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元の翻訳
Shanghai－@JAM in Shanghai, 2015

@JAM, a girls pop culture group, has been performing at festivals which name is "KAWAII POP FES" in overseas. This time, they perform in omnibus style, "@JAM" style, same as in Japan!

TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be on the stage, @JAM in Shanghai, 2015! TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE debut in Shanghai!

Event details
Festival title: @JAM in Shanghai, 2015
Date: June 28, 2015
Venue: 上海浅水湾文化艺术中心

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Shanghai－@JAM in Shanghai, 2015

@JAM, a girls pop culture group, has been performing at festivals which name is "KAWAII POP FES" in overseas. This time, they perform in omnibus style, "@JAM" style, same as in Japan!

TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE will be on stage, @JAM in Shanghai, 2015! TOKYO GIRLS' STYLE debut in Shanghai!

Event details
Festival title: @JAM in Shanghai, 2015
Date: June 28, 2015
Venue: 上海浅水湾文化艺术中心

元の翻訳
Although we have done to transfer to you today but I did not know the account of the holder's name.
Kindly could you tell me the account holder's name please.

And I was attached photo but is that able to eliminate the inside of the hole?
If you are able to improve it, please do so.
A card is shaved as shown in the photograph.
Would you please also issue of a invoice 00.

A new box is ready with high perfection.
I will send it one of the box to you, please have a look it and the cost will be $3 per box.
Also have already found a high technique of the company to put 00 name.
Titanium characters are as much as possible to black colour, because carbon has been dug deeply
the characters, therefore,these are very clear. Kindly have a look at photos.

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Although we have tried to transfer to you today but I did not know the account holder's name.
Kindly could you tell me the account holder's name please?

And I attached a photo but is it possible to eliminate the the hole inside?
If you are able to improve it, please do so.
A card is shaved as shown in the photograph.
Would you please also issue a invoice 00.

A new box is ready with high quality.
I will send one of the box to you, please have a look at it and the cost will be $3 per box.
Also I have already found a high technique company to put 00 name.
Titanium characters are as much as possible to black colour, because carbon has been dug deeply
the characters, therefore,these are very clear. Kindly have a look at photos.

元の翻訳
Today I arranged for making a payment, but I did not know name of the account.
Would you let me know name of the account?
I attached a photo. Could you delete a hole inside? If you can, could you delete it?
The card is shaved like a picture.
May I ask you to issue the invoice of 00?

I completed a new box. It is completed in high quality.
I will send 1 box to you.. Please see it. 1 box is 3 dollars.
I found a company that offers the best technology to engrave the name of 00.
As titan makes the characters black as much as possible and carbon is engraved deeply, the characters are clear. Why don't you see the photo?

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Today I arranged for making a payment, but I did not know the name of the account.
Would you let me know the name of the account?
I attached a photo. Could you delete a hole inside? If you can, could you delete it?
The card is shaved like a picture.
May I ask you to issue the invoice of 00?

I completed a new box. It is completed in high quality.
I will send 1 box to you.. Please see it. 1 box is 3 dollars.
I found a company that offers the best technology to engrave the name of 00.
As titan makes the characters black as much as possible and carbon is engraved deeply, the characters are clear. Why don't you see the photo?

元の翻訳
From now on, our aim is to search for shops selling in department store. For the retail market of shoes on the internet, Rakuten holds over 70% of the share. Our selling points as we planned are Rakuten and mass retailers.
Shoe shops are being handled by agency on the condition of consignment. 4 years before, the agency handled only up to retailing, but now they are actively do business with shoe shops by limiting to handling part numbers.
As another mass retailer. we have sports stores. As we don't know the wholesale conditions, we now work on research and marketing.

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From now on, our aim is to search for shops selling in a department store. For the retail market of shoes on the internet, Rakuten holds over 70% of the share. Our selling points as we planned are Rakuten and mass retailers.
Shoe shops are being handled by agency on the condition of consignment. 4 years before, the agency handled only up to retailing, but now they are actively do business with shoe shops by limiting to handling part numbers.
As another mass retailer. we have sports stores. As we don't know the wholesale conditions, we now work on research and marketing.

元の翻訳
In the future from now on, we have a purpose to sale a store in department store. Rakuten company has held more than 70% of sales share in internet market. Our sales contract and customers will be Rukuten and quantities, in bulk of the buyers. The shoes specialty stores are basically through agencies with sales on commission of condition that deal with the products. Until past four years ago, the agencies were not accepted to sale the retails but now, they try to make sale positively to the specialty shoes store that put limited the numbers. We have another way to sale the mass retailers that will be sports stores,
But we do not know a wholesale trade of the details in sport market yet, therefore will research and go to business.

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From now on, we have a purpose to find a store selling in department store. Rakuten company has held more than 70% of sales share in internet market. Our sales contract and customers will be Rukuten and quantities, in bulk of the buyers. The shoes specialty stores are basically through agencies with sales on commission of condition that deal with the products. Until four years ago, the agencies were not accepted to sale the retails but now, they try to make sale positively to the specialty shoes store that put limited the numbers. We have another way to sale the mass retailers that will be sports stores,
But we do not know a wholesale trade of the details in sport market yet, therefore will research and go to business.

元の翻訳
NEW ALBUM "WALK OF MY LIFE" with limited presents!

NEW ALBUM "WALK OF MY LIFE" when bought will include promotion poster size B2 as present of gratitude for early customers.

SHIPPING:
Released on 2015.03.18 "WALK OF MY LIFE"
<CD+DVD> RZCD-59745/B￥4,212 (tax included)
<CD+DVD> RZCD-59746/B￥4,968 (tax included)

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NEW ALBUM "WALK OF MY LIFE" with limited presents!

NEW ALBUM "WALK OF MY LIFE" purchase will include a promotion poster sized B2 as a present of gratitude for early customers.

SHIPPING:
Released on 2015.03.18 "WALK OF MY LIFE"
<CD+DVD> RZCD-59745/B￥4,212 (tax included)
<CD+DVD> RZCD-59746/B￥4,968 (tax included)

元の翻訳
Because this case is not a fault of the item.
While at first we explain as "Full refund of items will be paid after arrival of the item", even in such case, do we need to pay the shipment fee of items?

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Because this case is not a fault of the item.
While at first we explain as "Full refund of items will be paid after arrival of the item", even in such case, do we need to pay the shipment fee of the items?

元の翻訳
このケースを自力で解決することは、貴社には次のようないくつかの利益があります。
• 貴社がより良い買い手経験を提供することが、より良いフィードバックと詳細な売り手評価という結果になる可能性があります。
• 本件は、貴社の売り手パフォーマンス水準に対する「売り手側の決定のない解決済みのケース」とはされません。
• PayPalの販売基金は、訴訟が始まると保留の状態に置かれますが、解除となり払い戻しに当てられます。
• 貴社のeBayおよびPayPal会費は、貴社が払い戻しを行えば、貴社の口座に自動的に入ります。
保留が解除される前に貴社がこの問題を解決していなければ、eBayは以下の措置を取らざるを得なくなります。

修正後
このケースを自力で解決することは、貴社には次のようないくつかの利益があります。
• 貴社がより良い買い手経験を提供することが、より良いフィードバックと詳細な売り手評価という結果になる可能性があります。
• 本件は、貴社の売り手パフォーマンス水準に対する「売り手側の決定のない解決済みのケース」とはされません。
• PayPalにある販売の売上は、アマゾン仲介での争いが始まると保留の状態に置かれますが、解除となり払い戻しに当てられます。
• 貴社のeBayおよびPayPal手数料は、貴社が払い戻しを行えば、貴社の口座に自動的に入ります。
保留が解除される前に貴社がこの問題を解決していなければ、eBayは以下の措置を取らざるを得なくなります。

元の翻訳
詳細のレビュー実施後、商品の返品に伴う送料の支払いが必要になります。
eBayにおける出品者となっていただくため、潜在的購入者との信頼関係を築くことを目的として、2014年9月より特に取り決めがない場合、出品者側が送料の支払いを行うこととしております。
この返品規定により出品者として最終的により売り上げを伸ばすことが可能になります。

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今回のケースの詳細を確認したところ、商品の返品に伴う送料の支払いが必要になります。
eBayにおいて信頼できる出品者となっていただくため、潜在的購入者との信頼関係を築くことを目的として、2014年9月より特に取り決めがない場合、出品者側が送料の支払いを行うこととしております。
この返品規定により出品者として最終的により売り上げを伸ばすことが可能になります。

元の翻訳
このケースの詳細を見直しまして、貴社はこのアイテムの返品に伴う送料の代金を払うべきだと、私は考えます。当社はあなたにeBay所属の売り手として成功して欲しいため、信用と潜在的買い手との関係を構築するための努力の一環として、2014年9月に、アイテムが説明通りでない時は売手は返品送料を払わなければならないと変更しました。これが、小売的な返品経験を生み出すことでしょうが、それが最後には、一層あなたの販売を促進することになるのです。

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このケースの詳細を見直しまして、貴社はこのアイテムの返品に伴う送料の代金を払うべきだと、私は考えます。当社はあなたにeBay所属の売り手として成功して欲しいため、信用と潜在的買い手との関係を構築するための努力の一環として、2014年9月に、アイテムが説明通りでない時は売手は返品送料を払わなければならないと変更しました。これが、小売的な返品機会を生み出すことでしょうが、それが最後には、一層あなたの販売を促進することになるのです。

元の翻訳
Thanks for introducing your little brother.
Is the product your brother is looking for this?
If he's going to buy this product there are other sellers besides me that sell it much more cheaply.
If he decides to buy from me I think it will be well over $300.
This is an item I will be selling again around June, so if he buys around that time I think I can sell it pretty cheap then.
The reason the other sellers are so cheap could be that it's leftover stock from a long time ago, or there's a chance that it could just be the June listing price that was posted by mistake.
If I send it through EMS, it will arrive approximately 3-7 days after shipment.
Please try sharing this information with your brother.
The weekend is my time off so my reply will come at the beginning of next week.

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Thanks for introducing your little brother.
Is this the product your brother is looking for?
If he's going to buy this product there are other sellers besides me that sell it much cheaper.
If he decides to buy from me I think it will be well over $300.
This is an item I will be selling again around June, so if he buys around that time I think I can sell it pretty cheap then.
The reason the other sellers are so cheap could be that it's leftover stock from a long time ago, or there's a chance that it could just be the June listing price that was posted by mistake.
If I send it through EMS, it will arrive approximately 3-7 days after shipment.
Please try sharing this information with your brother.
The weekend is my time off so my reply will come at the beginning of next week.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry to disappoint you.

All the Casio 3500 is produced at the CASIO factories in Thailand.
It is the same as all the iPhones are assembled at the factories in China.

I did all of the followings upon your request;

- I have replied that this watch is genuine
- I have taken the photo of this watch and sent to you
- I have sent the watch via EMS without any additional charge

Why didn't you ask if this watch is made in Japan?
I feel so sad to receive such message even though I did all my best.

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I'm sorry to disappoint you.

All the Casio 3500 is produced at the CASIO factories in Thailand.
It is the same as all the iPhones are assembled at the factories in China.

I did all of the followings upon your request;

- I have replied that this watch is genuine
- I have taken the photo of this watch and sent to you
- I have sent the watch via EMS without any additional charge

Why didn't you ask if this watch was made in Japan?
I feel so sad to receive such message even though I did all my best.

元の翻訳
I am very sorry for the delayed response.

Thank you very much for your inquiry.
Do you want me to deliver the bicycle that you requested as a finished product?
Or do you want have it in parts?

If you want it as a finished product, then I want to let you know in advance that the shipping charge would be high. If possible, please let me know the URL, name and model (if known) for the product you want.

I will check for the shipping charge and the approximate delivery days.
Thank you.

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I am very sorry for the delayed response.

Thank you very much for your inquiry.
Do you want me to deliver the bicycle that you requested as a finished product?
Or do you want to have it in parts?

If you want it as a finished product, then I want to let you know in advance that the shipping charge would be high. If possible, please let me know the URL, name and model (if known) for the product you want.

I will check for the shipping charge and the approximate delivery days.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for contacting you so late.

Thank you for your inquiry.
Was it your wish for us to send a completely assembled bicycle per your request?
That, or did you want it in parts?

If you want a completely assembled bicycle the shipping fees will be quite expensive, so if that is what you would prefer please let us know in advance. If possible, please send the requested product URL, name, and the number of parts (if it is split).

We will look into the shipping costs and approximately how many days it will take to get there.
Thank you very much.

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I am sorry for contacting you so late.

Thank you for your inquiry.
Was it your wish for us to send a completely assembled bicycle?
Or did you want it in parts?

If you want a completely assembled bicycle the shipping fees will be quite expensive, so if that is what you would prefer please let us know in advance. If possible, please send the requested product URL, name, and the number of parts (if it is split).

We will look into the shipping costs and approximately how many days it will take to get there.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the inquiry again.
You can buy AR-OPF01, which you're looking for, from the following URL.
I will give you as much discount as possible if you order some.
The price and discount rate change depending on when you order it because of a fluctuation of the cost price and exchange rate.
Please ask me again if you can get a discount when you decide to order it.
If you have an interest in some other AA, don't hesitate to ask it to me.
Thank you.

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Thank you for the inquiry again.
You can buy AR-OPF01, which you're looking for, from the following URL.
I will give you as much discount as possible if you order some.
The price and discount rate change depending on when you order it because of a fluctuation of the cost price and an exchange rate.
Please ask me again if you can get a discount when you decide to order it.
If you have an interest in some other AAs, don't hesitate to ask me.
Thank you.