Susumu Fukuhara (susumu-fukuhara) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
WE have planned and are currently implementing the above plans and management controls to reform the above mentioned issues
[] Revision of the pricing system
--> We have identified a problem in the present program we use, and are current underway in rectifying it.
[] All listings have been stopped for new items until the above error in the program can be remedied and the current stock price can be adjusted.
[] When the new .csv file is uploaded, there will be a checking routine in place to evaluate the actual uploaded data and the applicable items for consistency over pricing

修正後
WE have planned and are currently implementing the above plans and management controls to reform the above mentioned issues
[] Revision of the pricing system
--> We have identified a problem in the present program we use, and the rectificaiton is currently underway.
[] All listings have been stopped for new items until the above error in the program can be remedied and the current stock price can be adjusted.
[] When the new .csv file is uploaded, there will be a checking routine in place to evaluate the actual uploaded data and the applicable items for pricing consistency.

元の翻訳
We are currently planning and implementing the following management system in order to solve the aforementioned problems.
- A review of our price management system.
*Problematic programs have been detected and are currently undergoing revision.
- A complete stop of new product registration until the above program errors have been fixed the prices of items currently in stock have been revised.
- Routine checks if there are any inconsistencies between the data that has actually been uploaded and the set price of applicable products when uploading a new CVS file.

修正後
We are currently planning and implementing the following management system in order to solve the aforementioned problems.
- A review of our price management system.
*Problematic programs have been detected and are currently being revised.
- New product registration is now put on hold and will not resume the process until the above program errors have been fixed and the prices of items currently in stock have been revised.
- Routine checks if there are any inconsistencies between the data that has actually been uploaded and the set price of applicable products when uploading a new CVS file.

元の翻訳
I apologize that the performance has dropped down drastically lately.

I am really sorry for the rise of canceling rate.

The cause of raising cancel rate is some items had been uploaded with wrong price that is much lower than preferred price because of the error of price adjusting system when uploading the csv files.

修正後
I apologize that the performance has drastically dropped down lately.

I am really sorry for the rise of cancellation rate.

The rising cancellation rate has been brought upon because some items had been uploaded with wrong prices that are much lower than preferred prices due to the error of price adjusting system when uploading the csv files.

元の翻訳
I sincerely apologize that the performance fell sharply recently.
I am sorry about the cancellation rate rose significantly.
The reason for many cancellation this time is because error has occurred in the price adjustment function in the system when uploading the products in csv. There were some products have ended up uploaded significantly lower than the desired price of original.

修正後
I sincerely apologize that the performance fell sharply recently.
I am sorry about the cancellation rate that rose significantly.
The reason for huge cancellation this time is because error has occurred in the price adjustment function in the system when uploading the products in csv. There were some products which have ended up uploaded significantly lower in price than they have originally intended.

元の翻訳
Initial failure is not intended by our shop on purpose, but because certain number happens as a result in a rare occurrence in manufacturing process.
Please kindly noted.

We have to find out the cause for the initial failure and to confirm the serial number, the product needed to be returned.

It takes one to two months in this case.

Or, if you prefer, we can give you full refund on the same day. (It is not necessary to return the item in this case.)

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Once you fill in the return application, we will refund the full amount on the same day.

Return Reception Center

修正後
Initial failure is not intended by our shop on purpose, but because certain number happens as a result in a rare occurrence of manufacturing process.
Please kindly noted.

We have to find out the cause for the initial failure and to confirm the serial number, the product needed to be returned.

It may take one to two months for that process in this case.

Or, if you prefer, we can give you full refund on the same day. (It is not necessary to return the item in this case.)

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Once you fill in the return application, we will refund the full amount on the same day.

Return Reception Center

元の翻訳
As our store does not occur the initial defect intentionally and certain numbers of the defect occurs rarely in the process of manufacturing by manufacturer, we request that you understand it.

We have to have the item to check the cause of the initial defect and manufacturing number.

In this case, it takes 1 to 2 months.

Or if you agree, we can refund in full on the day(in this case, you do not have to return the item.)

After we process returning the item, we will process returning it and refunding in full on the day.

Center for returned items

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As our store does not cause the initial defect intentionally and certain numbers of the defect occurs rarely in the process of manufacturing by manufacturer, we would appreciate that you understand it.

We have to have the item to check the cause of the initial defect and manufacturing number.

In this case, it may take 1 to 2 months until the check is finished.

Or if you agree, we can refund in full on the day(in this case, you do not have to return the item.)

After we process returning the item, we will process returning it and refunding in full on the day.

Center for returned items

元の翻訳
It would be appreciated if you could understand that initial failure happens not on purpose. Through the manufacturing process, it happens rarely, just sometimes.
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When it happens, we need to keep the item in order to check its manufacturing number and causes.

In this case it might take 1 to 2 months.

Or if you could agree with returning the item, we would refund right away. (You do not need to send the item back.)

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When you finish the procedures of returning the item, we would refund right away.

Returns center.

修正後
It would be appreciated if you could understand that initial failure happens not on purpose but through the manufacturing process, and it happens occasionally in certain cases.
When it happens, we need to keep the item in order to check its manufacturing number and causes.

In this case it might take 1 to 2 months until our check is finished.

Or if you could agree with returning the item, we would refund right away. (You do not need to send the item back.)

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When you finish the procedures of returning the item, we would refund right away.

Returns center.

元の翻訳
配達についての質問です。

最初の品物が10ドル、追加アイテムが3.5ドルとのこと。もし2アイテム注文する場合の合計金額は3.5ドルでなく13.5ドルという理解でよろしいでしょうか。

複数アイテムを同時購入することで、配送費を抑える方法はありませんでしょうか。

修正後
配達についての質問です。

最初の品物が10ドル、追加の商品が3.5ドルとのこと。もし2商品注文する場合の合計金額は3.5ドルでなく13.5ドルという理解でよろしいでしょうか。

複数の商品を同時購入することで、配送費を抑える方法はありませんでしょうか。

元の翻訳
Fuel consumption of 22Km/L in JCO8 mode is 15Km/L at most in the actual consumption. The fastest speed of JCO8 is 80Km/L, so it is even worse on highways..

Those who buy hybrid cars think it is fuel efficient even on highways. However, for a TOYOTA hybrid car, the systems including battery is only the dead weight at high speed, and its fuel efficiency is not so good as a normal gasoline car. So it cannot be comparable to the turbo diesel with all-purpose from low speed to big torque.

修正後
Fuel consumption of 22Km/L in JCO8 mode is 15Km/L at most in the actual consumption. The fastest speed of JCO8 is 80KPH, so it is even worse on highways..

Those who buy hybrid cars think it is fuel efficient even on highways. However, for a TOYOTA hybrid car, the systems including battery is only the dead weight at high speed, and its fuel efficiency is not so good as a normal gasoline car. So it cannot be comparable to the turbo diesel with all-purpose from low speed to big torque.

元の翻訳
I hear C-Class that is coming soon in Japan is just like S-Class. I think it will not lose even if the direction is completely different.

If the goal is set, there would be no complaint about the navigation where the latest map data will be downloaded.

The test car is equipped with an exclusive red seat and has good holdness.

The rear side airbags were optional, which was a big minus point. The radar safety of Mercedes is also optional, but I think it should have the standard equipment, given its price.

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I hear C-Class that is coming soon in Japan is just like S-Class. I think it will not lose even if the direction is completely different.

There would be no complaint about the navigation where the latest map data will be downloaded if the goal is set.

The test car is equipped with an exclusive red seat and are very comfortable.

The rear side airbags were optional, which was a big minus point. The radar safety (in Mercedes term) is also optional, but I think it should have the standard equipment, given its price.

元の翻訳
Old-type HVs and gasoline vehicles need the complete improvement of their power units

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Both Old-type HVs and gasoline vehicles need the complete improvement of their power units

元の翻訳
This is persistently my personal subjectivity.

The exterior well matches (best matches in my opinion) with the spindle grill in a good balance, and the face is friendly with its adequate agressiveness while maintaining the luxury.

As for the interior, it seems of higher quality and more refined comparing to New IS and New Crown by 2 ranks, and by a rank higher to the competitors.

Torque, acceleration performance, and driving performance are all fine.

This is an extremely balanced and well-made vehicle, I think.

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This is persistently personal opinion of mine.

The exterior well matches (best matches in my opinion) with the spindle grill in a good balance, and the face is friendly with its adequate aggressiveness while maintaining the luxury.

As for the interior, it seems of higher quality and more refined comparing to New IS and New Crown by 2 ranks, and by a rank higher to the competitors.

Torque, acceleration performance, and driving performance are all fine.

This is an extremely balanced and well-made vehicle, I think.

元の翻訳
The most part of Yamanashi prefecture is mountains. So, rice field is few. The rice was the precious food.
Instead of them, they eat this “Houtou”

Long time ago, Some people say “If you can't make Houtou noodle, you are not full-fledged people”
It seemed first step of training for married life.

As local dishes, so prevalent dishes are rare.
“In morning, Oneri. In noon Mugimeshi. In afternoon, Pumpkin of Houtou” seemed to Standard style of Koshu agricultual village in daily life for long time.

In 2007, this food　was elected as “Local dishes of agricultual village and fishery village 100 collection” that is decended in agricultual village in Japan , supported by national, and held by Ministry of agricultual and fishery.

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The most parts of Yamanashi prefecture are mountainous. So, there are few areas for rice fields left. The rice was the precious food for them.
Instead of rice, they eat the food called “Houtou”.

Long time ago, Some people say “If you can't make Houtou noodles, you are not full-fledged people”
It was regarded as the first step of training for married life.

As local dishes, only few are so prevalent dishes as this.
“In morning, Oneri. In noon Mugimeshi. In afternoon, Pumpkin of Houtou” seemed to be the standard style of Koshu agricultual village in daily life for long time.

In 2007, this food was elected by Ministry of Agriculture and Fisheries.as “100 selected local dishes of agricultural, forest and fishery villages” that has been handed down to agricultural villages in Japan , supported by nation.