Kai Le (soulsensei) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
谢谢您的联络。
我要求DHL在9月30日左右发货可以吗？
当您准备好时，我才叫您提货。
麻烦您在指定的日期的3天前与我们联系。

上一回在威海能够收集DHL货物的地方好像有限。
请问我这回应该去哪里取货呢？

请您告诉我您的地址。

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谢谢您的联络。
我要求DHL在9月30日左右发货可以吗？
等您准备好了，我就安排DHL上门取货。
麻烦您提前3天与我们联系。

上一回在威海DHL能提供上门取件服务的地点好像有限。
请问这回应该安排去哪里取货呢？

请告诉我您的地址。

元の翻訳
アメリカ男子サイズ7ですから、25センチ大丈夫だそうですねー

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アメリカのメンズサイズ7号ですから、25センチで大丈夫そうですね。

元の翻訳
〇〇 是让你自由和安全的网上支付服务。你可以转送和接受来自世界各地的货币。安全措施也很齐全。

只要花仅仅的3分钟就可以登录，并且免费地开设你的户口。

登录必须留意的东西

户口的密码得包括一个大字符。其余字母与数字必须是小字符。

在全部的项目输入完毕后，得同意使用条件，再点击户口形成。

想要免费开设一个新户口的人，请点击此处

使用者在中国也是在上升中

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〇〇 是自由安全的在线支付服务。可向全世界汇款并可接受来自世界各地的货币。安全措施齐全。

注册只需3分钟左右，马上就能免费开设账户。

注册注意事项

账户密码必须用包括一个大写字母的半角英文和数字创建。

全部项目输入完毕并同意使用条件，点击创建账户。

免费开设新账户请点击此处。

中国的用户也在急剧增加。

元の翻訳
以前你帮我作的作品很棒，所以我现在想跟你接洽。
我在寻找能读得懂为了修读中文的人而写中文文章的人
我发给你一本用普通话而不是方言写的抄稿，请你帮我清楚地念每个字出来。
还有，由于读者可以戴上耳机，你可以帮我录制周围环境的声音和噪声吗？
首先，请帮我念出100个文字。
我还有许多文字，所以如果这次的作品做得理想的话，我会再增加工作量。
能否请你帮我接下这份工作吗？

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以前你帮我作的作品很棒，所以又联络你。
为帮助正在学中文的人，我想找能读中文文章的人。
我发给你一本用普通话而不是方言写的抄稿，请你帮我清楚地念每个字出来。
还有，由于读者可以戴上耳机，你可以帮我录制周围环境的声音和噪声吗？
首先，请帮我念出100个文字。
我还有许多文字，所以如果这次的作品做得理想的话，我会再增加工作量。
以上内容能否拜托您？

元の翻訳

Lilitales的中英文版Steam被发行！
请多多指教！
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被修饰的翻版在KaguraGames先生的网站被发布！
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花了不少时间，不过多亏KaguraGames的帮助，Steam的版本被发行。我想谢谢KaguraGames。被翻译的Lilitales能给大家玩，我觉得很幸福。
DLsiteEnglish将在下周被发行。

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中英文版Lilitales现已登陆Steam！
请多多指教！
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修正补丁发布在KaguraGames的网站！
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这次花了不少时间，不过多亏KaguraGames的帮助，才得以发行Steam版本。我想谢谢KaguraGames。若是大家能享受翻译版的Lilitales，我将倍感幸福。
游戏将于下周上架DLsiteEnglish。

元の翻訳
好久不见。别来无恙吗？
我想介绍我朋友给你认识。
他将在 〇〇 大学担任教授。
虽然他会在10月或11月住在 〇〇 ，由于他对这个地方人生地不熟 ，不知道你方便带他熟悉 〇〇 一下吗？
而且，他想在 〇〇找个地方住。如果你有好介绍的话，请通知我。我会感激不尽。
如果你没问题的话，我朋友讲中文。可以麻烦你通过↵
WeChat跟他沟通吗？

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好久不见。别来无恙？
想给你介绍一位我的朋友。
他将在 〇〇 大学担任教授。
他将在10月或11月住去〇〇 ，由于他对这个地方人生地不熟 ，你可否方便带他熟悉 一下〇〇 ？
而且，他想在 〇〇找住处。如果你能介绍的话请通知我。我会感激不尽。
如果你没问题，这位朋友能说中文，能否麻烦你用 WeChat跟他沟通一下？

元の翻訳
ねえ－あなたの リスティングは美しいです！
あなたがどのようにebayの説明欄でそれらの大きな写真を得るかについて、私は尋ねたいですが、どんなプログラムを使いましたか？/　どうやってしましたか？
また、それのようなテキストのフォーマットを設定するために、あなたはどんなプログラムを使用しますか？
よろしくお願いします。↵

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こんにちは－あなたの リストは美しいですね！
どのようにすればebayの説明欄にあのような大きな写真を載せられるのでしょうか。どのようなプログラムを使われましたか？/　どのようにされましたか？
また、そのようなテキストのフォーマットを設定するために、どのようなプログラムを使用しているのですか？
よろしくお願いします！

元の翻訳
Apple のブランドを盲目的に崇拝する「Apple オタク」とのよい関係を昇進するかどうかにかかわらずそれが疑問の余地がある間、Xiaomiは最初の電話さえ出る前に、2010年に非常に故意にそうしたことは明らかなことです。それはそれがコミュニティを始めた時です。そのとき、一連のフォーラム（「ミファン]という現在の呼ぶ方。」で最初がコミュニティの拠点を置きます。これらのサポーターは、レシピの不可欠な一部です。

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Apple のブランドを盲目的に崇拝する「Apple オタク」とのよい関係を昇進するかどうかにかかわらずそれが疑問の余地がある一方、Xiaomiは最初の電話さえ出る前に、2010年に非常に故意にそうしたことは明らかなことです。それはそれがコミュニティを始めた時です。そのとき、一連のフォーラム（「ミファン]という現在の呼ぶ方。」で最初がコミュニティの拠点を置きました。これらのサポーターは、レシピの不可欠な一部です。

元の翻訳
自慰
福田さんはいまマスターベーションしています。
自慰は中国語で「打飛機 」です。

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自慰する
福田さんはいまマスターベーションしています。
自慰することを中国語で「打飛機 （飛行機を飛ばす）」と言います。

元の翻訳
昨天真的是太好玩了！改次一起再去一趟！

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前两天真的是太好玩了！改天一起再去一趟！

元の翻訳
Silicone has a broad range of uses and is used for various purposes ranging from grease/oil to cosmetic products. Organic silicone involves less volatilization of low-molecule siloxane in its operating environment and forms acidic silicone on the contact surface of the switch. In order to make this acidic silicone a non-conductor of electricity for the switch, limitations are placed on the product composition of switches as well as the manufacturing process.

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Silicone has a broad range of uses and is used for various purposes ranging from grease/oil to cosmetic products. Organic silicone involves less volatilization of low-molecule siloxane in its operating environment and forms acidic silicone on the contact surface of the switch. In order to make this acidic silicone a non-conductor of electricity for the switch, limitations are placed on the product composition of switches as well as the manufacturing process.↵

元の翻訳
I intend to make improvements on these three areas: to increase the quality of feedback from customers, to not send goods belatedly and to include a tracing number for every order that has been shipped. In regards to the low level of affirmation from customers, I intend to send a follow-up email to customers after every transaction to request for feedback. As for the elimination of late delivery, I will ship the goods speedily after receiving the orders and further increase the lead time. Currently, tracing numbers are not used to record down the shipping orders. Hence, I will attach tracing numbers to the order so that I can inform our customers of these numbers. I have already attached tracing numbers to the 5 order that I shipped out recently.

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I intend to make improvements on these three areas: to increase the quality of feedback from customers, to not send goods belatedly and to include a tracking number for every order that has been shipped. In regards to the low level of feedback from customers, I intend to send a follow-up email to customers after every transaction to request for feedback. As for the elimination of late delivery, I will ship goods quickly after receiving orders and further increase the lead time. We currently ship items without a tracking number, however I intend to change this and use a delivery option that provides a tracking number so that I can inform our customers of such numbers. I have already attached tracking numbers to the 5 orders that I shipped out recently.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your enquiries.
I'm very sorry but↵
we do not sell this product in sets here in Japan.
The photo, which you viewed earlier, indicates one product.
This product is usually sold in sets in Israel.
Moving forward, I think it is possible for you to purchase this product from other shops,↵
but I would suggest that you confirm the details beforehand with these shops.
For our shop, when we sell products as one set, or even as two or three sets, we will definitely indicate them with labels.
I'm deeply sorry that I cannot satisfy your requirements adequately this time round.
If there's a chance in future, please patronize my shop.
I'm grateful to have met you.↵
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Thank you for your enquiries.
I'm very sorry, but we do not sell this product in sets here in Japan.
The photo, which you viewed earlier, indicates one product.
We realise that this product is usually sold in sets in Israel.
I believe it is possible for you to purchase this product from other shops, but I would suggest that you confirm details with those shops beforehand.
When we sell products as a set, or even as two or three sets, we indicate them with labels.
I'm deeply sorry that I cannot satisfy your requirements adequately this time round.
Please use my shop again if you get the chance.
I'm grateful to have met you.

元の翻訳
I think it would be best for this company to handle our matters.↵
This is because compared to us, they are more knowledgeable about the sales of these products as well as factories and power generation plants.

I stated rather firmly that I wanted to take a look at the price list and conducted a business discussion with the company that was interested in the products from your company last month.↵
The company personnel told me that without the price list, we could not sell products to our customers.
In Japan, it is our basic style to reveal the prices before engaging in negotiations. So I seek your understanding in regards to this cultural difference.
If we don't obtain the price list, we will not be able to let this company handle our products.

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I think it would be best for a trading company to handle our matters because they are more knowledgeable about factories and power generation plants (where these products will be sold) than us.

I stated rather firmly that I wanted the price list because when I conducted a business discussion last month with the trading company that is interested in your company's products, they told me that I would not be able to sell products to clients without a price list.
In Japan, it is our basic style to state prices before engaging in negotiations. So I seek your understanding in regards to this cultural difference.
If we don't obtain the price list, we will not be able to let the trading company handle our products.