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元の翻訳
Eメールをありがとうございます。注文の品を送らせていただきますのでお知らせいたします。中国からの出荷ではなく、あなたがDHLを利用しているように、私達も別の会社を利用しています。DHLアカウントの所有者ということですので、あなたはDHLのサイトにて注文の登録を行い、確認のために私にEメールを送っていただく必要がございます。確認のEメールを確認次第注文の品を早急に出荷いたします。

何かご質問、ご意見等ありましたら遠慮なくご連絡ください。

注文を受け付けました。しかし、現在ある在庫品のやかんは注ぎ口にステンレスの鋼球が付いていないものになります。それに、やかんは現在ちょうど作られている最中です。用意が出来次第、貴方に連絡し、注文の品を送らせていただきます。

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Eメールをありがとうございます。注文の品を送らせていただきますのでお知らせいたします。中国からの出荷ではなく、あなたがDHLを利用しているように、私達も別の会社を利用しています。DHLアカウントをお持ちだということですので、DHLのサイトにて注文の登録を行い、確認のために私にEメールを送っていただくけますでしょうか。確認のEメールを確認次第注文の品を早急に出荷いたします。

何かご質問、ご意見等ありましたら遠慮なくご連絡ください。

注文を受け付けました。しかし、現在ある在庫品のやかんは注ぎ口にステンレスの鋼球が付いていないものになります。それに、やかんは現在ちょうど作られている最中です。用意が出来次第、貴方に連絡し、注文の品を送らせていただきます。

元の翻訳
Please reply without fail.

I have emailed you repeatedly, but I’m writing you again since you haven’t responded.
As for the visa stay period, you said there was no need to correct it, but when I contacted the Uzbekistan Embassy in Japan, they told me they would only issue a visa for just 1 day.
In this manner, I can’t report about the event, so please correct the stay period as soon as possible.
We don’t have much time left. Please find attached the correct application form again.

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Please reply without fail.

I have emailed you repeatedly, but I’m writing you again since you haven’t responded.
As for the visa stay period, you said there was no need of correction, but when I contacted the Uzbekistan Embassy in Japan, they told me they would only issue a visa for just 1 day in this condition.
In this manner, I can’t report about the event, so please correct the stay period as soon as possible.
We don’t have much time left. Please find attached the correct application form again.

元の翻訳
Please reply without fail.

I have been e-mailing several times, but I' sending you again because of no response from you.
Regarding the length of stay, I was told by you that I would not need to revise it. However, as I contacted the embassy of Uzbekistan in Japan, they told me that I would be granted a visa which would enable me to stay only for 1 day.

With my current status as stated above, I cannot cover the competition. Therefore please extend the period of my stay at soonest.

I have not much time left.
I also attach here the amended application form again.

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Please reply without fail.

I have been e-mailing several times, but I' sending you again because of no response from you.
Regarding the length of stay, I was told by you that I would not need to revise it. However, as I contacted the embassy of Uzbekistan in Japan, they told me that I would be granted a visa which would enable me to stay only for 1 day.

With my current status as stated above, I cannot cover the competition. Therefore please extend the period of my stay at the soonest.

I have not much time left.
I also attach here the amended application form again.

元の翻訳
I found now. I have not found an error in the website of "What is your production environment?"
But I see the error in the website of demonstration and my website,

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I have noticed now that I do not found an error in the website on your production website.
But I see the errors in the demonstration website and my website,

元の翻訳
We can list "gift" in invoice and "used camer(lens)" in name of the item.

However, we do not list a lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of ebay.

We apologize to you.

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We can list the item as a "gift" in invoice. and "used camer(lens)" as the name of the item.

However, we do not list a lowered price of the item since it violates a policy of eBay.

We apologize to you.

元の翻訳
Have you shipped the item A?
I have not received the AWB number from you yet?

If you have shipped the item A, would you please let me know the AWB number?
If you have not, would you tell me when it would be shipped.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Have you shipped the item A?
I have not received the AWB number from you yet.

If you have shipped the item A, would you please let me know the AWB number?
If you have not, would you tell me when it would be shipped.

Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Regarding Tracking Number 420342389400111899561328745397
It is written on it 'Leather' but it is not real leather material.
It is the same items as that of tracking number 420342389400111899561328745151.
Could you please re-check this.

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Regarding Tracking Number 420342389400111899561328745397
It is written on it 'Leather' but it is not real leather material.
It is the same items as that of tracking number 420342389400111899561328745151.
Could you please re-check this?

元の翻訳
I will be arriving in Osaka in early evening on Monday.
I will leave from Osaka in early evening on Thursday.
I would like to arrange appointments of some customers during your available time.
And, I will be with my father for this trip. He told me that he really wanted to see you in Osaka.

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I will be arriving in Osaka in early evening on Monday.
I will leave from Osaka in early evening on Thursday.
I would like to arrange appointments of some customers during your available time.
I will be with my father for this trip for he would like to see you in Osaka.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message. The foundation is HappyMake, a brand produced Japan’s famous beautician Teruko Kobayashi. We were selling it mainly through TV mail order. The package may have been a limited one.
For your reference, here is the link:

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Thank you for your message. The foundation is HappyMake, a brand produced by a famous Japanese beautician Teruko Kobayashi. We were selling it mainly through TV mail order. The package may have been a limited one.
For your reference, here is the link:

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message. The foundation is by a brand called HappyMake which was produced by a famous Japanese beautician Teruko Kobayashi. It was mainly sold through home shopping programs. The package may have been limited edition.
Here is the webpage for your reference.

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Thank you for your message. The foundation is by a brand called HappyMake which was produced by a famous Japanese beautician Teruko Kobayashi. It was mainly sold through home television shopping programs. The package may have been limited edition.
Here is the webpage for your reference.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
The cotton we use is from India and Pakistan and has passed Japanese safety standards, in other words, organic cotton.
Also, there are chemicals used in the dying process, these have also passed Japanese safety standards.

Sorry, but there are no plans at this stage to establish a line of organic products.

Thank you kindly.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The cotton we use is from India and Pakistan and has passed Japanese safety standards, in other words, not organic cotton.
Also, there are chemicals used in the dying process, these have also passed Japanese safety standards.

Sorry, but we curretly have no plans at this stage to establish a line for organic products.

Thank you kindly.

元の翻訳
Nice to see you're alive and well. I'm fine. You will be able to see your baby soon! Though I think that you will be easy tired, and the daily have painful to continue in your lower back finally, but don't be unreasonable.
I respect you that is still working.
Did Jason move safely? Great. Both of you two do your best. Hope spend relaxing feeling anyway until birth date. I really want to be able to speak English until the day we see. I have asked Conyac to translate.

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Nice to see you're alive and well. I'm fine. You will be able to see your baby soon! Though I think that you will be easy get tired, and the daily have pain continuously in your lower back in the fanal stage, so do not work to hard.
I respect you are still working.
Did Jason move safely? Great. Both of you two do your best. Hope spend relaxing feeling anyway until birth date. I really want to be able to speak English until the day we see. I have asked Conyac to translate.

元の翻訳
I am grad to hear that you seem doing fine. I am also doing fine. You must be able to meet your baby, aren't you? Take it easy as actually you are going to get tired easily and continue having back ache and hard day in and day out in the final stage of delivery.
I really respect you still working.
Have Jason moved out without any trouble? Great, you two are doing very good. Just spend yourself feeling comfortable until the delivery. I really hope that I could speak English by the day I would actually meet you. Now, I request the Conyac for the translation.

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I am grad to hear that you seem doing fine. I am also doing fine. You must be able to meet your baby, aren't you? Take it easy as actually you are going to get tired easily and continue having back ache and hard day in and day out in the final stage of delivery.
I really respect you still working.
Have Jason moved without any trouble? Great, you two are doing very good. Just spend yourself feeling comfortable until the delivery. I really hope that I could speak English by the day I would actually meet you. Now, I request the Conyac for the translation.

元の翻訳
I could ship it tomorrow, so if we arranged the special delivery, the item should arrive at the address in Yokohama by the day after tomorrow. Are you planning to carry it to your country then?

Once you receive the item, please open the status of the item and let me know.
Best regards.

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I could ship it tomorrow, so if we arranged the special delivery, the item should arrive at the address in Yokohama by the day after tomorrow. Are you planning to carry it to your country then?

Once you receive the item in Yokohama, please open the status of the item and let me know.
Best regards.