翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

あなたたちが仕事を辞めるのは私はとても残念に思います。
私たちにとって御社はアメリカでの初めての取引会社でした。
あなた方はほとんど英語が話せない私たちにも、とても親切にしてくれました。
今まで本当にありがとうございました。
今後のことですが、今までどおり私は注文を@yahoo.comに送ればよいでしょうか？
私は9月にUSAに行くので、8月22日に注文をしようと考えています。

英語

I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company.

You are the first company we started our business in the USA. You were very kind to us who were not good at English.
Thank you very much for your great support.

For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual?
As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking to make an order on 22 August.

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yyokobaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/08/11 01:53:24

元の翻訳
I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company.

You are the first company we started our business in the USA. You were very kind to us who were not good at English.
Thank you very much for your great support.

For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual?
As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking to make an order on 22 August.

修正後
I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company.

You are the first company we did business with in the USA. You were very kind to us who could barely speak English.
Thank you very much for your great support.

For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual?
As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking of placing an order on 22 August.