Satoshi Kishimoto (satoshi33) — もらったレビュー

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私達はフィールドから取り出される前に、ｌｘからｆｃに変更するためのカスタムセッティングを使おうとしていました。しかしカスタムセッティングオプションはどちらのメーターも作動しませんでした。私が何か間違った処理をしたのかどうかを確認する為に売り手に電話をしてみました。その売り手は「今までには無かったプログラミングの問題であるに違いない、なぜ両方のメーターにそれが発生しているのか分からない」と話されました。電話口の方の目の前にその一つが有り、それは適切に作動している模様。さらに修理チームにも確認を取っていました。私はこれらをフットキャンドルとして使うために購入しましたが、今回の問題でセッティングの調整ができませんので返品致します。　全額返金を希望いたします。

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私達は装置をフィールドへ持ち出す前に、ｌｘからｆｃに変更するためのカスタムセッティングを使おうとしていました。しかし変更オプションはどちらのメーターにも表示されませんでした。私が何か間違った処理をしたのかどうかを確認する為に売り手に電話をしてみましたが、そうではないことが解りました。その売り手は「プログラミングの問題であるに違いない。今までにそのような欠陥は報告されておらず、なぜ両方のメーターにそれが発生しているのか困惑している」と話されました。電話口の方は、目の前にある一台は適切に動作しており、更なる情報を得るために修理チームにも確認を取っている、と言っていました。私はこれらをフィートキャンドル測定用に購入しましたが、今回の問題でセッティングの調整ができませんので、返品と全額返金をお願い致します。

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その供給業者はAmazonの納入方針に沿っていません。　私は１１月２日に注文した際に３～５日の出荷を依頼しました。　現在の出荷予定日は１１月１５日から１２月５日と言われています。

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その販売業者はAmazonの納入方針に沿っていません。　私は１１月２日に注文した際に３～５日の出荷を依頼しました。　現在の出荷予定日は１１月１５日から１２月５日と言われています。

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I could installation, but there are two errors.

1. Indication of CSS collapsed in the following pages.
2. Some error is given in the follwing pages.↵
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Possibly does a server have a necessary function?
I look forward to having your reply.
Thank you.

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I was able to instal, but I get two errors.

1. Indication of CSS collapsed in the following pages.
2. Some error is given in the follwing pages. Is it possible that the server doesnt have a necessary function?
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I look forward for a reply.
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I want to set to display a particular artist from a particular country, could you do this for me?

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#1 Hello. Thank you for sending clear photo. I would liki to purchase it, because it was no problem when I have checked the scratch of the item. Could you send it by express delivery, as the day passed.

Thank you very much for your help.

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#1 Hello. Thank you for sending clear photo. I would like to purchase it, because there was no problem when I checked the scratch on the item. Could you send it by express delivery, as time passed.

Thank you very much for your help.

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#1 Hello. Thank you for sending clear photo. I would liki to purchase it, because it was no problem when I have checked the scratch of the item. Could you send it by express delivery, as the day passed.

Thank you very much for your help.

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#1 Hello. Thank you for sending clear photo. I would like to purchase it, because it was no problem as I checked the scratch on the item. Could you send it by express delivery, as the time has passed.

Thank you very much for your help.

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This is logistics outsourcing of Espool. <a href="http://www.spool.co.jp/service/logistics.html" target="_blank"><strong> </strong></a>

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This is the <a href="http://www.spool.co.jp/service/logistics.html" target="_blank"><strong>logistics outsourcing</strong></a> service of Espool.

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#1 We take the baggage of approximately 50 mail -order firms now.

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We are taking the baggage of approximately 50 mail -order firms now.

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#1 We started originally the job creation of the youth as a social mission. And we lay emphasis on the creatior of the employment opportunity for few people finging job chance socially now.

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#1 We started originally the job creation of the youth as a social mission. And we lay emphasis on the creation of the employment opportunity for few people finding jobs chance socially now.

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(It was quoted by a briefing session document for individual investors)

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(It was quoted from a briefing session document for individual investors)

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In fact, the person with a disability employment is so,too. Our shipment representation service pursue these two effects at the same time.

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Our shipment representation service, in fact, employment for the person with a disability is the same, pursues these two effects at the same time.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>
We recognize that it become the fair wind for the manpower supply company that deregulation for the porpose of the fluidity of the employment advances.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br>
We recognize that it will become a fair wind for the manpower supply industry that deregulation for the porpose of the fluidity of the employment advances.

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There was the news to say that productive population(from 15 to 64 years old) fell down 80 million the other day. As for the labor force in Japan, the absolute number will decrease in future. If it becomes so, the fluidity of the talented person is indispensable.

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There was a news report the other day which said that productive population (those from 15 to 64 years old) fell by 80 million. As for the labor force in Japan, the absolute number will decrease in future. If so, the fluidity of the labor pool will become indispensable.

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<br></br> There are many cases that the hourly wage is low in service industry. There is relatively the side that the securing of human resource has difficult when economy looks up.

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<br></br> There are many cases that the hourly wage is low in the service industry. There is relatively the side that the securing of human resource has difficult (has difficulty または、is difficult) when economy looks up.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br> We start dispatch of the store staff of the convenience store from this season and lay emphasis.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br> We are putting our efforts into the business through measures including starting dispatch of convenience store staff from this term.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br><strong> Shipment representation service of the internet mail order
</strong><br></br> As you know, the growth of the Internet mail order business is remarkable.

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<strong>Arai：</strong><br></br><strong> Shipment representative service of the internet mail order
</strong><br></br> As you know, the growth of the Internet mail order business is remarkable.

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#1 Depending on a distribution company holding a transportaiton vehicle, it put weight in the delivery. We have increasing some consultaion, because the duties in the center are performed outsourcing.

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Depending on the distribution company holding the transport vehicle, there are more emphasis given to the weight of the delivery. We receive increasing consultations since there are high cases of the tasks in the center being outsourced.

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Q3-6 : Please talk about the business environment and the action of the employment support project for people with a disability.

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Q3-6 : Please also talk about the business environment and the actions for the employment support project for people with a disability.

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<strong>Aarai : </strong><br></br> The influence of refision of the person with a disability employment promotion law of this April in 2013 is big. "raise in legal employment rate : from 1.8% to 2.0% " and the demand is very strong.

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<strong>Aarai : </strong><br></br> The revision of the Employment Promotion Act for People with Disabilities from this April (2013) is very influential (in raising the legal employment rate : from 1.8% to 2.0%) and the demand for it is very strong.

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Hollo.
I am thinking that I will buy a case of black i-phone 5.

Is the position of Scall the lower right like the advertised picture ?

I would like to buy an i-phone case whose Scall is the lower right position.

I appreciate you if I can have an answer.

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Hello,
I am thinking that I will buy a case for black iPhone 5.

Is the position of Scall the lower right like the advertised picture?

I would like to buy an iPhone case whose Scall is the lower right position.

I appreciate you if I could hear from you.