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元の翻訳
こんにちは。申し訳ありませんが金の状況が悪くなった原因でオーダーをキャンセルしていただきたいんです。不便を起こして本当に申し訳ありませんでした。
K. Batty

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こんにちは。申し訳ありませんが金の状況が悪くなったのでオーダーをキャンセルしていただきたいんです。不便を起こして本当に申し訳ありませんでした。
K. Batty

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
We are very sorry.
The product you ordered will be delivered to you by next week to the latest.
If you also consider ordering other products, we can post them to you all together.
If you still have something unclear, please feel free to let us know.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
We are very sorry for keeping you waiting.
The product you ordered will be delivered to you by next week at the latest.
If you also consider ordering other products, we can mail them to you all together.
If you still have something unclear, please feel free to let us know.

元の翻訳
2/25(Wednesday) Performance in「Dodesuka！」

DAICHI MIURA Interview Performance！

ME TV「Dodesuka！」
Schedule：2/25（Wednesday）6:00~scheduld on air

http://www.nagoyatv.com/dode/

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2/25(Wednesday) Performance [word choice] in「Dodesuka！」

DAICHI MIURA Interview Performance [word choice]！

ME TV「Dodesuka！」
Schedule：2/25（Wednesday）6:00~scheduld [spelling] on air [unclear]

http://www.nagoyatv.com/dode/

元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
After going to the post office, I know that I have made a big mistake. I chose "Saipan" instead of "Spain" to be printed on the shopping labels. The products are in New York now and will be delivered to Spain. It will take some days before these products will be delivered to you. I am really sorry for my mistake. In order to show our sincerity, we refund half of the price to you. I am sorry for this and please wait for a few moments.

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Thank you for the message.
After going to the post office, I happened to know that I had made a big mistake. I chose "Saipan" instead of "Spain" to be printed on the shopping labels. The products are in New York now and will be delivered to Spain. It will take some days before these products are delivered to you. I am really sorry for my mistake. In order to show our sincerity, we will refund half of the price to you. I am sorry for this and please wait for a few moments.

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Hi, My name is XXX.
We are talking about purchasing below products.

Product name: yyyyy
Item number:123456

We want to know the quality and facial expressions before purchasing.
We want you to reply this message with some photos showing the whole image, face and quality of the product.
We hope to hear from you soon.

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Hi, my name is XXX.
We are interested in purchasing the below products.

Product name: yyyyy
Item number:123456

We want to know about the quality and facial expressions before purchasing.
We want you to reply to this message with some photos showing the whole image, face and quality of the product.
We hope to hear from you soon.

元の翻訳
バックルを使用していないので前にあなたにあげた値段と同じように値下げしました 、sc のコストは 425 ドルです。

あなたに言ったように今回私は送料金を出しますのでもしよかったらPayPalで仕入れ書をお送りします。仕入れ書は以下の通り：　CD　330ドル、 SC 425ドル(合計 755ドル)、また画像内のもう一つのバッグが欲しいなら (金属プレートのブラウンバッグ) 270 ドルであげられます。違いは、インテリアは亜麻布で作られています。

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バックルを使用していないので前にあなたにあげた値段と同じように値下げしました 、sc のコストは 425 ドルです。

あなたに言ったように今回私は送料を出しますのでもしよかったらPayPalで請求書をお送りします。請求書の内容は以下の通り：　CD　330ドル、 SC 425ドル(合計 755ドル)、また画像内にある別のバッグが欲しいなら (金属プレートのついたブラウンバッグ) 270 ドルであげられます。違いは、内部が亜麻布で作られていることです。

元の翻訳
お茶のサービスを評価した後ようやくあなたに連絡ができるのです。実は私の夫がパッケージを受け取りして状態をチェックしたけどあの黄色い紙を上げてみなかった。そして今日は私の誕生日ですのでその商品を取り出してみたら、残念なことに、ティーポットのふたが壊れています。↵
あなたはそれをどう対応するのかを教えてください。たとえそれをもう一度粘っても美しくないのでこの値段で考えたら私はとても失望的かつ悲しいでした。

ありがとうございます。

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お茶のサービスを評価した後ようやくあなたに連絡ができるのです。実は私の夫がパッケージを受け取りして状態をチェックしたけどあの黄色い紙を上げてみなかった。そして今日は私の誕生日ですのでその商品を取り出してみたら、残念なことに、ティーポットのふたが壊れています。あなたはそれをどう対応するのかを教えてください。たとえそれをもう一度粘っても美しくないのでこの値段で考えたら私はとても失望的かつ悲しかたです。

ありがとうございます。

元の翻訳
In addition, when I look at the size number of this price list, I have one question.
Why there is only option M1?
I think the configuration method of this product is to weld the thread of option M2 into the pipe and then screw the joint of option M1. If there is only option M1, this product cannot be set up.

I wonder if it is normal practice for customers to prepare the thread or this product can be set up only by the joint.
Please tell me the instructions if possible.

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In addition, when I look at the size number of this price list, I have one question.
Why is there only option M1?
I think the configuration method of this product is to weld the thread of option M2 into the pipe and then screw the joint of option M1. If there is only option M1, this product cannot be set up.

I wonder if it is normal practice for customers to prepare the thread or this product can be set up only by the joint.
Please tell me the instructions if possible.

元の翻訳
I received the product a few days ago, but today when I was listening to it, its volume became aloud suddenly and cannot be controlled.
The volume increased after listening for about 5 minutes.
The situation didn't change no matter how many times I tried.
The output was unstable with ups and downs from time to time.
It was really a pity.
I want to repair it, so can I pay the reparation fee via PayPal?
I went to the reparation store and they told me it would cost me 300 dollars, which is not cheap.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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I received the product a few days ago, but today when I was listening to it the volume became loud suddenly and couldn't be controlled.
The volume increases after listening for about 5 minutes.
The situation didn't change no matter how many times I tried.
The output is unstable with ups and downs from time to time.
It is really a pity.
I want to repair it, so could you send me a payment to cover the repairs via PayPal?
I went to a repair store and they told me it would cost 300 dollars, which is not cheap.
I hope to hear from you soon.

元の翻訳
I received the product a few days ago, but today when I was listening to it, its volume became aloud suddenly and cannot be controlled.
The volume increased after listening for about 5 minutes.
The situation didn't change no matter how many times I tried.
The output was unstable with ups and downs from time to time.
It was really a pity.
I want to repair it, so can I pay the reparation fee via PayPal?
I went to the reparation store and they told me it would cost me 300 dollars, which is not cheap.
I am looking forward to your reply.

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I received the product a few days ago, but today when I was listening to it, its volume became aloud suddenly and cannot be controlled.
The volume increased after listening for about 5 minutes.
The situation didn't change no matter how many times I tried.
The output was unstable with ups and downs from time to time.
It's completely broken.↵
It was really a pity.
I want to repair it, so can I pay the reparation fee via PayPal?
I went to the repair shop and they told me it would cost me 300 dollars, which is not cheap.
I am looking forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
All the products in our store is sold through PDF data download.
You can place order from anywhere in the world.
You can use PayPal or credit card to settle your payment.
(Bank payment is only limited within Japan)
We sincerely look forward to your visit next time.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
All the products in our store is sold as PDF data downloads.
You can place an order from anywhere in the world.
You can use PayPal or credit card to settle your payment.
(Bank payment is only available within Japan)
We sincerely look forward to your visit next time.

元の翻訳
I wan to confirm one thing about the delivery.
The bath mat I ordered at the beginning of this month is still not arrived in Japan.
Below is the list of ordered items and its ordering date.

Below item arrived on Jan.27.

Large sized color: I heard ivory is the back order, so is other color also back color?
If the items have been delivered, could you tell me the tracking number of the items with ordering data Jan.6, Jan.9 and Jan.13?
I will try to contact with the delivery company that usually receives my item.

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I want to confirm one thing about the delivery.
The bath mat I ordered at the beginning of this month is still not arrived in Japan.
Below is the list of ordered items and its ordering date.

Below item arrived on Jan.27.

Large sized color: I heard ivory is the back order, so is other color also back color?
If the items have been delivered, could you tell me the tracking number of the items with ordering data Jan.6, Jan.9 and Jan.13?
I will try to contact with the delivery company that usually receives my item.

元の翻訳
In liquor drinks I especially like wine, but I am not familiar with Spain produced wine. Therefore, although it is a hard-earned family trip, my father is also addicted with liquors, we both participated in the trip.
It was very fun! After looking at VTR, I visited winery and tasted wine! Besides, although is is Frecyne's hippo, th explanation is full of knowledge we haven't heard before .

Sitges was very feel like a resort. Unlike Japan, I wanted to be at the fascinating beaches of the Mediterranean forever.

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In liquor drinks I especially like wine, but I am not familiar with Spain produced wine. Therefore, although it is a hard-earned family trip, my father is also addicted to liquors, we both participated in the trip.
It was very fun! After watching a VTR, I visited winery and tasted wine! Besides, although it is Frecyne's hippo, the explanation is full of knowledge we haven't heard before .

Sitges was very feel like a resort. Unlike Japan, I wanted to be at the fascinating beaches of the Mediterranean forever.

元の翻訳
Sorry if we had given giving misleading information to your customers. We will promptly fully refund if it is canceled. But, because it is the 40 exclusive models of limited edition in Japan, there is no change that they are very valuable. Top maple is made of the figure of the finest grade from a huge amount of stock in excess of 1,000 sheets, we use the wood chosen in consideration of the matching of the color. If you buy, you will have "the The Beauty Of The Burst" as a present. We look forward to your reply.

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Sorry [wrong register] if we gave you misleading information. We will promptly fully refund if you cancel your order. However, because it is the 40 exclusive models of limited edition in Japan [awkward], it does not change the fact that they are very valuable. Top maple is made of the figure of the finest grade from a huge amount of stock in excess of 1,000 sheets, [comma splice] we use the wood chosen in consideration of the matching of the color. If you buy, you will have "The Beauty Of The Burst" as a present. We look forward to your reply.