Mars16 (mars16) — Written Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 02 Aug 2014 at 23:07
original It is possible that your company use the co-working space of our company. I expect the number of people that can use it would be about 2-3 people. The co-working space is located in our office. Address is as follows. You will need to complete the application, so if you wish to use it please let me know.	corrected You can use our co-working space. We expect about 2-3 people can use it. The co-working space is located in our office. Address is as follows. You will need an application for the space, so if you wish to use it please let us know.

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 02 Aug 2014 at 23:28
original 上海オフィスのmessers様（CC:6pm Ltdの池田さん、Life Design Ltdの鈴木さん）先日、モデルナンバー200001と200003（弊社セメントモデルナンバーC250）のメタルスタンド追加の件について弊社Pennyとお話し頂いたと思います。その節は有難うございました。最終コメントは以下の通りです。 1.　残念ながら、以下の理由により、メタルスタンドの追加はできません。 -　メタルスタンドを別途発送してほしいとのことですが、残念ながら、穴の大小を問わず、現在のブラックバックケースにはこのメタルスタンドを嵌め込むことはできません。	corrected 上海オフィスのmessers様（CC:6pm社の池田さん、Life Design社の鈴木さん）先日、御社のモデルナンバー200001と200003（弊社セメントモデルナンバーC250）へのメタルスタンド追加の件につきまして私の同僚Pennyと電話でお話し頂き、有難うございました。最終的なコメントを以下の通りさせていただきます。 1.　残念ながら、以下の理由により、すでに発送している商品にメタルスタンドを追加することはできません。 -　ご指摘のとおり大小を問わず、別送を希望されている現ブラックバックケースにある穴にはこのメタルスタンドを嵌め込むことはできません。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

02 Aug 2014 at 23:28

original
上海オフィスのmessers様（CC:6pm Ltdの池田さん、Life Design Ltdの鈴木さん）
先日、モデルナンバー200001と200003（弊社セメントモデルナンバーC250）のメタルスタンド追加の件について弊社Pennyとお話し頂いたと思います。その節は有難うございました。
最終コメントは以下の通りです。
1.　残念ながら、以下の理由により、メタルスタンドの追加はできません。
-　メタルスタンドを別途発送してほしいとのことですが、残念ながら、穴の大小を問わず、現在のブラックバックケースにはこのメタルスタンドを嵌め込むことはできません。

corrected
上海オフィスのmessers様（CC:6pm社の池田さん、Life Design社の鈴木さん）
先日、御社のモデルナンバー200001と200003（弊社セメントモデルナンバーC250）へのメタルスタンド追加の件につきまして私の同僚Pennyと電話でお話し頂き、有難うございました。
最終的なコメントを以下の通りさせていただきます。
1.　残念ながら、以下の理由により、すでに発送している商品にメタルスタンドを追加することはできません。
-　ご指摘のとおり大小を問わず、別送を希望されている現ブラックバックケースにある穴にはこのメタルスタンドを嵌め込むことはできません。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 03 Aug 2014 at 10:59
original The outside and inside of kettle must not be washed. it is generally clean by boiling the tea several times. never touch the inside. The inside of kettle will never be touched. Same thing happens to Teapot of Chinese tea. It is troubled if you return broken kettle. Accepted partial refund is 35 dollars. There is no problem to use in America. The outlet shape is the same. The product will be delivered with well packed using buffer material.	corrected The outside and inside of kettle must not be washed. it is generally clean by boiling tea several times. Never touch the inside. The inside of kettle will never be touched. Same thing happens to Teapot of Chinese tea. It is troubled if you return your broken kettle. Accepted partial refund is 35 USD. There is no problem to use in the US. The outlet shape is the same. The product will be delivered with well packed using buffer material.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

03 Aug 2014 at 10:59

original
The outside and inside of kettle must not be washed.
it is generally clean by boiling the tea several times.
never touch the inside.
The inside of kettle will never be touched.
Same thing happens to Teapot of Chinese tea.
It is troubled if you return broken kettle.
Accepted partial refund is 35 dollars.

There is no problem to use in America.
The outlet shape is the same.
The product will be delivered with well packed using buffer material.

corrected
The outside and inside of kettle must not be washed.
it is generally clean by boiling tea several times.
Never touch the inside.
The inside of kettle will never be touched.
Same thing happens to Teapot of Chinese tea.
It is troubled if you return your broken kettle.
Accepted partial refund is 35 USD.

There is no problem to use in the US.
The outlet shape is the same.
The product will be delivered with well packed using buffer material.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 30 Jul 2014 at 21:52
original We received the information from your company that you received the missing one shoe of a pair of shoes. Since your company does not allow to ship a pair of shoes if one shoe is missing, right? We have inquired and checked with the Japanese customs’ office and the transportation company until today. Japanese customs’ office told us that they never opened that shoes box. What we would like to confirm is that your company was sure to ship the missing shoe. We understood that your staffs underwent the training for the inspection. However, human tend to make mistake. This is our request again. Please check your storage.	corrected I received the information (from you) that you received the missing one of a pair of shoes. Since you do not allow to ship a pair of shoes if one shoe is missing, right? We have inquired and checked with the Japanese custom office and the transportation company until today. Japanese custom office told us that they never opened that shoes box. What we would like to confirm is that you were sure to ship the missing shoe. We understood that your staff underwent the training for the inspection. However, human tend to make mistakes. This is our request again. Please check your storage.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

30 Jul 2014 at 21:52

original
We received the information from your company that you received the missing one shoe of a pair of shoes.
Since your company does not allow to ship a pair of shoes if one shoe is missing, right?
We have inquired and checked with the Japanese customs’ office and the transportation company until today.
Japanese customs’ office told us that they never opened that shoes box.

What we would like to confirm is that your company was sure to ship the missing shoe.
We understood that your staffs underwent the training for the inspection.
However, human tend to make mistake.
This is our request again.
Please check your storage.

corrected
I received the information (from you) that you received the missing one of a pair of shoes.
Since you do not allow to ship a pair of shoes if one shoe is missing, right?
We have inquired and checked with the Japanese custom office and the transportation company until today.
Japanese custom office told us that they never opened that shoes box.

What we would like to confirm is that you were sure to ship the missing shoe.
We understood that your staff underwent the training for the inspection.
However, human tend to make mistakes.
This is our request again.
Please check your storage.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 30 Jul 2014 at 21:33
original I will re-announce what I have constantly want to do. It is that you pay back to me all the money including shipping fee. However, I will pay the shipping fee if you want. All items I received are junk and if you are kind to your customers, my request is justified.	corrected I will re-announce what I have constantly want to do. It is that you pay back to me all the money including shipping fee. However, I will pay the shipping fee if you want. All items I received are junk and if you are kind to your customers, my request is justified.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 30 Jul 2014 at 21:37
original Please expedite to ship those packaged 2466,02280. Your prompt action is appreciated as they need to be shipped COB. By the way, how come do the same invoices need to be sent over time? The package sent from A wold always include an invoice. It is shown on the package 7670. That is the same and the only invoice I have with me, too. That's all I have got. I don't really see the point of submitting the same invoice for twice.	corrected Please expedite to ship those packaged 2466 and 2280. Your prompt action is appreciated as they need to be shipped COB. By the way, how come do the same invoices need to be sent over time? The package sent from A would always include an invoice. It is shown on the package 7670. That is the same and the only invoice I have with me, too. That's all I have got. I don't really see the point of submitting the same invoice for twice.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

30 Jul 2014 at 21:37

original
Please expedite to ship those packaged 2466,02280.
Your prompt action is appreciated as they need to be shipped COB.

By the way, how come do the same invoices need to be sent over time?

The package sent from A wold always include an invoice.
It is shown on the package 7670.
That is the same and the only invoice I have with me, too.
That's all I have got.
I don't really see the point of submitting the same invoice for twice.

corrected
Please expedite to ship those packaged 2466 and 2280.
Your prompt action is appreciated as they need to be shipped COB.

By the way, how come do the same invoices need to be sent over time?

The package sent from A would always include an invoice.
It is shown on the package 7670.
That is the same and the only invoice I have with me, too.
That's all I have got.
I don't really see the point of submitting the same invoice for twice.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 16:05
Comment 冒頭の一文（とくにwhich we do）の構造がよく分かりませんでした。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 16:00
original Thank you for your message. Understood. Since you didn't receive the product, I will reimburse you. Thanks in advance. I apologize for the inconvenience caused. Thank you for your message. Have you received your tracking number? I can verify for you. I apologize for the inconvenience. When you know it, please send me your tracking number. Thank you for your message. Because the address was invalid, the product got returned. I apologize but I will send it again. The following will be your tracking number.	corrected Thank you for your message. Understood. Since you didn't receive the product, I will reimburse you. Thanks in advance. I apologize for the inconvenience caused. Thank you for your message. Have you received your tracking number? I can verify it for you. I apologize for the inconvenience. If I could find the tracking number, I will notify you. Thank you for your message. Because the address was invalid, the product got returned. I apologize but I will send it again. The following will be your tracking number.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

26 Jul 2014 at 16:00

original
Thank you for your message.
Understood.
Since you didn't receive the product, I will reimburse you.
Thanks in advance.
I apologize for the inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.
Have you received your tracking number? I can verify for you.
I apologize for the inconvenience.
When you know it, please send me your tracking number.

Thank you for your message.
Because the address was invalid, the product got returned. I apologize but I will send it again. The following will be your tracking number.

corrected
Thank you for your message.
Understood.
Since you didn't receive the product, I will reimburse you.
Thanks in advance.
I apologize for the inconvenience caused.

Thank you for your message.
Have you received your tracking number? I can verify it for you.
I apologize for the inconvenience.
If I could find the tracking number, I will notify you.

Thank you for your message.
Because the address was invalid, the product got returned. I apologize but I will send it again. The following will be your tracking number.

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 26 Jul 2014 at 11:56
original 他の選択肢は貴店が2,200ドルで出品していた時計のバンドの長さを調べることかもしれません。他の時計の20cmのバンドと入れ替えることが出来れば、腕時計をすることができるので購入したいです。この件に関する貴店のお考えを教えてください。	corrected 他の選択肢は貴店が2,200ドルで出品（？）していた時計のバンドの長さを調べることかもしれません。他の時計の20cmのバンドと入れ替えることが出来れば、腕時計として手につけられるので購入したいです。この件に関する貴店のお考えを教えてください。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 11:50
Comment ２段落目の第４文が抜けました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 11:59
Comment 無駄のない分かりやすい英文だと思いました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2014 at 16:15
original Please send out as soon as you are ready. We have received ◎◎, ◯◯, and ▲▲.	corrected Please send it out as soon as you are ready. We have received ◎◎, ◯◯, and ▲▲.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 16:41
original Thank you for your message. Regarding to the items, I will contact when I send them. Best regards, Thank you for your message. I'm sorry but regarding to the items, I cancelled them. I will pay back all the amount. Thank you for your message I got it. Regarding to the high price items, It is high possible to be caught by the tariff. So I think that it will take time to be held in there. Thank you for your message. I got it. I will make the refund procedures when this problem is solved.	corrected Thank you for your message. Regarding to the items, I will contact you when I send them. Best regards, Thank you for your message. I'm sorry but regarding to the items, I cancelled them. I will pay back all the amount. Thank you for your message. I got it. Regarding to the high price items, It is high possible to be caught by the tariff inspection. So I think that it will take time to be held in there. Thank you for your message. I got it. I will make the refund procedures when the settlement is cleared.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

25 Jul 2014 at 16:41

original
Thank you for your message.
Regarding to the items, I will contact when I send them.
Best regards,

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry but regarding to the items, I cancelled them.

I will pay back all the amount.

Thank you for your message
I got it.
Regarding to the high price items, It is high possible to be caught by the tariff.
So I think that it will take time to be held in there.

Thank you for your message.
I got it.
I will make the refund procedures when this problem is solved.

corrected
Thank you for your message.
Regarding to the items, I will contact you when I send them.
Best regards,

Thank you for your message.
I'm sorry but regarding to the items, I cancelled them.

I will pay back all the amount.

Thank you for your message.
I got it.
Regarding to the high price items, It is high possible to be caught by the tariff inspection.
So I think that it will take time to be held in there.

Thank you for your message.
I got it.
I will make the refund procedures when the settlement is cleared.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 16:47
Comment 的確な訳だと思います

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 19:41
Comment 4番目の文章が原文と異なると思いました。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 19:16
original It has passed two weeks. How's the getting of stocks and the progress of the renewal of web site? Did the top page change? I want know what I can do now, if there is something to do please tell me. I guess you're busy because there are few contacts with me, but in case there is some misunderstanding, I confirm things. All items I ordered will be samples, so you can make just one item for one order. I'm waiting for your contact.	corrected It has passed two weeks. How's the getting of stocks and the progress of the renewal of website? Did the top page change? I want to know what I can do now. If there is something to do, please tell me. I guess you're busy because there are few contacts with me, but in case there is some misunderstanding, I would like to tell you this. All items I order will be samples, so you can make just one item for one order. I'm waiting for your contact.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

22 Jul 2014 at 19:16

original
It has passed two weeks. How's the getting of stocks and the progress of the renewal of web site?

Did the top page change?

I want know what I can do now, if there is something to do please tell me.
I guess you're busy because there are few contacts with me, but in case there is some misunderstanding, I confirm things.
All items I ordered will be samples, so you can make just one item for one order.

I'm waiting for your contact.

corrected
It has passed two weeks. How's the getting of stocks and the progress of the renewal of website?

Did the top page change?

I want to know what I can do now. If there is something to do, please tell me.
I guess you're busy because there are few contacts with me, but in case there is some misunderstanding, I would like to tell you this.
All items I order will be samples, so you can make just one item for one order.

I'm waiting for your contact.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 19:42
original This item was delivered to the customer on 6/30 from sender unknown. Its tracking number and url are follows: Sorry to bother you, but would you please cancel the refund?	corrected This item was delivered to the customer on June 30 from sender unknown. Its tracking number and url are follows: Sorry to bother you, but would you please cancel the refund?

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 18 Jul 2014 at 12:19
original FM802 "RADIO MAGIC ON AIR" 7:00-10:00	corrected FM802 "RADIO MAGIC ON AIR" 7:00PM -10:00PM

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 18 Jul 2014 at 12:07
Comment 参考になります

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 18 Jul 2014 at 12:14
original The item I ordered on July 13 has not yet been shipped. I am contacting you because delivery is taking a great deal longer than usual. Please provide information on the status of this shipment immediately. I also ask that you expedite your shipping procedures. Order number: 00-187-3920	corrected The item I ordered on July 13 has not yet been shipped. I am contacting you because delivery is taking a great deal longer than usual. Please provide information on the status of this shipment immediately. Further, I am very pleased if you could start your shipping procedures as soon as possible. Order number: 00-187-3920

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 14 Jul 2014 at 12:35
original I apologize that another person in charge (Facebook in charge) response to you wrongly. Please be assured that our ordering department understood the content definitely.	corrected I apologize that another person in charge (Facebook in charge) responded to you wrongly. Please be assured that our ordering department understands the situation definitely.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 14 Jul 2014 at 12:37
original Thank you for contacting us. Kindly find our below response to you. - Your item has been ordered to the wholeseller. The expected delivery date is July 31, and our shipping date will be on Aug 2. - If you wish to order now, we will enclose the $10 worth gift card which is good in Amazon US. - Your item will be shipped via EMS (with a tracking number) from Japan Post. To a destination in US, it should be delivered within 3-5 days. - The invoice price will be claimed as JPY 50, 000, which is US$508.	corrected Thank you for contacting us. Kindly find our below response to you. - Your item has been ordered to the wholeseller. The expected delivery date is July 31, and our shipping date will be on Aug 2. - If you wish to order now, we will enclose the $10 worth gift card which is good in Amazon US. - Your item will be shipped via EMS (with a tracking number) from Japan Post. To a destination in the US, it should be delivered within 3-5 days. - The invoice price will be claimed as JPY 50, 000, which is US$508.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English

14 Jul 2014 at 12:37

original
Thank you for contacting us.
Kindly find our below response to you.

- Your item has been ordered to the wholeseller. The expected delivery date is July 31, and our shipping date will be on Aug 2.
- If you wish to order now, we will enclose the $10 worth gift card which is good in Amazon US.
- Your item will be shipped via EMS (with a tracking number) from Japan Post. To a destination in US, it should be delivered within 3-5 days.
- The invoice price will be claimed as JPY 50, 000, which is US$508.

corrected
Thank you for contacting us.
Kindly find our below response to you.

- Your item has been ordered to the wholeseller. The expected delivery date is July 31, and our shipping date will be on Aug 2.
- If you wish to order now, we will enclose the $10 worth gift card which is good in Amazon US.
- Your item will be shipped via EMS (with a tracking number) from Japan Post. To a destination in the US, it should be delivered within 3-5 days.
- The invoice price will be claimed as JPY 50, 000, which is US$508.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 14 Jul 2014 at 12:47
original このフィギュアが製造、販売された場所を教えていただけませんか？また、子供が遊んでも安全でしょうか？台風の影響で放射能汚染された可能性があると聞き、質問させていただきました。規制はありますか？	corrected こんにちは。このフィギュアが製造、販売された場所を教えていただけませんか？また、子供が遊んでも安全でしょうか？台風の影響で放射能汚染された可能性があると聞き、質問させていただきました。規制はありますか？

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 25 Jul 2014 at 16:52
original If you still would like to see it, I would suggest you to stay away from speakers. ※We will start establishing "females/children are" around 9:30 on the day. Please accept that stuff may ask you to move, or move your belongs if you or your belongs are there to take seats. ■About sell of CDs	corrected If you still would like to see it, I would suggest you to stay away from speakers. ※We will start establishing "females/children area" around 9:30 on the day. Please accept that stuff may ask you to move, or move your belongings if you or your belongings are there to take seats. ■About CD sales

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 09 Jul 2014 at 12:42
original もちろんここで重要なのは紙の自撮りではない。むしろウィルス性のマーケティングである。RMB 8000 (約 US$1290)で販売されているWelomoプリンターを所有する企業は写真レイアウトの一部をカスタマイズが可能だ。駄菓子屋用に一台購入して会社のロゴを下の隅に貼り付け、あなたのの会社のWeChat公式アカウント用QRコードの隣に添えるのだ。名刺として2倍の効果を生み出すのはもはや自撮りなのだ。	corrected もちろんここで重要なのは紙の自撮りではない。むしろウィルス性のマーケティングである。8000人民元 (約1290米ドル)で販売されているWelomoプリンターを所有する企業は写真レイアウトの一部をカスタマイズすることが可能だ。駄菓子屋用に一台購入して会社のロゴを下の隅に貼り付け、あなたの会社のWeChat公式アカウント用QRコードの隣に添えるのだ。名刺として2倍の効果を生み出すのはもはや自撮りなのだ。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese

09 Jul 2014 at 12:42

original
もちろんここで重要なのは紙の自撮りではない。むしろウィルス性のマーケティングである。RMB 8000 (約 US$1290)で販売されているWelomoプリンターを所有する企業は写真レイアウトの一部をカスタマイズが可能だ。駄菓子屋用に一台購入して会社のロゴを下の隅に貼り付け、あなたのの会社のWeChat公式アカウント用QRコードの隣に添えるのだ。名刺として2倍の効果を生み出すのはもはや自撮りなのだ。

corrected
もちろんここで重要なのは紙の自撮りではない。むしろウィルス性のマーケティングである。8000人民元 (約1290米ドル)で販売されているWelomoプリンターを所有する企業は写真レイアウトの一部をカスタマイズすることが可能だ。駄菓子屋用に一台購入して会社のロゴを下の隅に貼り付け、あなたの会社のWeChat公式アカウント用QRコードの隣に添えるのだ。名刺として2倍の効果を生み出すのはもはや自撮りなのだ。

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