I am XXXX who placed an order on Sep, 20th.
Order No. 3160152

Was my order received?
Was my credit card approved?
When will the product be shipped?

I will be waiting for some contact

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Hello.

I am XXXX who placed an order on Sep, 20th.
Order No. 3160152

Was my order received?
Was my credit card approved?
When will the product be shipped?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thanks for the contact and for reactivating my account.
I am really happy to be able to sell goods through ebay again.

I will follow strictly the advice I received in this opportunity from you and seek for the full satisfaction of the buyers, succeeding my business and developing a long lasting prosperity with your company.

I would appreciate for further orientations and colaboration.
Best Regards,

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Thanks for the contact and for reactivating my account.
I am really happy to be able to sell goods through ebay again.

I will follow strictly the advice I have received from you and seek to deliver high customer satisfaction. Also I would like to succeed my business and develop a long lasting prosperity with your company.

I would appreciate for any further guidance and encouragement.
Best Regards,

元の翻訳
Thanks for the contact and for reactivating my account.
I am really happy to be able to sell goods through ebay again.

I will follow strictly the advice I received in this opportunity from you and seek for the full satisfaction of the buyers, succeeding my business and developing a long lasting prosperity with your company.

I would appreciate for further orientations and colaboration.
Best Regards,

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Thanks for the contact and for reactivating my account.
I am really happy to be able to sell goods through ebay again.

I will follow strictly with the advice I have received in this opportunity and seek for the full satisfaction of the buyers so that I could succeed my business and develop a long lasting prosperity with your company.

I would appreciate for further orientations and colaboration.
Best Regards,

元の翻訳
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Obrigado pelo tempo dispensado para ler esse e-mail e esperamos poder contribuir para o seu negócio.

Atenciosamente

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Prazer encontrá-lo no Evento.
Foi um evento muito interessante para mim.

Foi bom saber que existem muitas companhias asiáticas no mercado e compreendi a importância de focar nesse mercado.

Nós oferecemos serviços de tradução para globalizar seus produtos ou identificar diferentes mercados. Se você tiver interesse em traduções, ficaremos mais que felizes em apresentar nossos serviços.

Obrigado pelo tempo dispensado para ler esse e-mail e esperamos poder contribuir para o seu negócio.

Atenciosamente